My Senior Brother Is Too Stable

"Is it balanced? A hundred times the Zixiao Thunder Tribulation." "It must be very tiring for you to balance the way of heaven alone." "The prehistoric era is so beautiful, I won't come back in the next life." Longevity: "Do you still remember her?" Shen Gongbao: "Hahaha, I don't remember..." Changshou: "I haven't said who it is yet." "Many people think that I, Yunxiao, married the son of Dajie on behalf of Jiejiao. In fact, only I know that I married love." "You must be very lonely when you cast so many paper figures by yourself." " It only takes ten months to build an Incense God Cult, and it takes fifty years to control a Three Thousand Worlds, but it takes a lifetime to rebuild a spiritual mountain. " "They asked me why I wanted to enter the heaven, and why I wanted to kill the evil spirits? I put down my sword and stopped my horse, saying it was for a senior brother." Br> "Ksitigarbha, who loves Western religion the most, has joined the Tiandao sequence. If you like cats, you can also like me, who raises dogs." "Li Changshou planted innate spiritual trees in heaven for Yunxiao. Yesterday I changed your favorite Western religion to Buddhism, because I know that even if I change Western religion to your name , you won't come back." "Yeah, what's the use of practicing hard? I've worked so hard to prepare for the disaster, but I can't stand up to Ling'e's coquettishness." "What I want is freedom, but everywhere I go, I am restrained by heaven." People always meet Lu Ya who wants to be crushed when they are most helpless. " "If nothing happens, all of Jiejiao will be destroyed tonight. If something goes wrong, my soul will be destroyed tonight. I want to live, but I can't hold on anymore. I'm so stressed that I can't help but cry." "Why can't Qi Practitioners be like fish, with only seven seconds of memory? I wish I could forget the name Lingshan in just seven seconds." "It's enough to scratch off a word of thanks, and it's the same with the demon tribe's plan for heaven. There is no need to wait for a million Dou Dao soldiers to drop before surrendering." The Mother of Heavenly Demon went to the area close to the prehistoric way of heaven to experience the feeling of the true spirit being wiped out by the way of heaven. She continued to experience that her body was close to collapse, but the true spirit collapsed and still showed no response. The other Chaos Demon Gods were so frightened that they hurriedly fled to the depths of the Chaos Sea, but the Mother of Heavenly Demon was laughing and crying: "It turns out that it hurts so much, Kunpeng, you didn't bear it." "It is said that saints do not shed tears, but in the Lingshan Dojo, as soon as I took out a leaf, Zhunti was already crying." "It is said that the Immortal Immortal does not shed tears, but in the Three Thousand Worlds, as soon as I covered my mouth and lay down, the great masters of the ancient times were already crying." "What is the unfairness of fate?" "Taiqing was born as the first of the Three Pure Ones, while Zhunti was only a quasi-sage throughout his life." "There are only two places in the world that I can't reach no matter what, one is the pudenza in front of Taoist Hongjun, and the other is the heart of Hongyun." Donghuang: "It was very cold last night, which made me dream of you. You were standing at the gate of the heaven waiting for your Chaos Clock, and I stood in the clouds opposite and watched you for so long, so long. Why did your Chaos Clock attack you? Fire? You have been flying in the sea of chaos for so long. Why don't you rush in front of her to hurt her? Why are you so cruel that you will never move her? Why is my most precious innate treasure nothing in the eyes of others? Li Jiejiao; I don't accept her because I still hope that the Chaos Clock can at least protect the core members of the Jiejiao under Master Tongtian; I kicked her butt because I want her to calm down and communicate with me; I swear to never activate the Chaos Clock because the order of the Heavenly Dao is not balanced and I am the one who controls it, let alone the Chaos Clock that occupies the Time Dao, which will kill us! The last question, since it's you! Why did you lose such a precious treasure? " "I'm sorry for being born as a minister." "I'm sorry for eating a demon alive." "I'm sorry for not being able to give birth to a human being." "Some Kun died when they were cultivating the second soul in ancient times, and they have not been promoted until now." "What you call the great rise of the West is just to cut off the luck of the Western religion and turn Hu into a Buddha." "They say that the Western religion has lost to the External troubles, only I know, it was defeated by internal collapse. " He entered the Immortal Sect alone, became a disciple, established the Sea God, protected the dragon and phoenix shamans, destroyed the remaining demons, established the Heavenly Taoist Sect, and became a powerful minister of the Second Heavenly Emperor, but what he cared about most was his hometown Sakura. Kunpeng: "Look, I am an ordinary casual cultivator, just like wandering in the ancient world. I finally encountered the opportunity to teach Taoism in front of the Tao Ancestor. Unfortunately, there is already someone on the futon. I didn't lose, I just came late." Jiu Jiu: "Look, I am ordinary The female fairies are like wandering in the ancient world. They finally met love, but couldn't recognize each other's feelings. Unfortunately, when we sorted ourselves out, he already had someone in his heart again. I didn't lose, but I matured too late." "Tangled by fate, we followed the path. We looked at each other in the name of Taoist disciples, and we expressed our love to each other with the promise of not starting a war with each other. Maybe everyone understands in their hearts, but they just don't say it." Li Changshou: Let me ask you a question, do you think it is more important to me to become a god, or to you? Maitreya: Me? Li Changshou: Think again. Maitreya: Isn't it a Conferred God? Li Changshou: Think again. Maitreya: I am still important. Li Changshou: Neither you nor Fengshen are important to me. Without you, they are very important to me. The two-leaf willow eyebrows stood up in the sky and shouted angrily: "Kneel down!" [To be continued·Continuously updated] (Probably...)

First, let's talk about the origin of 98%. This is Li Changshou's inner voice. He has never said it out loud, but Daozu pointed it out directly. It's scary to think about it carefully. Ninety-eight percent is the estimated success probability of Li Changshou when he overcomes the tribulation. You have to ask why it is not 100%? Because Dao Dao is fifty and Tianyan is forty-nine - exactly ninety-eight percent. In Li Changshou's view, the one thing that escaped was variables; in the view of Tongtian Cult Master, the one thing that escaped was vitality. Here you will find the difference between steady teaching and interceptive teaching. So from a certain perspective, Jie Jiao is completely contrary to Li Changshou's philosophy. However, Jiejiao has charms - the righteous Zhao Gongming, the beautiful, dignified and generous Fairy Yunxiao (from the description in this book, I even suspect that Qiongxiao and Bixiao are Yunxiao's evil corpse and self-corpse). Therefore, Li Changshou and the two big guys from Jie Jiao formed a cause and effect... Li Changshou has been avoiding cause and effect, but unknowingly he still cannot avoid it, which is very interesting. The words "Ninety-eight percent" spoken by Daozu and "You know too much" when meeting Saint Taiqing for the first time showed that Daozu and Saint Taiqing knew the details of Li Changshou. However, the name "Ninety-eight percent" also showed that Daozu knew that Li Changshou would not act recklessly and was very relieved about him. Secondly, beating, this is more interesting, because while "beating", you also "scold". The beatings and scoldings hurt but didn't hurt. How could this be a beating? It was simply a deep pampering - Wen Wen lost Tianhe, causing Daozu to be unable to meditate, and he dared to come to ask for salary... But it didn't matter. As I said - it won't hurt. This is clearly for the eyes of the two saints of Western religions. It makes them frown and their teeth itch - how can this be a beating? This is telling them that this is my most beloved cub, Daozu. Are you clear? Do you dare to try to hurt him? Third, the hands are shaking... Such a fashionable term, it reminds me of Senior Lang. Perhaps Senior Lang has become a part of Heavenly Dao, and Daozu has also read Senior Lang's memory. With a shake of his hand, the Heavenly Book of Gods and the Divine Whip were in Li Changshou's hands, and Li Changshou became the real master of the tribulation. This was also a little joke from Dao Zu, which caused 98% of it to malfunction. An unexpected one came. From "98%" to "beating and scolding" and finally to shaking hands, all in one go, longevity finally became the focus, and even the trend of the entire catastrophe was dominated by him. This is very interesting. Because at this time, Li Changshou became the target of Chan Jiao, Jie Jiao, and Western Jiao. The most anxious thing at this time is Western religion. Why? Because they understand that they have become complete targets, even cannon fodder. They don't even have the ability to resist and are definitely being targeted. And Yuanshi Tianzun probably feels uncomfortable. It is obviously useless to secretly unite with the Western Sect before. Being associated with the Western Sect may be regarded as a traitor, but now he is in a dilemma and cannot get off. And Jie Jiao was happy. When it comes to friendship, Zhao Gongming is the righteous one in Yuntian. When it comes to feelings, the main wife is Fairy Yunxiao. At least Tongtian still has the promise of the deputy leader... We took a bath together... To be honest, I really feel that Yuanshi Tianzun went to unite with the Western Sect because he ate fungi. The Chan Sect has a limited number of disciples, and it is obvious that he can survive the disaster with minimal loss, but he really wants to die... Think about Adolf in World War II. In fact, all parties have clear goals for this great catastrophe. As for Chan Jiao, they can actually join forces with Jie Jiao to preserve their strength. Their goal should be to retain most of their strength. For Jie Jiao, it is to preserve the core strength and is ready to cut off the flesh. As for Western religion, it seems that if it can keep its seeds, it is a victory. That's why Gui Guicai said that this chapter is related to the direction of the entire Tribulation of the Gods. I will read it here. By the way, I would like to praise my return. I did not delete the manuscript in vain, because it is difficult to show this chapter in a relaxed manner, because the content is actually very heavy, but from the sentence "98%" to "beating and scolding" to the final "hands shaking", there is no sense of disobedience. When it comes to "98%", I already burst out laughing. My skills are really good. Come on, I hope you will truly become a god in this game, and I will always support you as always.

