Everlasting Immortality

It is a really good novel about cultivating immortals. The characters, stories, and rationality are much better than the current novels. The only two books of the same level are Duan Geng's The Road to the Head of the Xiuxian Sect and The Guidelines of the Taoist Sect. With a monthly pass, you can re-subscribe all chapters to show your support.

Basic information about the book "The Everlasting Immortality" is a work by Lv1 writer Lin Quan Hermit, which is a fairy tale fantasy about cultivating immortals. It was published on March 20, 2019 and put on the shelves on June 1. Currently (as of the end of June 2019), it has about 500,000 words and a total number of fans of about 92,000. It has been on the Xianxia Category Strong Recommendation and Sanjiang Recommended List; according to data from the Qidian Data Network, the first subscription was about 3,600, and it has been included in the premium channel. Cover introduction: An ordinary mortal was reborn into the mysterious world of immortality and became a monk in a small family. Due to the ardent hopes of the elders, the family is struggling. Faced with various unfavorable situations, Zhang Zhixuan struggled step by step, went upstream, developed his family, and wrote his dream-like and magnificent life. I discovered this book at the beginning of June this year. I don't know which column I read or which book list I read. Anyway, I added "The Everlasting Immortality" to my list of books to be read. I read it later and even though it was during the final exam period, I couldn't stop reading it and read the latest chapter in one go. I gained a lot after reading it, so I couldn't help but write a brief book review, partially referencing the content in the book review area and book list area. What is the Immortal Cultivation Family? What should a cultivating family look like? To use economic terminology, the former is "positivist" and the latter is "normative" because the latter adds value judgment. I think "Eternal Immortality" gives us a good answer to the latter question: Family cultivating immortals should live in harmony and be united. The protagonist Zhang Zhixuan belongs to a small family. In this world of intrigues, the protagonist's life is difficult and the family is struggling. However, the ordinary mutual help between family members can be seen everywhere, but it also gives readers the tenderness and the truth in the ordinary. Compared with the selfishness of the protagonists in many dark immortality and underworld cultivation works, and even compared with ordinary fairy tales, this book is undoubtedly a breath of fresh air and full of positive energy: family members are mutually beneficial, and although there is competition, there is no serious intrigue. Such a sharp contrast is what many readers want to see, which helped the book become popular; many readers said that this is a "normal" rather than a "abnormal" family model of cultivating immortals. From my personal point of view, if any family or sect reaches the point where everyone is indifferent, those who receive help are ungrateful, and those who respect their elders do not know how to care for their disciples, even if it can be maintained, it can only rely on system inertia or the terror support of the most cutting-edge combat forces. The cohesion and centripetal force of this group will cause serious problems. Not only will there be no further development in the long term, but more seriously, even a small external impact will put it in danger. Of course, this is just the view of me and some book friends. I believe many people have objections to this, but this is not the point. As the saying goes, everyone has their own preferences for carrots and vegetables, so there is no need to force others to do so.                                                                                                                                                                         of the rise of a small family, the history of the cultivation family's struggle to move forward, the family collective including the protagonist's unremitting efforts to revitalize the family, this process is warm and cruel; the relationship between an individual and the family is the individual absorbs the family's nutrition when he is weak, and feeds back to the family when he is strong. I think this is the biggest highlight and selling point of this book. Of course, as a newcomer, the author still needs to improve in many aspects. First, the ability to describe fighting scenes needs to be improved. ** Plots such as "Chaoyin Mountain Battle" are average and need to be consciously exercised. Secondly, the writing style needs to be improved. For example, the character dialogue is a little more straightforward: "Today you are not good to our family, and I will not be good to you when I get better." I always feel that there is a little, emmmmmmm, so the writing style needs further polishing. Again, the plot is a bit slow, and the author is a bit like Mrs. Xianglin who "talks about her son's death and her own tragic experience to everyone she meets". She is also chatty and a bit wordy, just like a chatterbox like Tang Monk (joking) [But this is not actually a serious problem. I saw some book friends saying that I saw it. The author's nagging makes me feel a touch of warmth when I think of my mother's instructions again and again when I left home. Regarding the complaints from some book friends, the author responded that this is due to his writing style, definitely not the word count, and it is constantly improving] In other words, the author's ability to retell old events has a long waiting time, there are too many repetitive contents, and the clutter needs further pruning. For example, when talking about alchemy, he must talk about it from the ancestors of the Zhang family, and when talking about the elders of the family, the patriarch must recall their hard work, etc. [I almost laughed to death when I saw a book friend's post, so I posted it to share the fun with everyone! (Of course lz was joking in good faith, he also said that the setting of the book was okay, the writing was good, and it was very confusing)] Finally, there are some neutral questions. If you don't grasp it well, it may become a shortcoming, but if you grasp it well, it will become a highlight. For example, the protagonist is a time traveler and has a golden finger; the setting that a monk in a non-aura environment will regress all the way to the lowest innate realm; the heroine's issues, etc. I won't go into details about the specific content. If you want to know more about it, I suggest you read the work directly. All this depends on the author's subsequent development and advancement of the plot, which remains to be seen. Of course, there are a lot of shortcomings and flaws mentioned above, but the flaws do not hide the good points. There are also many advantages and highlights in this book. In addition to the narrative at the beginning, there are also, for example, a relatively complete, reliable and logical setting, a relatively balanced power distribution, and few hard bugs; the advancement and control of the plot are relatively natural and reasonable so far; the author is also very serious and attentive, and the plot is solid; although the current map is still small, it is also vivid, and based on the information revealed in just a few words, one can imagine the grandness of the world structure, etc.                                   All in all, I recommend that friends who are short of books can read "The Immortality of Evergreen". Similar recommendations: Qi Kexiu's "The Road to the Head of a Cultivation Sect" [Death Warning: Updates have been discontinued for two years! ! !

