Online Gaming: The Great Thief

I have probably read more than 1,000 chapters and am ready to give up. The first 500 chapters are all very well written, but the latter chapters are almost full of water. They are either copied from Baidu or introduce equipment. And as I get to the later stages, I feel that the coherence is no longer good. Sometimes I feel like two people are writing it, so I gave up.

It's getting worse and worse. If you write like this, it's better to finish the settlement as soon as possible and write a new book seriously. I'm also reading the new book, and I think it's good.

Write more about the protagonist. Don't write a whole background of Warcraft. People who play don't want you to introduce it. If you introduce people who don't play, it will be like discouraging them from quitting.

The seedlings I discovered before have been waiting for more than a year for the update to be completed. I've booked them all in the past few days. It's a bit of a pity. I have been in contact with World of Warcraft before, but I always feel that something is missing, feelings? Plot? Lu Li didn't really participate in the plot of Warcraft, that's one thing. Maybe I participated in a limited way, but this is different from the imagined participation in the plot. Well, the participation of the protagonist in the plot of Lafayette and Marshal Pamela is too weak. There is already a game with a predetermined ending, and we read the novel just to see something different! Secondly, although the author has repeatedly emphasized the technical changes of the protagonist, I can only see some changes in data from beginning to end. The protagonist's sense of personal growth is too weak. Last but not least, I'm really sorry. Lu Li's emotional interaction with the people around him is really bad. (Friends or female friends) can be described as a relationship that grows over time, but as readers, we come to read novels. What a hot-blooded interaction, what a dirty joke! ! ! I have collected new books, I hope there will be some changes, come on.

How to say it! I have been raising this book. Who knows it's over. I didn't even notice it. I can only say that I suddenly feel a little sad now. Time flies so fast.

I have been chasing books for almost 3 months. I read all the previous chapters in one go. I have been a little disappointed recently. I would like to give some suggestions to the author, which may involve some books by other authors. Of course, they are only for reference. First, the thief's characteristics are not cashed out, which is a big disadvantage. There are not many articles about thieves. The famous one is Snail's "Rebirth of Thieves in the World", which focuses on the skills of thieves, the characteristics of thieves and the style of thieves. Second, it is too limited to the framework of Warcraft and focuses too much on large-scale dungeon plots and PVP. I have limited my articles to death, so I can add more single-player classic plots, or change the plot. Third, the introduction of the background system is unclear. After all, it is a novel. Is it possible to open the expansion pack in advance for Qi Yu? Why don't you go against our game developers? Should the reborn people blame the sky and the earth against the developers? Fourth, there is insufficient foreshadowing, and the article is straightforward and lacks hooks. So far, there are only the last two buckles. I think they are good. One is Garona's and the other is Illidan's. Grab this buckle to break through the plot, especially Illidan's ring, which is a cheat throughout the whole story. As a result, this plug-in is restricted by the developer, so you just let him restrict it.

Lu Li's luck is so bad. I'm afraid that if I continue reading, I'll feel bad too. So I'll take the first step.

The water MM in my heart♥♥♥

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As for the new books, I've ordered both of them. I'm really looking forward to the new books. I've been on a break for a few years.

There are still more than two hundred chapters left to read, so let's talk about my thoughts after reading them. Advantages? At least I don't feel like it. Maybe some old Warcraft players have some feelings for mission dungeons and the like, but I don't play World of Warcraft and don't understand, so I'm sorry. Disadvantages, let's not talk about the minor ones, let's talk about a few serious ones. ①It takes up at least one-third of the information in the entire book. Whether it's a dungeon, a mission, or even equipment, or a random monster or NPC, you always have a 1/2 chance of reading the entire chapter's introduction. I don't play World of Warcraft, so I don't know if they were plagiarized or the author's own thoughts. I just know that they are boring and meaningless. It was completely ojbk once and twice, but almost every dungeon has an introduction. The messy background is really boring, not a foreshadowing, and of no help to the dungeon. Why write it out? This is even more true for equipment. A lot of words are written in a eloquent way, and then the equipment is given to people. Forget it, there are no follow-up tasks or anything like that. ② A copy battle that is completely like a running account The title of the book is Thief, the protagonist's profession is a thief, and his identity is a star racer. Unfortunately, there is no difference between him and other professions at all. The description of the battle is roughly like, I am invisible, I strike first, seconds pass, and I leave, or I strike first, he strikes back, and I leave. He doesn't look like the best person in the game, but like a wretched individual. Then in the dungeon, the main role of the protagonist is to hang up and command, what profession? What is that? The reason given by the author is that thieves are not suitable for copywriting. Let me go, they are not suitable for copywriting. You wrote such a long dungeon battle? Let's talk about professional racers. I can't tell where the profession is. There is no detailed description of the competition. The only climax is one versus five, but after reading five chapters, it's just like that. ③A plot like boiled water I still have over 200 chapters to read. To summarize the previous 1,000 chapters, the plot is roughly like this. Find equipment, complete tasks, and play dungeons Repeat above Speaking of being a racer, there is no tension in the competition, and the description of the battle is also very weak, but let's forget about it for now. There is no use for the reborn person. The most important role of the memory of the past life is to prepare notebooks, tasks, and equipment. Yes, the ones I wrote above. The weak opponent mentioned many times how the Dharma God Xiao Mo was doing and how the guild was doing. There are a lot of legends, no worries about funds, and superb skills, but I just don't have the dick of your protagonist, so I can't pass the dungeon. The game developer is also a salty fish, so the difficulty is lowered when the protagonist is over the target? From my personal point of view, this kind of behavior is the stupidest. The heroine, why do you keep saying that the emotional drama is a piece of shit? It's because in the early stages, the heroine was given the most hated label [local tycoon] Generally speaking, this kind of adjective, in novels, mostly refers to a fool who is stupid, rich, and very cool. Its main function is to show off to the protagonist. How can you put it on a female protagonist? I have mentioned it many times. When I mentioned the heroine in the previous article, she was just like a wealthy woman, which is annoying to watch. I'm not a divine farmer, but there are some things that I just can't get enough of. All I can say is, come on, author

If things go on like this, unless it continues like this, if you ask them to buy at the market price once, they will be dissatisfied...

