I Have a Planetful of Players

The protagonist is a pig who has been deceived over and over again. What has he learned in ten thousand years? I feel like I don't know any common sense. So you like writing about Earth's political family? Does it have anything to do with the main plot? Your main plot is to use people from Earth to help you dominate the interstellar world. Some players on Earth have short-lived parents and are cousins ​​and grandfathers who have an affair with you? Besides, you are the ruling class and you are born to colonize the earth, but do you dare to write? If you don't write about kneeling down and licking you every day, what kind of bullshit god would you be? And his plan was discovered by a group of earthlings, just based on the contract? What should you do if someone really knows that you are an alien and someone is not afraid of stabbing you to death? Titan is in a good location and we use Mars as our main planet just because Mars has minerals, but we are afraid that the earth will find out. Are you a pig? Isn't it possible to set up a portal on a mineral star? What kind of bubble can't the earth be covered with? If there is no way to deal with the earth's indigenous people, what's the point of colonization? They always say that if you don't have money, you will get rich if you are cheated? I once read the book The Master Behind the Scenes. Although it is not a masterpiece, it is several levels higher than you know in terms of game development and main tasks. What are you talking about? Rewards depend on points, and the points are in the hands of one player. Are you insulting a pig by calling you a pig? Are you a god? No matter how potential the people on Earth are, they will all be your future colonization targets. Have you ever seen plantation owners give financial power to black slaves? There are also online names, such as Li Goudan and Wang Goudan. If you don't know how to choose a name, you just borrow the name from the fan list. A beautiful woman is called Wang Goudan. Why don't you call her all Goudan? What a useless book. . . Author, you still have a reason for not being popular. . .

I started reading it last night, and now I'm about 100 chapters in. I feel like the text is starting to fall apart. As someone who was attracted by the title of the novel, my first reaction was that a group of players worked hard to build a base, slowly developed it, and then competed with other lords for territory. To be honest, as far as I'm concerned, I don't care whether the setting of this book is to colonize the earth or something else. If I am afraid of being 404, I can completely change it from the perspective of the protagonist's kindness to cooperate with the earth or something. Anyway, in short, it is to solve the development restrictions of the earth and return to the development base. However, the author has been writing about what to do on the earth and how to return to his hometown and his family. In my opinion, it is completely putting the cart before the horse.

Am I the only one who thinks it looks good? I think the rhythm is okay. I've read too much Shuangwen, and I really don't want to watch Goldfinger pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger. Now this is the only one I can keep pursuing. For no other reason than I want to read unknown things. This novel is more like a collection of stories. Every character has a character description, and everything he says is consistent with his character and logic. This kind of protagonist is more in line with reality. The boss usually has something special about himself, and then leads an excellent team to achieve better results. It's just that the updates are a little slow.

He went to the market and was tricked by a bunch of people. The protagonist acted like a fool and said good things to others. The readers brought in the protagonist, and no one would bring in the players under the protagonist. Then a random player who had just started dared to show off his face to a lord like the protagonist, really treating himself as a dish. Then the protagonist himself was only 5th Dan in 10,000 years, and his elder brother was already 12th Dan. He also said that he was a genius back then and suppressed his cousin, and then this? , Fed a lot of poison, I thought it would be over just to see how the players later committed the second offense, and then I went back to the market and was tricked. I knew that I couldn't negotiate well, but I didn't know how to hire someone. What the hell, although it is not popular now, I can't help but control my fate, but at least the protagonist is a normal person. Is this the number one genius in the whole family? Say goodbye to a mentally retarded person who died of poison.