After reading more than 200 chapters, the emotional line is really a bit bad. The protagonist's heart palpitates because the junior sister has not taken the initiative for so many years. He only punishes her silently in his heart to copy the book. Sometimes the punishment is inexplicable. He usually makes three chapters when he is outside. If the protagonist always adheres to the principle of "pursuing the truth wholeheartedly" and treats the female fairies equally, then I have nothing to say. But when I first saw Yun Xiao, my heart immediately moved (I went to see her to deal with Zhao Gongming's porcelain incident, and I felt baffled at this time). The Taoist heart also changed when we met for the second time (we were hanging out and chatting at the Temple of the Sea). Even when we met for the third time, we even deliberately revealed that the cause and effect was for Yun Xiao to change his fate (he was granted the title of God of Heaven, but I also stopped reading after seeing this). The description of Yun Xiao's appearance three times changed the protagonist's "stability"? I really don't understand, is Yunxiao really that ridiculously beautiful? After meeting Yunxiao three times, the protagonist tore a crack in his disguise in front of the opposite sex? How "stable" is this? The most "unstable" and most inexplicable change is probably the change Yunxiao brings to the protagonist. Isn't this change a bit too sudden? Finally, let me feel sorry for the younger junior sister. Don't say that the younger junior sister Ye Gong is a dragon. Apart from the younger junior sister, Jiujiu and Poison are also the good-looking representatives in the book. The threesome in more than two hundred chapters have a little bit of impact on the protagonist's mood. Three episodes of Yunxiao's plot have made the protagonist's mood change significantly. Yunxiao should be the image of the heroine that the author deliberately created, but her emotional insertion is really too blunt, just like "bringing money into the group". Except for the emotional line, the rest of the content is quite well written.

I won't discuss the setting of this book, but I will just talk about the Qin Kong Xuan incident in a long article. It's hard to type, and I'm striving for refinement but fear of brevity. In fact, cultivating immortality is not just for immortality. Golden Immortal can live forever, and Yunxiao can transform into immortality. So why do we still need to practice? The pursuit of spiritual practice is Tao, which is the law of the movement of heaven and earth. Only by mastering the law of the movement of heaven and earth can we have great power, avoid disasters, and have all our wishes come true. It is a very simple truth. Therefore, the greatest gain or pleasure of practice is the advancement of understanding of Tao, which exceeds all other aspects. Therefore, a qualified immortal should be devoted to the Tao, and other treasures and magical materials are all means to achieve this goal. Youqin is such a qualified immortal, an indomitable swordsman. All her behaviors and activities are to prove her own way. I don't know the world, I don't understand people, I don't even know how people are born. In fact, it is very simple to know, just go to the mortal world and you will know. Not knowing is not something to be ashamed of. Knowing this will have no impact on my pursuit of the Tao. Because none of this matters. Her feelings for longevity are closer to those of a pure Taoist couple who support each other and pursue the Taoist path. There is an element of girlish admiration in it, more of a desire for fellow practitioners to share the essence of the Tao, and the least important thing is physical desire. Mortal couples are good at being together for three to five years, but immortals can stay together for thousands of years, so they can keep their relationship fresh every day. So this explains why Youqin is poisonous, because the art of detoxification that ordinary people think is not on her path. In Duxian Sect, there is no difference between detoxification and not. The problem with Youqin is that she has too little experience and lacks experience in actually encountering powerful enemies. This is a problem with Duxianmen's talent training system. It is more similar to a school that only teaches theoretical courses and ignores practice. Therefore, after Changshou's enlightenment, Youqin should be able to understand his own problem - Youqin's poison is only a problem of method and technique, not a problem of his own Taoism or character. The Kong Xuan incident, her duty, her Taoist heart, and her fierce personality as a swordsman made her dare to challenge the powerful, which is in line with her Taoist heart. It's just that the method of handling the incident is not appropriate enough. Longevity makes this clear. So after solving this problem, Youqin will be a very standard and qualified swordsman, and he will be able to participate in the development of the plot. Speaking of Yunxiao. Yunxiao is first of all a standard immortal, his cultivation comes first, and other things are not important. This is the same as Youqin. In the original work of Fengshen, Yunxiao is the immortal who is closest to the Dao below the saint (plus one to avoid exceptions), with a firm heart and a clear distinction between right and wrong. Duobao instigated the leader, Jin Ling was too murderous, Gongming was impulsive and loyal, Erxiao acted recklessly, Randen was cunning and cunning, let alone a person who explains the religion, Kong Xuan was born with powerful skills, and he didn't necessarily have much understanding of the Tao. So apart from killing and fighting, Yunxiao is extremely intelligent and is almost synonymous with being a good student who is devoted to Taoism. However, Yunxiao is not perfect, and her fraternal love for her brothers and sisters is her weak point, which eventually leads to her death and Taoism. Even though she understands this rationally, her Taoist heart is still weaker than love, which is sad. Therefore, a perfect immortal should abandon all obstacles to the great road. Relatives, teachers, Taoist companions, who stand in the way of the Tao, should they be killed or not? (Quoted from Destiny) Everyone has a choice. Back to this book, due to the setting and plot requirements of the light novel, most of the characters in the book are described as more like mortals, humorous and interesting. But there is always a part, or even a large part, of Yunxiao and Youqin who are still traditional immortals. The reader can easily feel that these two people seem to be incompatible with others. So I say Youqin is a low-end version of Yunxiao. It's just that the realm is different, the experience is different, and the Taoist heart is almost the same. He is a standard immortal. Yunxiao said in this book that it is not that he is ignorant of the hardships and dangers of the past. But calculation is just a way to survive. Her pursuit of the great road, her original intention, and her original intention have never changed. Therefore, Yunxiao is smart and understands conspiracies, but his nature is still gentle. Even in love tribulation, she faces it calmly, because she knows that her Taoist heart is firm, and on this basis she sincerely devotes herself to love tribulation. Love tribulation is not a bad thing, and there is no need to worry about gains and losses (it is far different in the golden realm). This persistence and confidence in the Taoist heart is what I like most about this character (of course, he is also beautiful). If you live a long life, you will be a pure flower in the dangerous wilderness. Maybe the Taoist heart will fluctuate after the plot requires it, but the general setting of the characters should be like this. The same is true for having a harp. If there is no Yunxiao, there should be a harp.

