Editing the Supernatural

The biggest highlight of this book is that the author does not suppress the protagonist's golden fingers too much.                     ，，，…

Fists and kicks: Xia Ji's eight strikes; sword technique: Xia Ji's eight slashes; sword technique: Xia Ji's eight pokes; stick technique: Xia Ji's eight dances; whip technique: Xia Ji's eight throws; hidden weapon: Xia Ji's eight throws; hammer technique: Xia Ji's eight smashes; bow technique: Xia Ji's eight shots; these are Xia Ji's eight techniques.

I can't stand the public version anymore. Unkindly, I wonder if the author is from Taiwan and has never read "Blessings". In it, Mr. Lu Xun successfully tells us how to make a thing that should be sad make everyone numb, tired, and bored to the point of ridicule. That is to reread it. Of course, feudal ethics and bad habits are the root causes of Xianglin's wife's tragedy, but it has to be said that the babble like Tang Monk can really wear down the patience of ordinary people. Maybe the author feels that he should be kinder to his savior. But you yourself said, "Men should do what they say, not what they say." Then, the article is full of "tellings" to the readers: how kind the heroine is, how innocent the heroine is, how gentle the heroine is, I want to be good to the heroine, I want to give this to the heroine, I want to give that to the heroine,... The words Su Xiaolei are everywhere, densely packed. I read so much of the public version, either by Su Xiaolei's side or on the way to "do things" for Su Xiaolei - you might as well just write the heroine article. Do you think you are repaying your benefactor? Wrong! You have been coveting the body of other girls from the beginning, so you replaced Su Xiaolei with a bearded man named Zhang Fei. Look how perverted your thoughts can become. What does this mean? It means your gratitude. Actually, I'm just chatting with girls Let's talk about your methods of chatting with girls. Very boring, author. It is also the routine of Long Aotian ten years ago in the online article: If I am good to her, she will be good to me. And the Qiong Yao drama's extremely awkward view of love: I'm not good enough for him/her, so I want him/her to marry someone else. Shenzhou has already landed on the moon, aren't you planning to upgrade your literary literacy? If you read a few more novels of the same type, you won't end up with such a childish and ancient plot, right? Do you think you are writing cool articles? But the words you crowd up on Su Xiaolei will only make people see the drama of deep love and misery and the gibbering Tang Monk. I advise you to be kind. Let's go back to the protagonist's idea: keep a low profile, pretend to be a pig, and give up the C position. You touch the breasts of Li Biwang, Chen Biwang and Ye Biwang, and tell me, is this the character that a cool novel protagonist should have? Or do you think your writing skills are so good that you can go against the grain and pretend to be Ruxi x Empire Saint Father Chen? It's cool, it's so cool. Do you think it's cool to play a game and be the strongest king? Let me tell you, even if you are number one in the S8 Chinese server and number one in the world, you still won't be as happy as if you brought female fans to IG fan events and beat their entire team to zero. Because the pussy is for others to see, not for you to go home and touch yourself. If your 100,000 mp sword is thrown behind the village boy on the opposite side and blows up the entire Congo Basin, I will scream cool, call the protagonist Niubi, and double-click 666. You threw it into a copy of the game and made me happy? Sorry, when I was playing games, I personally destroyed several universes. Watching you blow up the woods would not only not be fun, but it would also feel very lowb. So, author, you are really hypocritical. Just talk about girls, if it's not about repaying a favor, but if the benefactor is a man, would you go into someone's room in the middle of the night and help him cover himself with a quilt? If you can't write a plot, don't say that you are writing a humorous novel because it doesn't convey the meaning - a writer like you would have starved to death 800 years ago. So much nonsense to write We have disappeared.

The protagonist is so hot and awesome, but he has to keep a low profile. Alas, let's be more direct. It's boring and boring! It really makes no sense at all. I keep talking about suppressing strength and suppressing it with a hammer. I have left the village. I always feel that the protagonist is like using an atomic bomb on a soldier. He can become as strong as he can. In this way, even if the heroine dies, she can be resurrected with the modified ability. I am afraid that I can't control it. It's true, not everyone is a fool. Others know how strong the protagonist is, so naturally they don't dare to provoke the protagonist. I feel a little tired. (Note: I felt too boring before and stopped reading it. Now I came here to read it. I have just finished the first volume a little more. I ran out and said emm when I saw this).

