A Military Genius Takes the Comprehensive Mirror to Another World

Regarding the recent issue of Ilsa's decree, we discovered one of Sioux City's few shortcomings - double standards. If there is anyone who is least qualified to say that Ilsa's decree is cruel, it is Sioux City yourself. The author uses chapters 851 to 856 to describe in detail the atrocities committed by Sioux City and the Knights of Michael to massacre the city. Although this was for military operations, atrocities are atrocities without any excuse. Now Su Cheng's behavior is like "I was not cruel at all when I massacred the city, just for victory. Ilsa, your new decree is so cruel, Ilsa is so annoying." Sioux City is a typical example of why not eat minced meat. It oppressed its own citizens before, okay! Oppressing the indigenous people of the New World and the ruling class like ourselves, no! From this point of view, Sioux City is a typical representative of rulers, and the subsequent history of Britannia will also be recorded in historical records as a typical case.

Although this book has been finished a long time ago, and I only finished it recently after finishing it, I still can't help but vomit it out after reading the eighth volume. I hope the author can accept my opinions and suggestions. Let me start with the conclusion: the viewing experience of the eighth volume "The Patriotic War" is appallingly bad. I was quite comfortable reading the first seven volumes of this book, except for some of the author's writing methods that I found a bit awkward (for example, many characters have to add ah or ah after every sentence, probably because the author was influenced by Nikkei), and some settings are too idealistic, but it doesn't hurt. It doesn't matter that the protagonist Su Cheng never loses, or that Britannia (hereinafter referred to as Bu) wins all the time, it's normal. After all, this is a web novel, and it is a convention that the protagonist of a web novel is naughty. But the perception of Chapter 8 took a turn for the worse, almost making me want to abandon the book. The biggest problem is not that the protagonist's country lost, and it lost miserably. The biggest problem is that the defeat was too forced. In order to show that the protagonist nb forced others to lose. I will also talk about why losing is too forceful from two aspects: characters and settings. Let's talk about the characters first. It can be said that in Chapter 8, except for the protagonist and his direct subordinates, all the characters in the Bu camp, including named supporting characters and unnamed ordinary soldiers, have been forcibly weakened. At the beginning of the Battle of the Rhineland, Iser and Albert failed to think of the enemy behind them. Of course, it can be said that it was because the Frankish Empire (hereinafter referred to as France) was superior in technology and well prepared. However, Iser's setting at this time was "the only unified knight in the whole country, the leader of the largest knights, the head of the generals in the whole country, and once defeated the French army with less and more". It has to be said that he was outsmarted. Of course, it can also be said to be due to his age. Albert is not as naughty as Isel's setting, which is understandable. Then there are the ones who were most seriously demoted, Jacob, Ilsa and Bancro. These three characters, one is the queen, one is the palace minister, and the other is the military minister. They don't even have any objections to the fact that "general Allen leads the troops to fight against the army of his motherland"? It is understandable that Ilsa is young and has little experience, but Bancro, who is also the Foreign Secretary, does not understand what the concept of "Frank's surrender" is? Jacob is said to have been a palace minister for decades and is good at reading people. He also doubted Allen before, but now he doesn't say a word? Aren't these two old men brainwashed by Allen? Well, everyone believes that Allen has been acting for six years, then let me talk about the night of the mutiny The people who were weakened on the night of the mutiny were everyone in the entire Uriel Knights, everyone! Including Ilsa Jacob, deputy commander Enli and all the soldiers! What is the relationship between Enli and Allen? The mentor of Enli's secret crush Alyssa was killed by Allen. Enli himself was severely wounded by Allen's lieutenant (or was it Allen himself). Enli actually never had a problem with Allen from Allen's surrender to the mutiny? Well, you said that Allen and Enli have a good relationship after fighting side by side, which is understandable. Let's talk about the entire 150,000 Uriel Knights. 150,000 People, how could they mutiny all night without any movement? How about saying that Ilsa, Jacob, Enli and the three of them had a brain problem and didn't know how to wake them up all night? Allen only had 3,000 heavily armored soldiers, but he defeated 4,000 royal guards in a night attack. It is understandable that he could defeat 150,000 people? Ilsa Jacob Enri was mute and didn't know how to shout "Ellen has rebelled! Everyone, get up!"? It's not too much to spread the word ten to ten, and the entire knights have tens of thousands of people, right? What's wrong, they believed Allen's commander when he said it was an exercise, but no one believed Allen, the deputy commander of the Queen's Palace, when he said he was a villain? With the intelligence of the Queen and the Prime Minister, and the prestige in the military, how could they still go on a personal expedition? Zhu Qizhen and Wang Zhenshang are better than them! What kind of fight is this? Surrender and the ball counts. Okay, you said that these three people were so scared that they just ran away and had no time to call anyone, or that the camp was too big and no one heard them. Then the tm15w people said they followed Allen and turned against him? 15W, you said that the three thousand heavy armors are Allen's personal soldiers, and it is understandable that they would rebel. You said that the four army commanders each had their own ideas and became "traitors". It is understandable, but 150,000 people, who were only trained by Allen, can follow Allen to rebel against their motherland? The Kuomintang's military discipline is so poor, its treatment is so poor, and it still captures young men. If you want to rebel, you are rebelling against the gcd. At least they are all Chinese. I have never seen the entire Kuomintang surrender to Japan. Wang Jingwei's puppet army is not many soldiers, and