Kamzo

I suspect that Dianyan used book writing software, which is the kind that outlines the structure and then the software automatically helps write the book. Golden Eyes, a genius fortune-teller, fully ordered, Baojian couldn't stand it anymore after two-thirds of it, and I no longer had the desire to read this book.

After reading it, I originally wanted to find a book about antiques, but it turned out that this book didn't have much about antiques. And there are still many pitfalls. The first is the origin of the protagonist. In the previous article, it was said that he picked it up and later it was said that he came down from the heaven. But in the article, what happened to the memory when he first entered the sea of ​​consciousness? Also, you can see the age of the antiques and the distressed antiques, but there is no explanation why. The protagonist gave me a submissive feeling, too cautious. Personally, I think both Long and Peng should be more awesome than the protagonist.

The first part was good, very attractive, and not boring at all. But since the appearance of the man named Peng Bin, I felt that it was no longer possible. Anyway, I skipped the plots involving him and several brothers, and it did not affect the reading. In addition, the death of the heroine felt unreasonable. I felt that it would be better to either not die or die early.

Eleven votes are recommended every day. It's getting better and better. I can write another 500 or 600 chapters.

The plot is cliche, the supporting characters are annoying, and there's nothing good about it except the writing.

From going to college, to falling in love, to getting married and having children, my baby is now in kindergarten. Hey, I don't know when I will finish this book!

The last few chapters are the outlines and should be used as chapters! ! !

The content is inconsistent and too watery

I have read another eye-catching book, yes, next one. 🪖

Home, big brother 😁

"Shen Zang" is now available as a physical book, and is available on JD. Com and Dangdang (tip: free shipping on Dangdang). Book friends are encouraged to support it.

Did you forget a treasure? When Man took the protagonist to collect the sandalwood tree, he found an ice cave there. At the bottom was a Tai Chi composed of earth fire and ice. At that time, he was not strong enough to get in. Now that he has refined his energy, why don't he go get it?

Will you update it today? If you don't tell us more, then we won't keep waiting helplessly! It's hard to wait for this!

The latest news, I was caught drunk driving and I can't get out for the time being. Don't wait any longer!

The protagonist's personality is problematic and he can't tell the difference between good and bad, and the supporting characters are really failed. Especially Fatty, Sanpao and Manjun are both dragsters and laggards. They have so many flaws that it's hard to watch them anymore. In the Yongle Ceremony chapter, the bargains must be given to the Manchu Army. In the Gambling chapter, the money given by the Manchu Army was given to the Manchu Army for a long time. I won't say anything. But in Myanmar, Peng Bin gave the protagonist 500,000 US dollars to spend. The protagonist made more than 100 million by choosing raw jade stones with the money. He didn't say a cent of the money was given to Peng Bin. The little squirrel ran away. The protagonist stayed in Myanmar. Peng Bin accompanied him on a dangerous trip to the virgin forest and almost lost his life. He also gave him a meteorite knife. After coming out, he took them to the treasure house to select treasures and gave them to the three protagonists. Then he emptied his family fortune and sold more than 1 billion worth of things to the protagonist at a low price of more than 100 million. He also gave the protagonist more than 10 paintings, worth several hundred million. The protagonist is actually very proud of himself after taking advantage of his brother. After returning home, I pretended to be arrogant. When I was dismantling antiques, it was filial piety to give one to each of the two teachers. But what the hell was it to give Senior Brother Zhao tens of millions of gold Buddhas to donate to the museum, and let them choose the same one by themselves? This is downright stupid. The favor from that brother's family makes him noble.

I saw the anaconda. The author did not check the information and just wrote it. The 10-meter anaconda weighs less than 300 kilograms, and the 13-4 meter weight actually says several thousand kilograms. The ancient creature Titanoboa 18-meter does not seem to be that heavy. Even rifle bullets cannot hit it. You are kidding me. Why don't you write that it is 9 kilograms? Super monsters, and there are five or six meters of anacondas that twist off big trees. It is written in a forced fantasy. The sudden appearance of the squirrel in the previous article is even more of a failure. The previous article has always used science to explain metaphysics. Writing this paragraph has lowered the reader's IQ. Why didn't the author write a Tyrannosaurus Rex in the jungle? Even the dinosaur rifle can break armor! There are so many complaints that I don't want to mention, they are really poisonous!