Evaluate it, first let's talk about the shortcomings: This is a story about someone who has lived for tens of thousands of years, spent countless time and money in school, but learned nothing. After getting an adventure (after Goldfinger), he is still stupid and gets beaten up by society.       ，，，       It doesn't make much sense. I can't say that I just made up the word count because the author is very careful, but emmmm... Then let's talk about the advantages: The writing style of this book is relatively good among similar articles, the readability is pretty good, and the creativity is good

Compared with other fourth natural disaster articles, there is a gap in the game part, but the overall writing is still readable, but the urban part is completely superfluous. The author is too ambitious and wants to write about urban immortality, the fourth natural disaster, another world, the interstellar... There are too many things mixed together that the author cannot control with his writing skills, and it becomes four different things. First, the fourth natural disaster article should focus on describing the funny and happy fourth natural disaster in the game. However, the author chose to use a large space to describe the real life of the fourth natural disaster and introduce real forces and even officials. It is a big failure. It is completely meaningless content and the word count is simply inflated. Second, letting players know that they are in the real world is completely contradictory to the flow of the behind-the-scenes gangsters. Third, the slap-in-the-face routine is too old-fashioned and full of embarrassment It was supposed to focus on the daily joy of players. The bright line is to develop an alien world, and the dark line is to write about the interstellar world. When the alien world is being developed, the interstellar world will turn from dark to bright. It can only be said to be a pity.

Let me tell you what I think about this book. It has more than 700 chapters and is still circling the earth. I spent a lot of chapters writing short stories about the players. I have been worried about the lord himself and who is the protagonist. His strength has not changed at all after so long. If he can't handle it, he just wants to take off the mask. I originally gave him this when he took the players to the home planet to recruit people. I feel pretty good, there is a huge world view, but after reading more than 700 chapters, 90% of them are describing the players' short stories. I'm really tired of it. I hope the author can speed up the progress. It is enough to roughly describe the players' short stories. It has been top-notch since it was put on the shelves. I don't want to spend my money on these many repetitive short stories.

Sorry <(_ _)>, I really have to quit. I have been chasing this book for a long time, but it makes me feel uncomfortable. The author's writing style and ideas are very good, but the plot is really discouraging. The plot before touching the inner part of the earth and cultivating immortals is very good, but the more you write about the inner part of the earth, the more poisonous it becomes. It's not that you can't read it, but I feel that the author is completely over the top. It's so easy to write, so watery, and how to write it is completely out of order. In fact, I have written reviews about this book before, and they all complained about the plot of the family and the country. The comment section has also been following this trend recently. The author may have noticed it and started to change now, but I really can't follow it anymore. The plot has collapsed and the protagonist is useless. If you remove the protagonist and write only the player's perspective, it will be impossible to write. There is no way. Without the protagonist, given the current level of the earth, it is difficult to even protect oneself. The potential is of no use in front of those lords who are more than ten thousand years old. No matter how you write it, it will only become a competition for other lords. Writing a protagonist is useless because a big boss has already targeted him. He has to rely on soft food to write. I can write it once, but it is impossible to use an excuse every time. What's even more uncomfortable is that the plot inside the earth lowers the overall story pattern. Every player can't escape from the earth's personnel relationships, family, politics... And can never escape this circle. Up to now, there is no sense of trust between the protagonist and the earth's forces, it is just an exchange of interests, and it is also full of barriers and wariness. If you want to get out of this circle, you can only forcefully write down the previous plot, but this is impossible. No matter how good the author's subsequent writing is, it can only be remedial. A bad ending is inevitable. The author has double-crossed again, and I probably won't be able to write anymore. I will jump out of the pit as soon as possible.

There is internal fighting every day, and there is internal fighting within the protagonist's family. Most of the families of the main players below are fighting among themselves. Isn't the author afraid that he will be bullied by his relatives every day? This novel is too poisonous.

I got a publishing bonus, but it was not well written from the perspective of 2023. The first dozen or so chapters were unclear, prices exploded at the beginning, and who is interested in looking at family issues from the beginning?

Originally, a friend recommended reading this book, saying that it has the potential to become a god. However, the writing collapsed after four or five hundred chapters, and the style of painting became distorted. When I saw it, it was indeed what it meant. With such a good subject, I have been writing about the earth's monastic world recently. There are so many novel things that can be written, and I have not written about the cosmic federation or the development of the planet. Who is not tired of watching the theme of earthly cultivation?

