The Mysteries of the Great Tang

It's so verbose. The dialogue is all questions and explanations, with a lot of unnecessary talk or repetitive explanations. The details are endless and don't contribute anything to the main plot, especially the interactions between the female lead and the servants.

This is a rare and captivating piece of writing! The author's insistence on dealing with the concubine for so long is concerning. Consider that she's from the Hongnong Yang clan, has children, and enjoys her father's favor; yet they dared to kill her directly. The female protagonist is constrained by her age and many things she can't do.

There's a major plot hole I think: in ancient times, the pursuit of immortality was incredibly fanatical and blind, causing countless bloodshed throughout history, and emperors were no exception. When Liu Lang's mother, Lady Yang, and even her own brother learned of this, their first reaction wasn't to ask to cultivate immortality, but rather to vie fiercely for the title of princess.

The beginning of this book is also very good; the writing is really excellent, and the character descriptions in the beginning are better than before. The first two books were terribly boring with bland and bloated plots, and the characters were stereotypical.

It's all about palace intrigue, oh my god! Why add cultivation to a story if you love palace intrigue so much? Why not just quietly cultivate to the Foundation Establishment stage and kill Li Wenliang? All this small-scale manipulation and backstabbing is pointless. In the end, he can't even kill Little Yangshi.

It's actually quite good; the writing is good, and there's not too much unnecessary dialogue. At the beginning, I thought it was another domestic/palace intrigue story, but later I discovered there were elements of cultivation. It's just not long enough.

I admit I didn't finish it; I only read up to chapter 128, which I regret. I've read some of the author's works before—you can check my records—but it's been about two years since I last read one. I forget which book I stopped reading and never continued.

I've followed every book by Liu Da since Pingqing, and I've finished most of them. However, I gave up on the two books that recently finished because I was getting a bit tired of them. Then, I discovered this new book. The setting suited my taste perfectly, so I couldn't resist starting to read it and following the updates every day. Here are my suggestions: 1.

I've read over fifty chapters and I'm still stuck in the backyard. If she were a transmigrator with nothing, I wouldn't say anything, since survival is the most important thing. But the female lead seems to have transmigrated through countless small worlds and has a ton of good stuff! How could someone who has experienced paradise on earth be so foolish as to choose to remain in this hellish home?

Domestic power struggles are so low-level. All they do is bicker and argue with kids all day, and there are always long, meaningless dialogues. If this kind of fluff continues, I won't be able to keep reading.