Chasing the Moon Like a Shooting Star

[Rating]: No points, I'm so angry, I won't give points (ง •̀_•́)ง [Book title]: "The Adventures of Gaoyang Tiantuan" [Author]: Uncultured Gouzi [Number of words read]: Chapter seventy-two (abandon the book at chapter seventy-two, Why I abandoned the book will be discussed later) [Commentator]: Wild Fishing [Book Review] [Impression of the Work] "The Adventures of Gaoyang Tiantuan." The character of the heroine Wen Yin is very eye-catching. She is surrounded by Mu Yingyue, who is often off-line, Mu Jizong, who is narrow-minded, Duan Yongqi, who is a daily dog, and Lu Chengyuan, who cherishes words like gold. This group of people form a group of real warriors to help the male protagonist recognize his relatives, and go to the flower house together to find love... The story revolves around a group of people, mostly in a straightforward description, interspersed with past events, the overall reading experience is smooth, and the beginning has a strong sense of immersion in the exotic customs. But when I read it, I felt like I was watching a female video. It is suitable for little cuties with bronchitis to read. The majority of straight friends may find this heroine too powerful and feel uncomfortable. [Character design] "The character design is the most outstanding part of the whole text." The man is delicate and thoughtful, while the woman is rough and heroic. First let's talk about the leader of Gaoyang Tiantuan, Wen Yin. [Chen Wenyin-the domineering and leaky social sister] This character is portrayed very well, and many details can show the author's preference for this character. In the beginning, Wen Yin chased the bandits on horseback, and her heroic appearance while holding a meteor hammer left an impression on people that this woman was not a simple woman, who was good at martial arts and very rich. Later, the scene where the two met for the first time in the palace, choosing a snow camel, and the subsequent explanations all showed her delicate thoughts, and it was easy for readers to perceive the image of a princess above the court. Next, the image of her guiding the country when playing chess with the emperor is even more vivid. (Able in literature and martial arts, brave and strategic, proficient in music, chess, calligraphy and painting) I thought she was a brave and resourceful girl, even rich, but I didn't expect that she would occasionally show willfulness and frankness when she was with the male protagonist, and the little girl who lost money would reveal her character. Of course, there is also a side of willfulness, such as kicking Duan Yongqi down the mountain and not knowing what to do when testing Amir's internal strength. Such a bold and arrogant person is not as arrogant and domineering when facing emotional problems as she is in other things. According to her temperament, if she likes someone, she should directly tie her up and make her a consort. However, when she tortured Amir and Yuan Ping, she was jealous and willful, but she showed a different contrast and cuteness, which made the whole person look very plump. Her true temperament is not only reflected in the temple, but also in the world. The heroic Qian Yun who gambled on himself, the decisiveness of killing his head with a knife, and the arrogance and domineering when Zhizhou was grinding later made him a special fan. She is not only a fan among book friends, but also a favorite among all the stars in the book. This is mainly because although she is excellent, she is not that arrogant. From her admiration for her father and her concern for the emotional development of Xiao Lanyi and Chi Gugu, we can see why this girl is so popular. [Mu Jizong - a pure and beautiful man from a foreign land] Compared to the heroine's radiant father-in-law, the image of this male protagonist is much weaker. And more often than not, he will fall into an emotional situation, giving the impression that he is too delicate and lacks a bit of rough pride. It seems that apart from his talent in acupuncture, there is nothing outstanding. What is more distinctive is the emphasis on affection. They care about the emotional problems of their parents and will cry when they hear their parents' old grievances. The longing for Wen Yin is shown in many places, such as being reluctant to spend the money, feeling disappointed when Wen Yin didn't recognize him, the character of a child who was jealous of Duan Yongqi, and being drunk in the flower house and torn between his feelings for the two girls. [Mu Yingyue - the cute and cute young lady] The first time she met Gao Yang, she didn't know the princess. The first time she saw her master, she tugged her sleeves and asked if she could fly. She introduced herself in front of Master Wen Yin, competed with Wen Yin for her age, and her words "more majestic than our village chief" all reflect her lively and offline character. [Description] "The author's writing skills can be seen from the description." 