The Military Genius Brought Zizhi Tongjian to Another World

In my last post, I praised some of the advantages of this book: hard-core and sophisticated plot design, numerous excellent foreshadowings, and skilled POV writing techniques. Because I like this book so much, I decided to open another post to praise another major advantage of this book: the character design. This book uses a POV writing technique. Although the protagonist is Su Cheng, thanks to the author's mature POV writing technique, this book has a large number of impressive characters, which are even more profound than the protagonist Su Cheng. Part of the reason why I like this book so much is because this book is simply a breath of fresh air in the online literature world. Many works have a problem, that is, the characters are not clear. Except for the protagonist, there are almost no impressive characters. But this book is different. There are countless impressive characters in this book. [Loyal Jacob], [Baal, the Optimus Prime of the Rollin Empire], [Innocent Saint Jeanne], [El with dreams like salted fish and talents like gods], [Ilsa, the Lord of Youth], [caught between the Britannia Empire and France] Allen between the Rank Empire], [The loyal and brave Enli who swears to die as the savior]... Now that I have read this book, there are so many impressive characters that I can't even count them. I can clearly tell what these characters have done and what kind of personalities they have. I think this is what an excellent novel should be, with a large number of impressive characters that will leave readers with endless aftertaste. [The characters are portrayed with flesh and blood, which is probably one of the reasons why the story in this book is so beautiful]. After all, if the characters in the book are all a bunch of idiots, then the story will definitely not be any good. Another great advantage of this book is that the villain is not mentally retarded. This is also a major manifestation of the excellent characterization in this book. A major problem in many novels is that the villains are cruel and retarded, saying retarded words and doing retarded things. And this book perfectly avoids this poisonous point. Reading the whole book, the good and bad guys all have online IQs, and they start wonderful battles of wits one after another on the battlefield. But strictly speaking, there are no real good or bad guys in this book. Everyone just has different positions. Everyone is their own master, so they fight each other. No one is a decent person, and no one is a villain. This point is vividly demonstrated in Volume 7 of this book.

I'm really curious about why your book is so beautiful and only rated 1st class? I feel that your book is a bit buried When I read a book, I often find myself unable to stop reading it in the middle. Your novel is still the first one I have read from beginning to end and I have never read another novel (because I often can't read the novel until I reach the middle).

I found this book on QQ Reading. When I saw the title, I was confused and couldn't understand what it meant, so I just tried it to see how I felt, and then came in                                                After reading a few chapters, I felt that it was okay, so I switched to the starting point and continued reading. The more I read, the more interesting it became. The characters and events were all well written (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡ I gradually fell into the trap 😭😭 and couldn't jump out. I watched it for two days and it was so enjoyable to read from the first chapter to the latest chapter! At that time, it was good to keep four updates a day. Although now that school has started, we can no longer update four times, but at least two updates a day or sometimes three updates a day is great. Although we can't reward, we guarantee that everyone will at least subscribe to support the author!                  ，😭😭😭 Every time I watch it, I go to compare my feelings with the characters. See if everyone compares their hearts, isn't it →_→ It's awesome, hahaha. Of course, the bad thing is that I didn't compare my hearts to Su Cheng (ºº ) Finally, find a picture and post your favorite words, so go for it!

I kind of want to complain about the name of the protagonist. Why is the name of the protagonist so different? What's wrong with having a name in a foreign language? In China, do as the Romans do.

Regarding the recent issue of Ilsa's decree, we discovered one of Sioux City's few shortcomings - double standards. If there is anyone who is least qualified to say that Ilsa's decree is cruel, it is Sioux City yourself. The author uses chapters 851 to 856 to describe in detail the atrocities committed by Sioux City and the Knights of Michael to massacre the city. Although this was for military operations, atrocities are atrocities without any excuse. Now Su Cheng's behavior is like "I was not cruel at all when I massacred the city, just for victory. Ilsa, your new decree is so cruel, Ilsa is so annoying." Sioux City is a typical example of why not eat minced meat. It oppressed its own citizens before, okay! Oppressing the indigenous people of the New World and the ruling class like ourselves, no! From this point of view, Sioux City is a typical representative of rulers, and the subsequent history of Britannia will also be recorded in historical records as a typical case.

