When the Fireworks Fade, It Feels Like I've Been Here Before

[Preliminary score] 88 points [Number of words read] About 5.4K (26 chapters)/5.4K words have been read [Type of work] Female channel·Ancient Dai Romance·Classical Interpretation [Work Status] Serialized to Chapter 26 [Author]{"NickName":"Aixinjue Luo Yi Son","UserId":210661983} [Commentator] Zero Two Lu Shiyi 1. Introduction to the book title (15/20 points) ★Attractiveness of the book title (4/6 points) "The Fireworks Have Scattered" has a somewhat desolate tone, and "Deja vu" has a bit of resentment and lingering. The title of the book reminds people of sentences such as "Business and bustling things disperse the fragrance" and "There is no choice but to let the flowers fall, and the swallows that seemed familiar before return", which is very attractive to the kindhearted people who sing about the flowers and the moon. However, "smoke", "flower" and "return" are all popular words in the title of a romance book, and the title of this book is too long, so it is easy for people to leave little impression and cannot remember it. ★Book title and text (3/4 points) The development of the story is still in the initial stage, but looking at the emotional tone of the title, I can visually see that there are a lot of sadistic scenes in the back. I guess by then we will be able to taste the sadness and desolation of "the fireworks have gone away" and the post-disaster joy of "seemingly returning home"? ★The introduction is eye-catching (4/6 points) The introduction is too bloated. It takes too much time to create the impression that the heroine is "not a serious and good person", and there is no need to use the form of "borrowing others' words". On the other hand, the metaphor of "standing up as a pillar that reaches the sky and the earth" is quite subtle, and coupled with the heroic words of "even if you are weak, you will try your best", it shows your soaring heroism, revealing your edge, and eye-catching. ★Introduction and text (4/4 points) With regard to the heroine's current performance of frivolous words and unflattering behavior, she is indeed not serious and even a bit self-righteous. But don't overdo it, otherwise even if you complete the gorgeous transformation into a generation of heroines, you won't be able to save the already ruined impression. ☆Summary of the title of the book (15/20 points) ①The title of the book is rich in literary talent but not eye-catching; it is a bit long and difficult to remember. ②The introduction is not brief enough. The side description of the comments of passers-by seems superfluous, but the domineering side leaks at the back might as well be emphasized. 2. Plot content (27/30 points) ★The first flash: novel setting of the story Although the element of time travel and rebirth is still indispensable, the background of the book classified as "classical and fictional" is somewhat similar to the late Qing Dynasty when Lafayette held power, with the hen and eunuchs in charge. The elements in this book are very rich. In addition to family feuds, fake brother-sister love, and court battles, there are also "new schools" who can mutter a few sentences in foreign languages, have "free and open" ideas, and even Western embassies... The layout is quite grand, and the content goes far beyond romance and palace battles, which shows the author's ambition. The chapter-like narrative style is also unique and fits the temperament of this book very well. ★The second flash: the writing is full of charm The author has considerable writing experience and has formed a personal style in writing, which is not only sophisticated and sophisticated, but also full of charm. The heroine who has been living in Yicui (qing) Building since she was a child is a "Beijing movie in the city of Beijing", which is a unique scenery in this book: "Pan'er is beautiful", "Talks and knocks children", "Little sister's little gangster", "In I spent a lot of time talking about this, "The Erqiaozi who looks like a vixen", "The dandy girl got a rabbit man"... All kinds of humorous expressions, although I don't need to understand them, I still find them lively and interesting. The clever language description greatly adds color to the (seemingly) "casual and cynical" image of the heroine, making it fresh and full of vitality. ★The third flash: Emotions develop naturally The emotional line is steady and stable. The combination of "ambitious and aggressive brother with a hard mouth and a soft heart x naughty sister who is slippery, strong on the outside but strong on the inside" is full of attractions, and the daily interactions between each other are joyful and heartwarming. The two went from an embarrassing situation of "mutual distrust and contempt" to the heroine gradually opening up her heart and the hero protecting her everywhere without knowing it. The emotional transition was natural, reasonable and did not feel stiff or deliberate. ★The fourth flash point: exquisite use of rhetoric The use of rhetoric further shows the depth of the author's skill and talent. Some of the particularly wonderful parts even make people want to clap their hands and praise them: So it turns out that this can still be said! What a stroke of genius! For example, "Look at the demeanor around him, even a blind person can smell that he is not an ordinary person." It is much better than "At first glance, he is not an ordinary person." To describe the dazzling state when you have a headache, you use "eyes split open to distinguish between humans and animals." Jingning spread out in front of him, and the mountains roared and the tsunami twisted into a kaleidoscope. His noble and proud young heart was swallowed up by the vermilion palace wall, and only a body was spit out." The rhetoric is extremely exquisite and gorgeous, vividly describing the state of consciousness and long-term loss of consciousness when the male protagonist's "young heart" suffered a heavy blow. Judging from the author's rhetorical style, he probably has read Zhang Ailing. ★Finding the first problem: too many quotations As a rhetorical device, quotation can express accurately and reflect the author's profoundness when used appropriately, but especially quotations from the same place should not be too many. Otherwise, not only will it be impossible to install the invisible X, but it will also be suspected of being deliberately manipulated. For example, when Chen Yueheng appeared for the first time, the heroine praised her for her "good name. 'Yuexia Hengwu' sounds like it should be a name only for a fairy, and it is true to its name, 'It seems like the moon is covered by light clouds, and it flutters like the snow in the flowing wind.' "E'e, Lianjuan with eyebrows. Her lips are bright, her teeth are bright, her eyes are good at seeing, and her cheeks support her power." This long paragraph is like an endorsement, giving people the feeling that the author does not know that the author has memorized "Luo Shen Fu". Maybe the author can't feel it, so let's give an example that is not in the book: If you want to quote the Book of Songs, "One day is gone, it's like March." ! 