Genuine Cultivation of Immortality

This novel is really good after reading it in one sitting. The author's writing is okay. Don't stop in the middle. Once you stop, it will feel like it's not good enough. Believe me, I personally like it better (I have so much poison resistance that I can only read the story). Although there are indeed a lot of poison points, the later stage is really unfinished. It feels a bit like a novel from 18 years ago. The plot and author's imagination are okay. Personally, I think Shuhuang can read it. Don't be too demanding about this novel. It just needs to be a good-looking story. The author doesn't force his wits too much. Again, just read a story in Shuhuang (those female characters were created. Personally, I feel that it was indeed a successful one in the past. If you don't accept a harem now, don't read it. Really, trust me, run away. If you like harems, you can read it. Look, there is still a story about the harem heroine, and I feel that the portrayal is not that cliched, but who is the Wuman in the end? I deleted that one. In fact, I have a higher evaluation of this novel.) In fact, if you keep writing according to the early and middle stages, the bland ending looks good as a story. In the later stage, it is judged that the alliance reversal is a bit of a failure and it is unfinished (isn't it a good plot of a classic RPG game in the 90s? I will just go back to it)

The stallion novel deserves to be criticized, and even my own sister is even more disgusting. In what era are you still writing such a book that affects the three views, and is it written for children who have not yet developed their minds?

I'm sorry, everyone, I asked you to quit before reading the first chapter. I had to choose between my son's life and my daughter's tuition, and I still cried that I couldn't afford surgery for my son. Is it true nb

I have read more than 900 chapters, and I always thought this book was very creative. So I thought about clicking it and taking a look. As a result, I became addicted to it as soon as I saw it. I am a person who hates harem stories. When I was a novice, I was filled with a lot of harem stories. Now I really hate the harem. To be honest, I had no idea this book was a harem novel. It's actually a piece of writing that has a bit of a forbidden feel to it. But because of the good originality of this book, I kept chasing it, even ignoring the harem. In fact, the author's portrayal of the female characters' personalities is quite good, whether it is the starship romance between Su Xian and Xue Xiren, or the stumbling relationship with Xie Yunyun, or the relationship with Yuan Ge that experienced a family change, Yuan Ge's dependence on Su Xian, or the relationship between Su Tao and Su Xian that is more similar to a forbidden relationship, but the relationship happened a long time ago, but they just dare not express it. Another example is Su Xiaoai who wants Su Xian's genes. Silly and cute. Overall, these guys are well-portrayed. Great. Why do we hate harem stories? It's because we always feel that the male protagonist can't walk when he sees a beautiful woman. But this protagonist experiences growth step by step. He loves everyone around him and expresses his love very well. Originally everything was developing towards a beautiful scene. However, Wang Xiaoman appeared. And he successfully joined the harem group? What the hell, the other people all developed their feelings slowly, but this Wang Xiaoman. I really don't see any emotion between the two. The protagonist also said: We are really aboveboard, you are not my mistress. . I almost believed it! Sorry, this Wang Xiaoman really ruined the relationship of the whole book. Ji Mingming has never experienced anything like separation between life and death, or mutual companionship. But suddenly joined the harem group! I thought that no matter which female character the author added, she would give her a psychological development process. But this Wang Xiaoman really ruined the whole book.

The further you get to the back, the more you see, and you can't understand the author's thinking.

The idea of ​​this book is novel. I thought it was another masterpiece. It was okay in the early stage, but in the later stage, the writing fell apart and it was uncomfortable to read😖. Sudden orthopedics without any sense of disobedience, and the harem at will. I can barely accept this, but you don't mind the lesbian harem.

I have been reading novels for six or seven years, and I have thought about whether I should try to write a novel, and I have also imagined that my name will appear in the novel. But for many reasons nothing happened. Until today I just saw this book,,, woc, Xie Yunyun? I never thought that my name would become the heroine for the first time! Also, Yunyun, when I was a child, my family said that it would be easier to make a living if I had a girl's name (I always felt it was fake), and then,,,, oh, I resented my name so much again, I don't know what to say, and now I feel very complicated, especially in novels, where I often rhyme, ah! No, I'm a straight man! I! At once! Call! Thanks! Rhyme! Damn it, I have to change my name later. People have called me Yunyun on purpose since I was a child! The name must be changed to the one ordered by the man! ! !