Alas, this book written by the author really shocked me. . . The initial cautiousness made people watch the inexplicable joy Later on, various friends who met unexpectedly made "routines" that they had never experienced before, showing us another more real and interesting prehistoric world. Until later, Changshou entered the Heavenly Court. Although his original intention was to seek a place for protection, as he became more powerful, he wanted to protect more people, including his junior sister, master, uncle, Fairy Yunxiao, and all the friends he made. . . The crises encountered range from military generals of secular dynasties to a series of casual cultivators who have never seen the protagonist. . From the possible cause and effect caused by getting to know all the powerful people, to the current face-to-face encounter with the saints, and the ultimate goal: the balance of all things. Oh, I almost forgot that the ultimate goal is immortality. . There is something to be done and something not to be done, it is time to cut it off! From Hua Ritian sacrificing her life to fill a polluted spring, to Houtu Empress single-handedly shouldering the negative emotions of the Six Paths of Reincarnation, to Ksitigarbha sacrificing her life to protect the West, I saw not only the destiny of cause and effect, but also the possibility of man conquering nature. At the same time, I also saw the significance of longevity coming to this world, promoting the development of the world and becoming better, and at the same time using the thinking of another world to perfect the prehistoric way of heaven. Alas, from Hua Ritian's sacrifice, I saw the responsibility and charisma of a heavenly emperor. The longevity master's military solution also made me realize that the protagonist's halo is not invincible. Ksitigarbha's burning Tao body, melting golden lotus, and the freedom of reincarnation beads! Ksitigarbha's exit is a relief but also a deep regret. I'm also thinking that maybe this is the most perfect ending for Ksitigarbha.

One day, among the apprentices traveling to the west... "Hey, that monkey bullies people too much!" Tang Seng said. At this time, Li Gou ran out, and Jin Chanzi was so frightened that he fell off his horse. One day, Ling'e ran out. She was Cuicui from Gao Laozhuang. One day, the Great Sage carefully knocked on the floor, and a piece of land appeared, turning and slowly getting bigger. "Brother Qiyuan, you have to help me." One day, King Golden Horn and King Silver Horn were jumping around with Zhe Xingsun. "Ah ha ha ha ha, this Senior Brother Li ran in by himself." Another day - Xi Xing and his group sneaked into Lingshan. "Ah! The human religion has flourished, and we share our name!" A certain Li Gou became a saint on the spot, and there was a vision in heaven and earth. "This Lingshan Formation is nothing more than that." "Great Sage, acting is acting, be careful. Now that I have become a saint, I must cross this guy out in my notebook." "What about this smelly monk?" "Send him to reincarnation and change his name to Fahai." Are you - lost? By the lake, Xu Xian looked at the vast sea of ​​​​fa. In the sky, there is a water god standing on the Magpie Bridge. Downstairs, Yunxiao presided over the begging ceremony surrounded by a group of children. All over the world, Ling'e is dressed in battle armor and looks majestic. Beiming, a good brother from the Wu clan presided over the hunt. "Emperor Taizong, this is the tip bag sent by Li Xianren-we can launch the satellite." -Hongjun stopped striking thunder, and Li Gou breathed a sigh of relief. Fahai understands love, Xu Xian looked at Fahai and his wife. "Madam... There is indeed a difference between immortals and mortals." (Bai Suzhen and Fa Hai have been in love for a long time) Prehistoric, it is really wonderful. (Welcome to continue) Continuation: "Fellow Taoist, wait!" Lingshan, Zhunti stood up. "Fellow Taoist, you also traveled through time, right? The nine-year compulsory education is also the People's Education version, right?" Jieyin said with a smile. "I have a destiny with your human religion, a destiny!" "I have been yearning for the human religion for a long time!" "A long time ago..." "Yes, yes, yes, yes..." (Echo) (This person is just shameless and not of my race) Name: Onmyoji Master Kong Xuan The easy-going old Master Chunyang Shou's maid Wen Jing

Let me state in advance that this is a book review and suggestion without any malicious intent. I am also a big fan of books, and my original intention is not to "point out from a distance" or "spoil the author's plot". Just friendly advice. I don't want the author to modify the outline or anything because of this. One sentence summary:There are not many interesting things in the article recently. I hope that a few suggestions from the reader's perspective can help the author. All the interesting aspects of the article are for the "unexpected" refreshment. (Of course this does not conflict with rigor and logic.) Text To be honest, the recent plot is a bit duller than before. Well, I can't say it's bland, but it feels a bit lacking in soul. Specifically, it feels like the plot is pieced together, and the author doesn't know how to advance this plot (there is no inspiration or structure for this plot, but it must be written because the characters in the article must advance step by step.) It's like he doesn't know what to write in the later stages of the novel but keeps adding plots. This feeling has existed for some time. From the middle part of "Help the Dragon Go to Heaven", there is a feeling of powerlessness. All the plots happen according to "common sense" (of course this should be the sacrifice made by the author for the sake of "reasonability"). Regardless of whether this speculation is true or not, at least it feels like this to me. I remember at the beginning, when I first came into contact with longevity practices and the success of young junior sisters, my reading experience was quite high. I still remember that at the beginning, I was happy when I saw the resentful looks in the eyes of the longevity man No. 1, 2, 3, And 4 and the junior sister Ling Ge. Because this is a plot design that has never been seen in other books. Because the protagonist's behavior and strategies were beyond my expectations. Just like comedy. If you carefully observe the audience's reaction, you will find that it is not the plot itself that attracts attention and laughter. But after the plot developed beyond the audience's expectations, the audience generally began to laugh out loud. The same goes for articles. Why do you say the plot has been dull recently? Because the audience's threshold has increased, and through the author's long-term foreshadowing of longevity, the audience's careful preparations for longevity are no longer surprising. So no matter how carefully the author arranges longevity, he cannot give the audience a higher reading experience. It is also commonly known as cool point. What we need to do now is: Keep the audience in a state of excitement (**). So, what if we do it? As a big fan of the author, I have a few suggestions for this. Of course, I promise this is not meant to slander or dissuade new readers. I didn't mean to give you any advice, and you have no responsibility or obligation to modify the plot based on my personal suggestions. I am just telling you the plot that I want to see from the perspective of a reader. Cool point 1: Let the longevity plan have unexpected events/longevity plan fail/incur losses. As mentioned above, there are already too many people (the whole article) who have lived long and safely through "disasters". Therefore, we adopt a "don't care" attitude towards any disaster. Because longevity will resolve it safely anyway. Whether it is the way of heaven or the ancient powers. The current situation is: From my feeling and "this chapter" it can be reflected: no one is discussing the "disaster issue". And the disaster itself does not give me, the reader, any a sense of tension, no matter what level he is. Because there is no "narrow escape" feeling like other protagonists. I think the author himself may have fallen into a misunderstanding: with the protagonist's cautious and 🐶 character, how could he narrowly escape death all day long? Not to mention a narrow escape, even nine lives are not willing to try. And this is not felt, but calculated by the author himself. The author compared the disaster itself and longevity's preparations one by one, and then wrote the plot. And the author also came up with some surprises to make the plot more interesting. But the results were disappointing. I myself have been writing a book for a period of time. When I wrote about two groups of people (wise men) calculating each other in the end of the world, the friend of the protagonist (wise man 1) in the book used the conditions they knew to come up with an unsolvable strategy. I still couldn't figure it out. (Then the book stops) The author himself counts more than anyone else. Moreover, this book is based on rigor as its core and cannot be broken. How to make longevity fail under strict premise? (Note: The failure here is not a near miss, but a real complete failure. For example: Changshou's whole strategy is like a child's trick in the eyes of the enemy, or Changshou just dies) Now is a turning point. Changshou got the copper coin from Ran Deng, which proved that history can be modified. It is also the calculation of the saints on both sides that Changshouformally intervenes in the upper-level war. Which gap should be used to make longevity fail and comply with strict logic? Insight, experience, vision No matter how much you calculate your longevity, how closely you calculate it. But what if the other party does not appear in the conditions for longevity at all? No matter how much you calculate about longevity, the cultivation time is still too short after all. Some experiences are not simply realized through the accumulation of time. No matter how many calculations are made about longevity, there are countless backers, but the realm is not high. Some thoughts and perceptions cannot be realized at all unless one reaches a certain level. No matter how much longevity is calculated, can your experience be compared with that of a saint? Or the intelligent Daluo Jinxian who is second only to the saint? Even if from the perspective of longevity, "it is basically exposed to the eyes of the other saint", but he is a saint/below the saint, has lived for countless years, and has all kinds of magical powers and magic weapons. It is impossible not to have a method corresponding to restraint and longevity. Just saying the word "induction" can explain part of it. So, what is actually expressed here is: the feeling of powerlessness in the face of the saint. No matter how much you calculate, it is just a plaything in front of the saint. In the ancient background, this theme can be written into the book. Cool Point 2: Readers always want to see the plot. I won't go into details on this one, just list it directly: (to be supplemented by book friends) 1. The daily life between longevity and spiritual goose. 2. Changshou was shocked. 3. The sky! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! (As long as Yun Xiao appears in any plot, whether it's Yun Xiao resolving the aftermath for Er Xiao/Yun Xiao and his junior sister/Yun Xiao's battle of skills/Yun Xiao cooking(?)/Cautious Yun Xiao fighting against Qi Qi/Yun Xiao and Li Chang Shoudu can make readers scream (orangutan boiling)! 4. Some other interesting subplots Cool. Three: It is also the most important thing to write about during the prehistoric period: the infinite battle of wits between the saints on both sides. If the author has no inspiration for the longevity line, he can actually jump out of the longevity line and write about a series of crazy arrangements and preparations made by the enemy's powerful boss/wisdom boss for the "overall situation of heaven and earth". I actually don't like Chu Xuan's "50% probability of doing it." I like to use conspiracy when writing about wise men, and it is an unsolvable conspiracy. The same applies here: The author did not mention the cruelty of the prehistoric period. It is different now. In the past, it was all a small pond. To put it more seriously, the act of seizing the treasure has interfered with the arrangements of the saints on both sides and countless hidden powers. This has caused countless people to start a new round of planning. Calculation and deduction. I hope the author can write an unexpected plot development. Instead of "being dragged into the Great Tribulation of the Gods because of saving Zhao Minggong or simply surviving until the end of the Gods" (meaning that he has been secretly acting without being exposed), the plot that I (the audience) hopes to see is: chaos of gods, endless battles between gods, killing, blood, no limit, desperate unsolvable conspiracy. The explosion before death, the powerlessness and insignificance in front of the saint, Changshou watched his thousand-year preparations turn into nothing/thousand-year plans step by step into the abyss, family and friendship (Chanjiao) struggled in the abyss (referring to Changshou risking everything to save people), seeing the crazy affection appear on Changshou's originally calm face, burning with anger (I am not a psychopath, but maybe this book is really true) We need a plot like this. Besides, we can add another setting: Is it because he knows that if there is a cause and effect, he will take risks to save people? Is it because Changshou values ​​love more than ordinary people? And when his lover/relatives/friends are in fatal danger, if he goes, he may expose his identity to the other person. The repeated entanglement and pain in my heart... Doesn't it sound interesting? ) Other suggestions for improvement: 1. It is recommended that the battle scenes be written more pleasantly. At present, most of the battles in this book are about how many paper figures Changshou has prepared, how many fairy beans each paper figure carries, and the layout and position of these paper figures. The scene became very boring due to the comparison of the combat power of both sides, so the fighting scenes became a bit boring. This is not a problem in itself, because it is impossible not to prepare like this according to Changshou's caution, but it is indeed a bit boring for all the battles in Chapter 300. It is recommended that the author change the perspective of the battle or change the focus of the battle plot. 2. Some peripheral descriptions of the issue of longevity and prudence can be mentioned in one sentence. Even if this is one of the characteristics and themes of the book, it is completely okay at first, and it can even make readers laugh. I think the rest of the "conventional precautions" are a bit ink. I can only think of so many other plots that readers would like to see. Finally, I am not instructing the author on how to write. , It's not a satire on the author or anything. It's not a psychopath either! I'm a fan of the author's "getting to the point"! I've been typing on my phone for more than two hours.