This early stage is both a family fight and a forced intelligence reduction of the protagonist, which seriously affects the feeling. This method has long been not popular, and the setting is too serious. Didn't I deliberately try to undermine the crazy and deceived IQ of the top talents in the universe? I would like to give you a suggestion: it is best to revise the previous chapters, at least not to make them too uncomfortable to read. Otherwise, how many people will be persuaded to withdraw from the two chapters? The good thing is that the setting is good. I feel that if the early stage was better, the popularity would be at least twice as high.      ，

I feel that the author has allowed the people on earth to let go, and has recently begun to decentralize the power of the only city that Xiye has control over, leaving only a scattered developer team with perhaps less than a hundred people. The people on earth are so NB, why don't we just send all the people on earth directly to Tianshen Academy to cultivate gods and then develop one by one (not to mention the tuition is expensive, we can always send people to go in when they develop later), the protagonist of the night is wiped out while talking and laughing, and the book is over. Extra: Earthlings rule the entire federation, void, hell, and the realm of death. (Anyway, as long as the people on earth are invincible, it will be over)

To be honest, the setting is really good, but the writing is weird. I have read more than a hundred chapters, many of which have nothing to do with the sandbox players and the protagonist. The protagonist also borrowed 10 billion to buy some machine tools and recruit talents (unless the Celestial Coin is the same as the Zimbabwean currency, so it will be all spent). The world view is that of the Space Federation. Even if you don't buy a fleet and things to enhance your strength, you can at least buy some slaves and robot development bases and mining. Wouldn't it be good to free the players to invade the world? After reading about a hundred chapters, the summary is: the writing is very messy, the protagonist does not have the domineering power of a higher civilization, and the writing of invading the world is very stingy.

The writing is very wonderful, I have read it three times. The author will release a new book soon! No matter what, you can also read this comic. I want to see how stunning the beauty with the elf body is! Look at the dazzling skills of Brother Gou's Earth Cry, Li Goudan's Wind King's Barrier, the Dawn Army Leader's Slash, and the Second Lord's Gaia's Phase, etc.!

The writing is not good, there are too many bugs, the body on the earth disappears after entering the game, and only less than a hundred people find it. The four to five hundred words of the story of Pu Yunchuan and Isabel are too bad. How can a battle-hardened duke look at a fat loser, the loser male protagonist of a light novel, right? It's interesting to write about the rapid development of recruiting people and fighting for technology. Who would like to read your pimping story? You can't write it well either.

Chapter 27 I really don't understand what the author is thinking. Even if it is to advance the plot, I can't write it like that! A classmate came into contact with a monkey that was suspected of being infected with the virus. Instead of helping her to leave with the troops, you actually helped to hide it? As mentioned before, the fatality rate is 100%. Are you saving her or harming her? Do you want to infect the whole school? I don't know if the author would hide it if he encountered such a thing in reality, regardless of the safety of himself and his family. He is so arrogant!

I just couldn't help it when I saw Chapter 320. Author, has no one ever mentioned that the three front lines will be released at the same time? You have all kinds of chaos in the third line. You are watching the earth suddenly jump to another world and then jump to the game. Anyway, the chaos comes from the third line. To be honest, you can't control the third line, especially the other world. At first, I thought that the other world will be almost finished. But in the end, you give people the impression that it is a forced continuation of the other world. The earth side just has a bit of a **** meaning. You directly jump to the other world or jump to the game. The same goes for games and other worlds. Let's read a few chapters. If this kind of forced jump is the same in the future, then I can only say goodbye.

It feels like it was still colonized by gods in the front, but it turned into an urban pretense later on, and it was still a pretense with loopholes everywhere. Feeling a bit broken. There are tens of thousands of players, but just these few are abnormal? No one else has discovered it, and there are no low-quality people? Something to cause trouble? Although the writing is quite good and allows people to ignore these things occasionally, what is wrong with always writing about the real world and exaggerating the shortcomings of the book?

It feels like the players have no loyalty at all, they will revolt if they want, and they let the players go so freely without any restrictions. If they defect to other lords, the protagonist may not dare to use the contract to kill them all, because this is basically his only chance to rise.

After gritting my teeth and reading Chapter 12, I felt like I was wasting my time. I wrote a lot of words in a verbose manner. What is this written about?

