Pirate Dark General

Regarding Momonosuke's plot! In terms of the character of the protagonist, it is broken (personal opinion). First. The protagonist is not affected by female charm, so the fundamental reason for killing Momonosuke or not does not exist (I have never met Nami and Robin, so I am not familiar with it) Second. The article says that the protagonist has murderous intention towards Momonosuke, so where does the murderous intention come from? Third, there is too much emphasis on Momonosuke. I think it can be written that when cp0 and foil sword fight for Momonosuke, the protagonist kills Momonosuke when he kills cp0. Fourth. If it is to attract the hatred of the fur tribe and Wano Country, I think there is no need to rewrite Momonosuke. For example: you know that the person in front of you is going to kill your lord, and you try your best to stop him, but you still let him kill him, so that you will have a mentality (I have tried my best). And if you are trying your best to protect the lord, and a passer-by kills the lord, you will be moved and very angry, and your hatred value will be higher than in the previous situation. So I think the plot of Momonosuke in the article is very poorly written. There is no need to write it like this. Just kill him casually. Not only did it ruin the character of the protagonist, but it also made the plot unsmooth. The above are all personal opinions. If you don't like it, don't criticize it. Discussions are welcome. I also like to read this book, otherwise I would be too lazy to express my opinion.

I saw the chapter about the duel between the protagonist and Big Mom, and I suddenly wondered if the protagonist would kill Big Mom, and then let the protagonist Ma Jia become one of the four emperors. If so, it would be very interesting. (Speculations about the subsequent plot) The previous content does not have any major objectionable points for me, but there are still some small distasteful points.        ：，        ，，，， I don't know much about the main character's sister, Monet, so when I read the book review section, I felt a little confused about giving her the nature fruit. I don't know how much of a role the author wants her to play in the subsequent plot. I personally think that if you give her the nature fruit, you need to cultivate it, not only in terms of strength, but also in emotion. I saw in the book review area that a book friend wrote that Monet is Doflamingo's man. I personally think it makes sense. After all, the protagonist and his sister have been lost since they were young, and their relationship will definitely not be too deep. It should not be as deep as the feelings Peach Rabbit and the Empress have for the protagonist. If the protagonist and Doflamingo go to war, there is a 80% chance that they will not help each other, so it is not recommended to directly give nature fruits without cultivating feelings. Regarding Robin, I may have been influenced by other fan fictions, so I hope it's better to accept it, and it's not too difficult. Now she's in the early stages of being hunted down, which is easy to deal with. But it becomes more difficult after meeting the Straw Hats. I don't really like poaching. After all, the protagonist's character is gentle with a bit of aloofness. Poaching is a bit destructive. I don't know whether the author wants to write about a harem or a single heroine. I prefer harems, but I am afraid of harems. The harem novels I read in the past were all written around the emotional line. Usually the heroine was kidnapped by a big shot, and the protagonist came to save her, which was a bit boring. Some harem novels even have half the book with the same old plot of saving people. I am afraid that the author will follow the same path as his predecessors, and I am also looking forward to the harem. It's so confusing! 😆😆😆 Finally, please add some refinement! ! !

It seems that Bai Laizhang, an old phlegm, has to complain! I specifically looked at the character card before saying this. There is no sister of the protagonist in the character card. I have to spit out an old joke! Since there is no such character, it means that there will be no rescue or cannot be saved later. In this case, you might as well write the pig-footed sister to death from the beginning. What you wrote makes me very disgusted and uncomfortable. And if the pig's feet are directly pure evil, or pure good, or pure chaos. I can accept it and see through it. But the pig's feet give me the feeling of a bitch and a hypocritical hypocrite! On these two points, I was so disgusted that I was immediately persuaded to quit. (No arguments, no comments, just personal feelings, don't want to argue with others)

I felt that it was very interesting at the beginning, with a good grasp of the characters and personalities, and the plot was reasonable. Later on, not only did the harem start, but the protagonist also cheated and deceived in various ways. Even many actions in the early stage became very hypocritical in the later stage. The protagonist completely turned into a conspirator who deceived and deceived. He was also hypocritical and pretentious.

If food is tasteless, throw it away 😒

Brother, you are awesome. You can do this kind of side job while working on projects. Which engineering bureau are you from? Prove to engineers that in addition to making reinforced concrete, they can also write novels.

I think the angle of this book is quite novel and the characters are very distinct, but the dual protagonist Apophis felt a bit out of place on Fish-Man Island? Around chapter 300, I felt a bit indescribable. It was because after Big Mom died, I struggled to keep the hug together. The first naval protagonist had no role to play. I think the reason was because Big Mom was gone, so the next chapter was released. It's similar to some chapters about supplementary settings; it's confusing to read that avatars occupy some of the more important pages (when I clicked on it, it turned out that one mobile phone number can only be bound to one account. This setting is very confusing, so I had to use a small account, which was not in vain, and I booked it before 350)

After reading Chapter 335, I felt that the plot was stagnant and had no ups and downs. There is no suspense, and I have no desire to watch it anymore.

