The Traveling Fish Heads North, Returning to the Abyss as a Kun

The following comment comes from a dog who does not want to disclose his education level. As an event enthusiast, I came to participate in the book review event this time not only for the bonus, but also mainly because I like this novel. First of all, let me tell you some trivia: first, this is a novel with a strong ancient charm (isn't this nonsense); second, the author is Zhongda (another nonsense); third, it is not nonsense - the book is called "The Legend of Stewed Fish" (Zhongda said he wanted to poison dogs and sell them as dog meat). This novel tells a legendary story during the Dai Viet period. Readers... No, Zhongda took him away. Gouzi - came back - wrote a book review! Okay, I've already talked about two hundred words and haven't said anything yet. Let's talk about it formally this time. First of all, the title of the book seemed a bit too pretentious to me at first, so... I never read it. Later, I discovered with Zhongda Shuiqun that she was a girl. Based on the principle of same-sex repulsion, I read this novel and got out of hand... I have to say, the writing style is so strong, so strong! The beginning of the whole book is full of ancient charm... Let me say something special here, this is not classical Chinese, this is at most a vernacular novel in the Qing Dynasty language style, and it is very different from a traditional novel in the true sense. The habit of traditional Chinese novels is to start with the general trend of the world and even the birth of Pangu, and keep mentioning that Zhang San and Li Si were drinking and causing trouble today before the main text begins. The science popularization ends here. Zhongda directly introduces the protagonist at the beginning. The narration at the beginning of the story is close to daily life. It is a typical beginning of Western novels (not many people write serious Chinese style...). The advantages are extremely obvious and the sense of substitution is strong. Of course, the disadvantages of this writing method are also obvious. First, the layout of the opening chapter seems a bit small (after all, the content of the subsequent story is not small). Second, this writing method tests the character creation ability. Fortunately, Zhongda is very good at character creation, so there is no deduction in this aspect. Next, let's talk about writing style. Writing style, I really praise Zhongda's writing style. Dear friends, please remember this: Sister Zhongda's writing style has been certified by the eyes of uneducated dogs and dogs - it is excellent! It is said above that this is not a classical Chinese novel, but it does not say anything that counts as classical Chinese. I will mention it here (I won't say that I forgot to mention it before). Please look at the "History of Zhao" that she often mentions at the end of the chapter. That is classical Chinese. However... Zhongda's writing style is not without fluctuations... She was calm and profound at the beginning. After about five or six chapters, her style suddenly changed and she started to become brisk and sandy. But after about ten chapters, she gradually became calm again. I think this fluctuation is likely to happen to any newcomer. After all, she has not yet fully formed her own style. But the amazing thing is that even if the style changes, Zhongda's writing is still online. You want to see her fall, but she is just hanging in the air, which is helpless. Then there is character creation. To be honest, I have always said that characters are more important than plot, and plot serves the characters, because the original intention of novel creation is to express the author's thoughts through the choices and encounters of typical characters in the general environment. In terms of typical characters, Zhongda did a very good job. The male protagonist and the female protagonist (the names are too difficult to type) have very obvious personality traits. You can tell who is who with one sentence or one action. In addition, the dog-headed military advisor and good friend are also very eye-catching. The soft and waxy little bun image of the female protagonist's sister is deeply rooted in the hearts of the people (I also want to have a sister like this). I've talked so much without realizing it, okay, let's give a summary. In short, if we rate it on a 100-point scale, I think Zhongda's novel can score 97 points. You ask me why it's not a perfect score? Because three points return vitality.

I was blown away by the girl's beauty... Not by her talent. Let me just say a few words: I always feel that good writing is made by grinding it out, just like stewed fish. It is simmered over low heat and high to reduce the juice. After stewing for a long time, the flavor will come out. Writing is not a takeaway fast food. It can be used as soon as the microwave is hot. It can only satisfy hunger, has no nutrition, and will damage the kidneys after a long time - cough, hurt the body... The fish stewed by the girl is excellent: First of all, the writing style. I came from a major in ancient Chinese, which is equivalent to graduating from a gold medal chef school. Anyway, at my level, I can only worship it. As for the dialect... The occasional embellishment is quite interesting, but too much is not good and ruins the atmosphere; Chronology, careful consideration of words and sentences, striving for perfection, even ordinary characters are required to collect name and characteristic setting poems (?), Which is very rare. Good cooking skills also require a good attitude, which is also indispensable; The last is the story, at first I thought it was borrowed from The Legend of Two Dragons of the Tang Dynasty, but I ended up overthinking it. A girl can have such a concept and layout that is comparable to that of a master, and the characters she creates are flesh and blood. The protagonists and supporting characters have their own styles, and they are not just based on their own styles. I admire it very much. Women are not inferior to men, and this is what it means. After praising, I have to complain: the heroine really died too early, so that although the story is interesting, there is always a sense of sadness when reading it. I do not reject tragedy, but there seems to be a saying that it is sad but not sad? Personally, I boldly suggest that the girl should find a way to reconcile and ask the male protagonist for a second love, sincerely 🙏