1. The chapter labels of each chapter rhyme, which reflects the author's strong writing style. 2. The description of the scenes is very detailed: for example, the scene of hitting the wooden dummy and tapping the acupuncture points, and the scene of Xiao Lanyi (forgot his name) laughing when reading the letter 3. When choosing the names, he is also very particular, such as "Jizong", "Yingyue", and "Qiao". 4. The slang dialogue between Wen Yin and Nangong Qiaoqiao is really thoughtful and has a quack vibe. 5. The scenes of music, chess, calligraphy and painting in Zuihualou are particularly exquisite. Especially those who play chess. There are several mentions of playing chess in the article. Others describe chess as being relatively Zhuangbility, but Gouzi is quite big. [Emotional line] "This is also the point where I gave up the book." The love-emotional lines I have seen so far are: [Male protagonist Xiang]: Yuan Ping & Ji Zong & Wen Yin [Female protagonist Xiang]: Yong Qi & Wen Yin & Ji Zong [Master Xiang]: Chi Gugu & Xiao Lanyi & Xiao (unknown character, It may be a foreshadowing) [Parents] Chapter 72: Drunk in Zuihualou, and then the male protagonist suddenly becomes entangled in the relationship between two women. I don't know how the male protagonist likes the uncle who cooks the medicine, but a good man and a woman are struggling with the question of who they like, which is really bad. It added an element of indecision to his already not outstanding character. It even adds some old-fashioned emotional entanglements to the supposedly free and easy world of martial arts. It is strongly recommended not to cause trouble. Could it be that a gentle and graceful woman is really a hurdle that every man has trouble getting over? The family line is: Old Man Mu & the male protagonist's parents & the stepfather Yingyue I feel that the old man's emotional changes are too fast and not handled naturally enough. [Plot] "Mainly straightforward narration, lacking conflicts and twists" To simply use vernacular to refine the plot, it is probably that the male and female protagonists suppress the bandits together, and then meet for the first time in court after a while. The person the male protagonist is looking for is the female protagonist's master, and the master and the male protagonist's father Relatives are old friends, and when you meet a gangster, you will inevitably have to learn some martial arts, clarify the old grievances of the predecessors, and then recognize the ancestors and return to the clan, which also involves the emotional issues of the master... Thanks to the author's good writing style, this popular plot of suppressing bandits, recognizing relatives, and finding poisons has a little more readability. But excluding these, these plots are actually relatively dull, which is why the plot outline is so important. The plot issue is the biggest problem in this article. It does not say what kind of gratification or passionate passion it should show, but it should at least arouse the readers' sense of expectation. It doesn't matter if it's a suspense setting or a chapter break. Two examples in the article: A. In the beginning of the article, Wen Yin appears without a name and is always called by the woman. This sets up suspense very well and makes people guess her identity from a series of actions. B. There is a fragment in the article: Wen Yin asked Ji Zong how people in their area express their emotions. The fragment here is very good and can easily cause others to misunderstand and think that she wants to confess. But these are just small ups and downs, so I hope Gouzi can match these characters in the plot arrangement. A brilliant storyline will always be the core of the novel. Finally, let me ask a small question. Every time these big guys appear, their voices are deafening. (ง •̀_•́)งWhat kind of evil operation is this? It was okay once, but it shook my ears several times... Emmmm... [Classic Quotations] Mention two sentences that I like 1. After Liang Chong lost the bet and asked for mercy, I have a lot of money, Wen Yin replied domineeringly, "What a coincidence, I and I You also have money." This is really handsome to me (male protagonist, look at this guy... Emmm, he's such an unsatisfactory bitch, he will struggle with women...) 2. The inscription on the painting of Zuihua Tower: "If you don't wear a military uniform, you will know how to be a tiger girl. " These words are very passionate.