I read the first few chapters and they were poisonous. Farewell🙏

Chapter 457, the beginning, everything was fine before. You are a fused person, how dare you stand in the sea and fight after merging? Author, think about whether he has a Gundam Fruit or not. It's not like you can put them together into a submarine and go into the sea.

It's pretty good. You can continue watching.

This is the real son of Marshal Longinus

I just checked the category rankings. This book already has the most monthly votes among Pirates. However, there are seven Naruto books and four Elf books in front of it. Is Pirates so unpopular 😎?

The Straw Hats cannot be destroyed. The second-generation tour group pays attention to the background. Most of the people on this ship are related to the protagonist. Killing Luffy Sabo will make it difficult for Garp and the Revolutionary Army Zoro, the current Apophis Guina, is the childhood sweetheart of the protagonist's apprentice. Robin, the protagonist's subordinate, is an undercover agent in the Straw Hats. Nami, this character is ruined. It doesn't matter whether Chopper should be killed or not, and Usopp is the same. Brooke can set up a foreshadowing, and living a long time itself is the biggest secret. You can beat him half to death, and then arrange for various people to come to rescue him, just like Dogra. The main character is to fight Yim. Once there is a step down, the Straw Hats will definitely be fine 😒😒😒😒 Finally, why do you want to kill the Straw Hats? There are disgusting people in the article, which is proof of the author's writing ability.

This is the fifth time I have read the novel Dark Admiral. I really think it is the best One Piece novel I have ever read, and it is written in the navy. To be honest, if I were in the world of pirates, I would choose to be a navy! What is a pirate? ? The definition of a pirate is a villain who is not a producer in life at sea, but a murderer by robbing other people's money! ! Is it wrong to use soldiers to catch thieves? What a tall pirate king, he is just a tick sucking the blood of ordinary people, a scum! What's wrong with being a group of adventurers if it's just to pursue your dreams? Since you dare to fly the pirate flag, you should be prepared to die. It is really disgusting to see the emphasis on love and justice described in pirates! You are kind to your companions, those ordinary people who are being bullied? ! Even if the world government is corrupt, reform must rely on the revolutionary army, or the navy and internal government reforms. It's none of your business as pirates. As long as you don't cause trouble and hinder others, it's okay! !

The reason why Kaido is not dead is not that he cannot be killed. Kapuzefa Sengoku and one of the three generals are usually at the navy headquarters. Can the four of them still be killed if they use their ultimate moves together? If he really couldn't be killed, Kaido would be invincible in the world. The main reason is that the world government is unwilling to kill 1 In the last era, the three legendary pirates caused too much trouble. It is better to let the four emperors fight to death on their own. They will not have the idea of ​​conquering the world or the energy to become the pirate king. (I think the new world can only accommodate 3.5 Bosses. If there are four, they will have to fight all day long but there is a certain order. Three will always cause trouble easily. The fact that the red hair can become the four emperors does not rule out that the government deliberately let go of the four emperors to make up for the situation. Killing Whitebeard is to establish prestige and to let others Blackbeard maintains the Four Emperors, and Blackbeard will probably die if he fights Whitebeard. 3 Aokiji may be an undercover navy agent to maintain the Four Emperors' pattern, and Red Hair's broken hand may be because of knowing this. The Four Emperors' pattern, and Roger's death were all intentional by the government (Despair) 2. Not killing Kaido is also for the stability of the sea. Without Kaido, the sea will definitely become chaotic. The island and territory Kaido protects can be regarded as having a certain order. 3 Kaido is a reckless man, it will be much easier for him to plot against Kaido. A reckless man is easier to control than a highly intelligent man. Digression: The navy must establish its prestige in every era. The death of Roger and Whitebeard are both the end and the beginning of an era. Established the navy's status as the strongest. The world needs pirates. Without pirates to rob countries, how can the navy protect those countries? Otherwise, how can the navy collect gold from the sky? The red hair probably stopped the war on top to prevent the pirates from despairing. There are generals like Fujitora among the common people, so the World Government must have a lot of generals. The Navy may only be on the surface. The war on the top is really getting urgent. More than a dozen general-level masters jumped out from Mariejoia. Are the pirates desperate? Please improve

The first one is mine. Finally got the first place. Hahahaha 🐷The author's book is a hit. Fire tongs Liu Ming. I have been waiting all morning. The author is quick to improve. Hey hey hey

Curious about the protagonist's golden finger? Why can I open a small clone? Is it some kind of clone ability?

