The Meat-Guzzling Player

I dare not make random comments, for fear that someone will use the Qinglong Yanyue knife to peel an apple for me, use a nine-tooth nail rake to comb my middle part, use the imperial seal to crack walnuts for me, use a golden hoop to roll out dumpling skins for me, and use a Zhangba snake spear to knit a sweater for me. , Climbed up to the high-voltage line and sang Dong Feng Po to me, used Fang Tian Hua Ji to trim my eyebrows, told me through the screen that I had a lumbar disc, asked me why I was so good after nine years of compulsory education, and called me Xiu'er while typing on the keyboard.

If it's too watery, you can only raise it first. Just don't raise it to death.

Congratulations to the author on the new book! ! !

The author thought that the results were not good, so he cut it off. However, the more you read, the more cautious your investment becomes. No matter how good the writing is, if you write three books in a row, losing a large number of readers and losing trust, what do you have left?

After reading it, I have three shortcomings that I would like to discuss with you. First: The abilities simulated by the simulator are not the abilities that everyone actually awakens, but the author writes that the abilities simulated by the simulator have always been this, but this is not the ability they awakened in reality at all. If this is the case, students have always relied on such skills, and after awakening in reality, they find that the abilities are fundamentally different. What should we do? ? Also, the abilities simulated by many simulators are very rubbish and cannot be changed! This results in their innate starting point being lower than others! Damn! Second: The skill of time retrieval is too buggy. Just looking at the author's meaning is that once this skill is used, the timeline of the entire world will be regressed, and the cooldown is so low that the cost of use is zero! It's too tough! Even if you write it so that you can see a few minutes into the future! Third: In terms of combat, the gap between superpowers is too big. Just like that teacher Bai, a light wave can kill everyone instantly from a long distance. What a fool. If you write like this, you won't be able to write in the later stage, and it will collapse in the mid-term. The superpowers awakened by many people are obviously very powerful, but when encountering pig's feet, they either become rubbish and cannot display their true strength, or they are too awesome. Pig's feet can only be used in other ways! And I found that authors never read what readers write! ! ! If you are just immersed in your own little world, then this book is not far away from being a hit! ! I hope the author can find out in time! Respond promptly!

I have read Chapter 104... I only like the single heroine. I don't want to see the pairing of Cao Nanqing and Chen Tianmu break up like this, so I stand firm. I know the protagonist doesn't think so, but the author, you wrote this way. In these short 104 chapters, what did the protagonist do? Originally, the three of us were in a relationship, so what do you mean by going to a girl's place?       ，，，，， To be honest, good brothers shouldn't steal other people's limelight. After all, no one abandons you in difficult times, what else can you say? So the author has narrowed the path of this book. I think the character of Chen Tianmu can be made into a very charming character, but I think he is marginalized. I think this book by the author can be about regaining their hometown, and several friends make corresponding efforts to support each other during this period, as the main plot, and then further explore the world view of this book. Just giving all the opportunities to the protagonist and the limelight to one person is a bit... Vulgar The author's book, the team relationship chain is completely based on the Shrek Seven Devils in Douluo Continent as a template, written as a group drama, everyone has their own characteristics.       CP，，，，，，，… The same goes for other characters. Finally, please forgive me for writing so much. It's just that as an old bookworm, I don't have many good books to read recently, so I will complain more or less.

I think the author should fight. How should I put it? It all depends on whether your battle relies entirely on the awakening rate of the supernatural power. When you meet someone, a sound wave will destroy a group of your teammates, and if you don't say anything else, just keep shouting? Alas, Chen Tianmu, a top genius, can stand alone? Your area of ​​effect damage took so long to destroy two or three people on the opposite side? No consumption? The battles are all about skills, and I don't find that improving physical fitness is of any use. Based on this description, is there a school that dominates first or second? Why don't you just come to a rubbish school and learn some awesome skills so that you can dominate your mother? The afterimage is really maintained all the time, it is not consumed, and it has its own intelligence. (It is not easy to judge without intelligence? It is true that the gun in the hand is used for shooting four times and hitting anyone who cannot hide.) People have multiple clones and the strength of the main body is taken away and then disappear after one hit. You have more bugs than him, and it is not consumed and does not disappear even after being hit. Are you jealous and bloodthirsty even at this god level? Is this bloodthirsty thing of any use to you?

It may not be seen by the author, but I still want to talk about the plot in the virtual battlefield. People are subjective creatures. If you are in a class or a school, you kill people in the virtual battlefield just because you are divided into teams. Moreover, if two people are best friends in school, but kill each other in the virtual battlefield, is it possible to restore the original relationship after returning to reality? Emotions are the bond of mutual trust between humans. People who went to the same school may form a team in the future. Will we still trust each other because of the experience in the virtual battlefield? Don't say that it's just fake, the simulation is almost the same as the real one. If someone cuts off your hand on the virtual battlefield, the pain will be deeply remembered. Can we still be friends after returning to reality? I don't believe it! Someone chopped off your hands and feet and killed you, even if it was fake, but it was simulated to that extent and it was real. Can't we use alien images in simulated battlefields? The enemy appears as an alien, and a team appears as a real person. The voices all look like alien images. In this way, the relationship can be maintained in reality. Otherwise, how will we form a team in reality in the future? I once chopped off your hands and feet to death, can you still join a team after graduation? Not holding grudges is considered magnanimous. What's more, how can people not hold grudges? People have feelings, and feelings include emotions and desires. What kind of things are cultivated in schools? I'm afraid that if we fight on the virtual battlefield and then form hatred again in reality, we will be divided! In reality, the setting in the article is also the type of team action, not a lone ranger~ After all, there are everyone, it is impossible for everyone not to hold grudges! This setting would be a bit strange if it didn't round back later. Don't talk to me about psychological counseling or anything like that. Those are really effective, but they won't be that big. People who have been hurt will instinctively tremble when they see the person who hurt them. The psychology can be overcome, but the physical instinct is basically impossible to overcome.

You have lost two books in just half a year. . . You are damaging the credibility of your vest.

The skill's early time retrieval and low cooldown cost nothing. If you use it too much, it will make you weak at most. But you can use it again after resting. Will it not collapse in the later stage? Don't think that controlling time is so simple! The entire universe can be turned upside down just because of you. This is too outrageous. This is creating a parallel timeline. If you don't go back once, you are creating a parallel universe?