I! The Cleaner!

Just finished watching the toad part. The protagonist is set as a time traveler at the beginning. He lived a complete life in his previous life and has lived for three years. The protagonist behaves like an honest young man who is a bit timid. He doesn't have the maturity that a person who has lived his whole life should have. Nor does he have the arrogance of ordinary time travellers. It feels more like a local. There is clearly something wrong, but there is no progress in three years. Based on the content that has been read, it is not difficult to obtain badges, and they can be obtained in a wide range of areas, such as job hunting, shooting, and parkour, and there are also tips for advanced routes. It's unreasonable to be an ordinary person in three years without any skills. Even if you just cook at home, you can gradually become a chef. People are also too kind. They don't fight for what they should fight for, and they don't accept what is given for free. The younger brothers and sisters are purely background. They say it is for them verbally, but in practice they refuse to improve their lives. It's hard to imagine that this is a person whose pension has been suspended. His sister fell ill because of an illegal alchemy factory and could not afford to take medicine. He voluntarily stopped taking medicine in order to save money. He wanted to sacrifice himself and keep his share of the pension, but he put down the butcher knife when the evil spirit magnified his malice several times. In general, the settings just stay in the settings and are not integrated into the characters and story.

The reason why I am so discouraged is because saving the world is a very serious matter, and being funny can only go hand in hand with being unreliable. If one day the world is going to be destroyed and the savior is Yue Yunpeng, will you despair?

I have been subscribing and have read more than 290 chapters, but I really can't stand it anymore. The first free chapter was okay, but in the middle Jin Chan started to have problems, and various logical problems became more and more serious later. It can be seen that the problem obviously lies in the author's own life experience. It is set in the background of social turmoil and war, and is also full of various heavy social atmospheres. However, the handling of character behavior is full of an innocent flavor. Many places have the feel of a light novel rather than being close to serious realism. Let's talk about the recent chapter 294. The little golden retriever of the Lane family was obviously led by Leon to rebel against the army. In the end, he borrowed money from Leon and went home without any problems. What is this operation? ? What do the people in the army think, and what do his family members think? Does he want to return to the team? Shouldn't he find a way to deal with the military brass and avoid trial or prison sentence? In the end, he went home without any problems? ? You thought it was school? ? The same thing happened when Xi Jue was attacked by the rebels—— At that time, the follow-up was not completed, and it was as if nothing had happened and he returned to the bureau (as if he was going home). Where is the person who was caught in the chaos? Didn't he kill him? And such a big thing happened on this day, and he actually got drunk that night? ? The biggest problem with this book is that it is too "fairy tale"! In such a heavy social background, there is no urgency and pressure of responsibility, death, or huge conflicts and contradictions between people. There is only the innocence of the protagonist who remains aloof when it is time to stand up and take responsibility after gaining a powerful position! His bottom-level thinking model cannot bear the "red badge"! Without being tested in practice, overcoming the setbacks and tribulations of reality again and again, and truly realizing why reality is like this, this idea cannot be firm and solid! It has been foreshadowing that the protagonist seems to have a huge ambition in his heart to initiate changes, but what he has done has always been just an upgrade on a personal level. He has neither expanded his power nor spread his ideas. He has power in his hands and has not seen opportunities. He has not actively changed to seize the opportunity, but has been passively accepting the arrangements of fate. This is completely deviated from the background of this character! ! This kind of plot style arrangement has a Japanese light novel flavor and a lazy style of the petty bourgeoisie male protagonist, rather than the real resistance style of the lower class people. Until I read Chapter 300, the male protagonist has never really taken up responsibility and action, and is full of inertia of thought! Full of innocence! The author obviously hasn't figured out the conflict at the core of literature, but instead mixes plots of various styles together. However, such a cruel social background is obviously not suitable for such an innocent plot like animation. The plot can be full of absurdities, but there must not be such a "fairy tale" with huge logical loopholes. The male protagonist lurked into the rebel party and replaced the original leader. The core subordinates did not even know the true identity of the male protagonist. After hearing a few words from him, they really went back to their homes. Are they desperate? They don't know who the male protagonist is or what he is. How can they trust the male protagonist without fearing that he might lead them into trouble at any time and kill them? ? If the author cannot write these details, he can also briefly explain them in Spring and Autumn style, but he must not not write them. This is clearly not what these characters were thinking about. Neither the supporting characters nor the protagonists are established. The whole world is filled with a sense of intelligence that is completely centered on the protagonists, which is difficult to bring into.

I suggest you change your profile. You are being deducted from your salary even if you are working part-time. Such a profile is very unpleasant and can easily persuade people to quit.

