How Did I Become Jia Yuanchun

The author's writing is quite good, I like your style

It's a niche book, and few people will read it. Come on!

I only read a few chapters and found so many flaws! 1. The thing that cultivates immortality is not spiritual power but spiritual consciousness. The starting point is not one meter away, at least a hundred meters away. The title Tianzun is the highest title among Xianxia, ​​referring to Tianzun in Taoism. It is inappropriate for a mortal in your realm to appear in Dream of Red Mansions. Dream of Red Mansions is obviously a classical fairy tale. For example, the Fairy Lady Jing Huan is the boss of the Taixu Illusion Realm, in charge of the romantic debts in the world, and in charge of the worldly women and male idiots. It is incomparable to worldly things. Born in the Thirty-three Lihen Heaven. Jia Zhu was not dead when Jia Yuanchun entered the palace. Jia Zhu did not die of serious injuries from being beaten, but died of illness! Jia Zhu was already married and had children when he died. His wife's name was Li Wan and his son's name was Jia Lan. When Jia Yuanchun entered the palace, Jia Zhu was not dead yet! Thank you for being more rigorous when writing a book.

The writing is messy and even more unreliable than some Mary Sues. Nvzhu is really not just any ordinary green tea! The female pig is so purposeful that I feel like vomiting! It's inexplicable that a male pig, an ancient human being, has a special liking for female pigs!