The Emperor Wu is Chen Wenyin. His father is Chen Ning, King of Yu, and his mother is Yue Bangyuan, the princess of Shengping County. His father had outstanding military exploits, was familiar with literature and history, and was familiar with military strategy. He wrote "Six Strategies Table". Under the influence of her ancestors, Wen Yin was given the title of Princess Chaopin. She took the name "Gaoyang's descendants, and my emperor's name is Boyong", so she was named Gaoyang. In the seventeenth year of Zhenwu, on the thirteenth day of the first lunar month, auspicious clouds descended from the sky and a phoenix sounded in the northwest. The purple light suddenly appears in the capital, day and night. At three o'clock in the afternoon, the purple light stopped, and everyone gathered at the Prince Yu's Mansion. At that time, I heard the cry of a child, and it was Wen Yin. Wen Yin was young and practiced martial arts. He studied under Xiao Sijun, the leader of Zhenwu Sect, the "No. 1 Sect in the World". He was intelligent and astute, just like his mother. Wearing a military uniform, he holds a pair of maces and a pair of swords. He sits astride a white horse, and his golden fire meteor hammer rustles like wind and fire. In the 16th year of the New Age, I entered the Uighurs, dressed as a white dragon fish, and explored the desert and the vast sea alone. In the seventeenth year, Amir, the general of the Uyghur expedition to the east, entered the Central Plains, and Wen Yin made friends with him. In July, he allied with the Uighurs to retreat from the Liao army, killing Hui Qi, the Liao's national teacher, and Xiao Limi, the Liao's commander, and captured the Liao emperor Yelu. Yanyue's morale was greatly boosted, and he called "Princess a thousand years old" to the army. Returned to the capital and was given the title "Princess of Zhenguo Gaoyang". At the beginning of the next year, Tubo attacked the Uighurs. Wen Yin led his army to help them, won the victory, and destroyed Tubo. In June of the eighteenth year, Emperor Xinqi died. The emperor has no heirs, the country has a young son, and there is no long-term king to establish. The old generals of Zhenbei and Pingxi Prefectures persuaded Jin Biao, saying: "Long live Princess Gaoyang of Zhenguo." In the same month, the Uighurs betrayed their alliance and took advantage of the situation to rob me. They turned against me and attacked Yanyue. In July, Yue Bangyuan, the princess of Princess Shengping, committed suicide. In early August, Wen Yin gathered 130,000 soldiers and horses, besieged Tokyo, forced Liu Huaige, the grand master, to retreat. He ordered Chen Xuan to die and vowed to "never marry and have no heirs for the rest of his life." He proclaimed himself emperor and ascended the throne, changing the country to Yuan Dynasty. Moved the capital to Zhejin Prefecture in October and attacked the Uighurs. In the second year, the Uighurs were defeated. Proclaiming himself a minister, paying tribute, and being a minister of Yanyue from generation to generation. After ten years of rule, Shi Zu abdicated and became the Supreme Emperor. Chen Wenyin was born in a very high family, and she was a tiger girl in the general's sect. She was very aggressive and violent, her young phoenix turned into a dragon, and her hen was born in the morning. However, as an emperor, with his literary and military strategies, he opened up territories and defended the royal city, all the barbarians, Rongdi, and Di were submissive. Therefore, there is mixed praise and blame, and it is difficult to distinguish between loyal and traitorous people, leaving it for future generations to comment on. ——"The Book of Yanyue·The Chronicle of the Emperor·The Chronicle of Emperor Yanyue Shizuwu" Stewed fish speaks for himself

Just like the title! Worship Mrs. Gouzi~ This should be a novel about strong women!

