The Great Metaphysical Explosion

I don't know why, but I didn't want to read any further after Chapter Nine. There's this inexplicable need for others' approval. And this inexplicable need to publish his articles. If he just wanted to show off, he should have written about entertainment. I can tolerate that his research isn't mainstream. But where are the fundamentals of martial arts? Meridians and their circulation.

The section on teachers was really padded out and off-topic, a full seven chapters long. The earlier parts were alright in terms of reasoning... But what was the point of this long passage? To lecture the reader???

What motivated you to write over 6 million words?

There's too much rambling, and the plot isn't flowing smoothly. Maintaining a smooth flow is the key when you're just rambling.

I like this type of story, thumbs up 👍, it has a feel of Full-Time Magister.

The conversations between classmates are formulaic.

Let's go see Mr. Jiu together!

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Why does the main character's name often change to Qian Chuanfeng? Even in several consecutive paragraphs, it's always the same name.

Why are there typos in the description?