I have read more than 700 chapters. Pig's Feet comes back and wants to merge the family into the sect. I really can't stand it here. It's so funny. Then you might as well write about the sect from the beginning to make it more acceptable. In this article, I can't see how high-level monks make money. They all rely on low-level monks to support them. Pig's Feet Alchemy, let alone your 100% alchemy rate. If you set up the alchemy and cannot sell it on a large scale, it is a big failure. Originally, the family couldn't get spiritual stones. You have restrictions here and restrictions there. The family has excellent weapon training, the formation master does not have it, and the demon hunting team does not have it. Just rely on those low-level incomes? Latecomers are advised to retract this article!

Full order now. I'm really disgusted by the author's recent chapters. In the early stage, the jungle is about the strong and the weak, and they will do anything to survive themselves and the family. When it comes to upgrading, in order to install a reasonable golden finger, the protagonist is suddenly asked to be a moral gentleman and a world policeman. The transformation and growth of characters is a normal process in novels, but after reading these chapters, the protagonist is just talking loudly. When it comes to his own vital interests, he does not consider his own philosophy of "not killing people and seizing treasures, and maintaining justice in the world of immortality." In other words, justice that has nothing to do with me needs to be upheld, and my justice needs to be upheld even more. If this is the character of a hypocrite, God only cares about the results. Killing one person can save ten thousand people, which is not unacceptable. But looking at the author's writing, it seems that he is trying hard to help the protagonist clean up. This is just because he is not clear-headed. Returning to the protagonist's philosophy, it is impossible to simply "take treasure without killing people" without involving other changes. To accomplish this step, a society supported by contracts and rules must be established. However, in this context with such a huge gap in strength between different individuals, if this step is truly accomplished, it will not be a harmonious society, but a slave society in which layers of exploitation are exploited, and every surplus value will be squeezed out by the upper class. Finally, I would like to criticize the author, it's okay to be a double-labeled dog, but it's your fault for being disgusting. With so many people pointing it out to you, and still trying to clear your name, you're either stupid or bad. Finished spraying, abandon the book

This book is also called "Immortal Soft Rice". It has the softest male protagonist in online novels for more than ten years 😁

I vomited. Is the latest chapter screening readers? What does the protagonist say when he kills someone with his aunt? What did Toutuo say, what did he say when he broke through and killed an innocent fellow disciple? The double standards are too obvious. Even if you didn't have the part about killing Tutuo before you have to change your ways and return to righteousness in the future, I would have tolerated it. The large section of the latest chapter's cleansing up and the section after killing Tutuo are very good.