3. Character creation (26/30 points) ★ The sixth flash: the characters have a sense of layering The characters in the author's works are vivid and lifelike, and the layering and fluidity are well interpreted. •Charming heroine: Yu Zhiwei Successful character creation is not about creating a perfect character, but a character with personal charm, such as the heroine Yu Zhiwei in this book. The misfortune of confiscating the family and annihilating the family, witnessing their loved ones being brutally humiliated to death, and eking out an ignoble existence by pretending to be women in a land of fireworks, formed the tragic childhood of the heroine. She would subconsciously avoid those shadows because she couldn't bear to look back; but she was also stubborn and refused to try to forget, persisting in burning the flame of hatred even though she knew it was impossible. Such contradictions forced her to hide under her mask of being carefree and unruly, making her occasionally willful, often awkward, and often short-tempered. But readers just can't help but tolerate her shortcomings and forgive her unintentional mistakes, because her strength is so heartbreaking, and the softness she still retains after suffering pain is so poignant and moving. Her own situation was like a raging fire cooking oil, but she still wanted to take the three "little brothers" who were living in a place of filth and evil practices under her wings; she finally went out for a trip, and she didn't forget to bring a box of rouge to her servants. "Even though she is in darkness, she still wants to be the sunshine for others" is my summary of the portrayal of the heroine. When creating characters, the author must go through meticulous observation, repeated deliberation and careful consideration in order to create such a character who is full of personality, endearing and whose every move can affect the readers' emotions. Very exciting. •Not much written but profound: Yun Cui As the former top star of Yicui Tower, Yun Cui, a geisha who played the role of "mother" in the heroine's growth stage, has only one or two chapters, but the writing is quite brilliant. "The geisha's infatuation paid her by mistake" may be an old story. However, the tragic color combined with the virtue of repaying kindness and the glorious motherhood allows readers to feel the greatness of human nature from low-status little people, and truly makes each character have its own unique charm. ★The seventh flash: wonderful description of details The author is very good at reflecting the emotions and changes of the characters through the description of details. For example, the description of the heroine's expression in the section where she narrated past events: "Opened both eyes, without blinking", "She didn't even shed a single tear, but laughed like a hysteric". The psychological process of a person holding back from crying when she is extremely sad, wanting to cry but unable to cry, wanting to cry but the tears have dried up, leaving only endless sadness, so that she "laughs like a hysterical" is very thorough and penetrating, which makes people marvel. When the heroine received the button from the hero, she "bited her lip and frowned as if Jin Yiwei Beizhen Fusi wanted to arrest her and send her to prison. Finally, she slapped the bedside and took out the button." The details are so lifelike. ★The Eighth Flash: Very Contagious The author's understanding of the character's psychology is very good, and his grasp of the character's emotions is quite accurate. Not only that, the author also has considerable reader awareness and knows how to tug at the readers' heartstrings. For example, after the heroine suffered a genocide, she used her "naturally passionate face and her usual frivolous and playful demeanor" as her "best disguise". This paragraph is very resonant. In reality, how many people are not smiling on the outside but devastated on the inside? There is also the "frustration of losing one's armor and the panic of not being able to protect oneself" when one cannot control one's emotions; there is no one to accompany one's heart when one is sad, and "the embankment of a thousand miles collapses in an ant nest" as soon as someone comforts... These emotions and reactions are all too real and very touching, and readers can have a strong sense of identification and involvement. Another example is the long description of the heroine describing how she has no way to take revenge, the loud rhetorical questions, and the strong resentment and unwillingness in her tone, which makes the readers feel hopeless and powerless. ★The second issue of finding faults: the description of clothing is cumbersome There are many large descriptions of clothing in this book, which once made me have the illusion that "this is a game called "Miracle Weiwei"". I understand the author's high interest in "dressing up his daughter(s)". The detailed description of the various costumes in the article is enough to show the author's huge reserve of relevant knowledge. However, the description of costumes is too much and detailed to the point of being offensive, which is quite willful and depends on the good writing style. The description of clothing does not focus on the key points, but writes from head to toe. Sometimes I write about clothes just for the sake of writing about clothes, which is superfluous and the author seems to enjoy it. For example, when the heroine first entered the house, she chose the maids. Those maids "tied their hair into two buns behind their ears and tied it with a red silk ribbon. They all wore cross-collared short coats with pipa sleeves, square-collared green cloth half-arm short armor, and black horse-faced skirts."... As mentioned above. There are many descriptions of clothing: the standard "short coat and horse-faced skirt", occasionally added with hair accessories that are so heavy that your head will fall off, "a red gold necklace with a longevity lock hanging on the head"... Well, it is so advanced and gorgeous, I will give it up for the first time. Compared with the redundant description of clothing, the description of Yun Cui's appearance is very good: "Songsong wore a sideways pony bun and put heavy makeup on her face. A touch of water-red mandarin duck was exposed from the white mandarin duck waist, and she was tied at the bottom. She wears a light crimson gauze pleated skirt, with shoes on her feet and no socks, revealing a section of her ankles with skin as thick as gelatin. "The beauty's lazy style is fully displayed, and she also reveals a bit of decadence of her passing years. The image is very strong. Another example is the description of Chen Yueheng's appearance: "He has an oval face, phoenix eyes under a pair of beautiful eyebrows, soft eyes, and a smile at the corner of his mouth. At first glance, he seems to be a gentle person." Let's stop there! That's it! Any further description of clothing would be too much. 4. Detailed issues (20/20 points) ★The ninth flash bomb: foreshadowing is cleverly buried The author does not directly explain that the heroine has traveled through time, but lays out many foreshadowings and cleverly leaves clues for readers to generate questions and guesses. However, the author also understands the principle of overestimation and failure, and reveals the answer just right, making readers feel a little proud that "it was just as I expected." The "eating rouge" section at the beginning is reminiscent of Baoyu's classic gag; after arriving at the prince's house, the heroine lamented, "I have returned to the decadent life of the evil landlord class again." "Again" the "landlord class" contains a huge amount of information; and when the heroine confided her heart, "Although people's joys and sorrows are similar, they are not the same," which immediately reminded people of "Human beings' joys and sorrows are not the same, I just think they are noisy." ☆Summary of shortcomings ①The description of clothing is too detailed. The author has the attitude of "I know I'm verbose, but I just want to write if I like it." But in fact, no matter how beautiful the writing is, readers will still skip it at first glance. Because it has no refraction effect, nor does it reflect the characteristics of the character, it is just a pile of zircons, which does not shine like diamonds and has no great value. ②Long quotations seem verbose. The author's choice of words and sentences are enough to show his outstanding literary talent, and the right quotations are the icing on the cake, but using them too much seems to be showing off the