I Put the System in Its Place

Everyone who writes books is a genius, and those who save manuscripts are even more talented.

The author is too low-key. Everyone who has a book list will arrange it.

Drag the author into custody🤭🤭🤭

It's quite interesting. I feel that the author's books don't have popular routines, and the writing style doesn't deliberately imitate. It's very comfortable. It makes you smile. This is true for both books. I'm optimistic about the author.

This book is probably a continuation of the problems in the last part of the previous book. The writing was very scattered in the last part of the previous book, which made people feel that there was no sense of expectation. When writing a novel, one must pay attention to the sense of expectation. Without a sense of expectation, readers will get tired easily. This book is too scattered and the rhythm is too chaotic. In the background of the apocalypse, Goldfinger is a manufacturing system, which is actually a good idea. The problem is that readers don't know what the protagonist is doing. He upgrades the system and defeats the enemy in one go. Then, the settings of the different world, including the stone in the forest, the sword, and the good guy system, don't know what development will happen, so the readers don't have much hope. Compared with "Hostship", the main line of Trusteeship is clear, and the stage tasks are okay in response to the coming of the upper world, because the setting is for the spiritual energy to gradually recover. Coupled with the special system and the salty fish protagonist, a character born with dramatic conflicts. It will create a sense of anticipation in the readers. In the later period of "Hostship", the rhythm was messed up and the structure was scattered. The protagonist didn't know what to do, and the readers didn't know what to do. Readers lose their sense of expectation as soon as they don't know what to do. This is probably what I feel.

Uh-huh, I saw your book when I was looking through the rankings. I came over to take a look and sure enough, someone complained about you. I'm relieved about you, Laj. It's the first time you asked me to read a book and I didn't like you as a person 😤

I suddenly remembered that The butler system claimed to be the incarnation of the will of heaven and earth, born out of the vision of all sentient beings, but now he is planning to run away with his wife. . . .

I'm so happy. What did you write in your last book, the cycle of cause and effect, retribution, hahahahahaha, I want to laugh for three minutes.

It feels like the author has changed. I was managed by the system. It is very interesting. But this time it feels like a white text, with no logical logic. It is not as enjoyable as ours.

Why do some people always want the protagonist to show off when watching a behind-the-scenes series? Isn't the fun of this kind of book lies in the portrayal of the supporting characters? The supporting character is given the system, and then not mentioned at all. The mention is also to show the awesomeness of the ability given to the system by the protagonist. Does the creation of this supporting character still make sense? Are you happy if you are a complete tool person?