Although this book has been finished a long time ago, and I only finished it recently after finishing it, I still can't help but vomit it out after reading the eighth volume. I hope the author can accept my opinions and suggestions. Let me start with the conclusion: the viewing experience of the eighth volume "The Patriotic War" is appallingly bad. I was quite comfortable reading the first seven volumes of this book, except for some of the author's writing methods that I found a bit awkward (for example, many characters have to add ah or ah after every sentence, probably because the author was influenced by Nikkei), and some settings are too idealistic, but it doesn't hurt. It doesn't matter that the protagonist Su Cheng never loses, or that Britannia (hereinafter referred to as Bu) wins all the time, it's normal. After all, this is a web novel, and it is a convention that the protagonist of a web novel is naughty. But the perception of Chapter 8 took a turn for the worse, almost making me want to abandon the book. The biggest problem is not that the protagonist's country lost, and it lost miserably. The biggest problem is that the defeat was too forced. In order to show that the protagonist nb forced others to lose. I will also talk about why losing is too forceful from two aspects: characters and settings. Let's talk about the characters first. It can be said that in Chapter 8, except for the protagonist and his direct subordinates, all the characters in the Bu camp, including named supporting characters and unnamed ordinary soldiers, have been forcibly weakened. At the beginning of the Battle of the Rhineland, Iser and Albert failed to think of the enemy behind them. Of course, it can be said that it was because the Frankish Empire (hereinafter referred to as France) was superior in technology and well prepared. However, Iser's setting at this time was "the only unified knight in the whole country, the leader of the largest knights, the head of the generals in the whole country, and once defeated the French army with less and more". It has to be said that he was outsmarted. Of course, it can also be said to be due to his age. Albert is not as naughty as Isel's setting, which is understandable. Then there are the ones who were most seriously demoted, Jacob, Ilsa and Bancro. These three characters, one is the queen, one is the palace minister, and the other is the military minister. They don't even have any objections to the fact that "general Allen leads the troops to fight against the army of his motherland"? It is understandable that Ilsa is young and has little experience, but Bancro, who is also the Foreign Secretary, does not understand what the concept of "Frank's surrender" is? Jacob is said to have been a palace minister for decades and is good at reading people. He also doubted Allen before, but now he doesn't say a word? Aren't these two old men brainwashed by Allen? Well, everyone believes that Allen has been acting for six years, then let me talk about the night of the mutiny The people who were weakened on the night of the mutiny were everyone in the entire Uriel Knights, everyone! Including Ilsa Jacob, deputy commander Enli and all the soldiers! What is the relationship between Enli and Allen? The mentor of Enli's secret crush Alyssa was killed by Allen. Enli himself was severely wounded by Allen's lieutenant (or was it Allen himself). Enli actually never had a problem with Allen from Allen's surrender to the mutiny? Well, you said that Allen and Enli have a good relationship after fighting side by side, which is understandable. Let's talk about the entire 150,000 Uriel Knights. 150,000 People, how could they mutiny all night without any movement? How about saying that Ilsa, Jacob, Enli and the three of them had a brain problem and didn't know how to wake them up all night? Allen only had 3,000 heavily armored soldiers, but he defeated 4,000 royal guards in a night attack. It is understandable that he could defeat 150,000 people? Ilsa Jacob Enri was mute and didn't know how to shout "Ellen has rebelled! Everyone, get up!"? It's not too much to spread the word ten to ten, and the entire knights have tens of thousands of people, right? What's wrong, they believed Allen's commander when he said it was an exercise, but no one believed Allen, the deputy commander of the Queen's Palace, when he said he was a villain? With the intelligence of the Queen and the Prime Minister, and the prestige in the military, how could they still go on a personal expedition? Zhu Qizhen and Wang Zhenshang are better than them! What kind of fight is this? Surrender and the ball counts. Okay, you said that these three people were so scared that they just ran away and had no time to call anyone, or that the camp was too big and no one heard them. Then the tm15w people said they followed Allen and turned against him? 15W, you said that the three thousand heavy armors are Allen's personal soldiers, and it is understandable that they would rebel. You said that the four army commanders each had their own ideas and became "traitors". It is understandable, but 150,000 people, who were only trained by Allen, can follow Allen to rebel against their motherland? The Kuomintang's military discipline is so poor, its treatment is so poor, and it still captures young men. If you want to rebel, you are rebelling against the gcd. At least they are all Chinese. I have never seen the entire Kuomintang surrender to Japan. Wang Jingwei's puppet army is not many soldiers, and most of them are civilians. You, the Uriel Knights, have 150,000 people, and are natives of Britannia. You have been a soldier for several years, and you are all regarded as a rebel? Allen only led them for four years. Four years of leadership > Decades of motherland? What nonsense? Okay, leaving aside the characters in the book, assuming everyone from Ilsa to Enri is at the level of Emperor Sheeran, let's see if this is reasonable in terms of setting. What is the relationship between cloth and law? Two countries that have