most of them are civilians. You, the Uriel Knights, have 150,000 people, and are natives of Britannia. You have been a soldier for several years, and you are all regarded as a rebel? Allen only led them for four years. Four years of leadership > Decades of motherland? What nonsense? Okay, leaving aside the characters in the book, assuming everyone from Ilsa to Enri is at the level of Emperor Sheeran, let's see if this is reasonable in terms of setting. What is the relationship between cloth and law? Two countries that have been hostile for a hundred years, two completely different peoples, speaking two different languages. You said that Allen surrendered as a legal person, which is understandable. You said that Ilsa asked Allen to lead troops to fight against the army of his motherland? What nonsense? Tmd Even in the Three Kingdoms, Wei, Shu and Wu, who share the same culture and race, and were all Han Dynasty people decades ago, they would still be very hesitant to use surrendered generals. Unless it was someone like Xia Houen who was persecuted by Sima Yi in the Wei Kingdom, Zhuge Liang would dare to use it with peace of mind. Otherwise, only someone like Zhang Liao and Zhang He whose original master (Lü Bu, Yuan Shao) was dead, would Cao Cao dare to use it. What is Allen's setting? Frank Cyborg was one of the few civilians who became generals. He was very prosperous before he surrendered. You said it is understandable that Ge Zewen recruited him to surrender. It is quite normal for him to be used to attack other countries. But to attack his motherland? Are Ilsa and Jacob crazy? What does this amount to? It's equivalent to the Hundred Years' War in which the King of England surrendered Joan of Arc to fight against France. It's so outrageous, no, it's even more outrageous than that. At least the British and French ancestors are the same family, and France has nothing to do with it. Okay, you said that Allen is the leader of the Uriel Knights, but the military commander can temporarily change the leader before, but he can't? It was emphasized before that the protagonist cannot fully control his own knights, but now Allen can't change it? Or is there no one except Allen who can be the leader? Alyssa happens to be on vacation in the capital. She and Enli are both "twin generals". In terms of combat merit, Enli can be the deputy leader, but can Alyssa be the temporary leader? Okay, Alyssa is young and inexperienced. Not everyone is cheating like Su Cheng. What about the two veterans who were the same candidates as team leader with Su Cheng? Can't you temporarily support it? Do you have to use surrendered generals? Have you never heard of avoiding suspicion? Alan, a Frank, can completely mobilize a regiment of more than 100,000 people after being the leader for several years. Can Isel Albert Sioux City do that? These three have served longer, have better reputations, and have more military achievements. Albert is Isel's good brother, and Su Cheng is Isel's son-in-law. These three people have such great power and such good relations. Do they want Ilsa to be the emperor in her turn? These three people have military power over three-quarters of the country's elite army, but Ilsa and Jacob have never had any concerns? Fortunately, there is a setting that Sioux City is Ilsa's teacher. Otherwise, if Jacob died of old age, why would the three of them have to listen to Ilsa? Gale, Ilsa and her father all covet the throne. These three people want military power, prestige and prestige, but they are not even considered high-ranking masters? Although the military part of this book is too dramatic and idealistic, it can at least be justified. It is well written and I felt quite comfortable reading it. But the political part, how should I put it, the author is as naive as a child. As a large country with a population of 80 million, Bancro is actually the head of foreign affairs and the minister of military affairs by himself? Prime Minister Jacob or Bancroft's friend? Su Cheng, one of the four major league leaders in the country, still shares a father-son relationship with Jacob? In this case, can either Ge Zewen or Ilsa make the final decision? No one (except William, who was bribed by spies) questioned whether these people had too much power? What kind of tmd utopia is this? The author might as well give Ilsa Ge Zewen a setting of the divine right of the emperor and the real dragon. It's too idealistic. There is also the issue of military strength. A population of 80 million can support more than 700 regular armies. This is because the world is very productive, which is very reasonable, but the regular army cannot be raised at all? Can you only recruit a few thousand to defend the capital? The problem is that the 500,000 regular army in the South can mobilize 300,000 reserves. If the 300,000 in the North are wiped out, they can mobilize tens of thousands more to defend Sioux City's counterattack. Are you the only one special about Britannia? The 800,000 regular army can only pull 3,000 reserves to defend the country? Let's take Zhu Qizhen as an example. Zhu Qizhen sent three battalions worth 30,000 yuan first, and Yu Qian was able to pull 20,000 reserves to fight the Beijing defense battle. The main force was more than twice that of the three major battalions, but he couldn't pull out 1,000,000 reserves? Isn't this nonsense? In short, throughout Chapter 8, the supporting characters were forced to lose their wits and the soldiers were forced to lose their morals. The political settings of the previous seven chapters were difficult to withstand scrutiny. This one can be said to fall apart. As for the small issue of the Battle of the Rhineland, the lack of writing and ink is needless to say. Is it really worth making such a big sacrifice to give the stage to the protagonist? It's really better not to write about Allen's surrender and the establishment of the Uriel Knights from the beginning. If a gun appears in the front of a work, then there should be a shooting scene later. This is normal. A gun appeared in front, and the gun in the back fired and the bullet bounced off, injuring the gunman? This plot is more or less mixed with that. This book has been finished for a long time. No matter how much I say, the author cannot change it. But I also hope that the author will think more about whether the plot he writes is logical in the future, whether it is a war novel or a battle of wits. Will readers feel that such a plot is unreasonable? If so, should they be modified or added to make it reasonable

