Asgard

Report 1. This book is definitely not written by Dangyan himself. 2. This book was definitely not written with eyes in mind, I would bet a million

Just read the first 300 chapters. Don't read the rest. Become a eunuch. I don't understand why Dou Yan wants to demote himself to the altar. I'll probably take a detour from your book in the future!

What are you writing? Countless incoherent stories with no beginning or end, like a collection of countless novels.

Before the 300th chapter, the writing and characters were excellent. After the 300th chapter, I guess I hired a gunman. It was so disgusting that I abandoned the book. Goodbye

Can I make a complaint? This is random writing.

In a different world, Master Ye's character has completely changed, from killing decisively to repaying evil with kindness. In this world where martial arts is the most respected, repaying evil with kindness. . . I used to regard The Fortune Teller as a classic and read it five times. I thought it was good both for the affection between the master and the fantasy. However, this article feels like the writing style has changed drastically. Is it because the author has changed? After reading a paragraph, I feel that there is a clear gap between it and the previous article, and I feel like I am following a novel.

It feels like the whole thing was written by another person

After becoming Ye Tian, ​​it feels like it's another book

I deliberately stayed for half a month to read it again, but it turned out to be incomprehensible and boring to me.

The number of words has been reduced, and the plot is not as refined as when Ye Tong was.

After turning into Ye Tian, ​​he became very ugly. . It's too stiff 😅😅

The first book I read about Dianyan was The Genius Fortune Teller, and it was also the first online novel I read. I still listen to the audio version of The Genius fortune teller over and over again. As a Taoist priest, I admire the ideal state written by Dianyan. I also wrote a book called "Fengshui Rivers and Lakes" in the hope of getting some tips on Dianyan!

Pigfoot had to go out on a mission within a few months of joining the sect. The world would not be able to survive without him. He also forcibly arranged for a female companion. It seems that these chapters have fallen into a cliché. Endless things to do, endless fights to fight, endless copies, where is your story? I don't like novels that just randomly pull a few female pig's feet to attract attention. The author still needs to experience life more. How can he become an immortal if he is so impetuous?

I couldn't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 124. Either the realm was wrong or the sect name was wrong. In the end, even the name was changed.

Let's take a look at this one! Shen Zangzhong felt dizzy and abandoned the book! It's better that this book doesn't have so many inconsistencies and loopholes, and it's good to catch the eye. Although the TV has been messed up

As for Ye Tong and Ye Tian mentioned by book friends, it is necessary for the plot or... It is understandable!

It feels like the protagonist is always talking about the supporting role and stealing the scene from the supporting role.

Change the plot, it's depressing to watch.!

The plot changes too quickly, and the connection of ideas is a bit short-circuited! ! I can't keep up with the author's rhythm. It should be separated from the book in the future.

Since I was a physiognomist, I have always been looking for books that can make a difference. When reading a book, you must read the genuine one. The genuine one is at the starting point.

I hope Ye Tian can meet the reincarnation of Yu Qingya, and also hope that the people who ascended with him will be fine and can meet again

First, first, brothers and sisters who have followed me from Golden Eyes to now, come and report

Please update quickly, don't be like Shenzang

There are not many people who insist on updating. Big applause for the author👍

I have read all the books in the eye, especially Shenzang. I have started to read the original version from the beginning, and I have also rewarded some. It is to compensate for the pirated version before. It is not easy, and the writing is so good, and the hard work will be rewarded. I have read the genius fortune teller three times. I really didn't expect a sequel so early. It is really good. I also like the character of Ye Tian, ​​and there are folklore things. In short, I read the original version, and I support it. Moreover, the story of Immortal Palace is getting better and better. I will continue to support it.

The book "Asgard" used multiple writers. The prefaces of all the chapters do not match the subtitles. There are two chapters and two stories with serious storylines that are not related at all. There is no complete beginning to the end. You have defrauded our time and defrauded our money with so many chapters. I think Dayan is so poor that he is crazy. He has deceived the readers. You have got some money. Do you still need it? I can give you some charity, but please don't waste my time!

I can't stand it anymore. How many writers did you hire? Is this a great thing? Fraud

May I ask what happens after Chapter 342? Maybe I scrolled through it too quickly and didn't understand it. Inexplicably, he was brought to the second heaven by a mysterious person. Ye Tian's consciousness was dominant. Then the first heaven was not written before? ? ? I also talked about Ye Tong's body and Ye Tian's consciousness before. Why when I read the article, I felt that it was Ye Tong before and Ye Tiantian had just awakened. Confused...

The second-level diva's style has changed drastically, she is definitely a gunner

Meng Xin thought it was fairy grass, Xiao Bai thought it was grain grass, Zhong Bai thought it was hay, and Lao Bai thought it was poisonous weed. One chapter was defeated. 😰