Early authors, take a look! Later it gradually turned into a slap in the face!

I don't understand that a good normal treasure hunt has to talk about cultivating immortals, either cultivating immortals or ancient martial arts. The early writing of this book is almost like a god. After a few dozen chapters, it starts to be nonsense. You don't need to read it when it comes to snakes. You can't read it even if it is a pirated version. Only one Golden Eyes can do it. The other books are like changing people, and the level is getting worse and worse.

It is recommended that those who have not read it should not read it. There is nothing new in the early stage, it is all the same old routines, and there are many loopholes in the middle and later stages. If you die in the previous chapter, you will be alive in the next chapter. The previous chapter said 1000 and the next chapter will be 8000. There are all kinds of loopholes and bugs everywhere. I really don't know how many people are writing this book. Can't you read the previous ones and make connections before writing? After saying goodbye, the book that was sitting here was banned.

Eye-catching, the two great masters of Stone Octopus are exhausted. As far as this book is concerned, the writing in the front feels no different from Golden Eyes. The middle is too slow and the plot has no explosion. The plot of finding an employee (Si Yuanjie) and dozens of chapters makes people feel dizzy and unnecessary. I decisively abandoned the book! It feels like he can never reach the heights of Golden Eyes, and he can hardly rest on his laurels! 88

I want to know if I can't write just about antiques? Why did you become a cultivator? It's neither fish nor fowl.

In the ending, before the male protagonist ascends, the female protagonist actually dies 😆😆

I originally wanted to come in and see how many people were scolding the author, but I didn't expect that when I came in, they were all scolding the author. It seems I'm not being too serious.

Brothers have settled accounts, haha, the author must have hired someone to ghostwrite this book. In order to express deep brotherly love, the author ignores normal human nature and human feelings.

I'm a big fan of GoldenEye, but I drank too much today. After becoming famous, he is really not worthy of his fans. The dialogue method with ellipsis in every paragraph is too bad, and each one is worse than the last. Stop watching, really, I drank too much

It's really too watery, and I can't stand it after seeing more than 1,100 chapters. Always in the water, introduce someone when you meet them, introduce someone when you meet them, the person next to the protagonist is always on the way to death. The routine is the same. Do the characters all have the same personality? ? ? Does your family run a factory? The characters come off the assembly line, right? I have read all the previous books. But I really can't stand this one.

Author Jun, you adapted your Golden Eyes to the Southern Pai Sanshu, Lin Nan and Zhang Yuanang in a way that is beyond recognition. It can even be said that except for the title of the film, Golden Eyes, and the character names are Zhuang Rui, Qin Xuanbing and Miao Feifei, the other contents are completely different. The heroine Qin Xuanbing has become the villain, her brother Peng Fei, who lived and died together, has become a young man, and Uncle De, who has taught the protagonist the art, has become a villain who stabs the protagonist in the back... What does the author think of this?

Why is it that your book is so good in the early stage, but what kind of fantasy is it in the later stage? I really don't understand, every book is like this, I don't understand your character design, it's an urban masterpiece, but then it turns into a fantasy type, neither fish nor fowl, neither fish nor fowl 😓

The protagonist practices cultivation and talks about how the wealthy couple needs money, and at the same time he has to take care of the giant babies around him. It seems that if you don't give them money, you can't be brothers? You can help your brother, instead of directly giving them money to support him without any bottom line. You are not their father, and it makes your balls hurt. You don't have this obligation, right? Mr. Lan, don't say you are afraid of karma when giving money. You have the power to make money to support your brother, so you are not afraid of karma? When you buy a house for a brother, you changed the title of the book to "Good Brothers in China". It always gives people the feeling of taking off their pants and farting. The relationship between the characters and the distribution of property make people feel that their views are not correct. Another student of Baguazhang, why did you inexplicably reach the stage of practicing Qi in your martial arts? Does martial arts also have Taoist inner alchemy methods for refining qi? Can you refine your Qi just by practicing martial arts? What's the matter? You don't need to be angry? Can you refine Qi by eating a lot? Then why do we need to guide the law?

The introduction is a curio, and then the last chapter is about ascension. Does it make the brain soar?