ink in his belly. ☆Corresponding suggestions ① Highlight the key points in the clothing description and delete redundant details. Fortunately, the author's writing style does have room for willfulness, but the reader's tolerance is limited, and patience will always be exhausted. The author must not take any chances and keep a low profile when necessary. ② Grasp the key points in the quoted content and eliminate unnecessary statements. The author is very good at quoting some classic descriptions to let readers get the effect he wants to present, but only the most appropriate sentence or two is enough, which is both accurate and beautiful. [What I want to say to the author] The structure of this book is grand. The author seems to want to combine the growth of the male and female protagonists with the fate of the country, and the emotional line is only a side line. When necessary, the "love between children" may even be sacrificed to fulfill the "ambition of the family and the country." But Chinese people sometimes "will not be separated until they are reunited, and they will beg for nothing to be reunited." I hope the author can ensure the rationality of the story while carefully thinking about what kind of ending to construct in the end. After all, who can have trouble with happiness? The author is very careful in plot conception, and hopes to maintain the same level in the future to support such a big theme. It is difficult to write the essay "Rebirth to Strengthen China", so you need to grasp the appropriateness, ensure its logic, and avoid making empty castles in the air. The author's literary talent is brilliant, but it is still a little hard to restrain, and lacks a little bit of stability and stability. But compared with the performance of the previous book, the author has made great progress and has great potential. Moreover, the author has a serious attitude and keeps writing. If things go on like this, he will become a god. Take good care of you! Come on (๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧ This book review is reproduced from: Roadside Stall Review Circle. At the request of the author, it was published in the book club "When the Fireworks Have Gone, It Looks Like We Have Gone Home".

Disclaimer: I have never written a fanfic, but I really like the little emperor in the fish stew novel, so I used my imagination to write these two words at will. Tip: The content of this article has nothing to do with the original text. It is purely my own YY, and the background is modern~ My name is He Xiao, congratulations to you, Yunxiao's Xiao. I think my parents must have had very good wishes when they gave me this name. They must have hoped that I could move forward bravely and soar into the sky. Unfortunately, fate is often like this. The wishes are very beautiful, but the reality is extremely cruel. My parents both passed away when I was very young. Although they left a large amount of wealth, they did not leave me a real relative. But because of this large inheritance, many relatives I had never met suddenly appeared around me. Some said she was my mother's distant cousin, some said she was my father's cousin's third brother-in-law, and some said his father and my father were colleagues and they were together when the accident happened. When he said these words, this man's eyes seemed to be filled with water, which made people drown in it. So, I chose to believe him. I asked him what his name was, and he smiled and told me, my name is Yu Jingning, you can call me brother. From that day on, I had a new guardian. Brother Ning does not live alone. He said that there is a little girl about my age beside him. When I followed Brother Ning to the house where they lived, the sky had already darkened, and the warm yellow light shone through the windows, which made people feel a little calmer for no reason. Brother Ning opened the door, pointed at the child with bare feet and disheveled hair in the room and said to me: "He Xiao, this is Weiwei, and she will be your sister from now on." Sister? I frowned slightly and looked carefully at the person who could barely be called a girl. The girl seemed very happy after hearing what Brother Ning said. She jumped in front of me in a few steps, raised her head and said with a little pride: "Hey, brother, you have picked up another wild child." She said, her little nose wrinkled slightly, "Brother, have you found yourself a little wife?" After hearing this, Her face suddenly turned red. Although she wanted to open her mouth to refute, but for some reason, her voice was so low that no one could hear her: "I... I'm not a girl, I... I'm a boy..." The girl named Wei Wei was stunned for a moment when she heard the words. After a while, she seemed to have heard some funny joke. She raised her head and started laughing. I was very helpless and had no choice but to look at Brother Ning beside me for help. There was a wry smile on Brother Ning's face, and then he said half helplessly and half sternly: "Wei Wei, you are so rude." It seemed that Brother Ning's words had an effect, and Wei Wei's laughter stopped abruptly. She glanced at me and made a low sound in her mouth, then turned around and staggered towards her room. As the door of her room slammed shut, I carefully pulled the hem of brother Ning's clothes and asked with some worry: "Is Weiwei angry? Will she not welcome me?" Brother Ning leaned down, raised his hand and touched my half-length hair, eyes Shen Wenwen said: "Your sister Weiwei just has a bad temper, but she is a very good person. You will know it when you get along with her for a long time." The time we spent together was indeed very long, and time flowed by like water. Before I knew it, I had lived in this home for five years. In the past five years, countless conflicts have broken out between Weiwei and I. Perhaps because of his personality, Weiwei always hogged the limelight, but he had to stop because of Brother Ning's protection of me. Brother Ning is a very gentle person. Every time Weiwei loses his temper and slams the door, his tone is always more helpless than reproachful. And when I stand next to Brother Ning, every time I see Brother Ning's soft eyes looking at Weiwei, I always feel very envious in my heart. On the day of the primary school graduation ceremony, Brother Ning, as the guardian of Weiwei and I, came to the school early to attend the ceremony. As a graduate representative, I need to go on stage to give a speech. Standing on the bright podium, I looked at the dark crowd below and felt a little dizzy for a moment. I held the corners of my clothes tightly with both hands, and my eyes wandered among the crowd in the audience. It wasn't until I saw that familiar face and the encouraging smile on his face that I withdrew my eyes, clenched my fists, and spoke loudly. I feel that I have never been so brave as today. When I was about to finish the last word smoothly, I looked at the position again, but sadly found that the position was already empty. This discovery made me lose consciousness for a moment. I just stood on the podium in a daze. It wasn't until the teacher next to me gently reminded me that I suddenly came back to my senses and hurriedly ran off the podium. I ran out of the auditorium without looking back and looked around the campus. On the playground, teaching building, gymnasium. I searched all the places I could think of, but I still couldn't find Brother Ning. I was a little disappointed, why brother Ning went back without even saying hello. I turned around dejectedly and wanted to go back to the auditorium through the tree-lined path. It is very quiet among the tree-lined paths. The sun shines through the gaps in the leaves, casting mottled light and shadow on the gravel road. I walked down the path with my head lowered, and in my ears I could only hear the laughter of students in the