The Necromancer of Hogwarts

The shift schedule didn't work before, it hurt my eyes, so I sent it again. To say that Tageo needs to pursue becoming a god is simply laughable to everyone who knows anything about it. Let's talk about the setting of Diablo first. The first necromancer in Sanctuary is Rasma. Rasma understood the path of the balanced necromancer under the guidance of the Chaos Poison Dragon Tageo. So although Tageo can be regarded as Rasma's teacher, Tageo himself is not a necromancer. Let's talk about the character setting, the first necromancer Rathma, the son of the Demon Queen Lilith and the Archangel Enarius of the Angelis Council. His mother Lilith alone could kill all the angels and demons in Sanctuary World, thus forcing Inarius to allow her to use the World Stone. As the son of the Nephalem, Rathma is more powerful than his parents. In addition, the necromancers in the dark world are not the necromancy school of DND. The necromancers in the dark world use primitive magic. According to the D2 Player's Handbook, prime magic is the energy that flows through all living things, and the Necromancer is able to manipulate this energy to curse the fate of his victims. There are also Amazons who use this energy, who strengthen this power through belief and gain superpowers. "Farewell, and may Rathma's blessings be with you." - Necromancer Maitan, Diablo 3 mission dialogue "In the name of Rathma, in the name of Aldersun, in the name of Seloni, in the name of Garak, in the name of Dragonwing Muris, in the name of Tag'o, I will drive you all away!" - Necromancer Zal, Moon of the Spiders Such lines fully illustrate that the Necromancer has a clear belief system. Their magic is always named Tag'o, and they always keep Rathma's teachings in mind. Tag'or is a mysterious dragon-like creature who is responsible for guarding Sanctuary and maintaining its balance between heaven and hell. In Richard A. Knaak's Sin War trilogy, he is described as a creature made of stars, each representing a stage of life—past, present, and future choices so infinite that mortals cannot glimpse a certain future. Tageo's exact origin is unknown, but the book hints that he is not the only one, and that there are guardians similar to him in other worlds. No one has seen him since the end of the Sin War. He is worshiped by the necromancers of Rathma's cult. In short, this dragon is equivalent to the "god" of the Necromancer sect. In the novel, it is said that Tageo wants to become a god, which is completely nonsense. So, if the author could be more adventurous and want to write about a dark necromancer, please check the background setting of the information. It can be said that Tageo wants to become a god... Why don't you say that the Nephalem also want to become a god? When people are full, they try to become those beings they beat up.

1. If readers are reading HP fanfic + the plot setting of Diablo 2 Necromancer, then this book is extremely poisonous. 2. Just treat it as a fantasy novel that borrows some related elements. It is a food-level novel and can be read. 3. The author writes about the red ghost, which everyone knows. It can only be said that the author is crazy and tempting, the risk is quite high, and it is easy for both parties to be unhappy.

The starting point of Son of Death is very novel, I look forward to the follow-up

The starting point is very novel, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

The birth of a book with four different characters, the Dark II Bar does not reflect the characteristics of the Dark II. The skeleton holds a gun, and the Harry Bar always deviates from reality, using modern weapons and magic to compare. In fact, it is better to be simple. Write magic just write magic, ignore hot weapons, and thieves will make a show. Let me provide a guess. If magic really can't compete with Rewu, then why would it look down on the mortal world (that is, the Muggle world, Muggles are too unpleasant to hear). There is a typical problem, strength determines status, and this is true everywhere. No reason. It is also a bit nonsense to say that there is no communication between the demon world and the mortal world. In fact, everyone who has watched the movie knows that most of the places where wizards live are in the mortal world. There is an episode that seems to be a trial. Wizards from all over the world seem to enter the wizarding world through phone booths, toilets, etc. In the mortal world. So it's a bit of a stretch to say that you don't recognize the atomic bomb. . To sum up, this book is a bit toxic. A personal opinion, certainly not everyone's opinion. . There will always be controversy. If you agree, leave a comment and like it. If you disagree, just leave. If you don't like it, I'll eat both salty and sweet tofu. . . And they all like it.

As I write, it becomes crooked and falls into a cliché.

When I say eunuch, I mean eunuch, which makes people sigh that they can afford it and put it down. I wish you a great sale of your new book👍Bye

🐮🍺, There are very few books that I feel I can't get enough of these days, and this one is one of them.