First of all, I have read two of the author's works. They both surprised me at the beginning. The writing is smooth, the supporting characters are rich, and the protagonist's character is qualified. The shortcomings of all of them are that in the later period, they are the same as reading a running account. The more you read, the more annoying you become. It feels like the author is kidnapping the readers with the plot, adding a little concentrated drink to the water, and asking the readers to pay for a little taste. It turns out that it is fake and only contains water. Let's first discuss the protagonist's skills, the "red" and "materialism" badge. Why do I say that the author is a skill-based headliner? Because he took advantage of our judgment based on our own cognition and arbitrarily biased this skill towards Marxism or socialism, believing that the protagonist is a mentor who will change the world and a great leader who will lead the people to a republic. But in fact, this is just a way the author uses to attract attention. Red is just a color, and materialism is just a powerful buff. It has nothing to do with the socialism we think of. The protagonist is not someone who has transcendent ideas and goes through fire and water for the people. The leader, especially after the protagonist appears, was originally bullied but revolted blindly because he had no ideological program. The protagonist was labeled as a "terrorist" because he caused a large number of casualties. It's awesome. I can only say that it's awesome. Afterwards, the protagonist has no ideological spirit or anything. Well, just like the traditional kingly protagonist, the history of people's suffering, the history of blood and tears, the deep hatred, class conflicts, and the impact of economic development on society are not important. Everything is only based on the protagonist's opinions. The sins and oppression of the feudal class in the past are not important. , As long as the princess and her daughter are good-looking, they will be included in the harem, and the good guys from the feudal dynasty will be directly classified as the protagonist's camp. If there are any feudal remnants who have disagreements, let them kill a few civilians or conduct evil experiments/rituals and then be judged by the protagonist for "harming the masses." Well, it is really an exciting plot. What socialism? Capitalism? Feudalism? From now on, it will be Lyonism. If there is a protagonist, everyone will be happy. Without a protagonist, human desires will lead to various crimes. There will be no ideas at all. It will be pure high-tech feudal rule, which is hilarious. The harem is closed to everyone. Evil is desire and inner filth. Harming the masses is ignorance, stupidity and radicalism. The decline of thinking is the solution of abnormal brains and killing. I want to see the people's leader or the protagonist save the people, and the liberation revolution can be withdrawn. In the later period, pure water, in order to add a few brainless plots to add to the harem, I am speechless. Some places are well written, some places are like a trickle, and some places are just relying on 💩. Maybe some old aristocratic organizations will rebel, businessmen and capital will suppress them, and then the villain will go to the extreme and join forces with the cultists to summon the evil god, and then borrow these things to the protagonist Arrange an affair, take in women, show justice, become stronger, and then suddenly some villains that you have never heard of before but appear inexplicably and are very powerful appear as stepping stones, and then change the map for some reason, and then a hunter girl, a noble lady get involved for some unknown reason, highlighting the innocence, justice, simplicity, intelligence, and cunning that are incompatible with other people, and then establish a good relationship with the protagonist, and then a few more events, and then think... Big brother! I beg you! Could you please strengthen the protagonist's thoughts and strengthen his appearance? Do you think a reader who is always surrounded by beauties or surrounded by all kinds of royal plots, but cannot see any growth in the protagonist and still accepts women everywhere, will not scold her? The character design of the protagonist at the beginning of your last book was pretty good. I thought the protagonist was the kind of person who is cold on the outside but sultry in reality, intimidating to the outside world, but soft on the inside, calm in love, firm on the difference between lust and love, and protecting important people while keeping a distance from others, both mentally and internally. He is an indestructible and steadfast knight whose heart and body are equally indestructible. As a result, I looked down and slowly deducted points. The cold character was basically lost, lust was unleashed, and the harem was widely opened (not to mention not a harem, if you have the ability to firmly reject other women), you felt happy sitting in your arms, and then I couldn't watch it any more. Really, let's establish a charismatic protagonist. I've seen so many harem protagonists that I almost vomited. (I have read two of the author's books and am a loyal reader of his, but I really can't tolerate his operations. The uniqueness at the beginning attracted me, but in the end, it started to turn towards a routine plot. Really, I felt that my coins were cheated and I was kidnapped by him.)

When I watched the beginning, I felt that the protagonist was a little frustrated, and there were some unreasonable aspects in the setting, but there were no particularly bad points. I forgot all the unreasonable aspects in the second part, maybe because the world view slowly unfolded later, and some places were explained and confirmed. In general, the protagonist is getting stronger and growing, getting and encountering more magical anomalies, and getting to know many interesting people. At the same time, the novel has also laid down many interesting foreshadowings or pitfalls, waiting for the protagonist to solve the puzzles. I feel that the subsequent plot is getting more and more exciting. Now I am still reading it, and when I posted this post, I did not say that this book is very poisonous. I just said that I would post about some plot issues of this book later, but the bottom of the post said "I won't read it" or something, so I came out to explain.

I found an interesting phenomenon. The people smeared in this book are all apprentices and trainees, but those at the deacon and helmsman level are all highly praised. So the question arises, are those who evaluate this book based on superficial reading and malicious slander, or are they based on the facts and express their own opinions and views after careful reading, and make a judgment? I don't rule out the possibility of subscribing to a few more chapters and becoming a deacon, helmsman or elder before slandering him! It is not advisable for scholars to look down on each other. Write good books based on your own strength, rather than belittling others as your way to get ahead!

Reading the synopsis, I feel like I'm being discouraged. So, as a savior, does the protagonist also have his salary deducted and live in poverty?

As of Chapter 801. Please click on the picture to enlarge it. Please scroll down for other people's anomalies.

If in the introduction, the protagonist picks off a woman's head with a backhand and uses it as a ball to kick, monthly tickets will explode.