After reading these chapters of Bai Ze, some people find it difficult to accept. They think that Changshou has a distorted mentality and follows the Tao too much, which makes him seem cold and inhumane. Changshou will definitely obliterate all the people and things that will cause the ups and downs of his immortal life. This view of these people... Is completely correct. But, first of all, the core of this book is stability (Gou), which will not change. The protagonist, like other novels, is moving in the direction of "invincibility", but what is "invincible"? The view of longevity is different from that of the protagonists of all novels, so this is the first work: "True invincibility is when others do not know my name, knowledge, or existence, but I Standing apart from all living beings. Invincibility in Taoism and cultivation is ultimately just a mirror, and the more powerful you are, the more creatures that are close to you will be regarded as a threat. " Changshou believes that the so-called invincibility does not mean cultivating a Hunyuan Wuji saint like Pangu. He believes that realm and strength are not the key. The key is to be able to jump out of the three realms so that no one can recognize, contact, or interfere. Only then can you be called Wuji. So at this stage, when Changshou's cultivation level is still weak and it is impossible to escape from the way of heaven, how to achieve the effect of "relative invincibility"? In fact, it is to eradicate all people and things that may be detected and threaten the "real Li Changshou", such as the very early poisonous ones, such as Fox Girl, such as Bai Ze. In fact, Bai Ze is probably the creature with the greatest murderous intention so far in Changshou, especially in Chapter 410. Bai Ze asks Changshou why he founded the Poseidon Sect, why he deliberately lured a group of demons to gather in the mountain, how to plot against the Western Golden Chanzi, and how to maintain friendship. Kong Xuan knew such secrets, so pay attention to Changshou's reaction: Li Changshou paused for a moment and frowned at Bai Ze ----From here, it is obvious that Changshou's murderous intention has reached its peak. By the way, , I have never seen such a being who is willing to die without knowing it (laughing) Therefore, the book friend's view is correct. The protagonist has the intention to kill things that may pose a threat, even things that may pose a threat in the future (a certain land pressure). His unforgivable cold mentality, and even the fierceness of his methods, are even more severe than those that destroy his bones. His true spirit will be destroyed by you. Moreover, this mentality is not only due to longevity and having a backer, but it has been there since he was still very weak and had to spread poisonous powder when facing the enemy. However, if the character of the protagonist in this book was like this, then this book would not be a god, nor would it be loved by many book friends including me. In addition to the author's humorous writing style, novel plot, and various cute and hateful characters, Li Changshou's character is actually very lovable. It is said that Tai Chi has a long-lived and long-lived character. Even though it has an extremely cold and ruthless side, it also has a side that is very consistent with positive values For the teacher, in order to help him overcome the catastrophe, he took the risk to go to Beiju Luzhou to find the herbal medicine for the elixir. Even though his cultivation far exceeded the master long ago, his attitude of respecting the teacher has not changed; His attitude was that when he was short of supplies in the early days, he would rather go out to trade than secretly dig up the mines within the sect, even if no one knew about it; Everything he did for the Dragon Clan, the Jade Emperor, others, and the Wu Clan must be done to perfection, even if he was afraid of losing his own interests, such as filling the eyes of the East China Sea and saving the land of the Great Virtue; Being with friends Zhao Gongming and Ao Yi was all about being trustworthy and righteous. So, although this senior brother is indeed too stable, I think this is his character. We who live in a peaceful era should not force our own values ​​​​—such as the intention to harm others, the intention to guard against others, or the intention not to offend others unless they offend me — to the protagonist, because the prehistoric era is really too sinister.

"What, I am Taibai Jinxing?" "What, I am a person who teaches small magic weapons?" "What, I gave the golden hoop to Donghai?" "What, there is a gap between the West and me?" "What? Does Jin Chan have a grudge against me? " "What, Ksitigarbha is against me?" "What, Nuwa is my second boss? " "What, Yunxiao is my wife?" Raised by me?" "What, General Shulian is from the Jade Emperor?" "What, Xiao Bailong is from my younger brother?" "What, Mr. Bodhi? Did I cut it?" "What, Journey to the West was planned by me?" "What, the four apprentices teamed up to trick Tang Monk?" (ﾟДﾟ≡ﾟДﾟ)?