Preface to the book review: When I first met in the group, I was attracted by this dog who always talked about "illiteracy". ​​ After a few days of acquaintance, I was impressed by his erudition and knowledge, but with my aloof persona as "Master Shuang", I naturally just smiled indifferently and pretended to be dismissive. Until one day by chance, I heard about the love history between Brother Dog and his "chivalrous woman", and I became deeply curious about his books... I was curious whether the heroine in his books would be as heroic and handsome as the chivalrous women in his words! With this motive, I opened the first chapter of the book, "The White Clothes Are Rampant"! Just from the chapter title, it is filled with a feeling of boldness, freedom and unrestraint. ​​ Sure enough, in the noisy market, the heroine in white has made a shining appearance. In just a hundred words, the heroine who is not afraid of the world has appeared on the page. Because I was attracted by the vivid heroine, I didn't even pay attention to the title of the second chapter, so I turned to the section in the third chapter "The popular near fire and narrowly escaped death" where the heroine takes action. When I saw the heroine chasing the hero with a flaming meteor hammer, I was also confused. Is this a martial arts guy? ​​ It wasn't until I checked the information many times that I learned that this kind of "fire-emitting meteor hammer" had already appeared during the Ming Dynasty. Here again, I admire the author's profound knowledge and unique imagination. After all, this is the first time I have encountered a heroine who uses a flaming bolas as a weapon. I suspect that this must also be due to the "chivalrous woman" in the author's real life. PS: "Here, in my eyes, I suspect that the author himself is M-oriented..." After reading the first three chapters, I feel that the so-called golden three chapters are nothing more than this. ​​ As the male protagonist, a foreign boy, and a meteor girl who is as graceful as a flying star, the moment they first met was the moment of separation, which invisibly left me with deep thoughts as a reader, making me want to read on. Want to know what kind of growth this foreign boy born with supernatural powers will experience? I also want to know, can this maverick meteor girl remain aloof from the world in the world described by the author? Not only that, regarding the progress of the plot, the author also uses an extremely realistic and expressive technique to tell it through the perspective of the male protagonist in a leisurely and unhurried manner. It can be called a cancer in the Internet literary world... However, I like it! Mmm, it smells so good! I am used to reading fast-food online articles, but after suddenly encountering a very rare martial arts style novel, I couldn't bear to read it in one sitting... Even if the author updates as steadily as an old dog, I am afraid that I will lose it after reading it. In order to prevent spoilers, I will not say more here. I ask readers to calm down and experience the ups and downs in this world with this alien boy, as well as the touching love and hatred!

Introduction: In the distant Uighur, a young man named Batur met an unreasonable Han girl. Although it was just a brief encounter, her shadow remained in his heart. Will they meet again in the future? Where will their fate lead them? Book Review: In the world of martial arts, who says women are inferior to men? When you read this novel by the author, you will find that in front of a strong and distinctive woman, all men will become Chen Wenyin and the useless men around her. If what I remember is correct, the author of this book once said that when a martial artist takes off his coat, all that is left is romance. Therefore, at the beginning of the story, the author gave the male and female protagonists the most romantic encounter in the world—depending on each other for life and death, and fighting against thieves and bandits together. Five hundred years of waiting in the previous life only exchange for one look back in this life. When they meet, the Uighur man is devoted to the girl. It's a pity that the girl is gone, and the boy can only cherish her gift and miss her silently. From then on, all the coincidences came together in a book. Not only did he enter the Central Plains, he also met that powerful girl again. With different identities, will a boy and a girl get together? When they dominate the world, will they really put an end to all injustices in the world and eliminate corrupt officials from the world as they always say? Although the author claims to be uneducated, he is no more than a top student who said "it's okay" after taking the exam. This can be seen from the culturally connotative titles of each chapter of the novel. And usually, if you use vernacular to write a martial arts story that takes place in an ancient environment, it will inevitably lead to people jumping off the stage. But in this novel, because of the author's skillful use of words, it doesn't make people feel like they are jumping out of the drama at all. In addition, the author can control the details very well, so although the plot development feels a bit slow, the reader can read it comfortably. In terms of character creation, perhaps because the female protagonist is too strong and distinct, the characteristics of the male protagonist and supporting role are suppressed, making it difficult for people to remember. If I really had to pick some flaws, this would be the only one. Ps: The above are all spoken by one family, please forgive me for inappropriateness!

Isn't this cover for a pauper? Can it be used casually?