I read the author's new book, flipped through the previous book and came across this one. The author is really powerful. He can write almost 4 million words with this score. His moral integrity is very high.

Three million words! More than 6,000 recommendation votes? I have to say that I can really persist.

What makes the author insist? People with self-discipline will generally have good luck👍

4（：）：        …        "…，，，？" "I need the royal family of the empire, the center of the empire, all the territorial nobles, more than a dozen horse farms, hundreds of blacksmith shops, and a large number of talents. In short, I need a very courageous emperor to support me with all the power of the country." "Then I will use all the power of the country to support you in completing this task!" "I'm moving to the north... I feel a little reluctant to leave Pendragon..."                                                                                                                                    "This is your hometown, Kyle. Ah... I'm a little nervous about meeting your parents..." "Don't worry, my parents are very kind." "After finally having peace for a while, is war going to start again... Is it a battle with the barbarians this time..." "The central government is still considering whether to launch a full-scale war with the mountain barbarians, but I think this battle is basically going to pass. After all, even the battle code name has been decided. This time the all-out war against the mountain barbarians is code-named - Salomanda."

The finale is coming soon. How will the protagonist deal with Ah Lan, Ilsa, and Deng Jiaer 🥺, especially Ah Lan and Ilsa. If they are allowed to follow others, it will make me feel like the little loli I raised has run away with others. Ahem, maybe I have read too many novels like Ru Ting Ru Ting [fn = 13]

This book is not profitable at all. The author has written more than three million words and it is still LV1, so he should just write the book that has a future!

Alyssa probably feels this way, just make do with it (laughs)

The author's book is so miserable. It's obviously pretty good. There are very few war novels, especially in the Western genre. In recent years, I've only read some light novels like King of Magic Bullets, Overlord Sword, and Heavenly Realm. Maybe these are incompatible with Starting Point.