I. Li Changshou. As the protagonist of a new generation of immortal novels. I just want to settle down and live in this dangerous wilderness. Carefree and at ease. But it has been pushed to the forefront time and again by unscrupulous authors, and recently it has been forced to have a relationship with Western religions. It means that my uncle can tolerate it, but my aunt cannot! Unless a certain author breaks the news, he has no choice but to do the destructive thing.

Book review: This book really does not follow the routine. The prehistoric novels we have seen before basically just don't care who you are, I will just rush over and it will be over. Morality is my fist. As long as you can't beat me, then everything I say is right. No matter you are a great Luo Jinxian or a saint, I can beat you. This is the opposite of what I should do. I am a dogma, I am a sure person, and I will not be affected by the cause and effect if I can. I'm just a coward. Only I know my real trump card. What others know is just what I want you to know. The protagonist is a bit like the book "My Senior Brother Has a Hole in His Head" that I have read, but the protagonist of this book is more fleshed out. As long as no "accidents" happen, you will never know how many cards I have. To put it bluntly, if you form a good relationship with me, I can clearly arrange your future, and it is the most stable kind. Recently, I have arranged a way out for my silly master. I was worried that he would fail to overcome the tribulation, so I let him cultivate into Zhuoxian. Then I hooked up with Yue Lao and prepared to make connections in advance for the master to find a job in heaven in the future. The arrangements were more clear. As for the heroine: There are currently three candidates for the role (based on the conclusion reached by the Archmage when he asked Yue Lao to lead the red line). The first is the junior sister. After all, it was Li Changshou who "tuned the focus" from a young age. Although he couldn't completely pass it on, he still learned very quickly in some aspects. He also aspired to be a heroine and wanted to be the caring little cotton-padded jacket of his senior brother. Although his progress was slow because his senior brother was too stubborn, in terms of the role at present, he was a proper heroine (that's what I said); the second thing was Poisonous Xuanya. I was wrong, it was Youqin Xuanya. The current contenders for the position of heroine (probably), after all, are poisonous and will always bring a lot of trouble to Senior Brother Changshou, adding variables to Senior Brother Changshou's prudent behavior. As for the third one, Uncle Jiujiu, after all, he can start to dress himself up for the longevity of his senior brother. Although the effect is not very good, and it is indeed fierce and surging, I feel that it is interesting, but I don't know how the author will arrange it. Summary: This is a non-routine book about cultivating immortality, which can be classified as a high-quality novel. According to the author himself, the outline alone has a million words, so there will definitely be no eunuchs. I will write a more detailed review post after this book is put on the shelves, and I hope the author can achieve good results.

Some people say that merit is the weakest in becoming a saint, and killing three corpses is detachment. I feel there is something wrong with it, and I will analyze it about becoming a saint. There are many people who practice killing three corpses. Basically, everyone in Zixiao Palace has practiced it, but there are only 6 who have become saints. The three pure ones all kill three corpses, but there is no ruthlessness. I think that to become a saint, the three corpses need to be merged into one, and good and evil are reunited. My one Qi transforming into three pure beings should be a supernatural power, not three corpses, otherwise Tongtian wouldn't be surprised. It is not very clear how many corpses Nuwa killed, but Nuwa had joy, anger, sorrow, and joy, and I feel that it should be pure merit.                                                                                                                                                                                           They are both caught in the middle, because loans are most restricted by heaven. It is true that Nuwa does not have the freedom of the Three Pure Ones. For example, it is not possible to destroy Shang by force. The Immortal Killing Formation is directly placed above Tongtian, and the Heavenly Dao Zhou Wu is in power. Later, I have to practice earth, water, wind, and fire again. It should be that as long as there is no problem with the way of heaven, there will be no problem with the world. But it should be controlled by Hongjun. Hongjun can knock down the holy throne. It should be the function of Hongmeng purple energy. I feel that after retraining Earth, Water, Wind, and Fire, the Two Saints of the West may lose their holy status. After all, it is a loan to become a saint. Once you practice Earth, Water, Wind, and Fire again, you will definitely not be able to repay the loan, and you may have to borrow it yourself. This is one of the reasons why Hongjun and Sanqing look down on them (Hongjun clearly pointed out that you two are not my disciples and don't worship me, Sanqing really looks down on them).                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     I have no opinion about the first place, Zhu Xian Tong Tian's second is also very stable, but without Zhu Xian in Tong Tian, ​​he should be third. The original one should have an advantage over Zhu Xian Tong Tian, ​​after all, Pangu Banner. The lead is definitely greater than the lead. It's hard to say who is stronger between Nuwa and the Two Saints of the West. But the last one with as much merit as Nuwa was the Xuanhuang Exquisite Tower of Heaven and Earth. In other words, Nuwa was poor and had only merit. If you dare to fight Nuwa, you will bear the karma. I feel that Nuwa does not need to defend herself. If others (non-saints) dare to hurt Nuwa, she will be in trouble for the rest of her life. She will be treated the same as the ancient ferocious beasts. You still have to kneel down and cry and beg Nuwa for some snacks to defend yourself. A saint is not involved in cause and effect, but his sect is basically indifferent. Accepting Yin Zhunti itself is a loan to become a saint. If you have too much debt, you don't have to worry about it. You should not be afraid that Nuwa will continue to have great ambitions. But if you really fight Nuwa to the death, you still have to look at Tiandao Station. Nuwa at Tiandao Station is basically cool. The loan is collected in place gg. I think the small friction of Tiandao helps the West, and the real chance of fighting against Nuwa is higher. After all, there is no trace of repayment, and Nuwa's human race creates value every day. Therefore, Nuwa's death battle should be greater than that in the West. Based on everyone's opinions, slightly change the ranking of the pick-up list Ranking (non-death match) Laozi>(Zhuxian)Tongtian>Original>(Ordinary) Tongtian>Nuwa≈ pick-up lead>Zhunti. (Non-death battle, after modification) Laozi>(Zhu Xian) Tongtian>Original>(Normal) Tongtian>Jieyin >Nuwa≈Zhunti. (Death Fight) Laozi≈ (Zhu Xian) Tongtian>Primitive>(Ordinary) Tongtian>Nuwa>Jieyin≈Zhunti. If anyone has different opinions, you are welcome to correct me. Exchanges make people progress.