I think the setting of realm levels in this book is very careless. If the previous and later chapters are forcibly connected, it can only be understood that the gap in realms is not very big. 10,000 Combat power for foundation building and 200,000 distractions. Similarly imprecise settings include equipment levels. The descriptions of F-level and B-level are simply not enough to reflect the gap between them. The same goes for the description of universal currency in this book. Very illogical. After reading more than 200 chapters, these loose settings are not explained clearly or compensated for. The author likes to use all kinds of memes, especially in names. The name Qin Liangyu makes people who know him very uncomfortable at the beginning. Moreover, as a supporting character from a family that can plot planets, and as an only son, it is really embarrassing to force a brainless scene. I also used memes about Malaysia Airlines and the names of equipment in many games, movies, and TV shows, which is really embarrassing to be honest. A good author uses memes to make everyone smile, but if you use this too much, it will be a problem. . . In terms of the relationship between the characters, there are always many deliberate descriptions of the protagonist and his biological sister. It seems as if the author wants something to happen between the protagonist and his biological sister. If it is later said that he is not his biological child, then it is still acceptable. If it's the other way around, this description feels a bit worse than a beast? I don't know how to put it... Most of the characters have very good relationships, especially the supporting character Uncle Yuan at the beginning, I think it is great, the characters are well developed and have great depth. I complained about so many shortcomings and talked about the advantages. It has great imagination and a good world view setting, but the description is not complete enough. The writing is pretty good and it reads smoothly. If you are lucky enough to be seen by the author, I want to say to you: be less brainless and twisted supporting characters, and pay more attention to the logic and rigor of the setting. There should be less jokes and less self-motivated vernacular. The lines should be in line with the character and more substantive descriptions. But you must also keep your imagination open. Above.

Who is the protagonist licking in class? The one who has a crush on the protagonist's sister is so vicious that I'll kill you. I won't even remember the revenge of my predecessor. Even if you don't care, it's normal for the relationship to be cold and venomous!

President Zou died in vain. Are there really any women who are heartless? People say they don't care and you just play like this?

This book is so poisonous! ! ! The poison that poisoned Shen Nong was not as poisonous as this book. It was poisoned starting from Chapter 15.

The author's literary quality is not good and he makes up words randomly, but I can tolerate it. The plot has no foreshadowing and is forced into chaos, so I can tolerate it. But the plot has no logic, no common sense, and is written without any brain. How can I tolerate this? To be honest, I read four to five hundred of them, and I was so disgusted that I wanted to give up several times. I endured it and continued to watch it. The plot at the end had no logic, no basis, and was written indiscriminately. It was so disgusting that I couldn't stand it anymore, so I had no choice but to cancel it. Maybe my level is low and I can't read your book, but it's just a pity that the subject matter and creativity are too low. What a pity

I always feel that Su Xian actually has a good impression of Yun Yun, otherwise he wouldn't say anything about hiding it for fear of hurting his feelings. Sometimes hiding it is the biggest harm. It may be that his past life as an orphan made him only want to protect the good things in this life, but he forgot to carry it all the time. The final consequences of continuing to be entangled like this are simply unimaginable. And I also discovered 🙂🙂 that the author likes Lily very much... And then likes to be straight... In short, I think Xiren is the most suitable for Su Xian. Can I ask you not to have a harem? And I think since we are in the interstellar... The requirements for same-sex relationships are not so strict, are you okay now? I just want one person and two people for the rest of my life, otherwise I want to curse Su Xian and not get anyone. Looking at the distribution of characters, it seems that they are all Su Xian's heroines... I would rather have no cp.

I've read over 90 chapters and can't stand it anymore. First of all, the advantages are that the setting is innovative, the golden finger is interesting, and the family relationship is good. Then there is the poison point. First of all, if the murderer is found and has an early cardiac arrest and becomes mentally ill, then there is no need for compensation? Obviously, this is not the case in our country's laws. There is no need for a criminal sentence, but in civil cases, the guardian still has to compensate. Then there is the education that the only daughter of the so-called Xingchen family received. At least not the education an heir to a large family should receive. Even if you don't develop the idea that family interests come first, what the hell is love first? Then the villain's IQ is worrisome, his son is arrogant and domineering, and he doesn't know how to assess the situation, and his father engages in promiscuous relations between men and women in the company. Shouldn't we send our subordinates to do all the dirty work?

The beginning is pretty good, but in the middle the protagonist's special period is meditation when it's time to take the exam at the academy. . . . Although the teacher said he was making things difficult for others, I always felt that those words were a little inconsistent with the early character design. Then I just felt that I saw a very angry protagonist (very proud) and I always felt that this paragraph could be a little gentler.

[Poison Identification] The brain is a good idea, the setting is also very novel, and then you start a harem? It's still the kind of poisonous harem from ancient novels. The harem first likes your sister, so they just get married casually. Just because I want to please you, and then you don't give me a good look? Are you going to take in someone's aunt just after leaving Novice Village? Why are you so excited? Just because you made an emergency landing of a spaceship in a reasonable manner, you even made up a psychological term. One sentence made me feel shy, "Here we go, a disciple of a noble family, a soldier, yet so silly and sweet, yet the setting is actually the top family in the universe?" Don't these families give basic education to their children when they are released? Don't women need to be educated about three things? In just two sentences, the male protagonist blushes and his heart beats like a deer? ? ? Stomp on other geniuses when you see them, lick the male protagonist when you see them? ? The most venomous thing is that they keep saying that they are biological sisters. How can they have that kind of relationship? What is it like to describe a sister who is jealous and uncomfortable when she is seen with other women? Personally, the book is okay, so I will withdraw it first. Those who like ancient harems and future-minded leisure can still read it. When I say this, I think of an ancient novel "The Leisurely Life of Cultivation Civilization". The brainless Shuang Xiao Bai Shuang has a similar setting. With a golden finger, he is the first in everything he learns and can shock the world. Far away, goodbye

When I saw Chapter 19, I just couldn't express my feelings! The main character is He Shen B?