been hostile for a hundred years, two completely different peoples, speaking two different languages. You said that Allen surrendered as a legal person, which is understandable. You said that Ilsa asked Allen to lead troops to fight against the army of his motherland? What nonsense? Tmd Even in the Three Kingdoms, Wei, Shu and Wu, who share the same culture and race, and were all Han Dynasty people decades ago, they would still be very hesitant to use surrendered generals. Unless it was someone like Xia Houen who was persecuted by Sima Yi in the Wei Kingdom, Zhuge Liang would dare to use it with peace of mind. Otherwise, only someone like Zhang Liao and Zhang He whose original master (Lü Bu, Yuan Shao) was dead, would Cao Cao dare to use it. What is Allen's setting? Frank Cyborg was one of the few civilians who became generals. He was very prosperous before he surrendered. You said it is understandable that Ge Zewen recruited him to surrender. It is quite normal for him to be used to attack other countries. But to attack his motherland? Are Ilsa and Jacob crazy? What does this amount to? It's equivalent to the Hundred Years' War in which the King of England surrendered Joan of Arc to fight against France. It's so outrageous, no, it's even more outrageous than that. At least the British and French ancestors are the same family, and France has nothing to do with it. Okay, you said that Allen is the leader of the Uriel Knights, but the military commander can temporarily change the leader before, but he can't? It was emphasized before that the protagonist cannot fully control his own knights, but now Allen can't change it? Or is there no one except Allen who can be the leader? Alyssa happens to be on vacation in the capital. She and Enli are both "twin generals". In terms of combat merit, Enli can be the deputy leader, but can Alyssa be the temporary leader? Okay, Alyssa is young and inexperienced. Not everyone is cheating like Su Cheng. What about the two veterans who were the same candidates as team leader with Su Cheng? Can't you temporarily support it? Do you have to use surrendered generals? Have you never heard of avoiding suspicion? Alan, a Frank, can completely mobilize a regiment of more than 100,000 people after being the leader for several years. Can Isel Albert Sioux City do that? These three have served longer, have better reputations, and have more military achievements. Albert is Isel's good brother, and Su Cheng is Isel's son-in-law. These three people have such great power and such good relations. Do they want Ilsa to be the emperor in her turn? These three people have military power over three-quarters of the country's elite army, but Ilsa and Jacob have never had any concerns? Fortunately, there is a setting that Sioux City is Ilsa's teacher. Otherwise, if Jacob died of old age, why would the three of them have to listen to Ilsa? Gale, Ilsa and her father all covet the throne. These three people want military power, prestige and prestige, but they are not even considered high-ranking masters? Although the military part of this book is too dramatic and idealistic, it can at least be justified. It is well written and I felt quite comfortable reading it. But the political part, how should I put it, the author is as naive as a child. As a large country with a population of 80 million, Bancro is actually the head of foreign affairs and the minister of military affairs by himself? Prime Minister Jacob or Bancroft's friend? Su Cheng, one of the four major league leaders in the country, still shares a father-son relationship with Jacob? In this case, can either Ge Zewen or Ilsa make the final decision? No one (except William, who was bribed by spies) questioned whether these people had too much power? What kind of tmd utopia is this? The author might as well give Ilsa Ge Zewen a setting of the divine right of the emperor and the real dragon. It's too idealistic. There is also the issue of military strength. A population of 80 million can support more than 700 regular armies. This is because the world is very productive, which is very reasonable, but the regular army cannot be raised at all? Can you only recruit a few thousand to defend the capital? The problem is that the 500,000 regular army in the South can mobilize 300,000 reserves. If the 300,000 in the North are wiped out, they can mobilize tens of thousands more to defend Sioux City's counterattack. Are you the only one special about Britannia? The 800,000 regular army can only pull 3,000 reserves to defend the country? Let's take Zhu Qizhen as an example. Zhu Qizhen sent three battalions worth 30,000 yuan first, and Yu Qian was able to pull 20,000 reserves to fight the Beijing defense battle. The main force was more than twice that of the three major battalions, but he couldn't pull out 1,000,000 reserves? Isn't this nonsense? In short, throughout Chapter 8, the supporting characters were forced to lose their wits and the soldiers were forced to lose their morals. The political settings of the previous seven chapters were difficult to withstand scrutiny. This one can be said to fall apart. As for the small issue of the Battle of the Rhineland, the lack of writing and ink is needless to say. Is it really worth making such a big sacrifice to give the stage to the protagonist? It's really better not to write about Allen's surrender and the establishment of the Uriel Knights from the beginning. If a gun appears in the front of a work, then there should be a shooting scene later. This is normal. A gun appeared in front, and the gun in the back fired and the bullet bounced off, injuring the gunman? This plot is more or less mixed with that. This book has been finished for a long time. No matter how much I say, the author cannot change it. But I also hope that the author will think more about whether the plot he writes is logical in the future, whether it is a war novel or a battle of wits. Will readers feel that such a plot is unreasonable? If so, should they be modified or added to make it reasonable