It's a very fresh subject matter. Of course, what amazes me the most is not the novel subject matter. It's about the characterization of the protagonist. In fact, many male videos have very ordinary-looking male protagonists. It seems that I don't work too hard, just go to the bar, and I can always fight for a glimmer of hope. At least in my opinion, the protagonists' emotional intelligence and IQ in those books are very worrying. Even the protagonists of those books are very foul-mouthed and slap in the face just for the sake of being slapped in the face. Nothing you want to do has ever failed. [But] the authors in those books never described the layout in detail, causing readers to think that they were just lucky. I am not very good physically and mentally. The male protagonist of this book has absolutely superior character and IQ. The protagonist is really too strong... And also very cruel to himself. [Spreading consciousness in various ways, rehearsing every small movement over and over again, having a very high level of understanding, being able to introspect, and being willing to copy books even when he feels something is wrong with him... Etc., Etc., He is probably a very, very hard-working person with both heights] Although he is said to be a Gou, he is affectionate and righteous. I am also willing to pay a lot for the people I care about. And at least in my opinion, this "gou" was indeed the best way to save life in that era. The book also said that caution and timidity are completely different things. Also, his way of speaking is indeed his style [steady], and the author's description is really very good. He comes across as a very gentle, steady, and extremely smart senior brother. Doting on the junior sister but not crossing the bottom line, there are limits in interpersonal relationships... Forgive me that my poor vocabulary cannot summarize the person described by the author, but this is the first time I have read the book in so many years and I feel that if his character is not strong in the end, who can be the strong one? Then the most important point: I personally think the author respects the female characters. The male protagonist is not a teddy dog ​​either. It can be seen from the actions of the male protagonist that he is actually more career-oriented. And it's not like you just move up to a beautiful woman when you see one, it's the kind of person who really doesn't care. Although there was civilized viewing, there was really no excessive behavior. Even while watching, I was always alert. At least it gives me the feeling that he simply appreciates women and appreciates a beautiful thing. He has always been very calm. No disgusting animalistic desires. Also, the male protagonist is also very good-looking. [] This is really a very rare setting. In other books, the male protagonists should be more ordinary looking in order to highlight the sense of substitution () But I personally think that a very, very beautiful heroine should be paired with a very handsome man. () Then let's talk about the writing style: Excellent, I really can't find the adjective. It's very comfortable to read, you can understand the meaning, and there are no rude words [emphasis added] The protagonist's form and method are very thoughtful, and his character is really good (emphasis added) It really makes people feel relaxed. [This is the first time that I feel that if a person does not become a strong person in the end, then there will no longer be strong people in the world] Then quietly ask, is this one-on-one or a harem? [Because of the character card...] (Here are my guesses: the character of the protagonist almost thought it would be cp-free... But I just finished reading "Stop Talking, Kiss Me". The author actually explained how the senior brother feels about his junior sister in many places, and he treats his junior sister sincerely. Xiaocheng's family wealth was given to junior sister. Junior sister almost finished using those precious medicines, and she was not angry [there was a plan, but he was really shocked at that time]. Junior sister was not classified as [Magic Weapon Person] and so on... However, senior brother's actions in that chapter did make people a little surprised... This guy She usually hides it very deeply... The actions of the junior sister are more predictable. The author also explained that when the girl is emotionally hazy, she will be more active in wanting to fall in love due to the influence of the sect's atmosphere. In addition, when she was a child, she had a good impression of the senior brother. By the way, this must be due to the good looks at the beginning. I think this detail is really good. After all, people like to be good-looking, and ugly people are only qualified to be senior brothers It's not a question of whether you like it or not, it's just that your mind is immature, and you will subconsciously feel strange and withdrawn when faced with such a relatively hot thing) And Changshou, with such a high emotional intelligence, must have taken into account the immaturity of his junior sister when he said "Look, that's it." Ming he had expected this reaction... I have to comment on his emotional intelligence here. And the expression on his lips... I understand that he is really mature. And the way he raised his chin seemed probing. ... And another thing is that he didn't kiss her immediately. Personally, I think this is a sign of respect for my junior sister's real thoughts. In general, he is the one who seems to be passive in the relationship and is actually the most aware of himself. The one who is affectionate and fearless... [Gou Yuwen is really not timid (loudly)] The other one still seems to be the active one in the relationship, the enthusiastic and sober one, but in fact she is the most... Scared. I have seen many people say that a little girl is hung up in a long life? ... But do you think a little girl is like a person being hung up? [Facing other people's confessions, not refusing or agreeing, and taking advantage of others from time to time, but not responding is hanging up.] But she just failed to seduce, and the more frustrated she got, the more courageous she became. She also said that the senior brother was really like a sister to her. Moreover, Changshou would probably respond to her many times... Then she found that the junior sister didn't listen at all, so she just let her go. But one thing is certain, she didn't feel the tangled feeling of being abandoned or rejected at any time. And Changshou's attitude towards her... People feel that there is no problem. () Maybe it's because the two are so familiar that everything feels so natural. Even confessions and seductions seem like normal conversations... In short, the combination of the two is quite interesting... And from the new chapter... Changshou's feelings towards her are not the same as those of senior brothers and sisters. ［ What does it feel like for a mature brother to wait for his ignorant sister to wake up? ? ? Maybe it's my CP brain...] By the way, he feels like a kind-hearted junior, and he is also very polite to Jiujiu and treats his seniors and friends... Then: [Gou Yuwen is really not timid! [Changshou is really the best male protagonist I have seen so far! If you say he is rubbish, can you please open your eyes and take a closer look at his IQ and EQ? Influenced by Yang's comments, "My Senior Brother is Too Steady" is really a good work. You are also a great author! It's really hard to open both books. I hope this book and your other books can have a happy and happy ending.

Daozu asked Changshou, do you know when I noticed you? Changshou said, did you notice when I first arrived? Daozu said that you don't need to feel different because of your heelings from the future. Here, the facts may not be what Daozu said. Let's look at a few questions. 1. Why is Senior Lang so powerful? 2. Why is longevity so powerful? The reason is very simple. In the final analysis, the information brought by time travel is unequal, resulting in them having an absolute advantage at the information level. Longevity and waves are prophets to the primitive inhabitants. As a tool of heaven, Bai Ze has the best prediction ability among saints, but how does it compare with the history mastered by Changshou? Therefore, longevity is a heaven-defying existence, and so are waves. At the same time, the longevity ambition can be seen from the name of longevity. The second sign of his ambition can be seen from the way of longevity. From this, we can get a glimpse of the two spots and get the whole picture. Let me tell you in detail. Longevity, longevity, how long does it take to live a long life, and how can we live a long life? Gou cannot live long, but gou is the basic guarantee of longevity; strength cannot live long, and strength is the basic requirement to avoid premature death. The name longevity reflects the ideal of longevity - going home. The connotation of longevity, Changshou himself said, is to live as long as heaven and earth. Why should we live as long as heaven and earth? Stay with Yunxiao? Playing the piano with Ling'e? Apparently neither. As a time traveler, longevity has always been a passing mentality, watching with cold eyes, with an idea that no one has said, including myself, that I have almost forgotten - to go home. Use the safest way to return to your own time - live back. Li Changshou asked Yunxiao: Does becoming a saint mean transcendence? I think maybe Li Changshou didn't understand what detachment is, but sanctification definitely isn't it. Perhaps, going home is a step on the road to transcendence. There are conditions for going home. In addition to living longer, it also involves why Li Changshou's way is the way of balance. The ultimate goal of balance is to balance the way of heaven, although it is often used to balance Yunxiao and Ling'e~. Why balance the way of heaven? Because, at present, if you want to go home safely, God will definitely stop you. Why, because what era we are in now, there are no gods, no immortals, no demons, no ghosts, no cultivation, no law and no heaven (the way of heaven). Therefore, living back means that the way of heaven will die, and the way of heaven will die. The law of heaven is the enemy that prevents longevity and returning home, so there is a way to balance~ When the law of heaven collapses, the blue star is born.