I've read more than a dozen chapters, and if it's about licking, I'll give up.

The setting of this novel is so to my liking. I really like the plot and some of the characters. It makes me feel sick to my stomach (the author is really experienced. Not to mention Ali, not many people know about Space Pirate Sara). There may be many similar novels in terms of setting, but the author's The world view depicted is awesome I advise you to read this novel just for the setting. In terms of characters, it is quite fun to read without thinking. I personally think that the middle period is the highlight of this novel. I will not comment on the later period, it is not good. If there is a novel with a similar world view Can you guys recommend it to me?

Wang Xiaoman is too poisonous

To be honest, why do you have to let Xie Yunyun become a Zerg... It makes me heartbroken. This is a bit toxic...

A good book is a good book, but the plot is a bit cliche and the main line drags on for a long time.

Chapter 38 is gone again

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

We will collect a large number of supporting characters, and those with fan value will be given priority... Of course, the setting of this book is quite complex, so when it comes to setting character abilities, such as cultivation, mythology, martial arts, and superpowers, even if you get a mutant, I can use them all. The character setting should be as detailed as possible. Of course, if you get a protagonist, I can only give you a magic modification, that's it... Ahem, everyone, please help me and speak out... I am really incompetent...

It's starting to taste a little bit 😁

It's okay to persuade him to quit with just one sentence My daughter is trading her future for her son's life! The mother who said this sentence,,, how do you want readers to read it? Can you still face it? Facing their dying relatives, my sister was hesitant and my mother was blocking her. What kind of family is this? It's so scary,,, Additional: I did receive a lot of discussion after posting this post. But my original thoughts have not changed. I was very helpless because every question I asked was very similar, making me say the same thing several times. So I am posting my replies here, and I will not reply one by one in the future 😒 In my opinion, you are just adding settings for the author. At the beginning, after hearing the fee quoted by the doctor, my mother collapsed to the ground and said that I, a cleaner, had so much money, and there was no way I could borrow it. I also asked the doctor if he could give them some time. At least, at this moment, the mother has not considered using her daughter's money, and this can also correspond to the mother's shock and rejection later when her daughter proposed to use her own tuition to save her son. So why do I say that you are supplementing the settings? Because the above is a literal meaning. What you are talking about is that the mother is testing her daughter at this moment, or waiting for her daughter to speak out, or even acting weak to let her daughter take the initiative. This was not written by the author. Moreover, don't these plots make this family even more terrifying? Based on realistic considerations, this is indeed a dilemma for the mother. However, life is ultimately greater than everything else. Especially my own children. I only have two questions about the other possibility you proposed. First, when her daughter asked to use her tuition fees, why did the mother act like she had never thought about it. According to what you said, my mother felt that she should not speak out herself, nor should she act so shocked. A more realistic way of writing it would probably be to apologize to my daughter. Then he went to raise money for his daughter as soon as possible. After all, it was still half a year before his daughter started school, and his son was about to die. Faced with his dying son who urgently needs money to survive, it is definitely not a normal reaction to block his daughter's decision. Second, "The daughter is exchanging her own future for her son's life!" This sentence pattern is to reflect the daughter's selflessness. Similar sentence patterns include: "For the sake of her son's life, my daughter actually gave up her own future!" So usually, the former is higher than the latter in a general sense. So the extended meaning of this sentence is that the future is more important than life. This is not a value that is respected, nor do I think it should be respected. You may disagree on this point. But your disagreement cannot change my mind. Also, about bias. Some people think that if the mother readily agrees to use her daughter's tuition fees at this time, it will appear that the mother favors her son and does not care about her daughter. My daughter will feel unbalanced later. This point has to be said to be the giant infant mentality. As long as you are alive, there is hope. But when you die, there is nothing. This idea is shared by most people. Is choosing between someone who may not be able to go to college and someone who will die soon really a choice that shows which one the mother loves more? Normal people don't think like this. Since the daughter took the initiative, it meant that she was a normal person.

I have read more than a hundred chapters, and everything else is fine. It's just that the relationship feels really perverted. The brother and sister are so awkward regardless of whether they are biological or not. It feels disgusting. The relationships in the book look really childish, which is the biggest flaw. All kinds of ambiguous harem stallion romances have really been eliminated. Let's see if there will be any changes in the future. If there are no changes, I will abandon the book.

The protagonist's attitude towards Lin Yunyun in the early stage was too good, and he very rationally forgave her on behalf of the original owner, without any idea that he had any qualifications to say those words. Because of her, Su Tao's brother died; because of her, he almost died when he traveled through time; because of her, Su Tao's tuition fees were gone. Don't say that without her, there would be no protagonist. She has bad intentions but does good things, so it's not right to doubt her. Who knows if what she said is true or not, what if she already knew the consequences. Why did she believe the protagonist as soon as she said it? From the protagonist's perspective, she didn't know that the consequences would be so serious. It's not worth believing at all.

I decided to vote for this book three times a day, and vote until it is finished.