distance and the rustling of the leaves in the wind around me. "Don't change the subject. I'm not your biological sister, so why can't I like you!" A familiar female voice suddenly sounded in the woods. When I heard the sound, I could vaguely see two familiar figures behind the intertwined trees. The two people were entangled together. The tall man looked anxious, but the petite girl below had tears streaming down her face. The two people whispered something again. Finally, Weiwei stopped struggling and the two hugged each other. Standing ten meters away, I could do nothing but stand blankly. The wind was very gentle that day. When I looked at the pair of people embracing each other, my thoughts seemed to be floating far away. "He Xiao, you are the best man today, why are you here alone?" Someone tapped me on the shoulder, and I came back from the memories. I lowered my head, straightened the flowers with the word "best man" written on my chest, and raised a smile at the corner of my mouth: "It's nothing, I just saw that Brother Ning and Weiwei finally achieved success, and I was a little emotional, and for a moment I remembered the past." The man smiled knowingly, patted my shoulder again, and said, "What, Mingming We grew up together, but now you are left alone. It feels uncomfortable." "It's really uncomfortable." I raised my head and looked at the handsome and beautiful woman, "It's really uncomfortable."

This novel "Fish Stew" is different from the first one. The first one was a fish stew. This one is considered a roasted bird. In any case, this time the heroine was not smashed into a cake. I must praise it. Compared with the first work, the second one seems to be much more sophisticated. Most readers who like fish stew novels were surprised by her writing style at the beginning of the first part (including Ben Wang), and then at the end... There is nothing more. In the second part, the writing level has been online so far, the style is highly unified, and the diction is wonderful (the 80,000-word rainbow fart will be omitted below). Okay, the following is the key. In order to show my strength (lazy), I decided to comment on four poems from the poetry meeting in the fish stew novel (what did you say? Six poems? Stop making trouble, do you know how to count?) Huanxi Sand The deep crimson color is still warm, the floating silk stamens are traced by the wind, and the words are still falling on the edge of the pool. When I was young, I didn't know how to be Li Xing, but when I got older, I recognized Huiheng. It is difficult to write the soul of Yutang on a piece of paper. Comments: Let's not talk about the rhyme problem of the word "Heng". The upper que is about Begonia, and the lower que is about itself. The structure is quite satisfactory, which does not add to the score but detracts from it. The first sentence of Shangque, "The crimson color is light and crimson is still warm," is remarkable, but the last two sentences do not capture the level and artistic conception of the first sentence. The passing of the lower que has the ability to carry on the previous one, but it has no ability to start the next one. The conclusion gives people a feeling of being thrown out, and overall there is a sense of deja vu of "open high and go low". Linjiang Fairy The Tibetan pistils are clear and fragrant, and the sleeves are filled with flowers, and the flowers are falling at dusk. Two servant girls and a young girl are half leaning against the door. Look at the light scarf accompanying the moon, the fragrant traces on the temples. Explanation does not mention spring, the east wind sends the fairy soul. The night is long and the bamboo falls and the wine is still warm. Wake up drunk in the morning breeze, remembering the king and grandson from old dreams? Points Comments: First of all, after years of interpretation, the number of variations of "Linjiang Immortal" is double digits, so this time the metrical version is ignored (for fear of embarrassment). Let's talk about Shangque first. It reverses the basic formula of moving from scenery to emotion and uses flowers to set people off. First, it creates the image of a girl who folds flowers and admires the moon. Xia Que changed his mind to Haitang, but only slightly, and returned to the character's emotions, ending with a drunken dream. In fact, this poem is very picky for readers. Xiao Liu originally wrote about herself. In this poem, if one cannot understand Xiao Liu's past, one cannot understand the content of the poem. Such words are easy to convey artistic conception, but difficult to find resonance. Good things come soon When the flowers fall and it rains, there is a thin layer of spring regret. Borrowing two points of color, don't discuss it with Xuandu. Leave a few fragrant souls on the branches, hoping to be chaste and prudent. If the wind does not carry her back, she will be close by. Comments: This song goes from "Spring Hate" to "Don't Talk to Xuandu", giving people a sense of cynical arrogance. Xia Que further sublimated this sense of arrogance, preferring to leave the "fragrance soul" to achieve "chastity and prudence", but the author obviously did not simply want to be detached from the world. She concluded at the end that "Langhuan is near" not only gives people an artistic conception of "keeping the clouds clear and seeing the moonlight", but also makes people feel the author (Sister Xia)'s arrogant ambition. Yutang Spring Early spring is cold and sunny. Who asked about Baling in February? The light rain is drizzling, and it touches the red lips. I am naturally beautiful and don't admire the good things in the world. I have no fragrance and I don't want to comment on it. There are thousands of beautiful colors and soft postures, but there are still three traces of truth. When I go to Yangzhou in Nan, I always remember the iron crown. How can I ask for my son's beautiful writings when he praises me so much? Comment: This song is characterized by a large number of allusions. The beginning uses Chen Yuyi's "Spring Cold" to express the arrogance of self-admiration of the begonia's fragrance. Later, the allusion of "Begonia has no fragrance" is used to show that the author does not care about worldly vision. At the lower palace, Lu You and Su Shi were used to further elevate Begonia, and Du Fu was also pulled out to whip the corpse, showing that although Begonia is beautiful, it does not seek worldly recognition. From this point, it can be seen that although the entire poem is about Begonia, in fact every word is a metaphor for the author himself. Hate the late spring The good dream was disturbed by the wind and rain, and then I fell asleep, still looking forward to being asked. The same color of makeup is applied, and the eyebrows and eyes are half drunk and full of moonlight. I only hope that you will have many roots, stay outside the palace, and live up to your past. Don't wait for Tang to return to Jiangxue, thousands of flowers are flying, then you will know that you will regret your spring body. Comment: There is not much problem with this song itself, but compared to the previous works, it seems a lot more petty. Here, Yang Yuhuan, who was "loved by three thousand people", is compared with herself. The upper que is written about the feeling of missing the king. The lower que first talks about the Maweipo change, which leads to the meaning of "it is late to regret the spring body". In fact, it expresses the thought of hoping for a long-lasting love... A typical boudoir. Red dates Plant roots under a tree. But the flowers are fragrant. To ask how beautiful this flower is, there are a bunch of people under the flower-viewing tree. Comments: A peerless masterpiece, the best in the world, integrating elegance and secularity, integrating scenes into human feelings and imitating worldly affairs. In two words, it is amazing!