As a fan of fairy novels, I have read many such works before, such as "The Story of a Mortal's Cultivation of Immortality", "The Immortal Rebellion", "A Hundred Refinements to Become an Immortal", "The Battle of the Great Way", "The Illustrated Book of Destruction of Luck"... Etc. So when I saw the book "My Senior Brother is Too Steady" (hereinafter referred to as "Senior Brother"), although I was unconsciously attracted to it, but because of the limited energy of people, after all, the title of the book was a bit less serious and less "immortal", so I didn't fall in love with it. Later, Juxiandian book friends kept telling me that this book was very well written, and some of them had even become die-hard fans of this book. Only then did I realize that I should study it carefully. Regarding this point, the author please don't mind it. No matter how good things are, there is a process of getting to know them (laughing). Getting back to the subject, this is my first review. Let me first talk about my feelings after reading the first few chapters. I also added some of my own understanding of the Xianxia online novel. I hope you don't like it and don't criticize it. My impression of this book at the beginning can be said to be full of fairy spirit. The mountains are majestic, the aura is flowing, flying in the sky is refreshing, and the author's writing style is very enjoyable. When I saw the sentence "Everything in the water does not fight, and the water carries thousands of boats without collapsing", I immediately felt the fairy-tale characteristics of this book. It should have inherited Lao Tzu's Taoist thought of "governing by inaction"! For a fairy tale work, there are actually many things that can be interpreted, such as fairy magic, spiritual treasures, sects, talismans, formations, etc., But our first review will focus on the fairy world view of this book, which is the core of a book. Speaking of Taoist thought, different Xianxia works have different starting points and different content for reference. Judging from the title of the book "Senior Brother", the focus is on the word "steadiness"! After reading the chapter "The World is Dangerous", I understand better where my senior brother's "steady" style comes from. Let's focus on analyzing how monks can survive what the author said at the beginning of the book through the mouth of his senior brother, which are the so-called three rules of "immortal cultivation": 1. To avoid cause and effect, try not to be involved in weird things. The best way is to practice Taoism at home... To be honest, after reading this theory, I was a little speechless for a while. Isn't this the famous "ostrich thinking"? In order to avoid disaster, is it really advisable to bury your head in the sand and not care about worldly affairs? For those who seek immortality, it is indeed very important to pay attention to cause and effect. Where there is a cause, there will be an effect. Sow a grain of millet in spring and harvest ten thousand seeds in autumn. This is no joke. However, as the saying goes, misfortunes depend on blessings. If those who practice Taoism do not look for opportunities and compete for resources because they are afraid of cause and effect, they will probably end up in the wrong place. The so-called "seeking wealth amidst danger" means that only by constantly exploring and discovering, looking for opportunities, and solving the cause and effect, can immortal cultivators be able to go against the will of heaven and cultivate the great road. This should be the consensus of most fairy tales... So, for this first rule, I estimate that my brother's thoughts will change in the future. As his cultivation level improves, he will slowly start to take risks, seek opportunities, and solve the cause and effect. 2. Trump card. If you have 100% strength, you can hide 30% and only show 70% to others. Pindao quite agrees with this point. After all, the world of immortality is different from the mortal world. In order to compete for resources, opportunities, and treasures, conspiracy and calculations should be everywhere. If you are not careful, you may end up dead. Therefore, it is very important for cultivators to keep their trump cards! However, as for the concept of 30%, I think it is still too little. It is the last word to retain most of the strength when it is not necessary. As the saying goes, "pretending to be a pig to eat a tiger" and "making a fortune in silence", even if a wise monk faces an immortal cultivator who is worse than himself, he cannot reveal his strength at will, unless... This person is about to be killed by you. Seeing this, I am also very curious about what senior brother's trump card is, and I hope there will be surprises for me later. 3. If you can't fight, run away! This is of course very important, and the reason is very simple. Life is important. Keeping the green hills around, not worrying about running out of firewood, and being able to run away in times of crisis is the best choice. Just like Han Li in "The Story of Mortal Cultivation of Immortality", he is famous in the world of immortality for his excellent escape skills. He was nicknamed "Han Paopao" by fans of the book. This is not a derogatory term, but a real compliment! However, the key to the problem is when to start running and how to run. This is really a very technical choice. As my senior brother said, on-the-spot reaction is very important, you must learn to adapt to changes! In addition, escape techniques are also very important. According to the Xianxia that Pindao has seen, the known escape techniques include Five Elements Escape, Thunder Escape, Wind Escape, Blood Escape, etc., And the mysteries among them are also different. At present, it seems that senior brother has mastered a good water escape method, but I don't know how effective it will be in actual combat. I'm looking forward to it. Okay, I have not been in the pit for a long time, and the content that can be analyzed is still limited. If I am wrong, please forgive me. However, although I am a newbie, I believe there is one thing that will make you envious, that is, I still have many chapters to read, and I can read dozens of chapters in a day, which is so cool! Haha, just kidding, but fellow Taoists who are struggling to catch up with updates don't be frustrated. When there are no updates, you are welcome to read the Juxian Palace book review. The topic of Xianxia is constantly being discussed. I hope you will continue to pay attention. See you in the next review.

Text: This is an analysis post of the heroine based on one (Hu) version (saying) the right (eight) scriptures (Tao). It is for entertainment and reference only. It does not represent the final result. Welcome to slap in the face. Last time I wrote a simple analysis of the three possible candidates for the heroine, but the current plot development gives me the feeling that I am being slapped in the face by PaPa(￣ε(#￣)☆╰╮(￣▽￣///). But maybe if I write this this time, I will be slapped in the face again soon. Without further ado, let's start the analysis. The first choice for the heroine is junior sister Ling'e. All the previous signs indicate that Ling'e likes her senior brother Changshou, but these recent photos give me the feeling that junior sister's feelings for Changshou are actually very subtle. Although she said she liked her very much, she backed down when Changshou responded, and lost an opportunity to lock the cp. . However, it is not ruled out that this is a normal reaction of a girl in love. Ling'e's stock may rebound in the future, but for now, the junior sister will probably be offline for a while (ps: reject the author's malicious control) This second choice for the heroine is poisonous, personally. There is a high probability that it will be impossible to become a Taoist companion of Changshou. After all, although Changshou's previous behavior made Changshou mistakenly think that he is lusting after his own body (but it seems to be fast), Youqin realizes the gap in cultivation between himself and his senior brother. What he wants to do now is to catch up with Changshou in terms of cultivation. It is certain that Xuanya has a good impression of Changshou. , But now because we have to work hard to catch up with longevity, there is a high probability that we will be offline for a period of time. It is recommended that those who buy Xuanya stocks take a wait-and-see attitude first, and they can buy them later. The third choice for the heroine is Master Jiu. Judging from the current information, Uncle Master's stock has been killed, and it will be difficult for it to rebound sharply in the later period. The reasons are as follows. Uncle Jiu understands that his relationship with longevity is just a kind of love between drinkers and winemakers. Uncle Jiu is just greedy for the good wine of longevity. The rest is an illusion caused by Uncle Jiu's character. So Uncle Shi's stock should be cold. If you choose to buy it, Uncle Gu can sell it and buy it appropriately. Enter Ao Yi. (PS: The fourth pure spoof, don't take it seriously) The fourth hostess chooses Ao Yi to dress up as a woman. The reason is as follows. Shota becomes a loli, which is exciting. As we all know, there are only zero and countless times of dressing up as a woman. Maybe this time, Ao Yi will open the door to a new world. Changshou made Zhao Gongming become Uncle Zhao. There are precedents for this. Believe me, it is right to buy Ao Yi shares now and form the CP of Ao Yi and Changshou. After all, men should fuck men. Real men are not afraid. The above is the content of my current issue. Thank you for watching and I look forward to the author's slap in the face.

I like the protagonist with such a high emotional intelligence. There are many places that naturally show the protagonist's emotional intelligence, and the writing is very delicate. Not only the protagonist, but the supporting characters also know how to speak, which I feel is rare in online novels. It can be seen that the author must know how to behave in life, otherwise it would be impossible to write these characters with high emotional intelligence and smoothness vividly. This book is so to my liking, I feel like the IQ of the supporting characters is online throughout. I also really like the relationship between the protagonist and his junior sister. The character of the junior sister is also well created! Support the author, come on, author! ! !

Hello author! In short, I like you so much! I came across "Steady" while reading on WeChat and came over to subscribe. I want to send you money. Jpg To be precise, the sentence that made my heart beat was, "It is really interesting to re-create Chinese classical literary works." I noticed a lot of homages to Journey to the West and Fengshenbang, especially the description of the general environment is very "Journey to the West". There are many, many interesting places, so thank you, I am really happy reading this book. I believe you will also have a lot of fun in the hard work of creation. It seems that this book is very popular. I came a little late, but I believe that the support the author needs is always insufficient, so I must tell you that I like you very, very much. I like your writing, plot, and three views very much. Whether as a reader, or as a girl, a person who has a certain pursuit of literature. Friends who complain about procrastination, please be tolerant to the author. Writing is really not easy. If you don't believe me, write a book review. That's it, Aligado!

Ran Deng: One lift, two tricks and three deceptions, planning for four years and May 6th, and even more calculations at seven, eight or nine levels, 100% victory! Longevity: Ten steps and nine calculations, arrange seven people from all directions, six plays, five rows and four performances, the script is clear and clear, and hundreds of millions of hearts! Randeng: In ancient times, the ancestors were not saints, and the civil servants were nothing more than clowns. Longevity: In the Taoist gate, there is no oil lamp or fire, so I urge the assistant teacher Xizhou to hide. Randeng: Hong Hong, forest, forest, war, fire, chaos, pain, suffering and fright. Longevity: When the tower, the ruler, the bird touches the water, the water extinguishes the light. Randeng: One hundred million calculations, one is number one in calculating Tao and Buddha. Longevity: The acting skills of three people, playing the role of fairy, porcelain and fool. Randeng: I explain the teachings of the Golden Immortal, revealing the heavenly aura of immortality. Longevity: You, the coffin man from Jiu Shan, are so wretched. Randeng: Go dig a grave on your peak, Longevity: My spiritual tree will be your bed. Randeng: I will blow the trumpet to send you away. Changshou: Your mother will come and lie down in person. Randeng: Poof! ! ! ! ! !

