America: John Wick 1924

This kind of battle story is usually a classic cool kill in terms of plot. But the author's description makes the slightly routine plot very vivid and full of pictures. The overall plot advancement is relaxed and relaxed, and the battles are compact and lively, without being sloppy. Highly recommended

If I go back to that era, I will return to China even if I die. Even if I am to be cannon fodder, I will follow in the footsteps of the teacher.

What's the use of a person no matter how skilled he is? If someone uses a 75mm caliber "sniper rifle" to hit you, you'd have to run several kilometers to hit him

In the United States in 1924, there should be a lot of gun battles. It would be a bit difficult for the protagonist to be alone. As long as he can't resist bullets, a dozen guns can threaten the protagonist. The protagonist over there is very good at fighting.

This novel is full of words. Aren't you tired from reading it? 🙂

I suggest you write less about the top of Bajiquan. The chest muscles are most developed in some places, and they are close to the arms. It is more difficult to hit with full damage. At the same chance, hitting the head with an elbow will cause more damage than hitting the chest? With the same hand-raising movement, Shenglong's uppercut is the real god.

To be honest, on the battlefield, if you want to save your life, a one-handed wild goose feather sword and a small buckler are much more useful than a two-handed long sword. Especially during melee, don't think about fighting with a two-handed knife, it's pointless. A one-handed goose feather and a small buckler can both save life and provide output. Especially the kind of Yan Ling that is not curved enough, it is much better to chop and stab with a two-handed sword or a samurai sword There are also long swords like Qijiadao. To be honest, if you can't cooperate with the battle formation. It's also useless On the battlefield, long-handled stabbing weapon>one-handed stabbing weapon>one-handed knife>two-handed sword>two-handed knife

This is a two-dimensional world. In the early 19th century, an intelligence fee of $5,000? Do you want to listen to what you are talking about? . .

There is nothing wrong with the writing and plot in all aspects. It is a good novel, but I don't like the author's tone. Too many authors write about the West, and the core has a smell of Western Paladins. This is quite annoying. I am a good person and I am educated. This is purely self-pleasure. The novel is good, but this smell makes me unable to stand it. Come on, author.

I don't know why, but this book lacks the motivation to keep reading🤔

The protagonist is an extremely unlucky guy, and nothing is accomplished easily... Accidents happen during various tasks... Chapter 147 is really tiring...

The heroine the author describes is too strange

? ? 180,000 Words and six female protagonists. It costs millions to write a group. Is this serious? The little teddy is possessed, right?

No matter how awesome a pig's trotter is, he is still a personal hero. As time goes by, will there be no waves? In the early days of North America, life was in vain if it did not conquer territory.

Fighting is the only one that can be portrayed. It would be better if these female protagonists with strong 2D painting styles are removed. Instead, write about normal women. It's too confusing. If you want to write it, just change the background of the 2D light novel.

Seeing 243, there is no one stepping on the back, stuffing so many heroines

The protagonist traveled long distances all night and then together with Olicia to fight a hundred people, I thought it was quite awesome. However, when I suddenly thought about those gods who had first-class merit and special merit in resisting U. S. Aggression and aiding Korea, I felt that the author was being conservative.

