Popularity Above All: My Art Style Is Way Too Eccentric!

The setting is good, but the plot makes up for the good setting.

It's quite interesting, but it's a bit too much to repeat the plot twice.

Water army, water, water, sea, you are all water.

The story is obviously modeled after One Punch Man. Why is Dior on the cover?

But if you add the setting of a universal drama to everyone, you will be like the old timers. The traditional routine of the protagonist entering the drama to gain popularity will not be enough. If you do it this way, do you need to write the plot that other people will perform? If you write it, it will take over the main role. If you don't write it, the setting will be meaningless. And I can basically guess that there may be problems in the follow-up, with other people imitating the protagonist's various characters. Another point is that the origin of the audience is not explained clearly at the beginning. Does this mean that there are endless audiences in parallel worlds? Then each actor is like the setting of a global god, entering various dramas to collect popularity. Moreover, the written audience is very flat, human-like, and the speeches are all in the same routine. When writing about this kind of subject, the author can go to the comment sections of various dramas, games, etc. To collect materials. I can only say that although it is right to follow the trend and write about the subject, you should at least make some preparations. You are not as good as the same subject as eggplant

The first story is over. So far, it seems that the setting is very good and the writing is okay. The biggest problem is that the plot is too repetitive. To put it simply, the protagonist keeps on going every second, and the monsters come one after another, but there is nothing new. I hope the plot can be improved in the next part, otherwise readers will be lost. Sometimes after reading the latest chapter, I feel like "here we go again" and "I feel like I've seen this episode before". If you continue to do this after being put on the shelves, you will lose readers.

What does it mean to go the Saitama route and use Dio as the cover?

It was said at the beginning that the protagonist's body is very powerful, he can kill everyone with one punch, and his chest muscles can withstand all injuries. I have already imagined a macho man like Saba or Asura, but the description of the protagonist's appearance is sloppy and inconsistent. The villain's description of the protagonist's appearance is, strange?, What does it mean?

It basically feels like Fist Man

There is no stage where the priest reads the classic lines, there is no foreshadowing of the sinner's soul, it is too straightforward and it loses the sense of mystery😔 It doesn't have the flavor of the previous book.

It's quite funny. Sure enough, the funny and hot-blooded series are the strongest, but can you only star in one anime at a time? Can I go back and forth to several sets and change roles? Hh

The author should write the drama first. The second game is said to be a card drawing game. It reads like an interactive movie, which is very incompatible. It reads like a game, and then there are too many famous scenes in the early stage without any foreshadowing. If the threshold is raised, it will be boring later. Let's see what happens next.

As long as the writing of this setting is not too bad, it is good as a running account, but it is just a picky thing. I'm afraid not many people like to see this kind of thing.

Compared with the previous pretentious protagonist of Gojo Satoru, this one chooses a funny protagonist similar to One Punch Man. At the same time, in order to avoid the collapse of the combat power of traditional dramas, we chose to use the infinite flow writing method. The protagonists continue to participate in different types of dramas Funny, interesting, and well-set, highly recommended

It's basically a localized punch.

The setting is okay, but the writing power is not enough to write interesting points.

I can give 8 points to the opening episode, which is a perfect score. I can only give it a 6.5 For the gacha game. The biggest problem is that the length of the game is too long, both in terms of writing time and plot time. In reality, it would take at least a year for the big boss of a card-drawing game to be offline. If it's the ultimate BOSS, it won't even show its age. How are you going to live? Should you keep writing this plot, or intersperse other plots in between? Then if you intersperse it with the year, it will look even more broken.

Interesting, I wonder if the author will write about whether Lando will go to heaven on a summer night? It's Destiny World. Will it evolve beyond Destiny World?

In fact, you can also directly break the fourth wall by interacting with the audience, barraging, or making complaints. Even if you have no fighting power or average fighting power, which audience wouldn't like this?

I thought this name and this avatar said Dior, but it turned out that it said bald head

It's best to add some settings, such as what benefits can be gained from playing the character. Otherwise, what's the point of playing the character?

I felt it was pretty good during the first punch, but then it was a bit draggy. I also wrote a routine several times. I hope it can end as soon as possible and enter the next world.

Why are people with psychic abilities always written as people with zero abilities? Please change it, thank you

Without a golden finger, why would the protagonist stand out🙂

The theme development is quite interesting, but the author's descriptions are sometimes too bland, resulting in the inability to fully arouse emotions when some pretense should be more enjoyable. I hope the author can be more refined.

Yes, but it's too repetitive. You can't write each plot twice. It's just adding dialogue in the middle. What a big deal.

There is no description of the hairspray hand movements, this is the soul.

There are a lot of typos and omissions. I hope the author will check after finishing.

What is reality for? It's always been in the comics

Three pictures a day is just right, two pictures are not enough👀