I'm Really Not a Life-Changer

Too much dialogue affects the reading experience and the flow of the story.

Author Author I had ten monthly passes in my hand and I gave them to them. . . Do you like it?

I have been a reader for almost twenty years, and I almost never interfere with the author's normal advancement of the plot of the book, but you wrote it so well. The eldest sister's husband's family is described as too stupid and bad. I hope that they can die as miserable as possible, and that the protagonist can use them as cruelly as possible. The more painful they are, the better. There is no need for remorse or anything like that, just to simply torture them to death. After watching this plot, all 11 monthly passes will be given to you.

This queen's plot, apart from being disgusting, I don't see any use for it. At present, it can only be understood as the author's xp causing trouble 😅

It was very poisonous when it was first released. The protagonist was dressed as a woman and was a stunning beauty, which fascinated all the high-ranking officials and families, including the emperor. The old emperor, who has been secretly cultivating the best masters in the royal family for hundreds of years, is scheming, top-notch in mental skills, and has mastered the four most powerful evil spirits in the royal family. In the evenly matched confrontation with the villain behind the scenes, the villain instantly turned him into a puppet just because he saw the protagonist pretending to be a woman and lost his mind? ? ? Three years ago, he used women's clothing to rape the queen and gave birth to a son? ? ?

I originally had a lot of things to do this week and I couldn't finish them even if I stayed up late. But today I accidentally clicked on them and couldn't stop them. It's over, I can't sleep tonight. It's really good, the character creation, the whole background of exploring the world gradually unfolds... There are a few small questions at the moment: 1. The protagonist is too fragile, offending everyone who should be offended, and then he can't hide it anymore, and now he is a strong ordinary person? Should we start solving it immediately? 2. How to deal with his wife😁? He had no feelings before, but now he has closed the door... Looking back, it seems that her wife could have told him to go back at that time... Can she still dare to trust him after such a betrayal? 3. This world is full of bad people. In comparison, can a family of military commanders be a little better? How should the protagonist go? You can't take on the whole world by yourself. Looking forward to the plot unfolding later.

The settings are basically reasonable, there are no intelligence-reducing operations, the protagonist plays high-end games as soon as he comes up, and the interludes are good.

I just read Chapter 7, and I felt a sense of familiarity. It turned out to be the same author 🙂. There is nothing much to say. This author is the first one to disgust me to the point of swearing

See Chapter 80, the queen. . . It's extremely toxic and I really don't like rapist-type male protagonists. It was well written before, but once you subscribe, you will be given a strong dose of medicine. . . 😅

The writing in the front is quite good, but after the Queen's chapter, I started to feed💩. It felt like I was eating a big meal and ended up eating💩. It was really disgusting. The content setting was very interesting, but the middle part💩 was really uncomfortable.

The last one is written as 💩. Don't be confused by the first dozen chapters. The last one is all 💩

The comments are so right, drive high and go low, without thinking, just word for word, the editor's recommendation seems to be based on who gives it 💰whoever gets more will get it.

First, let's report the progress: we have reached chapter 380. The plot of the book is quite interesting, but! This author seems to have a problem. He likes to break sentences to express foreshadowing. It's interesting once or twice, but it's really disgusting when it happens too many times. Especially after entering Beijing and until the replacement of the prince, the section is particularly repetitive. After that, it becomes relatively less frequent, but I still like to describe it like this. Secondly, there is another huge pitfall: the author of Gouba always likes to do reversals, but they are also very blunt. Anyway, after reading the first big plot, I don't want to read the rest of it anymore. I'm tired of it and it's very boring🥱. I suggest you read this book at your own discretion. There is no slander in speaking from the bottom of your heart. (The plot will not be revealed, if you are interested, you can watch it for yourself)

The protagonist is promoted, the mother-in-law divorces his wife, the protagonist dissuades him, the protagonist comforts his wife, and the wife is moved. This scene has been performed three times recently. I am here to watch the mother-in-law and daughter-in-law drama. It is one thing for the author to get married. Is it okay not to bring it into the plot?

The author is being mysterious again. I feel that the author is writing about himself, whether he is a designer or an author. While designing, he is playing with himself and putting down his own projection. The protagonist is designed, the protagonist is written, the author designs the world, the monsters, the author writes the world of the book. "I" know what I know, and I also know that "I" know what I know, and then they exchange ideas with each other! The entire attack here, immediately hit it with the other hand, create a powerful character there, and immediately break it with one blow, hit yourself, brainstorm according to your own ideas, whoever you think of, and do whatever you think.

I feel like the author should read other people's books and learn more. He will always be the Riddler and have endless reversals. The account he managed to raise with great difficulty will be destroyed. Once his reputation is not good, he will not read your book! I just read Hidden Moth recently, and I have just read about 10 chapters. People write books based on logic, and the details can withstand scrutiny. To introduce this book, it is purely because you rely too much on the Riddler and use infinite reversals to write books. If you lose these feelings, you will not be able to write books. Your grasp of details is also average. I saw every book of yours and I gave up because I couldn't stand it. I really want you to get better and better. After all, your brain is really good. I don't want you to waste your imagination!

Why do you want to write about what happened with the Queen? Wow, this plot makes me really uncomfortable.

There are too many Riddlers, and hiding too much makes me feel sick.

The master of reversals... The master of suspense... Dead and alive! ! So tired...

What is the significance of queen in this book? I'm so fucking speechless

In a world where evil spirits are everywhere, coups d'état are always happening, and princes and emperors have accidents every now and then, all kinds of people still consider the rules of officialdom when doing things, and the protagonist does not take action without evidence. It feels really naive.

After reading Chapter 103, the rest of it is not interesting The main character has no main plot and no goal. He just dawdles and lives one day at a time. Anyway, the author will arrange major events and have to wait for the main character to start! Second, the protagonist's pen can now achieve partial omniscience without side effects. Write down the names of the aristocratic families and royal families that are already known. It is estimated that most things will be clear, although some things will be blank. At least most of the 17 princes should be able to know the entire life except for a few problematic ones... Using big data analysis, the protagonist can guess most of the things, Third, it is the old-fashioned saying that the country's military force is not as good as the villain's. The country does not have an overwhelming advantage, so he becomes a villain. But now it has not reached the end of the dynasty cycle. It is even in the middle of the dynasty. It can be revived if things go wrong... As a result, the power belongs to the personal world. In theory, the most powerful royal family is like a lunatic... I still want to write a little more, but I am sleepy and go to bed💤... Finally, the Riddler please return to Gotham City...

Let's cut it. I told you to quit at the beginning. If you don't know anything, you just push forward. I'm speechless. It's inexplicable to travel through time. It's inexplicable to come forward.

Lure people into killing them, what the hell are you writing about?

I feel like the protagonist has no ideas of his own and has always been led by others. He has written books by himself and knows a lot of things. He still has to do things under others. The appearance of a sword fairy shows that there are other people who can take advantage of him. Why must he do things under others? Even if he does things under others, he will not use the convenience to grow quickly.

How long does it take to rewrite the Earth players

Everyone, let's go. The author writes brain-burning stories, and the plot is slow. If you want to read something light-hearted and joyful, with decisive killings, etc., Please leave. I'm leaving too.

Save time. Those who can accept the author's initiative to reduce the dimensionality of cheats can read it

No wonder he is an ancient true god, he smells like an ancient pretentious slap in the face

It was okay in the early stage, but when I saw that a single plot from Chapter 200 to Chapter 300 was not finished, I was a little overwhelmed. There were too many supporting characters, which was useless.