Book review: Gu Xiaoliu grew up in Yicui Building in Fenzi Hutong. She traveled around these romantic places all day long. Xiaoliu was a good flirt with girls. She had a smooth tongue and a good eye for words. I thought this would be the trajectory of my future life, but unexpectedly an uninvited guest came and broke the peace here. Prince Pingshuo's family had no female relatives of the right age. The eldest son Yu Jingning needed a member of the Yu family to marry into the royal family, so he chose Princess Shuhe, who was originally the Shaoyang royal family, and is now Xiaoliu. She later changed her name to Yu Zhiwei, and Zhiwei embarked on a road of struggle for royal power in the court. I got to know Yi'er from the book "The Fish Goes North and Returns to the Underworld as Kun". At that time, I liked Yi'er's writing style very much. It has a strong ancient style and charm, and I prefer the short notes that are somewhat similar to historical records. This book, from the perspective of character setting, has distinct personalities, especially the contrast between Yu Zhiwei before and after. Being Xiaoliuzi is arbitrary and comfortable. Isn't this her own disguise? She wants to escape from the past and not let herself think about the sad past. She also wants to make the living feel at ease. At the same time, she is kind-hearted and can help the beggars in the alley. She thinks that there will be an opportunity for these half-grown children to study and practice martial arts without having to make a living here. As Yu Zhiwei returned to Yu Mansion, when she faced those aristocratic families at the birthday party, Yu Zhiwei was still in the transition between two identities. When she fell in love with Xia Jinfan for the first time, she was lonely and weak. Perhaps she relied a little on Yu Jingning. When she was sick and had a fever and said those words in her heart in a daze, she was like a homeless child, showing her vulnerability for the first time and wanting to find something that could warm her. The writing style naturally still continues the ancient charm. Whether it is the dress or behavior of the characters, they are all in line with this era. As Xiao Liu, she speaks Beijing dialect and has a bit of a naughty temperament, but as Yu Zhiwei, she also has the charm of a daughter's family in her movements. In terms of the plot, the battle between the two sides in the court has just begun. The emperor is young, the queen mother controls the government, the new faction, the old faction, and the eunuchs all have their own thoughts, and how will the young faction like Yu Jingning return the country to the world?

I have a heart that is familiar with rubbing my face under the book of an author who wants to have sex.

🌻Title of the book: "The Fireworks Have Dissipated and It Looks Like They Have Returned" 🌻Author: Yi'er 🌻Number of words to read: fifty chapters 🌻Brief review: An ancient romance with an imaginary plot and a grand structure. In these short fifty chapters, there are already too many characters to appear, but there is no sense of cumbersomeness because the author has created each character in a distinct and unique way, and there is no sense of confusion. At first glance, the author's writing style feels somewhat similar to A Dream of Red Mansions, but if you look closely, you will find that the author has formed his own personal style. I really like this kind of full charm, and it also has some humor, which makes it not seem so boring. What I most admire about Fish Stew is that in just fifty chapters, the layers of the characters have already emerged. Some of the main characters have their own unique personality charm, which is what I lack. (PS: I'm sorry for the stewed fish, I've only read chapter 50. And I'm not very good at writing book reviews, so I just talked about my feelings.) ------------------Separating line---------------- Fan fiction: (This is the main content of this book review , in fact, I originally wanted to write a book review, but found that my level is not good enough, so I will write a fan article and give it to ❤️Stewed fish) 🌸The arrogant and violent brother x the troublesome little sister🌸 (Of course, these are not brothers and sisters. In the novel, these two people are "coupled" together. Maybe the characters are not very elusive, so please forgive me.) In the prince's mansion. When Yu Jingning walked out from under the lush, cloud-like tree, Yu Zhiwei was sitting in the courtyard, cracking melon seeds and reading the storybook in his hand with gusto. The setting sun gave her outline a layer of golden red, and even the tiny pores on her face were slightly emitting light. Obviously she is about to get married, but she looks like she is forcing everyone to be extra leisurely. The servant in the mansion came to her side to ask for the items in his hands. He saw Yu Jingning from a distance and hurriedly saluted. And Yu Zhiwei also noticed it. When he turned around, he saw Yu Jingning. But whether it was her imagination or not, Yu Jingning's expression that she had seen her owed him two hundred taels all day turned into tenderness at this time. Although it passed by her in a flash, she still noticed it, and she couldn't help but feel a little uncomfortable. To put it bluntly, she has been in the mansion for three years, but she is going to marry He Xiao in the year when she is growing up. This is what she wants, but not what Yu Jingyu wants. As the two looked at each other, Yu Zhiwei first looked away, while Yu Jingning walked towards him. He raised his chin slightly, signaling the boy to step back. The boy took the order and left in a hurry. "I thought you wouldn't come to see me?" Yu Zhiwei threw the storybook onto the stone table next to him, curled his lips and poured himself a glass of water. "I'm just here to tell you what you need to pay attention to after entering the palace, otherwise if it affects Prince Jing's Mansion..." Before he finished speaking, Yu Zhiwei interrupted and