I Became the Ancestor of the Blood Clan

I read this book because the setting was interesting, but in the middle I found that I still fell into a cliché. After a month or two, it started to fall apart in the later stages... It's a pity.

When did he become the heroine?

I have never seen such a conscientious writer. One chapter a day. Can you imagine that this is the only book on my bookshelf that I update most frequently? 😭And this is the first farming article that I can read. Be optimistic about the author.

The structure is good, but the writing is flawed. Average to above average

It used to boast of being a farming story, but now it seems like it's just a regular hegemony story with a little more development. Is it a whim or opportunism!

These recent chapters have been pretty good. It connects reality and the game, and the writing style is smoother than before. I give you my recommendation vote, keep up the good work!

2021.01.14 This is a rare book that I like. To be honest, the first half of this book is quite amazing. The second half is average, but the overall feeling is insufficient. Since the male protagonist started to become stronger, it started to become more and more fluent. I think the best part of the writing is that I was still in the magic tower period, but then I became extraordinary and started to make a lot of money. I hope the author can spend some space to flesh out the characters of the important characters that appear (he, she, it) (so far, some of the characters that embody the character and make the impression of the characters distinct include the master of the White Tower, a certain young girl of golden blood, and probably a certain princess), but the impression is still too weak. What does it mean to have a full personality that makes people think of what she does just by saying it? What is your wish? Why do you follow the protagonist (not because of any vampire restrictions or the contract with the God of Death (the God of Death should also be abolished)). You can choose the opportunity to write about these events (it is best not to write them in the form of extras, because the extras will feel incoherent). Finally, I wish the author a good year in advance! (This is a feeling that I am not teaching people how to do things 🤫)

Can you update it faster? One chapter will be updated every day. One chapter will be gone before you say anything

Are the four monthly passes accurate?😁

It's rare that I can continue to watch the farming genre. I've read a lot of books, and now my taste is becoming more and more picky.

Author Jun Why there is no character column in this book🤔Look at the picture

I originally voted for you when you updated today.

It's so good! I stayed up late reading this book and now I have two big black circles under my eyes. I can't help it, it's so good. Look! You must keep reading.

Why hasn't it been updated today?

It's really well written, keep it up! ! !

It's well written. If you don't have eunuchs, your grades should be pretty good.

It's only two chapters and I can't see any problems with the plot. The writing is good and fluent. Write well, author.

Update quickly, otherwise you will be a phenomenon tomorrow

Where is the VIP group?

I saw about 100 pictures. In fact, there is one place where I still have doubts. Can't the protagonist be double-dressed? Why in urban design or residential planning, people can be found in reality. There are many talented people among Sha Diao netizens. Then you just need to make a plan in reality and let the people in Glory implement it. It should be pretty simple to just follow the book. That's it…………

Blood team

People who read vampire stories should still have some expectations. After all, vampires always have a stereotype of being mysterious, powerful, and evil. It can be said that the biggest attraction of this genre is how to solve the contradiction between the evil characteristics/congenital defects of the vampires and their survival and development. It can be said that if the contradictions are solved cleverly or the contradictions are made vivid, this vampire novel will be successful. So how did this book solve it? The Vampires transformed directly and became the righteous servants of the people, known as the "Holy Light Vampires" (the country is terrible), and then through hard work in building the country, they educated the people and made the people in the country take the initiative to donate blood (to be honest, this explanation is also very cliché). Well, the conflict has been resolved. Your uncle has also solved the interesting points. The vampires in this book are neither mysterious, powerful, nor evil. I read a vampire novel just to read about you, the "holy light vampire"? Because the protagonist doesn't want to see blood, he drinks the so-called "bottled white magic blood" that is the same as Nutrition Express. ——You, the ancestor of the Vampire Clan, don't even bite the neck, why are you writing about Vampire Clan themes? It's better to just write about mage farming. To put it bluntly, except for the extremely cohesive and absolute obedience setting of blood link, which is somewhat useful in building an utopia (after all, this thing is equivalent to 100% implementation of the law), the vampire theme of this book is not helpful at all. It made me so angry. The theme bonus is completely bypassed, and the plot construction is also old-fashioned, so is it a dead end? Not really. But that is based on the author's enthusiasm. If the characterization is clear, the plot is ingenious, the intention is profound, and the development is novel and meets one or two of the requirements, it can be a good watch. However, after reading several chapters, it is full of the shocking lack of common sense exposed by the writing of Jianguo, there is not enough eye-catching plot development, and the creation of the main characters is useless. It feels very mediocre. Seeing the protagonist claiming to be the "King of Routines" with his mediocre routine operations, I really had mixed feelings. Then the theme of this book also very ambitiously adds players and double penetration. I can't see that much later, but I can foresee that, compared to the interesting points, it will more likely only be a burden that further crushes the book.

To tell a joke, the ancestor of vampires is younger than ordinary vampires.

There is a saying that this book collapses so much in the middle that it makes it seem boring in the later stages. There is a book called "The Super Mechanic". I recommend the author to read it. I think there are many techniques and writing rhythms in it that are worth learning from the author. Please work hard, author. I am very optimistic about you.

It's very interesting at the beginning, but the author loses control as it goes on... There are meaningless places, such as the sand sculpture players talking wildly, The really interesting conquests, battles, and farming are just brushed aside... The settings of the earth and the players are holding back...

Li De, does it seem consistent with your impression? ?

Extraordinary was so awesome in the early stage, but it was stuck for a long time without upgrading. In the later stage, it suddenly collapsed, and suddenly it became very easy to pop up a lot of them.

In the later stage, I was still eating books. The author wrote about an awesome career and then forgot about it. It had no sense of existence at all and made people feel like they were ghostwriting.

I personally feel that the role of the vampires in the later scenes is too low. In fact, you don't have to be so big-hearted and just write about the farming and development of the vampires. Isn't it fun to do something like blood elves now?

Don't bleed in front of me, because your blood will reveal my true colors.