Finished reading! Finished Spreading Flowers 🌸 Let me tell you my own views on this book from a personal perspective: Advantages: ①The text description always reveals the protagonist's caution, but without losing humor, not being ruthless, not being a virgin, and being humane. Personally, I think this kind of protagonist is really good. ; ②The characters are very vivid and full, such as the long-lived Gou, Ling'e's brother-chasing, the one with the piano... Um... Poisonous, the free and easy Jiujiu, etc., Etc., Which made me couldn't help but curl my lips, thinking it was wonderful; ③This book uses the word "stable" throughout the whole text, which is wonderful. I personally learned a lot from it. I once saw a comment that said: Reading this book thoroughly will be of great help to you in entering society. I personally agree with it. Of course, there are always some people who think that the protagonist is too cautious. This depends on personal understanding. If you really can't get into it, skip the next one and just be safe; ④ The emotional issues in this book are also very interesting. Most of the general fairy tales are about harems, so more pen and ink are needed to write about the heroine, but if the writing power is slightly insufficient, it will easily collapse. But this book is different, because of "stable" and "gotten", so longevity will not have too many violent fluctuations in feelings, and it is good to be plain (by the way, is it possible that the author does not know how to write about the emotions between men and women, so he did it deliberately); Disadvantages: ① If you can, don't read the comment area, it feels like there is noisy everywhere. The main reason is that there are many opinions, and you don't know which one is right, which is extremely unfriendly to people who don't know much about the prehistoric setting and ancient mythology; ② It's also an emotional issue. The character card says there are four female protagonists, so I don't think it counts. In the early stage, there was indeed a special portrayal of Jiujiu and Youqin, but in the middle and later stages, Jiujiu and Youqin had very few scenes, and Jiujiu was not with Changshou in the end. (My personal opinion about the heroine is that she has more scenes, and she is the companion of the male protagonist, so I personally think this is not good.) Maybe the two of them can't get along with the main line, which is a pity; ③In the finale, Brother Monkey's scenes were a bit less. Maybe the author wrote it too deeply. The calculation between Changshou and Hongjun was too deep and there was no room for Brother Monkey to continue his story. As a result, Monkey King's domineering and prowess were overshadowed by the final battle between the two. I personally feel that it is a pity. After all, who doesn't have an indomitable monkey in their heart; Summary: This is the fourth book I have read since coming to Qidian that I would put on my 10-point book list. I highly recommend it! First-class fairy grass! However, this book has a lot of calculations in the humorous writing style, so you need to read it carefully. For those who can calm down and read it, this book is really good; if you are a reader who prefers the description of the relationship between men and women, this book... Hahaha, it is really not enough. Well, I seriously suspect that the author's writing skills are not enough to describe the relationship between men and women (dog head saves his life). For readers who prefer to read passionate stories, you may think that the male protagonist of this book is too stubborn and a bit cowardly. This depends on your personal understanding. I personally feel that he is stable, but he is the kind of stable with a bottom line, which is very consistent with the male protagonist I like, so I will be done with it, but you may not think so, then just discard it and go to the next one. Reading books, happiness is the most important thing. Supplementary 1: There are really many readers of Quantum Speed ​​Reading. Although it is an online article, at least they read it carefully. They post comments without reading the content clearly. Don't you feel unsure? Supplementary 2: Chapter 672 "Embers", well, it's so good to cry... I send you to the Emperor of the People, and pass on the fire from generation to generation! The fire is endless, humanity is eternal! Supplementary 3: Di Xin... It's such a pity. He is talented and rough, but his domineering power is revealed. It's a pity that this is a myth and there are immortals. I don't understand Emperor Xin in the specific history, but I think the Emperor Xin written by the author is worthy of being the last human emperor! Additional 4: Let's do it again and finish spreading the flowers🌸In order to avoid not seeing it, this is more stable, hahaha. Finally, I pray the Wen Zi Sutra three hundred times, and may you live a long life and see you again! (Personal opinion, if you have any objections, you can discuss it; if you want to scold someone, you can scold me as you please, relatives are not guilty, please have some moral integrity)

It might be better without Yun Xiao

I saved up eight monthly passes and planned to buy them at the end of the month. Who knew I got so drunk that when I woke up, it was already New Year's Eve?

It's over, this is one of the best novels I've read in 2020. The content is rich and interesting, and contains many foreshadowings. The discussions and book reviews in the novel are invisible to pirated copies. The book review discussion in the article is another interesting soul node. Looking forward to the author's next work.

I started reading this book a long time ago, and stopped updating it for a long time. I just finished reading it again. Although it cannot be said to be brilliant in writing, it is a very good online article in my opinion. The characters in this book are well-characterized, the storyline is logically rigorous, and it has its own deconstruction of mythological themes. The most rare thing is the ending. Although it is a little dull in the last few dozen chapters, the ending is very complete. It can be seen that the author has good control over the outline of the story. I hope the author can continue to work hard, maintain the pursuit of the integrity and rationality of the story, and not be too affected.

This is a light-hearted and funny novel about immortal heroes. The protagonist Li Changshou has a full skill tree of Gou Dao, and paper figures are scattered all over the world. It is very stable. The images of junior sisters Yunxiao and Ling'e are also very brilliant and unforgettable.

Recommendation: As the saying goes, "The rafters that stand out will die first" and "The trees that are as beautiful as the forest will be destroyed by the wind." This is especially true in the world of cultivating immortals where the weak prey on the strong. If you want to have the last laugh, you must not show off your edge. This book can be said to be the best book on Taoism and immortality in my opinion. The protagonist of this book is a person who is cautious to the extreme. He does things extremely steadily, makes plans secretly, and plans cleverly. He never puts himself on the table. Of course, he succeeded in the end. Book friends who like Gou Daoliu should not hurry up and get into the trap. Personal review: First of all, a brief summary, this book is about a young man who traveled to the ancient world. He was cautious by nature, grew up in a humble way, and eventually became a giant in the ancient world. Secondly, let's talk about the author and writing style. The author of this book is very good at writing relatively light-hearted articles about cultivating immortals. He has several completed works with more than one million words, and the quality is guaranteed. The overall atmosphere of this book is also relatively relaxed. Although there are some descriptions of the struggle to cultivate immortality, it is not too detailed, so it is more suitable for book lovers to relax through this book. Finally, let's talk about the characterization of this book. The protagonist of this book is really outstanding. That image of going to the extreme is really deeply rooted in people's hearts. For example, descriptions such as "The success rate of overcoming the tribulation is 98%, rounding it off, what's the difference between sending someone to death?" Makes the setting very stable. In addition, the protagonist of this book does not just talk about it, but his actions such as "excellent package" and "white paper doll" reflect the consistency of the protagonist's words and deeds. It's not like the protagonist in some novels who says one thing but acts inconsistently with it, leaving the character with a sense of separation. Of course, the supporting characters are also well portrayed. I like the Monkey King very much, it fits the image I have longed for since childhood. Yunxiao's "kneeling down" is still fresh in my memory even though it has been three years since the book was finished. In short, this article is an excellent article on cultivating immortality. If you are tired of reading novels where the main character is always fighting to show off his talents, reading this book is also a good way to change your taste.

~A very interesting book~ The characters are interesting and the story is wonderful Thank you, brother, for the laughter and touching~ Looking forward to the author's next masterpiece~ (๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧

A very good book, a romance and martial arts novel wrapped in fantasy. I came back to make up my order after my prostitution.

I accidentally came across this book when I was in a book shortage. I came in to read it out of curiosity about the title, but I got stuck 🕳️ It has become the norm. It is a really good book, full of positive energy. I hope to see the author's next masterpiece.

Finally finished chasing, check in! This is also the first time to support the genuine version. I can't help it because my senior brother is really too stable. I like many characters in it so much: Tongtian Duobao, Jade Emperor, Taiyi, Yunxiao, Longevity, Taiqing, Jade Cauldron, Jin Ling... (Well... The ranking has nothing to do with my preference 😃) Come back, see you in the new book!