said: "Okay, okay, your sister wants it all. Even though you are married, you still look unforgiving. And I am just a little concubine here, so I will be careful about my words and actions." "..." Yu Jingning did not answer, but her eyes were a little lonely. Immediately, Yu Zhiwei drank the water in one gulp, picked up the storybook in his hand and handed it to Yu Jingyu, "Brother? I'll give this storybook to you. I have many here, and it would be troublesome to take them away." Under the sunset, Yu Zhiwei's smile was introduced into his eyes, but he couldn't say anything. When Yu Zhiwei left the place, Yu Jingning sighed with regret: "Xiao Liu..." Then he opened the storybook - It tells the story of an actor and a young master from a noble family. The young master and the actor had feelings for each other, but he never thought that neither of them had ever told them. Then the two of them suddenly missed each other. Yu Jingning was flipping through the pages, and her movements suddenly stopped. She remembered something and laughed self-deprecatingly: "Ninety-nine steps, one more step..." The laughter was hearty and cool. When he finally died, his face was streaked with tears. ​ ——It's all over. 🌿 (a little short, and not very good, paralyzed~)

The most impressive character in Sister Stewed Fish's new book "The Fireworks Have Gone Again" is of course none other than Gu Xiaoliu. This is not because of his aura as the protagonist, but because he can not only seduce people but also change his face. What kind of character is this? Let the old aunt tell you in detail. (Every guest, please bring your own sofa, bench, small mat, melon seeds, peanut popcorn, the old aunt's class has begun!) The beginning of the article writes about a character in Yicui Tower. This character is a remarkable person. He has a face with oval seeds, peach blossom eyes, long eyelashes and a red lip that can attract people's soul. He is very handsome. But such a wonderful person actually has two small tiger teeth, and what's more terrible is that there is a mole on the left side of his mouth. " It's a pity that such a handsome and playful man is mixed up in a pimp environment, but it also makes people wonder: for such an iconic young man, is it possible that Yicuilou not only does... Business, but also... Business? This really understood my rotten girl's heart, and I instantly felt like I was going to be obsessed with this beautiful little male protagonist: I love it, I love it! Who is this person? He is Gu Xiaoliu who can change his face! Let's continue reading: Oh my god! It turns out that this Gu Xiaoliu is not a waiter but a real "Brother Bao", the "Demon King" who specializes in eating the rouge on girls' lips. Once Brother Bao appears, who can compete with him? So the first few times were very lively: theatergoers, opera singers, and people talking about Beijing movies, it really turned into a "pot of porridge"! (But this pot of eight-treasure porridge is so delicious!) But at this time a person came, and as soon as he appeared, he cooked the eight-treasure porridge into preserved egg and lean meat porridge. This preserved egg is our "Gu Xiaoliu", "Brother Bao" and "Princess Shuhe" who can change their faces. This lean meat~~ (Stop, stop! Can the teacher break it off? How did this preserved egg become a princess?) Yes, that's right, Gu Xiaoliu changed his face again, but this time he changed his face and even his gender. The little brother became a princess, and the man became a woman. Okay, after explaining this problem, let's move on. This lean meat is also an amazing person, who is he? He is Yu Jingning, "Brother Ning", the son of Prince Pingshuo and the son of the Yu family. As soon as this lean meat appeared on the scene, the preserved egg and lean meat porridge was immediately taken possession of. From then on, there were no "Brother Bao, Gu Xiaoliu, Princess Shuhe" in the world, only Yu Zhiwei, the little girl of the Yu family. From then on, Gu Xiaoliu embarked on the wonderful road of "debt collection" in her life. Debt collection? What debt to collect? This debt is too much, and it is still an arduous road to collect debt. (Quietly speaking here, the old aunt likes to collect debts the most. I wonder if this Miss Yu has such debts?) Of course, this little sister of the Yu family is not a fuel-saving lamp. Her debt collection journey is not only difficult, but it can only be said to be extremely exciting. If you don't cause trouble and find someone to flirt with, it's not called hanging around outside.         ，，，，？ Is this okay? It seems that our Weiwei is not Nuonuo but a madman with all his teeth and claws. Not only that, this careless girl started to change her face again and "pretended" and recruited three junior followers for herself, but the key is that these junior followers have no way to distinguish the gender of their elder brother, male or female? This really echoes the words of the eldest brother of the Yu family, "It is inappropriate to break up the etiquette and music!" But such a person who is capable of literary and military skills, solves crimes, can change his face, and is also flirtatious, is actually the kind of thoughtful reborn person you would never expect. Yes, you read that right, the heroine is a reborn person! (Hulla, hula, hula, hula) Oops, I seem to be stuck in Gu Xiaoliu's face-changing game and I can't extricate myself. What should I do? Don't tell me that Gu Xiaoliu's performance in that poetry club competition was beyond my expectations. I really didn't expect it, I didn't expect it, I didn't expect it! I heard that there will be people who solve crimes and fight in the future. How many faces do you think this Gu Xiaoliu has? (Jingle bell...) The old aunt put away the lesson plan, okay, we will stop here for this class first. If you predict the faces that will follow, please continue to lock in Sister Stewed Fish's new book "The Fireworks Have Dissipated and Seem to Be Home Again". See you in the next class!