After finishing all the chapters so far, I can say that this book is getting better. The author's writing style is very peculiar. To sum it up in one word, it is "flying in the camp and dog fighting". Although it is a derogatory term, I think it is very suitable to be placed here. The monk is no longer a lone ranger, but has to bear the burden of the entire family. There is no secret realm or independent adventure, only necessity. Similarly, different from the popular farming novels, the protagonist this time has almost no golden fingers and no advanced concepts. Therefore, it no longer only requires control from a high position, but one really has to do everything personally, earning one hundred spiritual stones and one hundred spiritual stones. There is no fairy spirit in this way, but it can give people a different kind of reality. Of course, there are still some writing problems. The writing quality in the first hundred chapters is very poor, and the plot is not fully developed. After that, it gradually gets better, but overall, the writing is still far from the writing.

Personally, I think it is the best book about family cultivation of immortals. It's a pity that the settings of the gods and immortals in the later stage are not based on mortals, otherwise it could be written longer There are also some interactive processing, which may be reasonable, but not in line with everyone's cognition, so I can only skip reading.

Saw so much! Overall, this book is a very novel article on cultivating immortality! I can't praise the writing style, it's more expository, it seems quite intuitive for a novice! I would like to talk about the logic of this book. The author wants to make it as logical and rigorous as possible, but many of the things he has explained before are contradictory at the end! It means that if the character description is true, it will be expository! It's hard to see the feeling of flesh and blood! Since the author wants to write a rigorous book about cultivating immortals, please spend more time on the outline of the map, characters, background relationships, realms, skills, functions of magic weapons, efforts and benefits, and how to write a wonderful copy! Another thing I don't understand is what are the values ​​​​of this book? Such things as sects are too pedantic! Just like you opened a company so that your employees can live a better life 🤭

After reading this book, when reading other fairy novels, I felt that the supporting characters had no brains. The supporting characters in the book all have online IQs and are mature. Especially the setting of the elixir feels more reasonable.

The content is novel, the writing is average, the descriptive words are too repetitive, the IQ is online and real, and the emotional description is a bit strange, but it is acceptable. Overall, it's worth watching.

It's very interesting. I have been reading online articles for 10 years. This book has great potential. I am optimistic about such books.

The author does not fight for the sake of confrontation, and forcibly increases the difficulty faced by the protagonist. As mentioned in the previous article, Zheng Xuan Bailin's recent ascension can kill the real demon and divide its body. So why can't Qing Yuanzi, who is on the eighth level of the soul, kill a crippled real demon (just a head, but it has been sealed and suppressed for tens of thousands of years)? Even though there is a big gap between Qing Yuanzi and Zheng Xuanbai, what Qing Yuanzi is facing now is just a head of the real demon, which has been sealed and suppressed for tens of thousands of years. Can one head have one-tenth of Zheng Xuan's strength? You must know that Qing Yuanzi is already at the eighth level of Yuanshen, the number one person in this world? On the fourth level of Yuanshen, he killed the Yuanshen of Qinglihai who was about to ascend (as mentioned in the previous article, the Yuanshen killed was at least in the late stage of Yuanshen)

To be honest, I have been reading novels since 1989, and the novels nowadays are basically the same routine. Most of them just change the soup without changing the medicine, which makes them look more and more boring. This novel is unlike other novels. There is no intrigue within the family in other novels. Instead, there is only hope for the revitalization of the family. There is no particularly exaggerated golden finger, but only solid and steady cultivation. This is something that most novels today have not done and most authors have not thought about. Reading this book may not be as enjoyable as other novels, but this novel can make people read it calmly, or in other words, it can allow people to get an ethereal pure land under the wash of many refreshing articles.