The author should not be influenced by the trolls. The book is a good book. The subject matter is good. The world view is great. Those who are good writers certainly don't like to read this kind of book with too strong professional vocabulary. There are currently 700 chapters. The book is very good, but it requires a certain level of logical analysis and understanding. It is all straightened out. It is not too enjoyable to read. So it is a good thing to read more. Otherwise, I am afraid that if I encounter such a good book again in the future, I will just miss it. I was so scared that I did the Zhang Li Comprehensive Volume overnight. Okay, that's all. I hope the author will adjust his status in time and start a new book to achieve great results

In fact, the author's writing is okay, but the world view is too huge and difficult to grasp. I think there is no need to add elements of Chinese mythology. It doesn't fit well. It just follows the flow of early science fiction. It is an absolute masterpiece. The story of the first batch of players on Mars is an absolute classic. It's a pity later. I'm waiting for the author to restart this book. It's so good that I'll definitely order it all. Even though it's not finished, it's still hard work.

The explosion of water. Do you have to write so many useless things? You can't write more about the main plot. Left, lower, right, and right. Wang Goudan, Li Goudan, Zhang Goudan, Brother Goudan. After reading more than 400 chapters, they all jumped on the horse. Who is it? I can't tell the difference.

Please, stop using so much Sichuan dialect. It's a bit disgusting to watch. No discrimination intended, just discomfort.

The protagonist gave me the feeling that I was watching the King of Birds

I came across this book on a book-listening app, and I actually finished listening to it because it was free. The result is too many inconsistencies. For example, in the gene body conflict, when Wang Goudan was competing with the Yunshan faction, Feng Yao was deducted points for exposing his gene body and went on a killing spree. Later on, he becomes an elf in human form. The same goes for Feng Doudou. In Lu Kaikai's combat power ranking introduction, he is a wood elf ghost. Later, it becomes a weapon spirit. Didn't I say that the elven form is fixed? Also, the genetic body used by Abe Seimei is the moon elf. When I turned back to write about the Emerald Dream, I said that the Moon Elf gene is no longer available. Where did your cell phone come from, protagonist? And the race of Eonar, the captain of the Titan Army, is also the same for several days. All I can remember are the Dawn Titan, the Golden Titan, and the Green Titan. There is also a problem with the setting of undead creatures. When the school went to Iron Mountain Forest, the dwarf vitamin guardian was shocked that the undead had gods? I just wanted to ask, isn't Sylvanas an undead? Aren't the top ten lichs undead? Aren't they all the gods making such a fuss about? There is also the captain of the Fifth King's Team. It is written that he is exercising his body. If you, a dead soul, have a body that can be trained, isn't it just a body that can be used to move around? The strength of the body is fixed. Isn't it the setting written by you? It wouldn't matter if it was the captain of the First King who was originally alive and used the azurite to fool the laws of the world of death. But you didn't say anything. This was written too carelessly. Did you proofread it before and after writing it? There are also a lot of pitfalls that have been left unfilled. The most basic one is Chen Yutong, who went to Lanling Academy. To be honest, if he had been in the final friendship, it would not have been possible to be as good as it is now. He would be short of an assassin with top-level combat power and a one-hit kill. If Yu Nu Gua Wu Gua cooperates with Chen Yutong, maybe Dou can be killed indiscriminately.

There are too many characters. I saw that more than 70% of the characters are almost a mess at the end, and there are too many characters It was pretty good at the beginning, but after chapter 850, it started to suck. I was confused when reading it When the whole world knew that this was not a game, the title of the novel had no relationship with the content. This should be called (I Have a Group of Earthlings), which is more suitable.

It should be written around the protagonist, around the main line, and the story should be written entirely about the players. The more you watch it, the more boring it becomes, and there is no sense of excitement at all. The protagonist should be allowed to show off. As a result, the protagonist's appearance rate is basically non-existent, and I am speechless.

This progress is too slow. More than 1,000 chapters are still in the novice village, and the protagonist has only reached a level after more than 1,000 chapters.