I have read more than 50 chapters and am still in the Novice Village, and most of the chapters are about the inner description of the protagonist. When the protagonist acquires a skill, the effect is not introduced at all. For example, the protagonist acquires an S-level skill that brings great blessings to the sky, and then reaches the full level. The author said that this skill adds luck points, and then disappeared. Another point is the author's attitude. Obviously, Obviously if there is a problem with his own writing, he will scold you directly if someone else raises it. If you don't believe it, read Chapter 36. There is a paragraph in it that is so scumbag. A lot of people mentioned it in book reviews. Did the author directly scold you as mentally retarded? Balabala. The most common saying is that those people are trolls. Could it be that if a troll trolls me, I can't troll you back? Please, it's just you. The popularity of the novel means that no one will specifically criticize your novel. It's okay if there are problems with your writing. However, when fans bring it up to you, you don't listen and just call them trolls and curse them. This is a quality problem, and the author is really too bad. I have read more than 50 chapters, and at least 20 of them are about the protagonist's psychological remarks, and they are all useless. Nonsense, just what the protagonist said to the heroine: As long as you are happy, I will do it, as long as you like me, I will do it, and if you want me, I will do it. I wrote a lot about these three sentences. This subject matter is very attractive to me, but the author's writing is so bad that I can't stand it at all. If you don't believe what I say, you can read the book review, and you will naturally believe it.

Many people say that the author explains too much, but does not explain a lot of quarrels. Would you believe it? I read a book and there is a plot. When I arrived in the world of Bone King, I knew the plot of the future Bone King, and then I found an opportunity to kill the Bone King first. As a result, the comment area exploded and two groups of people started arguing.

Preview of additional updates for this book in the coming period... It can be said with certainty that another small wave of explosive updates is coming soon! After 0:00 a. M. On the 31st, I will add an update chapter to ask everyone for their monthly passes that are about to expire! On the 1st, which is also after midnight, I will add an update chapter asking for everyone's guaranteed monthly pass at the beginning of the month! I hope everyone will vote for "Modify Extraordinary" for the sake of my diligence and correct attitude... And there will be an additional chapter to celebrate New Year's Day during the day! It can be said that on New Year's Day, at least four chapters will be updated! ! ! As for why you say at least? Because I plan to commit suicide a little bit! <Walk a little like Sui Yu who entered the dungeon in the story! Here I make a promise to my book friends! In January 2019, throughout the month, for every 100 additional monthly tickets, I will add an extra chapter! (The worst thing is to pay off the debt as soon as possible) Moreover, it seems that we are still in the period of double monthly bills. The monthly votes cast these days are used as two votes! In other words, as long as everyone takes the time to vote, which is almost equivalent to 50 votes, I will add another chapter! This opportunity must never come again! So, what are you going to do?

I'm just curious, how many people were disgusted after reading Chapter 36? . . I guess there are not many people who run away because of nausea. Are there any who are still disgusted and stay to see? . . Is there anyone who is not disgusted by the plot at all? First of all, without any malice, I would like to complain about a few problems I saw before Chapter 36. Because I really like the author's subject matter, I hope that the author will really change the major problems a little one day (minor problems are fine). I am in another software book review group, so I won't spend much money at the starting point if there is an official version. Only before Chapter 36, I have only seen three big problems with the author. The first is that I am not very good at writing my thoughts clearly. In just 36 chapters, I have already used long and repeated remarks four or five times to explain an idea, and in the end I did not explain the specific idea clearly. For example, 36 scared me away. Future Vision tried to write a vulgar tragic routine that was in absolute terms the most vicious conflict between the protagonist's ability (100 agility and unable to catch up with a wild boar), the background (the heroine singled out a bear), and the subject matter (invincible novel), but the result was that Future Vision still didn't make it clear what detailed capabilities it was. The second is the system data flow. The core is data and information. Even if the invincible data does not matter, please think about and complete the information in advance, or you can upgrade later. It is very funny to suddenly add settings, and the original ability is directly original. Write a bunch of animation abilities, and then draw a story that is original by the author but exactly the same as a certain animation ability. It is very dissatisfied. Write Rimuru, and suddenly add a prototype with a sense of taste. This is meaningless (except for the disgusting fans of the original cute king) There is no positive setting. Write a Solomon. The ultimate body is Kongoucai. Write a sword skill as strong as you want. But in the subsequent plot, please remember that you have a skill that can kill a large area of enemies instantly. I don't expect the author to be smart enough to write detailed ability training, but at least clearly write down and remember all the abilities of Mouhu. Otherwise, a male protagonist with 100 agility and an instant kill of 30,000 goblins cannot catch up with pigs, so a female protagonist who can beat a bear head-on will be killed by a novice wild boar boss. . . Baffling. The third one is self-conflict. It's normal not to have an outline, but at least write down an extra copy of the abilities, data and general settings mentioned above. I don't want the front leg because it's easy to pick herbs, and I want the back leg because it's not necessarily easy to pick herbs. This self-conflict emmmm Forget it, I'm too lazy to worry about it. I gave up anyway, it's just a random complaint.

Luck is the most important attribute in this world, bar none! ! ! ! !

Emmm. I am a small person, and I am in a panic now because I accidentally killed an important figure in a certain force as a villain boss, and there is no way to save him; now a bunch of fighting emperors are chasing me in the form of fighting horses, but unfortunately they can't run as fast as my white jade horse. I am a fighting emperor chasing a little guy. I am in a panic right now because a little guy has KO'd our princess. We are now chasing him in the form of a fighting spirit. Unfortunately, our fighting spirit turns into a horse and cannot run as fast as his horse. Seeing that he is about to run away, (in vernacular) I am so anxious!