The White Snake's Journey to Immortality

It's rare to see such a detailed novel. Otherwise, it is to give a very grand world map at the beginning and let the protagonist follow the main line of the world like a quick tour. Otherwise, it is to start from a small level but the logic is confused and reversed. In my opinion, novels are like life. They are not all step-by-step, but sometimes they progress rapidly, and sometimes they are stuck in the mud and waste time. I hope Mei Suer can grow up safely, and no matter what choice she makes, she will do as she pleases.

The author's writing is really good, I support it! In fact, it doesn't matter whether there is a male protagonist or not. After all, the protagonist was also a female in her previous life. And Xiaoyou is pretty good too, and he's pretty good as the male lead.

Because Zhuo Yue abandoned the article. What I hate the most is this kind of person who relies on you after helping her. He is like a candy, he has no self, but the heroine likes him and he has more scenes.

The previous article was very good, but after entering the Qingxian Sect, I became more and more depressed. The heroine seemed to have changed. Others talked about her. She was obviously practicing, but in the eyes of others, she was lazy. In the face of other people's ridicule and comments, nothing can be done. This kind of behavior is like not fighting or grabbing, like an old man who doesn't care about anything around him. But don't forget, the protagonist is a demon, and the original intention of practicing is just to survive and live forever. I don't know how many times I would have died if I didn't fight for it in the Shuijing Forest for decades. But entering a sect is like changing your personality. If you don't fight or grab, then why are you still joining the sect? What's the point? Zhuo Yue is a good girl and loyal to the protagonist, but the protagonist shows his attitude towards Zhuo Yue. To be honest, I can imagine that the two people will definitely fall apart in the end. No matter how good the relationship is, they need to maintain each other. If one-sided efforts are not rewarded, such a relationship cannot last long. I hope I will write better and better in the future! ! !

After reading more than two hundred chapters, I felt like it was a great novel. The heroine's golden finger was wider than a vat, and resources were sent to her desperately, for fear that she would not be the best in the world.

There must not be a male protagonist, take a look first, come on

Although there are still some shortcomings, I think it is very interesting! It's the feeling of a steady stream of water! It doesn't go against common sense! There is no such thing as in other novels where you clearly know that this person will have troubles if he doesn't die, but you don't take any action. It feels super fake! But there is no such thing as this novel! Very common sense! Like! Like it very much!

Come on, author＾0＾~very porridge

The early chapters of these chapters seem quite comfortable, especially the character of the heroine, which I admire very much. It reminds me of White Snake. Ignoring the cruelty at times, it is a bit jarring. Many other parts are very realistic and realistic. However, what makes me speechless is that the description of many supporting characters is very vague. There are many old people or some A, B, C and D. I think it is better not to write them. In this way, the supporting characters have no sense of existence at all, and it is more like an autobiography of the heroine. The whole pattern is not vivid.

I also want to ask the author if he is a fan of Gu Long. Personally, this way of writing is a bit boring for me to read. I have watched 44% of the content so far, and there is no exciting fighting scene at all. The fighting content is just brushed off 😅. There is no malicious intention in the above content, it is purely my personal opinion.