In fact, the Snow Fruit is not weak, the Shasha Fruit is not weak, and the natural system is basically not weak. In fact, in the final analysis, accepting Doflamingo's things will feel like you are losing face as an older brother, so just steal Dove's Snow Fruit and give it to your sister. Not only will you save face, but the problem will be solved 😏

The protagonist is really trying his best to create a glorious image of himself, but there is no need to worry about his arms. The protagonist has acquired the talent of bigmom, so it is not a big problem to restore his arms. However, I think it is more likely that the Seven Star Sword and the arm are fused to solve the identity problem. Or to solve the problem of insufficient domineering power of armed colors mentioned earlier. The protagonist is ambitious and will not deliberately leave a weakness. I'm kind enough to help you explain the problem of broken arms without being precise.

The first point: Kaido is indeed a phantom devil fruit user, not a dragon Because Oda deliberately avoided introducing the characteristics of Kaido's devil fruit when Kaido appeared. There is a big debate among many pirate fans about whether Kaido is a devil fruit user. Based on the general understanding, we naturally think that Kaido, like other animal devil fruit ability users, is a person with the ability to eat the dragon dragon fruit of the phantom beast species. But some people also consider that Oda has always emphasized that Kaido is the strongest creature on the surface, and coupled with the legend of dragon slaying in Wano Country, they believe that Kaido is probably not a person with abilities who eats the dragon fruit of the phantom beast species, but that he is a dragon himself. In the newly released Life Card Illustrated Book, Oda finally puts an end to this speculation. He made it clear that Kaido is indeed a Phantom Beast Fruit user. So, Kaido is not a dragon.             ：       ，，，， But for some powerful ability users, their strength is excessive or even completely dependent on the superpowers given to them by Devil Fruit. Once they lose the ability of the Devil Fruit, they are no different from ordinary people, or even very weak. As for Kaido, he belongs to the former. His strength does not depend on the superpowers obtained by becoming a dragon, but on his own extraordinary strength. This power is innate to Kaido. In the information, it was mentioned that several people who overestimated their capabilities had approached Kaido to challenge him before, but like Luffy, they were unable to withstand Kaido's mace blow. Kaido's power has exceeded the scope of human cognition. Moreover, with this description, we have a clearer understanding of the "strongest creature on the surface". This statement can only be regarded as an exaggerated metaphor. Third point: Kaido comes from a rare race In the plot, we have seen that Kaido is unusually tall and has a body shape that is incomparable to ordinary people. Therefore, many people think that Kaido is likely to be a giant. In this information, Oda also completely denied the statement of the giant clan. Oda said that Kaido only has a huge body close to that of a giant, but he is not a giant. As for which race he comes from, Oda still deliberately kept it secret. Maybe he didn't want to say it on purpose, or maybe he didn't think about it (laughs). So, according to Oda's statement, we can only define Kaido as that he does belong to the category of human beings. Just from a rare race that few people know about.

This is my first time seeking refinement. The book written by the author is very suitable to my taste. I will give you 10,000 coins.

I remember the battle between Apophis and Hawkeye. Are they going to use the Seven-Star Sword? The protagonist is going to do it by himself, or can he give the Seven-Star Sword to Kuina? It is a rare good book among pirates. I read it several times every time it is updated. There are almost no bugs. I hope it will be more reasonable, more people will read it, and it will become more popular. I will send congratulatory messages from the front line of the construction site.

I wonder if this book is poisonous? 😌

The protagonist is a person who is not even as good as Danzo in Naruto. In terms of character, Danzo is very similar to his character, but there is a fundamental difference between the two. No matter how bad Danzo is, his original intention is to make Konoha truly dominate the world. The protagonist is bad because he wants to benefit himself at the expense of others. Everything is for himself. A person walks in the darkness to protect the light, and a person walks in the darkness because he likes darkness. I like the darkness like Danzo. The darkness of the protagonist is too dirty.

One of the best among Pirates fandoms.

Please improve it. It's a very good novel, but there are too many free prostitutes. This is unavoidable in the starting point. People are unconscious. Many good novels are slowly dying like this. Readers and authors who sincerely support have suffered damage. Of course, there is no loss for free prostitution. People who pay for novels are not stupid. When it comes to paying to read novels, there are always people who feel good about themselves. I think it's awesome for nothing. It is just to support the legitimate fruits of their labor. If everyone is prostituted in vain, the novels are destined to become fewer and fewer. No one will do things that are not rewarding. I spend about forty or fifty a month on reading novels, not much. The thing about borrowing brand-name bags from members everywhere really made me laugh.

I can't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 47. I can't accept the dual personalities and such contrasting personalities. It's very abrupt. One second you are the naval hero Longinus, and behind you is the magic sword Apophis. Seriously, be a navy and be a navy. What's going on with your black and white attitude? Is this considered schizophrenia?

A general without military uniform is not a complete general ~

Damn it, in the latest episode of One Piece, Im seems to be the ancestor of Weiwei. Prepare your sword in advance.