*** Modern whistle BG, main character He Xiao, single arrow Yu Zhiwei *** Original character, age control, private design *** The character belongs to fish stew, OOC belongs to me *** If you have some understanding of the outpost direction setting, the reading experience will be better 1 This is a small outpost located on the northwest border of the Federation, surrounded by sea and sand sea. A small courtyard, two people, three rooms. There are very few humans who can awaken as sentinels and guides, and guides are even fewer than sentinels. It is said that there are tens of thousands of outposts of various sizes across the federation, and the average ratio of sentries to guides in the outposts is five to one. The ratio of sentries to guides in this small outpost is one to one. Disdainful of the entire league, ah no, the whole world. Sentinels have keen senses, strong skills, and strong bodies. In addition to often feeling irritable and restless due to their sensitive senses, they are the backbone of the federal army and are mostly active on the front line battlefields. The guide has strong mental power and can adjust the five senses of the sentinels to calm their emotions and protect themselves. He can also use emotional resonance as a weapon to attack others, but his body is relatively weak and his strength and speed are far inferior to that of the sentinels. Sentinels protect guides, and guides lead sentinels. This is common sense. Three The sentry of this small outpost is a veteran in his forties who still refuses to retire. His daily job is to sleep in the house. The guide of this small outpost is a fifteen-year-old boy. His daily job is to wash, cook, wash dishes, dust, and repair glass walls. The young man is called He Xiao, and he has served in this outpost for five years. When he first arrived, Xiao He Xiao was holding the textbook he borrowed from the military academy. He was hungry and trembling. He cheered himself up for three days and pointed to the introduction to the sentry guide above to discuss the theory with the veteran who fell asleep until noon. Choking on the strong absinthe-flavored pheromone in the veteran's room, Xiao He Xiao tightly covered her nose and watched the veteran flipping through the textbook. The veteran turned to the last chapter of the textbook, pointed at the legendary guide story on the page with his cigarette-stained fingers, and said earnestly: "Master, you are not an ordinary person, how can you hold yourself to the standards of ordinary people?" It was the first time that ten-year-old He Xiao heard someone tell him so clearly: he is not an ordinary person. Most of the sentinel guides awaken their abilities in adolescence. Xiao Hexiao has already shown strong mental abilities when he was only five or six years old. However, his mother never praised him for this. Nor did anyone else. Xiao Hexiao happily returned to the house with his textbook in his arms, and read the story of the legendary guide who was known as the Federation's number one tactician over and over again. The next day, Xiao Hexiao made two burnt breakfasts, wiped the table three times, repaired the glass that was broken by the sand last night, and smeared a circle of yellow mud on the wall of the small courtyard. The wall seems to have grown a centimeter taller. Xiao Hexiao stood by the wall and compared his height. He was happy to find that the wall was only a little taller than himself. Even if I let the wall grow a little taller every day, I would just be tiptoeing. Wu Qiang's height grows much faster than He Xiao's. When the Yu brothers and sisters came to this outpost, the wall was already more than two meters high, and the fifteen-year-old He Xiao was only 1.5 Meters tall. Six Since the wall was higher than He Xiao, the veteran would occasionally come out of the house to take a look around. The five senses of the sentry are too sharp. Normal sentry posts will use running water or fans to create a white noise barrier to protect the sentry's hearing; they will also be issued soft clothing to protect the sentry's sense of touch. In this outpost, the persistent wind and sand provide pure natural white noise, but it also makes the veterans miserable like countless sharp knives. Later, the veteran lay in the rocking chair behind the high wall, looking at the wind and sand swirling above his head, and said to the newly arrived Yu brothers and sisters: After staying here for a long time, even in my dreams, the sky is filled with yellow sand. Seven However, the Yu brothers and sisters only found it thrilling. They pulled the thin He Xiao and watched it several times. The veteran lost his guide more than ten years ago. Once a guide chooses to become a sentinel's partner, after the spiritual and physical union, their lives will be connected from then on, trusting each other and protecting each other. The veteran's guide was only considered "missing", so he has refused to retire. He wanted to wait. However, the mental pain of losing a guide is difficult to heal. The environment here is harsh, and there are often no qualified guides to adjust the five senses and provide mental guidance. The sentinels will easily suffer from fugue syndrome and occasionally fall into chaotic perceptions and lose themselves. Sentinels suffering from fugue will search for the nearest guide and forcibly combine with them, driven by the instinct of survival. Yu Zhiwei looked at He Xiao, who was thin but still had clear eyes, suppressed the rolling thoughts in his heart, smiled and touched his head: "Thank you for your hard work, you are great!" Eight Thank you for your hard work. You are awesome. That night, He Xiao huddled on the bed, chanting these seven words, grinning silly, and hugged his knees. A fiery red fox jumped on the corner of his bed. He Xiao carefully lay on the bed and poked the fox's belly with his finger. Soft and warm. The fox jumped into He Xiao's arms, licking his slightly wet cheeks with his warm tongue, letting the young man bury his face in his soft belly. That night, in He Xiao's dream, the sky was full of yellow sand, and there was an extra flaming red sun, shining warmly on people. Nine The fox is Yu Zhiwei's spiritual guide. He Xiao guessed it when he saw it. He has not yet had a spiritual guide himself. He felt that maybe he was too weak. Even if there is one, it can only be a little rabbit with mottled fur. Such a dazzling red color is indeed the embodiment of the lively and agile Yu Zhiwei's personality. Later, He Xiao learned that that red color could also be a blood moon. Ten Yu Zhiwei's pheromone is orange-flavored. He Xiao picked up this taste from distant childhood memories, only remembering that it was a fruit as sweet as sunshine. It is the same color as the yellow sand in the sky outside the small courtyard! It's great. Eleven The relationship between the Yu family brothers and sisters is very good, inseparable. He Xiao watched it for a few days, feeling a little envious. When he left the capital, he had no younger brothers or sisters, but his mother had a lover. He Xiao's mother was the widow of the former federal head of state. She took over his power