Restorer

I kept subscribing to the first half, but gave up on the second half. It was too stupid, just to make up the word count. I kept reading the original book, but this book was really eye-catching. I will no longer follow the author's books in the future.

It's a waste of monthly tickets. From the beginning of Cave of Bones to now, the word count has been lost. It dug dozens of chapters and filled it in less than half a chapter. The more I look at it, the more annoying it becomes, what an ant, what a waste... The more I look at it, the more annoying it becomes. The brothers gave up their books and resumed their careers.

The two most wonderful books about Taoyan are "The Golden Eye" and "The Genius Physiologist". I have read these two books over ten or twenty times

I've reached chapter 165 and I can't stand it anymore. Why do you have to keep a low profile? And then forcefully remedy it? Other books are low-key because they don't want to cause trouble, but this book is low-key just to cause trouble. The word count is low!

Hey, I've read more than a dozen chapters, how can I say, everything else is fine, except that the main character is a bit out of his mind and feels a bit silly.

Something didn't feel right when I saw Chapter 266. My thinking and logic began to deviate from the book. I couldn't stand it anymore. What the hell?

The preface does not match the postscript, and there are too many loopholes. It feels like many ghostwriters gave up on it.

This attitude is too deceptive, so I gave up.

The first two hundred or so chapters are very interesting to read, but the more you read the later, the more uncomfortable you read.

Chapter 3: Directly persuade him to quit and forcefully explain his reasons for being both responsible and established.

It's endless fun to fight with people, it's fun to fight with gods, it's fun to pretend to be sexy, to hunt for treasures, and it's a real man to drink, eat, and pick up girls! ! ! Don't keep telling the story!

I really like this book, and it feels like I used to read it. It's not like the books on the current rankings that are unconventional and have nothing to read but also play with routines. I play the same routine back and forth with millions of words. I wish I could think about it after reading a hundred chapters. This book at least made me full of expectations. Although it is not the best, it can be regarded as a life-saving medicine. In today's book shortage, having such a book can be considered as a rain of rain! Overall, a good book worth collecting

The water is terrible and the push is too slow. What a waste of book money

It's over, eunuch! A slap in the eye!

Hit the eyes and transform into Doraemon. When encountering difficulties, taking out a treasure from the inner space can resolve all difficulties.

The previous few films had emotional foreshadowing, so why not this one?

Are you a eunuch? 🤤🤤🤤

A woman's eggs have been brought within her mother's body, which means that her grandmother determines the number and genes of the eggs. This is also the origin of invisible genetic genes. In addition, if a woman does not undergo physiological mutations and ovulates one egg per month, she will definitely ovulate it before the age of 60. It is impossible to extend her life and her reproductive period will be extended indefinitely. This is a limitation of human life science. This hole in this book needs to be corrected. For example, life is extended ten times, the ovulation period is also extended ten times, and the probability of having a child is reduced ten times.

The protagonist is too stupid. In modern society, I have never read novels about cultivating immortals. I have always seen movies and TV series. If not, there are folklore. But you have a protagonist who doesn't know what a magic weapon is, what a formation is, and doesn't even have any imagination to make connections?

Personally, I still like Golden Eyes to be a little bit beyond reality, but not too much beyond the capabilities. It wouldn't be interesting if it really turned into a fantasy like ghosts and gods. In addition, many parts of Golden Eyes are very fascinating, such as the relationship between the animals and so on. I hope this book won't turn into magic, fantasy, ghosts and the like in the end. Just a little bit beyond reality.

