It Began When I Saw People’s Lifespans

The author wants to tell you that the subject matter is good. The writing is also okay. But you should start writing without writing an overall outline. Your book has too many inconsistencies, and the protagonist's mentality is too capricious In the beginning, I had the ability to sell my time, so I chose to be cautious. I tried to hold on, but ended up writing on the plane and to Poland. I thought this was something only a madman would do. There was also the need to form an organization at the beginning, but it turned out to be a child's play, just developing two people and running around the world. The same goes for the purchase time, which I briefly brushed off in a hurry. Maybe I wanted to quickly write out the plot that I thought would be more interesting later on, but this time I just brushed it off, leaving me speechless. Because the theme of your novel is time. The protagonist's abilities derived from time are too arbitrary. Has the protagonist himself even thought about how to develop? For an ordinary person who is confused. I think when he made 300 million, the first thing he did was enjoy life. Anyway, there is endless money. As a result, the protagonist wants to study the cultivation of immortality at one time and rule the theological world in Poland at the other. Really, your book is too exaggerated.

I read a short story, and the protagonist was the same. The number he saw was lifespan. If it suddenly became less, it would be dangerous. So he went to the pharmaceutical research laboratory to develop a new injection and hung it on his arm. If the number became smaller, it meant failure and more products were successful. The number of the medicine he studied increased more and more, until one day the number became a lying 8, which is infinity. He injected the injection, and then the zombie virus broke out and the end came.

Is this book based on a movie? It seems to be from Korea, I can't remember it. It's probably about a girl who can see other people's lifespans, and the lifespan is on her ankles.

The author's foreshadowing is a bit too much, and it doesn't give people a bright feeling. It's boring, the heroine feels inexplicable, "If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, don't write it," and it feels a bit forced. However, the follow-up is still refreshing. It's still very good so far. It's worth watching. I must write better in the future so as to attract more people's attention. Come on.

Copying books? 😡

It's a good book with a very novel writing style, but unfortunately, the plot written by the author is too scattered. It would be better if the protagonist's development and growth could be written in more detail.

In the current social climate, the world is angry, who will be the savior in times of crisis? The love between children and daughters cannot be separated, and the separation between life and death is heartbreaking. Leave Germany empty plots, abandon the righteous to conquer, how many times do intrigues and deceptions come true? In the quiet world, the ups and downs of the world, who decides on etiquette, justice and integrity? I just want to talk incessantly, not enough to cover the world of heaven and earth, and talk about my heart, but I can't tell the depth, so I am amusing you and put it into a smile.

A few years ago, I also conceived of a golden finger based on time, or lifespan, because from the perspective of ordinary people, time is a cheap, wasteful, and renewable resource. 6 Billion people (in the eyes of social elites and wealthy people, the vast majority of people in this world are waste, and their contribution to society is dispensable. I believe you and I can feel this malice) multiplied by 50 years It is equivalent to 300 billion years of time. When converted into money, superpowers, etc., It can surpass the abilities of ordinary people. This is the cost of showing off. As long as you calculate the conversion scale yourself (don't make it collapse later), this is the main economy of a book. If this is not messy, the others will not collapse. The difficulty of developing the ability of time must be increased, increased, increased. It is too easy to obtain and it makes people feel unacceptable. , Time itself transcends the universe (representing most matter, matter is expendable in the face of time), and is mysterious. Human beings' observation of it is too poor, which does not mean that time itself is so controllable. The author defines the acquisition of time as autonomous trading, which is very good and controllable. If this evil is not released, others will complain later depending on their mood. 😄😄😄, I have been reading books for more than ten years , the first time I post an opinion, mainly because the discussion circle is full of malice. I think the author feels uncomfortable when he sees it. Even if he is open-minded and laughs it off, it does not mean that he is comfortable in his heart. Not caring is open-minded, but it is not a reason for you to be presumptuous. Do you know that others can do whatever they want without caring? I hope this can cheer up the author and make you feel that someone recognizes you.

It's really poisonous and the logic is confusing. Newbies may still be able to read it, but even those who are a little older may find it hard to swallow.

The author has a lot of poisonous points, especially in terms of pretentiousness and emotions. If you can't write emotions, don't want a female protagonist.