From Troll Tribe to Elven Empire

The basic form of early primitive society was the early republic, and there was no distinction between East and West. The basis for maintaining autocratic rule is the military. The basis for the formation of an army is the production of food and weapons. The most important thing is the production of food. Whether it is based on planting or nomadic people, it is based on the stable production of food. Even with a relatively weak material foundation, it is not easy to directly invoke dictatorship, because inheritance is still a big problem. The "Bamboo Book Annals" records that Shun imprisoned Yao and exiled Yao's son; "Han Feizi": Shun forced Yao, and Yu forced Shun. This can also be proved. Therefore, it is somewhat thankless to directly establish a dictatorship without any advance preparation. Although this is in a magical world, the protagonist's force cannot exceed that of other trolls at once. In my opinion, the army or early army stage cannot be bypassed.

The protagonist plays with the parliamentary system in a primitive society? Power and efficiency are directly proportional. If you don't plan to centralize power, you still want to play a bloody battle of wits with primitive people? Do you plan to stay in the deep forest for the rest of your life and never go out?

Brothers and sisters, don't look at the few chapters I update every day, but I have a lot of words in each chapter. Please give me some to follow up😭

It was said that popularizing Chinese characters and Chinese language was not good, and too many readers were poisonous, so the initial language settings were modified. Changing to the protagonist only provides ideas related to "hieroglyphs" and "phonetic characters". So, now the trolls in the book speak in troll language, please remember to translate it when you read it. I tried hard to imitate the original feeling of Troll language by simplifying the language, but I only tried it until Chapter 17 and stopped. There are two reasons, 1. It's too difficult 2. The results are a bit different.

To explain, in the setting, witch doctors are all sages, what they lack is just knowledge. So the protagonist does not have the need or energy to do something that is dominated by one person. Even if you ascend the throne, don't you still have to rely on the people under you to rule? Under the entanglement of interests, efficiency may not be any higher than that of a minority republic. Moreover, we have to be careful all day long to balance the interests of all parties. How tiring. And for the development of civilization, wouldn't it be good to work together as a team? In addition, the book is not purely about the parliamentary system, but a "republic of wise men". Smart witch doctors will get a two-hundred-year "training regime", which is a republican politics belonging to a small elite. Classical mob politics cannot develop in the short term.

It's very good. Come on, author, don't make it unfinished.                                                                                             Although I felt that the setting and foreshadowing were a bit complicated in the early stage, and the writing and language style was a bit uncertain, and I even wanted to give up when it came time to establish a parliamentary system in system construction, but after reading hesitantly, I accepted this language style. The novel is still very good. It is not the usual overbearing protagonist and brainless novel that is common nowadays. It focuses on the development of groups and races, and it will not make people tired from fighting for hegemony all day long. There is a single heroine, there is no emotional drama, but it can be used as a little adjustment, and in the setting of the novel, it also helps the development of the protagonist. It is not a vase decoration, but a complementary companion. It also helps the protagonist have stable emotions and maintain energy on business. I think it is quite reasonable.       ,,, ok,,, The protagonist's personal growth and the development of race and civilization complement each other. I think there is no problem. After all, in this article, the trolls are primitive and simple immortal species without any intrigues or internal conflicts. The protagonist has room for mistakes and growth. Unlike other articles where the plot rhythm is too full, the protagonist's absence will consume the reader's patience, so the protagonist is required to be a perfect product from the beginning and not make stupid mistakes. This article will not consume the reader's emotions too much, so it can basically be viewed with a peaceful mind. The language is straightforward, sometimes like a briefing, and is not very likely to arouse and stimulate the reader's emotions. However, it is okay in this kind of article. After all, the perspective is on racial development and civilization construction, rather than a one-man show of the protagonist's personal invincibility, so it does not matter if there is less psychological description and excitement (the speech at the bottom of the sea is not bad, and it arouses emotions). However, a few supporting characters can be slightly strengthened, such as the psychological changes and research results of the witch doctors who have joined other tribes in the Republic. After all, most of the witch doctors with personalities and achievements currently appearing are from the original tooth tribe. I feel that so many other wise men with profound backgrounds have not been reflected. Or one or two representative characters of other races can be written as a reflection of the diversity of the world, and as embellishments in a bunch of briefings.                                                                                      but for readers who are used to reading fast-food online articles, they probably don't have the patience to read it anymore, but for the reasonable party and the setting party that pay attention to logical autonomy, it is actually quite good. At least for readers like me who are not majoring in science and engineering, they will not find fault with specific technical details. However, in the author's writing, the development of technology and the construction of the system have a complete context to follow. It is not achieved overnight by the protagonist patting his head. It is a collective wisdom and effort and a step-by-step process, which is good. There are also the origins of species, the increase in productivity, changes in production relations, the development of culture and spiritual entertainment, the improvement of various systems, and even the racial character from wild and reckless trolls to learning self-control, and from arrogance to self-confidence and modest elves. They are all reflected in various stages. Various changes are described with specific events and transformations, not just "after years of development, from... To...". After reading the novel, readers will be able to have a clear understanding of the history of the development of trolls and elves, and have an impression of the specific stages, historical events, and various turning points. This is very well-shaped, and the author has carefully thought and designed it.       ,,,, hhhh But I personally feel that I quite like this novel after accepting it. I hope the author will continue to work hard, do a good job in setting up and foreshadowing, and don't ignore the details, let alone fail to write. If it is written according to the current standard, I will order it all.

My evaluation is that the concept is very good, but I really can't stand it. There are too many complicated and outrageous settings. I feel that the author is a bit like Kong Yiji who doesn't want to take off his long robe, and he doesn't want to rely on golden fingers. He must use his own or researched knowledge to make a round. The author has been burying holes since the first chapter. The author forced himself to increase the difficulty, which caused him to frantically search for information later to fill in the holes. The result is that no one likes to read those complicated and tortured principles. For example, the plant refrigerator. Is it really meaningful to spend a lot of space to explain the principle of this refrigerator? It's still ridiculous to explain it. I think finding a rune that can use water elements and cooling and then using something like a magic core to provide energy is definitely more reliable than a photosynthetic plant refrigerator. Why do you want to use modern technology to solve problems in a world with magic and then use mathematics, physics and chemistry to explain the principles of plant magic? This matter, I think, is really outrageous! The first element of online writing is fun! There is no need to be so entangled in principles. There are too many ways to solve them. What about golden fingers, magical energy, and magical creations? Why do you want to use modern science to explain it? I have read a novel about troll civilization called "The New Empire of Azeroth" in the early stage. The setting seemed very comfortable and refreshing. The protagonist relies directly on divine power to become a leader and a sage, leading the race from barbarism to civilization. This setting seems very effortless. Unfortunately, the emotional line at the end of the book is so disgusting that it falls apart. The main character is a troll who thinks about marrying human women, titans and casting human women every day. It is so disgusting that it ends.

Scientific research based on fantasy, the magic system is completely set by the author, and it is not perfect at all, and then science is used to explain the magic. . . . . Unlike him, he likes magic. I think you are fake science, and those who like science think you love fantasy. Nondescript

Does it look good? Is there a Shennong? It looked good so I ordered it all, but I was scared by the bunch of poisonous weeds at Qidian.

The technological development written by the author is too idealistic and is purely based on my thoughts as a green-skinned person.