"Meteor Chasing the Moon", author: Illiterate Gouzi. Category: Martial Arts-Traditional Martial Arts. Introduction: In the distant Uighur, a young man named Batur met an unreasonable Han girl. Although it was just a brief encounter, her shadow remained in his heart. Will they meet again in the future? Where will fate lead the two of them? Ten chapters of poison testing: Chapter 1, Pian Pian dressed in white is rampant. The protagonist Amir is the youngest Batur (warrior) in the village and is good at using bow and arrow. When I went out hunting, I encountered a girl in white who was surrounded by villagers. The girl doesn't know how to reply, and the protagonist communicates with her on behalf of the villagers, but unexpectedly the girl is arrogant and unreasonable. Chapter 2, the edge is seen in the green forest. The girl let go of the person under her feet and prepared to leave, but the protagonist wanted to take her to see the official. The protagonist chases the girl into the forest and shoots several arrows, forcing the girl to draw her sword. Protagonist, if you didn't have a halo, I'm afraid you would have died a long time ago. Chapter 3, Meteor Jinhuo was almost killed. The protagonist and the girl fought hard. The long bow was broken by the opponent's flaming meteor hammer, the dagger could not hurt the opponent at all, and the girl walked him around. At this time, the protagonist fell to the ground and listened to the sound, and judged that sixteen horses were approaching. Chapter 4: Supporting generals with the same enemy. When bandits attacked, the two stopped fighting and returned to the town to report the news. However, the martial Hui people were unwilling to leave, and instead prepared to fight the bandits together. Chapter 5: A tiger is hard to guard against when a calf is born. The girl decided to stay and fight against the bandits with the town name, and took the initiative to take on the role of commander. The deployment of the defense seemed orderly. The protagonist cooperates with the girl and successfully overturns the robber's horse with the trip rope set up. Chapter 6, united efforts to fight against the powerful. The girl fights against the bandit leader alone, using various methods. The protagonist assists the townspeople to kill several people. However, under the defense of the girl and their extraordinary bravery, the townspeople were completely defeated by the menacing bandits. Seeing that the bandit leader was about to escape, the girl suddenly blew a whistle. Chapter 7, white eagles and golden hammers fly to each other. A white eagle came in response, went straight to the bandit leader, and actually pulled him off his horse. The girl rode her horse to chase him, and the meteor hammer in her hand once again showed its power, and the bandit leader was dragged to death. The townspeople celebrated their victory, and the girl let go and ate and drank. Haha, what a great chest! Chapter 8, I still hold the reins when I say goodbye. After drinking and eating, the girl is ready to leave, and the protagonist is ordered by the elder to send her twenty miles away. The two chatted happily, and there was a sense of attachment and farewell. After exchanging gifts, they finally separated. I wonder if this farewell is forever, haha~ Chapter 9, gossiping and excusing oneself. The protagonist returns home and is caught by his family. At this time, a military master arrived and said that General Zhengdong invited the protagonist to the military camp to reward him for his efforts in defending the town. After returning home again, my mother and sister joked again after hearing the process: We are in love. Chapter 10, suddenly changed into military uniform overnight. The protagonist is called into the military camp, and within half a year he has made great achievements, been promoted to the general's bodyguard, and bought a house. Naturally, his family is overjoyed. However, the protagonist felt a touch of sadness, and the girl in white planted a seed in his heart. Brief review: Gouzi is my good friend (self-considered). He especially loves martial arts novels, and he is a martial arts practitioner as smart as Jiumozhi. He is proficient in swords, guns, sticks, axes, axes, knives and forks. The most valuable thing is that the writing of traditional martial arts novels is also extraordinary. After reading it, I found that this book is more vernacular than his previous one, and therefore easier to understand, perhaps to cater to the market. However, it seems that it has not achieved the expected effect. The author is particularly good at detailed fighting descriptions. The martial arts moves, weapon settings, characters, and story lines all have great wisdom that far exceeds that of ordinary authors. Although the author's name is not very literate, in fact, he can pick up piano, chess, calligraphy, painting, dance and music at his fingertips, and he is also very good at picking up girls. I still remember that when we were fighting in the exhibition circle, one of his high-quality posts made me dizzy and I could only sigh in despair. On this beautiful occasion, I would like to write a small book review for Gouzi, to help him get over 100 orders for his next book, haha~ Writing is not easy, but you have to practice it and cherish it! I am Cang Yiwei, I bring salt for myself!

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