The Evil Dragon: the Conqueror Begins with the Dutiful Son

After seeing the complaints in the comment area, many people gave up before reading the big poisonous points, and couldn't stand even the smallest poisonous points... So I'll summarize it for those who don't want to waste time. But let's talk about my personal conclusion first: the flaws do not hide the advantages. Specifically, the situations that may persuade you to quit are (the following may be suspected of spoilers, please proceed with caution) 1. The cheap evil dragon mother was sucked out of her nutrition during the fetal period, which indirectly caused her endocrine disorders and mental disorder. Abnormality (Behavior of a filial son +1) 2. The evil dragon mother dribbles the ball and bites people. She does not distinguish between friends and foes, so that everyone betrays their relatives. In the end, she is ambushed by the dragon-slaying army at the door of her home. Faced with the encirclement and suppression of the army during her pregnancy, she died in a fierce battle (The enemy seemed to have zero casualties? My mother is really miserable) 3. When the cheap mother died, the protagonist was still a sleeping egg, although He was sucking nutrients but kept sleeping. As soon as he opened his eyes, he saw that his mother's head was torn off by the brave team, so he immediately put his mother's dragon soul into his inventory (act of a filial son +1) 4. When his mother was beheaded, the protagonist himself was still a dragon egg, so he also became the trophy of the drow elf princess (dragon-slaying leader/mother-murderer), and the main character After being hatched, Kaku forcibly entered into a 90-year partnership contract (slightly humiliating at birth) (In fact, he earned a long-term meal ticket + bodyguard + harem, but he was forced into a contract as soon as he hatched, which is still a little humiliating after all) 5.1 The soul of the protagonist is not a real golden dragon or a red dragon or a hybrid, so the protagonist cannot automatically obtain the dragon inheritance as he grows (Bad news: The protagonist's inheritance is not free) 5.2 Instead, you can use the system points in the system store to redeem any dragon inheritance you need. At the same time, the price of gold dragon and red dragon inheritance is shattering (Good news: all dragon inheritances can be selected according to the protagonist's needs) 6.1 The partner contract signed by the protagonist is made of gold. Made in the year of the dragon, it has a certain brainwashing function. During the period of effect, it will distort the character of the evil dragon in the direction of kindness... And it will create a sense of closeness to its partners (Bad news: Want to brainwash the protagonist?) 6.2 The protagonist has found a way to circumvent the contract from the inheritance of the golden dragon (Good news: The brainwashing failed) 6.3 The protagonist has not done anything since he was born. What a bad thing, it really doesn't look like a descendant of an evil dragon (Bad news: Greed, cruelty, arrogance, aggressiveness... He has not inherited any of the qualities of a cheap mother. In a sense, the behavior of a filial son +1) Personally, the poisonous points that have caused a certain degree of discomfort are 2 (The red dragon in its prime, as the world's top combat force, went to the star realm. On the eve, he was killed without any injuries by a group of mortal elite troops with the help of science and technology,) 5 (Why can't the inheritance of the golden dragon and the red dragon be obtained for free, angry💢) 6 (As a descendant of the red dragon, shouldn't he rob more and kill more? Otherwise, he is not a red dragon. Readers of evil dragon novels come here just to see the protagonist do evil) But these are still acceptable to me. At least, the author has never committed any of these taboos, such as the minor villain's long-term incompetence, the sudden change of his painting style, the forcible subjugation of his intelligence, or the fact that the enemy is always one level higher than the protagonist. (I have also read the book "Troll Tribe to Elf Empire" recently. It is also a book that does not have any major processing errors. Unfortunately, it seems to be intermittent for so long that it becomes eunuch... I am going too far. I want to say that the author's experience is still very sophisticated) (However, the refreshing point is that there are always some shortcomings...)

Chapter 35: birth

The writing is good, the writing style is very good, and the setting is very rigorous, but the story told is too slow. A good novel should focus on the story, interspersed with settings. Generally speaking, there are many stories surrounding the protagonist, so you can enjoy it as much as you want. Don't expand too much without the protagonist. Personal thoughts, not criticism

Refuse eunuchs, come from elves, and have few chapters.

Aren't dragons born from eggs?

It's almost 20 chapters and the protagonist hasn't laid the egg yet. That's outrageous.

Thanks

The beginning of this book is really hard to stick with.

I would like to make a suggestion. It is not good for the protagonist to be invisible for a long time. Although the characters described in the early stage have enriched the world view, the novel is still based on the protagonist after all, and the distribution of pen and ink must be appropriate.

Body modification, brainwashing and control of the dragon, it's so hot

What is the relationship between the author and Mao Ti? It feels very similar when reading the story... The author seems to be a big shot in the historical district who opened a small account to play with tickets, but at first glance, the two novels are not very similar. The world setting and plot development are quite amazing, but the author's scene description skills are not outstanding (or he does not focus on this aspect), and the dialogue design is also average. At present, it seems that they are only at a level that will not hinder him. In general, the craftsmanship is very good. The main shortcoming is that the first three/ten chapters are not taken seriously, and there are not many attractive passages at the beginning of the plot. There is no big problem if orthodox literature is casual about the opening part (but it is also a minor flaw), but the writing of online novels should not overestimate the patience of readers.