@Hun, I'll reward you with 500 starting coins, just to have a word with you, Niubi (broken sound)! ! !

Did you change the name of your new book? That monster chat group has nothing and the author is not you.

This book is too sloppy. You basically copy the setting of WOW, but it also introduces the plot background in various ways, a short chapter, a long 2.3 Chapters, even if you say it is a new setting, it is so good to copy WOW. Then the writing was extremely careless. When I first started writing, Azure Sea Breeze got a ring in his previous life and was hunted down. Because he couldn't delete his account and practice again, he became a goldsmith. As a result, after more than 800 chapters, he wrote that he could delete his account and practice again? ? ? The white Kodo in the front was clearly given to the water elf, and later he participated in Garona's trial and rode the white Kodo again. There is also the Christmas event killing contest that I can't complain about. Under what kind of social background would the government in power allow a game to hold such an event? Could this be seen as training a killer? Distorting gamers' perspectives? A bear hunting competition was harmonious since the second session, but the killing competition was not harmonious. . . Unable to complain. . . In Chapter 672, the berserker's blood volume dropped below 20%, and he exploded with 300% damage, which lasted for 30 seconds. I won't complain about the bugs in this skill. After a while, another special effect was added, with a movement speed of 300%. Haha, the rhythm of the national mad battle may not be considered BT by the author. Immediately there was another immune control and the health volume remained like this. The original 30-second setting was gone. . . . . I really like it. . . . There is also Chapter 975. I met Eleven Young Master for the first time earlier. He said that the extremely high armor equipment was from the level 40 copy of Uldaman. By Chapter 975, it became a level 50 set. I really can't complain. Lu Li was only level 43 when he first appeared, so that equipment should also be level 40. By Chapter 975, it becomes level 50 and is inlaid with -5%, so you can wear it even if you are level 48. 978-985 A whole 7 chapters, what are you writing? Write a mission. The mission is to give a gem that breaks sheep and breaks control. I am a server. In a previous game, Lu Li encountered a gouge and was automatically dispelled by damage. Can I write 7 chapters for something that has nothing to do with the protagonist's strength/plot/friendship/love? ? ? Where did you find a guild with 100,000 people? ? It would be better if you just write to the guild and collect it. . . The water is so obvious. . . In more than 900 chapters, it was written that the Blackrock Spire star group did not include Mo Wangfeng, but it turned out that it appeared later. The wheel obviously did not turn to the Flame of Ragnaros the first time, but it turned out to be in the warehouse. . There are various inconsistencies, copying the plot and background of WOW. . . . . The Eleven Young God of War in Golden Armor made his first appearance, emphasizing that the set of shoes reduced his movement speed by 20%. Later in Chapter 975, a pair of legendary shoes were replaced with added mobility. I just want to ask if the suit is still called a suit if there is one missing piece? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? Can I be more serious and responsible when writing a book? ? ?

Tribal pig, alliance dog, see you on August 27th in the nostalgic server

He keeps saying he defends traditional online games, but in fact, the entire book serves competitive online games. The only thing that the whole book has to do with traditional online games is the dungeon. The most important conflicts in traditional online games are between people and between guilds, that is, guild wars. , Can't be found in this book at all. What's left are various dungeons and wild monsters that have been replaced without changing the original medicine. The contradictions in the whole book are only reflected in the friendly competition in the arena. Don't deny it, you can't lose your level or equipment if you fail in the arena. What is this if not friendly competition?

After reaching the top 16, the individual competition is useless, right? As long as the team wins the competition, they advance...

As a virtual reality game and a novel, it should be a little exaggerated. Don't always imitate real games. This is not a concept at all. Take a look at Thieves World, one of the best online games! ! !

It's not a battle flag. Why is it never used when downloading a copy?

It seems that the card was suddenly announced to be 70, and the familiarity of the dog is gone. I really don't know whether to laugh at his clever ending, or to cry about the youth he once had.

Today when I was reading, I saw a single chapter published by the author when he had more than 500 chapters. The book friend game mentioned in it spent money but did not spend money to subscribe. At that time, it felt very similar to me. Although I can't spend thousands on each game, World of Warcraft and a mobile game I play now cost tens of thousands combined, but I really have never subscribed to any chapter in Qidian before. I always told myself in the past that my current conditions are not good and I follow many novels, so I can't afford to subscribe. I will subscribe again in the future when my conditions are better. But thinking about it carefully today, it's not that I can't afford to subscribe, it's just that I don't respect the hard work that the authors put in for their works. I felt very ashamed at that time. I didn't say anything. As a relatively old WOW player starting from TBC, today I recharged at Qidian for the first time and subscribed to the full version. I will subscribe more at Qidian in the future. I'm doing my best and thank the authors for their hard work! ! ! I apologize for reading it before, and say thank you for the author's single chapter that woke me up! ! !

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I have read more than 100 of them, and this novel reminded me of (Full-time Master) and (Melee Mage). Really good

It's been so late😢

You should work hard to write lyrics in the new year~ Come on update~ I haven't had time to read articles at the end of the year recently. I don't have monthly tickets, so I have to rely on rewards~ Don't think that the monthly tickets are too little~^_^

I'm using the old version to read the full text, but it's broken out of context no matter how I read it.

Two words really don't sound good, four words are better "Hiying Lilan" and the like, the literary points are also domineering

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