I read the author's new book, flipped through the previous book and came across this one. The author is really powerful. He can write almost 4 million words with this score. His moral integrity is very high.

Three million words! More than 6,000 recommendation votes? I have to say that I can really persist.

What makes the author insist? People with self-discipline will generally have good luck👍

4（：）：        ......        "……，，，？" "I need the royal family of the empire, the center of the empire, all the territorial nobles, more than a dozen horse farms, hundreds of blacksmith shops, and a large number of talents. In short, I need a very courageous emperor to support me with all the power of the country." "Then I will use all the power of the country to support you in completing this task!" "I'm moving to the north... I feel a little reluctant to leave Pendragon..."                                                                                                                                    "This is your hometown, Kyle. Ah... I'm a little nervous about meeting your parents..." "Don't worry, my parents are very kind." ... "After finally having peace for a while, is war going to start again... Is it a battle with the barbarians this time..." "The central government is still considering whether to launch a full-scale war with the mountain barbarians, but I think this battle is basically going to pass. After all, even the battle code name has been decided. This time the all-out war against the mountain barbarians is code-named - Salomanda."

This book is not profitable at all. The author has written more than three million words and it is still LV1, so he should just write the book that has a future!

The finale is coming soon. How will the protagonist deal with Ah Lan, Ilsa, and Deng Jiaer 🥺, especially Ah Lan and Ilsa. If they are allowed to follow others, it will make me feel like the little loli I raised has run away with others. Ahem, maybe I have read too many novels like Ru Ting Ru Ting [fn = 13]

Alyssa probably feels this way, just make do with it (laughs)

The author's book is so miserable. It's obviously pretty good. There are very few war novels, especially in the Western genre. In recent years, I've only read some light novels like King of Magic Bullets, Overlord Sword, and Heavenly Realm. Maybe these are incompatible with Starting Point.