Occasionally, I see someone saying in this chapter that they suspect this book was not written by Dan Yan. I just want to say that this smell is too strong, and it is definitely Dan Yan himself. And there is really no progress at all in the past ten years. First of all, the author can be vulgar, but the protagonist cannot. Can you write less content that has no effect on advancing the plot or shaping the character? It is now 2022, not 2010, and the writing method has not changed at all. The ambiguity now is completely expected. Secondly, can you reduce the stereotypes about women? Have you not seen a normal working woman in more than ten years? A college student union president is described as mentally retarded. Would such a woman not understand the importance of career and strength? If you don't practice hard, will you buy clothes first? What is this? The girls in the research group are working in the laboratory every day for papers. Some of them are not interested in buying clothes at all and even now wear high school pants. Can you please stop writing about women who ignore priorities and make trouble without reason? To be honest, I don't even want to say that this is a gender stereotype, it's just like an NT. What's even more disturbing is that every time the protagonist meets this kind of girl, his IQ is cut in half at least. Do you want to write that the protagonist is a straight man who doesn't understand the charm? I just feel like sb...

I don't understand why I recommend these chapters.

I have read about 200 chapters in the past two days, let me know your thoughts. The writing on antique instruments is still as professional as ever, but writing about feelings and the relationship with my sister really put me off. For example, around Chapter 205 and 206, and in the Qingcheng restricted area before. The protagonist is kind to his sister, which is understandable, but he is so kind to the other two women, which I don't quite understand. Although the sister is said to have a good relationship with them, and the protagonist also has some friendship with them, I really don't think the relationship is that good. I felt so aggrieved after reading Chapters 205-206. This sister has to take those two women with her whenever she goes home or whenever she goes to meet the protagonist. Is it necessary? Don't these two women think that taking advantage is enough? Whenever I go to someone else's house, I always benefit from them. Even if you don't say it, don't you know how precious it is to drink so much monkey wine and eat such highly spiritual meat all day long? There is also the protagonist's sister, who is stupid as hell. Her brother gave her some good things, and even if she eats them all, she can't give them away everywhere. Although she didn't tell her that the meat was saint-level extraordinary, even ordinary extraordinary meat is very precious, right? Her brother's hard work gave it to her, so she didn't cherish it and gave it to others casually? I'm really convinced! You'd better write less about this kind of emotion, I'm going to be persuaded to quit!

Wouldn't it be enough to just use the repair system to upgrade the protagonist's mother to Foundation Establishment? Why spend 6,000 to repair that brain tumor when you can fix it with a few hundred repair points? Could this "everything can be repaired system" only repair the protagonist's own cultivation technique? Can't fix someone else's? I don't understand🤔

This book should be abandoned after reading this point. It is simply a waste of starting coins. This endless loop is pointless. This book has a rating of 1 out of 10. I would rate this book minus 10, which is too much.

It's hard to describe in one word The talents are exhausted Transformation failed The story is old-fashioned, no problem, new wine in old bottles tastes just as good The story is that story, the words are those words, the old story expresses new ideas, you have to craft it carefully This book is really disappointing. It's a pity that the previous books have laid the foundation. This book of accumulating family wealth must have lost half of it. It's a pity.

When looking for a gunman, find someone reliable. Is the word count about hard water bad for character and disgusting? Don't look at it once it's out of the earth, one lump after another goes up.

In the past, I considered The Genius Phrase Master and The Golden Eye to be top-notch urban novels. I can accept adding a bit of fantasy and cultivation to urban novels. Now, this book, at first, I thought it was about the city, but when I read about 20% of it, there were no ordinary people anymore. It described all the cultivation of immortality, but the protagonist's cultivation of immortality relies on the system. Except for the novelty of absorbing meteorites, the other writing is very bad. There are many typos that I won't mention. There are so many poisonous points that I can't even count them. If it was ghostwritten or automatically written by AI, I won't say anything. If it was written by Dianyan himself, you should reflect on how to make money in the future. With the bad methods of Immortal Palace and Restoration Master, will your next book be read by anyone? I thought the genius fortune teller and the golden pupil were the ceiling in novels, but now you are almost writing this IP off.

I gave up the book after Chapter 20 or 30 of Entering the Black Hole. I only read the comments section from time to time and all the comments were abusive. Did you even sell your pen name?

Don't continue to subscribe. I felt humiliated. I couldn't stand it when I saw being sucked into a black hole. I pushed it to 80% and couldn't stand it anymore. I just looked at the title and skipped back. I was confused all the way to the last chapter.