
Beginning in Konoha 300 Years Ago
从木叶前300年开始苟
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 77k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 6y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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30Chapters
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Not to mention anything else, the highlight of this book that I am most optimistic about is the early description of the worldview and social relations before the Warring States Period. It can be seen that the author has put a lot of thought into it. It may be a big shortcoming for people who like to read cool novels, but as a fan, or simply a novel, this will undoubtedly be an advantage, not a disadvantage. So, I also hope that the author can write down the story in his mind as much as possible. Every creation, even if it is just a fan novel, is the author's hard work. Come on, brother outside
I have a rough feeling that Arrangement's identity in his previous life was that he was a political animal from a scientific research institution? I read it in one go and didn't go back to confirm it. Based on this, on the one hand, there are descriptions such as environmental physiology affecting the mind, and on the other hand, people can't trust the tribe after a hundred and twenty years (especially the atmosphere in the Uzumaki tribe is very good). In this aspect, there is also the treatment of the attitude towards the younger sister after reincarnation. . . The two key chapters are not too long, and there are no "faults" between the tribe and the younger sister. It gives people a strong sense of inconsistency. My thoughts stopped when I wrote this, and I couldn't remember it after thinking for a long time. That's it. Also, the protagonist is seeking immortality throughout the entire story? The starting point seems to be to survive until the plot begins? I'm not sure yet. Is it starting to go astray? If you don't have a foothold, it's quite reasonable, but "human" itself is not an immortal species, and I always feel that something is wrong with the protagonist. Well, it's just my own feeling.
I'll wait until we get into the plot before watching.
If you update it once a day, this book will die. Author, please work harder. You are writing a new book. Even if you update it like this, it will still die.
After reading some, I have a question. The protagonist has lived in the tribe since he was a child for more than a hundred years, but he feels that the people in the tribe cannot be trusted? No feelings at all for more than a hundred years? Do your own children, grandchildren, family elders and juniors have no feelings? Why do you do research on your own, hide it, just to survive until the plot begins? Please forgive me for skipping over the lines and not seeing where I made it clear. Share the technology and study the cloned body and controllable transplantation of the soul. Can't we still live to the end? We can still live together. The whole family will survive for hundreds of years, and the soul will live forever. After hundreds of years, there will always be geniuses. How many black technologies has been researched by Uncle Snake? The protagonist A family has been studying sealing techniques for hundreds of years. Black Zetsu, Six Paths Madara, and Kaguya are no longer a problem. Okay, if you have a bigger brain, you can colonize the interstellar world and fight with the Otsutsuki clan. Now, the protagonist abandons his wife and children alone, leaves the family and lives for hundreds of years. After a few hundred years, the plot begins to reincarnate into a child and the first generation, Madara makes friends? Or compete with Minato for his wife? Going to school with Naruto? Since the protagonist has no sense of belonging to the family and no emotions at all for more than a hundred years, the cold-blooded and ruthless character of the old coin has been established, and the book has collapsed. How do you write the plot in the later period? The protagonist is hundreds of years old and is in love with others? Or do you have a good impression of these people from the first generation? A family that has been in the family for more than a hundred years has no feelings, but will it have feelings for the people in these first-generation comics and anime? And I don't see the protagonist's goal now, to live three hundred years later? What is it for? Watch the plot? It's okay to say that you don't want to die but want to live on and become a big villain, but I haven't seen what the main character is for yet. It seems to be simple. The plot will start three hundred years later. My family will be exterminated three hundred years later, so I will survive until three hundred years later to escape the extermination? Because I skipped through it, the middle part didn't seem to attract my attention. Also, the author's imaginary setting was a bit outrageous. When the protagonist was 16, if I remember correctly, he studied for ten years and didn't even know a sealing technique. He didn't have any IQ accumulation in his previous life for decades. I skipped a paragraph in the middle. I may have missed it. I have read it, but I want to say that if I remember correctly, Katsuyuki will be able to seal the King Kong when she is a teenager, and there will be a lot of other sealing techniques. And if it is true that the Uzumaki tribe cannot learn a single sealing technique after more than ten years of study, and there are no other attributes, and it is not all about Taijutsu. How can a Taijutsu master like Kai Huang survive in troubled times? It's late at night and I have nothing to do, so I just finished watching the first life and complained about it.
That's not right! The era of samurai has begun to decline since the emergence of Ninja sect! The Ninja Sect appeared thousands of years ago
It started when the main character didn't trust the family. One hundred and eighty years later, he became the talker of the family and still didn't trust it. And in the end, he was reincarnated into a samurai family and went to fight in Renwu. A hundred years of planning was abandoned even if the family didn't trust it? I guess all the readers have run out of ideas by this point. I also failed, but my previous writing was pretty good.
Why reincarnate? Is the next routine going to be reincarnated into Konoha Hatsuken? Then reincarnate into the era of the Twelve Little Stronges? What does your book have to do with its title? I thought I was an old man who was trying to sell dog meat 😊😊
It's rare to see a novel that appeals to your appetite. It doesn't matter if it's a young seedling. I'm really worried when I read the comments below. I hope the author won't be led into a ditch by those readers who are pointing fingers.