Carol... Aqua hair, aqua eyes... That's probably what it feels like (laughs)

Reading this kind of book, I feel like I'm watching a TV show It's the kind where the protagonist travels to a different world, ck3 type, and becomes a military attache in ancient times.

Many people may think that the armors of Su Cheng, Alyssa, Iser, and Enli are European iron pot armors, and the cloaks are tied around the neck. In fact, this is not the case (laughing) What do their armors look like? In "Sword Art Online", the armors of the integrity knights are more in line with my idea of ​​Su Cheng's armors. The armors of the Integrity Knights look like this: It's very cool. When everyone thinks about Su Cheng's armors in the future, they should use this armor style as the basis for their imagination (laughing) By the way, in a few chapters, Su Cheng will change his armor, which is still white and blue with a white cloak. As for what Su Cheng's new armor will look like, everyone will just imagine what the armor in the picture above looks like (laughing)

A novelist who writes so much that I wish I could finish reading it.

Are the hot weapons out? At this time, the science and technology tree is crooked, and the quality of life is close to modernization, but we are fighting with cold weapons.

The book is good and the content is also good. Except for the modal particles, I am really speechless.

Bar de Lu - the mainstay of the old era who was often defeated Barr, a dying old man, a general who was often defeated, but he was persevering and never discouraged. Why, he persisted so much, because he was the only one in Roland. There were fatuous rulers above and young people below who refused to take over. When he When he was about to win, Su Cheng broke his victory and said, "I am too incompetent, too incompetent." Barr, it's not that you are incompetent, it's that there is no one available in the Luo Lin Empire. It has lost its territory again and again, and sent black-haired people away again and again. Barr, you are too tired, can you take a rest? No, once Barr rests, who can shoulder the responsibility for Rollin? Who can bear it?

? The swordsman has been banned? If you wait until the author joins the QQ group, you will feel nothing.

El - the tragic fate of the undefeated marshal El, a third-class logistics officer, as one of the three adopted sons, is the most passive figure among the three. His talents are so dazzling, but his ideals are so mediocre. Because of this, he has to promote the general trend of history. Even if he is undefeated, so what, being undefeated again and again cannot save the situation, but being undefeated again and again makes him farther and farther away from his ideal. Perhaps, one day dying in the arms of his teacher will be his happiness...

Is the protagonist going to die in the last picture?

The ending feels a bit rushed. Are you planning to write a sequel? Su traveled back to Earth, and Ilsa also traveled back to Earth. What about this proposal?

Although some book friends said that Alan's betrayal in Volume 8 made other people smarter than anyone expected, but in fact, from my personal point of view, this is still reasonable. First of all, the content of surrendering the enemy and entrusting him with important tasks is actually included in many war writings. The difference is that in other books, there are not many rebels, and in this book, Allen rebels after being surrendered. Why did the Queen entrust him with such an important task and not doubt him? In my opinion, Ilsa was only 12 years old at this time, she had just experienced the death of her grandfather, and she had no confidants of her own. She mostly relied on the civil servants and generals of the previous generation, so it was reasonable to want to bring Alan, who was not very important at the time, under her control and entrust her with important responsibilities. In the six years since he surrendered, Allen did obey the country's arrangements, worked hard on the battlefield, and made a lot of contributions. So Yager was wary of him at first, but it was understandable that he relaxed later. After all, there were many things in the country at that time, and he also had to help Ilsa, so it was normal for his guard to drop. Su Cheng had been in the north for a long time at that time, and had fought several battles at that time. He didn't always pay attention to Allen's movements, so it was normal that he didn't notice it.

Let me ask you in the book borrowing circle, is the author's new book out of stock?

Why is it a historical book like Zizhi Tongjian instead of Sun Tzu's Thirty-six Strategies of War and Wu Mu's suicide note?

I have obsessive-compulsive disorder. I ordered it all at once. Does this look good? 👀