The Authentic Taoist Sect of Shushan

After reading dozens of chapters, I feel uncomfortable with just two words! The description of the protagonist is quite confusing. As mentioned earlier, there is a good sword, very powerful! Did you forget to make it yourself later? There are many inconsistencies in many places, which makes me suffer from obsessive-compulsive disorder! The logic is not very smooth. The main plot is upgrade? Ascension for the sake of ascent?

The author's book has reached the highest level. There is not a single chapter that is not good. He explains it and explains it. If I could give it a score, 0.1 Would be just right.

Chapter 1: Persuading people to quit is so troublesome. Nowadays, no one cares about the settings when reading books. The author just comes out with a lot of settings. You just need to say concisely and clearly that the university professor knows martial arts...

This book is really baffling. How did the protagonist know that he was in the Shushan world after traveling through time? What's the logic of Nima automatically traveling to Shushan by defaultヽ（＿；)ノ

To be honest, when I read the title of the book, I thought it was about Emei and Kunlun. When I read the introduction, I thought it was about Emei. But when I came in and saw... What the hell, you, a person who reads books and studies law, can you be more orthodox than someone who is a direct descendant of Taiqing? Please understand the Hunyuan Qi Taiqing Talisman. What does it mean that I put such a thing to protect the mountain? I don't understand? Why did no one attack Emei head-on during time travel? Because you, the land golden immortal, have to kneel down when they encounter the Liangyi dust formation with magical talismans, and there is no magic weapon or technique in the entire Shu Mountain that can break it

Shushan is the orthodoxy left by Supreme Master Lao Tzu in the world. Do you still need to reestablish it?

This is my first time to comment. I originally liked the Shushan series, but there is too much nonsense. There is too much nonsense. There is too much nonsense.

It feels like reading an instruction manual, and the author is afraid that you won't understand, so he adds explanations after each paragraph, and it's the same thing. He goes over and over again. How worried are you that the readers won't understand?

I read a little bit and it was all about the relationship between gods or how awesome my skills are. I know you are awesome and you probably have to say it every chapter.

I'm really speechless. It's 2020 and there are still people writing this kind of book.

Don't write about university professors. Who would want to be a professor if they are so awesome? That's nonsense.

Shushan is a world with a heavy network of cause and effect. There is no secret, no understanding of cause and effect, only the passage of life and death. I don't know what to say about this protagonist!

To put it bluntly, this book is just for fooling Quanqin, and the author does not expect to make money.

It's so wordy. People who read Shushan are all old bookworms. You are so wordy and you can't explain it at all! Water comes and goes, from the beginning to now, how much actual content is there?

An originally smooth plot allows you to introduce large sections of the background to pieces.

The first few chapters are of no use at all. No matter how awesome you are in reality, everything will start from scratch after time travel, and the background introduced is of no use at all.

There are too many explanations and not much text, which makes it a bit uncomfortable to read. It seems to be pieced together. The only thing that runs through it is from low to high in practice, and the rest is just haha.

I admire the author very much. I can insist on writing so many negative reviews. I hope I can stick to it and finish it. Although I don't watch it 🙂

A maid is so poisonous that Hedinghong is not that poisonous

This is too long-winded. I kept writing it before time travel and I couldn't understand it.

What the hell! There's no human touch at all, it's all a machine plot.

Guoshu Anjin is of no use at all, so what else is there to write about?