after her husband died in the war. On the one hand, she won the support of the female group with her image of an orphan and a widowed mother, while on the other hand, she silenced the male group with her decisive and decisive killing skills. He Xiao is often proud of his mother. Sometimes he also wants his mother to be proud of him. "My mother doesn't like me, is it because I'm bad?" At night, the red fox jumped on He Xiao's bedside as usual and rubbed the back of his hand. He Xiao picked up the fox and asked seriously. The fox barked softly and turned his head to ignore him. "Are you shaking your head?" He Xiao came closer and asked. The fox turned its head again and its tail waggled from side to side. He Xiao hugged the fox tightly and murmured: "My mother doesn't like me. It turns out it's not because of me. I'm so glad." Their exile was short-term, but his wandering had no end in sight. Thirteen The Yu brothers and sisters were leaving. Regardless of his brother's dissuasion, Yu Zhiwei found He Xiao several times and wanted him to leave with them. He Xiao didn't dare to make the decision without authorization, but the veteran lost his temper at this time. "Abandoned in this barren place, who knows if they have found my guide! Let's go, let's go!" Oh, yes, we have to help the veteran find his missing lover. He Xiao nodded. Then let's go. When my mother asked, he was just trying to help others. Fourteen Leaving the post and heading east, there were finally some colors under his feet. He Xiao looked at this new world curiously. The veterans are still complaining. In his dream, the sky was still full of yellow sand. He Xiao scratched his head in embarrassment. He always felt that it was because of him that the veteran was assigned to that post on the beach. Fifteen The Yu brothers and sisters probably provoked someone. They encountered three attacks within three days of their departure. The Yu brothers and sisters are all excellent sentinels, and the veterans have rich combat experience. The three attacks were all near misses. As the only guide among the four, He Xiao was carefully protected, but also unintentionally ignored. He Xiao was a little discouraged. He is still too weak. These three people can adjust their emotions caused by the fierce battle by themselves, and they don't need his help at all. In this attack, the leader seemed to know the veteran. After a few words, the veteran's eyes were splitting. It turned out that his lover had died at the hands of this bastard a long time ago. The veteran was furious and his mental power was completely out of control. The burst of spiritual screams and pheromones flooded everyone present like a tide. The basic principle of self-destruction is regardless of friend or foe. Both guides and sentries will be affected. The lethality is amazing, the basic principle of self-destruction is two. The extreme empathy that overflows like a tsunami can cause symptoms such as dizziness and coma at the least, and can plunge people into an eternal mental night from which they can never wake up. He Xiao only had time to hold Yu Zhiwei's hand and use his spiritual power to build a barrier for her. He wants to protect her. He Xiao saw her spiritual picture, the most indelible picture hidden deep in her heart. Seventeen According to the brother of the Yu family, He Xiao held Yu Zhiwei and cried loudly that day, while building layers of fragile but tough mental barriers for her. He refused to let go of Zhiwei's hand until he collapsed and fell to the ground. Eighteen The blood moon in Yu Zhiwei's spiritual picture was washed away into a clear sky. However, He Xiao was in a coma for more than a month due to mental exhaustion. Nineteen Yu Zhiwei went to visit He Xiao, and saw the young man with clear eyes like a deer, and apologized to her shyly. He saw her secret without permission and even touched her. He Xiao only felt ashamed. Yu Zhiwei smiled and accepted He Xiao's apology. Twenty Late at night, the fiery little fox jumped onto He Xiao's hospital bed, said hello to the tall kneeling stag, and playfully patted its nascent antlers with its tail. He Xiao may not know it yet, but his spiritual guide has quietly appeared long ago and has been protecting him. The little fox hugged He Xiao and found a comfortable position in his arms to huddle up. The ward was quiet, and the little fox had a dream. In the dream, the sky is full of yellow sand, and in the sky is a bright red and yellow sun. The little fox sniffed in confusion. Why does this sun look like a big orange? Postscript: ——In the original text, He Xiao's role is too small, and he basically has to make up his own character and experience. If there are any contradictions, there is no way. ——The sky full of yellow sand is He Xiao's spiritual picture. ——This is a herbivore that is temporarily timid and timid, but will one day become ferocious and tall.

Author: Yi'er When Daheng founded the country, four princes with different surnames were granted the title, namely, Prince Gu of Shaoyang, Prince Yu of Pingshuo, Prince Lin of Zhenli, and Prince Duiyu. After the Shaoyang King Gu family, King Duiyu was eliminated by the previous emperor. King Duiyu has no descendants alive yet. In the Gu family of Shaoyang King, only a few years old girl is still alive. In Zhenli Wang Lin's family, there is now a queen mother in the palace. Pingshuo King Yu's family, the vassal territory is located in the northwest. Yu Jingning, his only son, took an errand as a guard of honor in Beijing. Current situation in the capital The emperor is young, less than twelve years old, and has no real rights. Qiu Anren: Eunuch in charge of the ceremonial department and the admiral of the East Factory. Basically, Empress Dowager Lin and Qiu Anren are in power, and the rest have no say.

Book title: "As the Fireworks Have Dissipated, It Looks Like We Have Returned" Author: Yi'er Yu Zhiwei has many names and identities. My surname is Gu, my sister is Liu, and she is called Gu Liu Niang. She was born into a noble family, Princess Shuhe of the Gu family of King Shaoyang. She should have been born with a noble stomach, rich clothes and good food. From then on, it was just the old tune of the rabbit dying and the dog cooking, and the bird hiding behind the bow, which was chosen by the late emperor. So far, the family has suffered a disaster, and only Gu Xiaoliu is alive. He pretends to be a boy in Fireworks Alley until he is twelve years old. He was found by Yu Jingning, the eldest son of Prince Pingshuo, and named Yu Zhiwei, pretending to be his younger sister who had been practicing in the temple on his behalf. To put it bluntly, she was just a piece of dough that could be flattened and rounded at will. She was sent to the palace. From then on, the little girl never even had a chance to walk out of the palace wall. For such a little person, it is enough to accept her fate, but will she accept her fate? What has he experienced that makes such a person willing to become an indispensable pillar under the nine gates of the capital. Look at "Once the Fireworks Have Dissipated", look at Yu Zhiwei, and look at the new story Yi'er brought to us.