I have never posted a book review, I only talk about activities in this chapter. Seeing that the author has become full-time, I would like to express my support. I like the overall atmosphere of this book, and I like this down-to-earth style, which combines mortal flow, luck theory, and farming literature to find its own path. I like the detailed description here, and I like that even people who only appear three or five times still have detailed characters. I like the novel settings here. You can come back from the catastrophe, Qingyun is forbidden to seize the body, and Nascent Soul practices Taoism. As far as this book is concerned, these are really enough. It is enough for me to finish the book and order it all, and occasionally give small rewards. But since the author is working full-time and wants to make this his career, the next book, the next book, the next book, the next book, need to be able to stand up. Then I will make some small suggestions here, please refer to them critically. Story-telling, drama, and a sense of immersion are areas where you are relatively weak. It's not that it's bad, it's just a bit short compared to those long boards. If you can continue to improve in the future, the road to becoming a great master will not be a dream. I wish you good health, a happy life, and a smooth journey to becoming a god~

It feels like a mortal in the early stages of cultivating immortality. Great book!

Please keep updating the author. I won't be able to read this book until it is updated.

Originally, all the books were deleted because of the eunuchs, but today I searched on a whim and found that they were updated again. Ye Qingjie, there is another book that can be read 😁

The protagonist is still eating soft food and fighting against the five scum, can he be upgraded? I'm not an apprentice, right?

For a novel, you should look at the creativity in the early stage, the plot in the middle stage, and the connotation in the later stage. This novel has creativity in the early stage, and the writing is profound, but there are contradictions in the plot in the middle stage. Now it is about to enter the later stage. I am looking forward to what the connotation will be in the later stage and what the theme of the whole book will be. Because my favorite fairy tale novel, Zhu Xian, the sublimation of the theme behind it is still fresh in my memory. The Great God's Everlasting Immortal Way has the style of Zhu Xian Xia Xia, so I am looking forward to it. I also want to write a similar fairy tale novel, an expectation that comes from a person who loves fairy novels.

It's much more beautiful than ordinary people. The plot is reasonable and reasonable, and the characters have distinct personalities. It's really beautiful! When the plot develops to the later stage of Yuanying, it feels really difficult to write it down. Especially after reaching Yuanshen, it is really brain-burning to make it reasonable and innovative at the same time! I used to read pirated books. After reading this book, I decided to register and subscribe to Qidian. Com to support the author's creation. I also sincerely hope that the author will sort out the outline and outline and update it again. Finally, I wish this beautiful fairy novel can be completed smoothly!

Well written

When I saw joining the sect, I felt that it didn't feel that good anymore. It was better to leave and finish it unilaterally 😄😄

I really don't want to read these chapters now. The beauty of this book lies in the fact that there are not many stupid people, but now the entire Wuyun Sect is full of stupid people, and people with the disguise skill can sneak in at once. If it's so easy, why do you still have to train undercover agents since childhood? Can't everyone just be disguised? When we first fought against Xuan Su Sect, it was easy to sneak in and break through the protective formation without any trouble.

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I feel like my writing has more direction and better than before. Please support me 🙂

This book has been discontinued. I really have no books to read. Fellow Taoists, I recommend some novels about cultivating immortals. They should be more rigorous and don't laugh like a comedy novel.

The biggest feature of this book is that it makes people feel the human touch in the daily life of Taoism. Upgrading is certainly one aspect, but the details of the interactions are more interesting. The author should not be disturbed by some individual remarks, keep calm and don't be anxious.

Come on, man! Stick to yourself and keep the pace. Just update normally

Can one bad review every day be improved?