I'm too lazy to type words today, so I came here to take a break. I always said I should take a good look at your book, but I never had time. I read several chapters in one go tonight, and I felt really happy! I sincerely praise, the girl's writing is really good, and the plot design is also reasonable and rigorous. Although I know the spoilers in advance, it does not hinder my interest in continuing to read. In the first chapter, there were still some awkward parts, but when I read it again today, it was completed in one go and made me feel so comfortable. However, it may be that this article is in classical Chinese and has a small audience, but it does not prevent it from being a very good story and a great novel! Keep up the good work, little sister, I'm optimistic about you~

The writing is very good and the storyline is very attractive. I highly recommend it to everyone! ! I hope the author will update it soon! Compare yourself to the author❤️

I have never written a review for anyone, and I am also the kind of invisible book friend who only reads books silently and never speaks! When I encounter the poisonous points in the book, I also smile with forgiveness: the online article is just something for Boruto to enjoy, there is no need to take it seriously! But after reading this book by Sister Yi'er, my thoughts have changed: it turns out that there are also good books in online articles! The first feeling after reading this book is that it shouldn't be classified into the category of ancient Chinese, but should be classified into the category of history! In this touching description, the love between children is not the most important part, but the story of how the male protagonist worked so hard to sit in the temple! Although the heroine is the cinnabar in his heart, making him the guide and motivation in the temple, this is not the reason why this book has become an ancient saying! Since ancient times, heroes have struggled with beauty. The hero in history does not have the white moonlight in his heart. This is why I think it should be classified into the historical category! Let me talk about the girl's language first. As a science student worthy of the name, although I like ancient literature very much. But to sister Yi'er, a regular soldier in the Chinese department, the poems in my book seemed so pale and feeble! The use of classical Chinese in the entire article makes me feel ashamed. Compared with some popular books that are not even used well, this book can be called a masterpiece in classical Chinese! Talking about the description of the story, both the setting and the plot arrangement are relaxed and relaxed! What impressed me deeply was that the costumes, shapes, and fighting scenes of the characters in the book were all described in great detail! For example, in the first chapter, the character description of A Ying when she appears is very detailed, making you feel like there is a pretty little girl standing in front of you after just one glance! The vividness shows the author's literary skills! I have only read the first 15 chapters of the book so far, and there are only so many comments I can give! I sincerely hope that book friends who like to watch historical dramas will take a good look at it! This book will definitely not disappoint you! As an old literary youth, I give sister Yi'er's book a score of 95 points. The few points less are to prevent her from being proud and give her the motivation to make better progress! Come on sister! Finally, I would like to recommend my own book. Although I am not as good as my sister in the use of classical Chinese, I can still read it! Ha ha ha ha!

The impression after looking at the appearance, four words, the old saying is big boss.               ，，， Chuxing thought for a long time, if he was allowed to write ancient poems, would he be able to have such a good literary talent? The answer is no, after all, I am good at making fun of people, and suddenly I become serious, which scares me. However, this is a serious drama article that needs to be treated seriously. Chu Xing also needs to restrain his cheerful temper and comment seriously. From the first chapter, I knew that Yi'er was a wolf fire, and the ancient charm revealed between the lines made me admire her.          :           "，，，，，，，…"       If you ask me to write a drama, I will probably go crazy. However, the story between Lu Mingzhi and Ning Yichen gradually became colorful in the colors of the drama, full of thoughts and awakenings about life. The difference between a drama and a general novel is that it can always give you some inspiration about life. Things are fickle and the world is full of twists and turns. Cherish the people in front of you. Strictly speaking, this book should be in the style of a typical martial arts novel and should be classified into the martial arts category. The author's profound cultural knowledge can be seen between the lines. The words and sentences of ancient poems and the Spring and Autumn writing style for describing history are all easily accessible. People who like traditional culture will especially like this. There are not many people who can write this kind of writing nowadays. Give Yier a big thumbs up! ! !    One word, good! Two words, excellent! Three words, awesome!   …                                                                                                                     ，，，，~             ，， This is a book that needs to be calmed down and savored. The plot is compact. Don't skip reading, otherwise you will miss the wonderful plot. To be honest.            ，，            ，，， Today, Internet literature has developed into various genres. Although fewer people read martial arts, it has many advantages that modern novels do not have. The writing style is smooth and smooth, and the plot has ups and downs. It presents a majestic world in just 200,000 or 100,000 words.              ，，，，，                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       "           ，                                                                                                                                                                                          Frequently coming up with a stroke of genius during the slow reading process, make people wonder, how can those words and sentences be used so accurately and appropriately?          ， Continue to add after reading. Without further ado, let me add a few words from my colleague. Bring along your own book, hahaha

Big support for the author! !

It's a bit of a river-side reading, support it, come on!

The article is written more delicately, with clear logic and detailed annotations. The protagonist is humorous. I like it!

Collect it, the writing is very good, support the author, Great work!