As a reader who has followed Ogata to the present, I think Chen Zhen is the character that the author has portrayed the least well. His problem lies in his inner demons. He is a martial artist who cannot hold his fist tightly. Bao Bao wants to portray a prodigal son who is reborn from the ashes at a critical moment. Looking back at the story of how to get rid of the inner demons, we can only say that this is really a failure. Chen Zhen wanted to fight against Huang Long, but he could only shout slogans because he could not hold his fists tightly. His inner demons were because he killed people, and he believed that relying on youth to defeat the enemy was problematic. No, buddy, you are a martial arts practitioner who has wounded and maimed countless people, and then you have been fighting the inner demons for more than ten years. After the inner demons are eliminated, you can kill people with a knife. Also, because of your age, you feel that you are invincible. You think that age advantage is invincible, and others have practiced boxing for so many years. It is not an advantage, so you have never beaten anyone older than you before, so you don't feel that something is wrong. Is your mentality like that of someone who is looking for others to compete with each other? The character of Chen Zhen is a bit too inconsistent, giving me the impression that he is a majestic sissy with a full body of muscles, a seven-foot long beard, and his behavior is not consistent with his thoughts. You talk about revitalizing the martial arts school and going against Huang Long. Brother, everyone is following you at their own risk. Huang Long is a vicious gangster. You have lived in Chinatown for so long and you don't know what it is like to fight against Huang Long. However, you can't lead the big gang. Jiahe and Huang Longqian's abilities mean that your sister has to find someone else to become a disciple. The people in Chinatown are waiting for you to eliminate violence and bring peace to the people. The disciples at the martial arts school are waiting for you to cheer up. But in the end, all you can do is talk nonsense here. You have such a big responsibility and you can't clench your fists. Are you kidding me? If you are born you are a waste. Forget it, you are incompetent, you are still Zhuge Zhan after all, but you are capable, but you are under so much pressure and have everyone in the martial arts school working on your inner demons. Your father's last words cannot make you wake up. This is a matter of attitude. If it weren't for the protagonist, your martial arts school would have been destroyed. The pressure of so many lives cannot withstand your inner demons. I can only say that your martial arts school should be destroyed. Why don't you surrender like your old uncle said? You're just giving it away. What, if there is no protagonist, do you plan to go to Anshengtang to fight and kill a bunch of disciples, and then Chen Zhen will be stimulated and pushed back? Then everyone took a look and realized that the curator was awesome. He was so strong. It was great that the curator got rid of his inner demons. Isn't this funny? Don't the families of those disciples who died wonder in their hearts why they are my children? You are so strong, why didn't you take action at the beginning? You had to wait until my child died before taking action. Then several families put their children at the door of your martial arts gym, knelt down and asked, "Mr. Gym, you are so strong, why are you so strong?" Why not take action? Because there are inner demons, and the inner demons were eliminated this night, so the lives of our children are not as important as the inner demons in the heart of the curator. Therefore, the curator could not take action before, and still encouraged everyone to fight against Huang Long. Do you know that it will take a few lives to break your inner demons, or you don't think you can defeat the inner demons and pick up the knife again, so let our children take the lead. This is what you do as the leader of a gym. After doing this to you, your reputation as Chen Zhen is not as good as that of Hong Ming. After all, you have to win the competition by yourself. You are just teasing others. So Chen Zhen, the character, seems to be a real waste before the inner demon comes out, but after the inner demon is eliminated, it is really funny.

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Generate a picture for me: An ultra-high-definition two-dimensional picture drawn in an anime style combined with watercolor strokes. The picture shows a girl with a very good figure, wearing a nun's costume, lying on her back on a bench near the door of the church where you walked in, smelling of alcohol, half asleep and half awake. Her long blond hair is tied with black hairbands on both sides. The ends of her flat bangs expand outward and are spread over her shoulders. She has light blue phoenix eyes with one eye squinting and the other eye looking at you sideways. She was holding a half-filled wine bottle-like glass bottle, which was half filled with water. There were many similar glass bottles on the ground. The hem of her nun's dress was shortened and changed into the shape of a short skirt. The length only reached half of her thighs. She wore white silk stockings above her knees. A black tactical sleeve is tied to each of her two plump white stocking thighs. The straps are black. Through extreme details and extreme impasto techniques, a grainy texture is formed. A streamlined brush is used to create a glazed texture with a soft light effect. The light and shadow are shadow lights, the perspective is a silhouette perspective, and the overall atmosphere is dark and gradual, perfectly showing the girl's lazy temperament. Ratio 1:1.

The male protagonist should stop role-playing with the female protagonist. The conversation begins with "priest" or "nun". It sounds too strange. Even if you have a good impression of the other person in interpersonal communication, you shouldn't always use professional pronouns 🙂

What is the difference between this and copying?

There are so many female protagonists. If the protagonist is a eunuch, I will kill him if he is not.

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I feel like I can imitate Brother Pineapple from the early stage of "Endless Debt". The violent aesthetic style is very suitable.

This book can actually be reviewed without having to be a book friend! The author also has a big heart. But to be honest, the beginning is not as smooth and beautiful as Swordsman.

I have read both Swordsman and Swordsman Group. The Swordsman Group book was the most comfortable for me. In the Swordsman Group book, I skipped chapters like Shura Field. I can only say that emotional lines are not the author's strong point. As for this book, I can't say why, but it just seemed awkward, so I only read the content before it was released.

This book is a comic adaptation and a natural script for an AI drama. Why hasn't the studio started yet?

The light of the great god has been lit