No matter what you write, your bold and original style is better than many authors. But if you die midway, then just pretend that I didn't say anything.
The author's creativity is good, but I can only say that I can't stand the protagonist in the author's works and it doesn't suit my taste, so I'll give it a try. I'll see you later.
There is too much information. If you don't get into the plot quickly, not many people will be left to watch it. Although the original is great, I don't need to say more about why I watch the fanfic.
Open your imagination
The protagonist plans to use the east wind of world consciousness to practice the way of the samurai. Isn't the best way to eliminate all the invading chakra from the ninja world? So the protagonist needs to recover all chakra like Kaguya? At first, I thought that the path chosen by the protagonist was to practice the immortal mode to achieve perfection and survive three hundred years after entering the three holy places. I didn't expect that he chose reincarnation. Although this technology is high, it is not interesting enough. Reincarnation is not true, but life extension is. And the samurai's extraordinary path can completely use natural energy (the vitality of heaven and earth), coupled with will and heart, this is a bit like the two dragons of the Tang Dynasty passed to the rain field, except that the natural energy in Naruto is more lively and can make people healthier. The chakra setting is based on yoga practice, and the original chakra setting of Buddhism was also the same system, so the rise to decline of Buddhism in this book is very close to reality, so the Otsutsuki clan is actually from the Asan sect camp. Finally, I would like to say that this protagonist is hard to like. Naruto is a passionate fan, and it would be too dissonant for you to write an old Yinbi. There is no Lao Yinbi type of protagonist who is popular among Naruto fans.
It's quite interesting, but updates are too slow I'll save this book until it reaches one hundred chapters before reading it.
Dufa, the author is crazy about showing off his classical proficiency but he really can't write novels
Don't be an eunuch. I'm very curious about how the protagonist is abusing a dog three hundred years later.
I hope that the Uzumaki clan will be reincarnated again when the ninja world is pacified by the Senjus. After all, everything you did in the beginning originated from the Uzumaki. I hope that the Uzumaki clan will not be wiped out.
Interesting
I can also watch the protagonist of Lao Yinbi. [I also like to watch this kind of absolutely rational protagonist] I am afraid that this person will set up a plot later. He started to talk about love with people again, revealing his true feelings, fetters of life and death, etc., Which directly destroyed the self-contradiction of his character. After all, he has stayed in his family for more than a hundred years, and he has no trust, no feelings, no bonds with his family members. His wife, son, and daughter have no feelings. He treats his family's elders and juniors, everyone, like strangers, and just uses their resources for himself. Service, I have never trusted each other, I just want to live until the end. They don't care whether they live or die at all, and the family atmosphere is also very good. The protagonist is still like this. He is truly ruthless to the end. This character has been established If after the plot begins, true feelings are exposed and people are bound to life and death, it is really unacceptable. After all, you can't build trust after being with your family for hundreds of years. A person who is bound by emotions abandons his wife and children and has no feelings for his wife, sons or daughters. Regardless of whether a person is reincarnated hundreds of years later, the plot will start three hundred years later, and then he will be dependent on the plot characters for life and death, and will never leave, just because he knew them from watching anime in his previous life. They are typically eating inside and outside, turning their elbows outward.
We ordinary people can just work honestly and write books if we have ideas. Just treat it as a side hobby, but if you don't have the talent to write a book, you'll be put off. Thinking of Houheixue, I said, "I won't tell the truth anymore" - and sure enough, someone followed up with something like "It's better to tell the truth." I understand that people actually don't even understand how they live, but once they understand how they live. He just doesn't fit in...
Ugh, I knew this update speed would happen sooner or later. It was really wise to delete the book in the first place.
When I read this novel, I didn't feel like I was watching a Naruto fanfic. Instead, I felt as if I had traveled to ancient China. There are a lot of tone in it, and even some sayings that it is exactly the same as ancient China. Ancient Japan should be very different from ancient China.
More, author, can't wait
When will the author update?
Renew? I will give you the recommendation vote tomorrow. I hope the boss will update ten chapters a day.
Why are you called Your Highness? Why is it that no one calls Uchiha Itachi or Erzhu your Highness, and why no one calls Hinata princess?
Will the protagonist fight for world hegemony? I prefer fighting for hegemony stories.
Is there a health or income problem due to the epidemic...? Are you okay?
Apologize and have the audacity to open a new book
First of all, this is my sincere apology. I clearly promised that I would come back, but I disappeared for such a long time, which disappointed my book friends. At first, due to various difficulties in life, I was unable to continue writing this book. After a full year passed, I finally had some spare time. I wanted to continue to connect it, but too much time had passed and my thoughts and ideas had changed greatly. Looking back, I couldn't continue to connect it naturally. After much thought and deep introspection, I finally decided to open a new hole. I hope that book friends who had some slight expectations for me would give me another chance. The new book is called "Once Upon a Time in the Ninja World". While it maintains a world view similar to that of the original work a year ago, it is a completely different story, and various new settings have been added for the sake of rationality. There are 50 chapters in the manuscript, and the updates are still quite vigorous. I really hope that interested book friends will take a look.