After the episode about arriving in China, I was quite speechless. I'm patriotic too, but it's written in such a disgusting way that I can't stand it.

Let's talk about the setting of Diablo first. The first necromancer in Sanctuary is Rasma. Rasma understood the path of a balanced necromancer under the guidance of the Chaos Dragon Tageo. So although Tageo can be regarded as Rasma's teacher, Tageo himself is not a necromancer. Let's talk about the character setting, the first necromancer Rathma, the son of Demon Queen Lilith and Angelis Council Archangel Inarius. His mother Lilith alone could kill all the angels and demons in Sanctuary World, thus forcing Inarius to allow her to use the World Stone. As the son of the Nephalem, Rathma is more powerful than his parents. In addition, the necromancers in the dark world are not the necromance school of DND. The necromancers in the dark world use original magic. According to the D2 Player's Handbook, prime magic is the energy that flows through all living things, and the Necromancer is able to manipulate this energy to curse the fate of his victims. There are also Amazons who use this energy, who strengthen this power through belief and gain superpowers. "Farewell, and may Rathma's blessing be with you." - Necromancer Maitan, Diablo 3 quest dialogue "In the name of Rathma, in the name of Odessan, in the name of Seloni, in the name of Garak, in the name of Dragonwing Murius, in the name of Tag'or, I will drive you all away!" - Necromancer Zal, Spider Moon Lines like this fully demonstrate that the Necromancer has a clear belief system. Their magic is always named Tag'o, and they always keep Rathma's teachings in mind. This section explains these two roles in detail. Tag'or is a mysterious dragon-like creature who is responsible for guarding Sanctuary and maintaining its balance between heaven and hell. In Richard A. Knaak's Sin War trilogy, he is described as a creature made of stars, each representing a stage of life—past, present, and future choices so infinite that mortals cannot glimpse a certain future. Tag'o's exact origins are unknown, but the books hint that he is not the only one, and that there are guardians similar to him in other worlds. No one has seen him since the end of the Sin War. He is worshiped by the necromancers of Rathma's cult. In short, this dragon is equivalent to the "god" of the Necromancer sect. In the novel, it is said that Tageo wants to become a god, which is completely nonsense. So, if the author could be more adventurous and want to write about a dark necromancer, please check the background setting of the information. Tageo can even say that he wants to become a god... Why don't you say that the Nephalem also want to become gods? When people are full, they try to become those beings they beat up.

Very good. How many words does the author plan to write ? Don't just write it as a eunuch.

The previous steps have been successful, and the introduction of various fantasy elements is relatively good, but since entering China, I feel that the author has gone astray. If he does not have enough ability to control political elements, the written content will appear childish, especially the author is not willing to be brief and forcefully write this aspect of the content. The most problematic aspect of the author's treatment of redism is that it creates a great sense of separation from the previous article. It was originally a fantasy style that combined modern technology and magic, and had its own promotion path. However, since entering China, he has been boasting about redism and various theories. There is nothing wrong with being patriotic, but I feel that the content of the author's article at this time has made me feel alienated from the story. Maybe it was the author's earlier plot that made me have higher expectations for this work, so when I started to brag about it, I had a strong sense of being out of drama, and it felt like an angry youth YY novel (not discriminating against patriotism). Maybe I used too much force? I don't know if the author has been in bad shape recently, or if there are some mistakes in the plot arrangement. I feel that the writing of the later chapters is much different from the previous ones. If the author carefully sorted out the outline or rearranged the plot, this work would at least have the potential to reach the popularity of The Invincible among Harry Potter fans.

Just kill him, why should he swear to take care of the families of those prisoners? He still looks very passionate, haha. Does this protagonist feel like a clown, trying to deceive himself and others in this way? What about the coldness you promised? Might as well change it to a funny label.

My personal suggestion is not to use Chinese names in Harry Potter novels. Although there are Chinese people in Harry Potter, the names look awkward. After all, everyone has foreign names, and you, "Xiang Yu," look very awkward.

Watching a creative HP fanfiction rapidly collapse in an indescribable direction, I feel that many readers have been thrown out of the car by this sharp turn.

I got addicted when I saw the red ghost part. I just want to read Harry Potter fanfics.

Red is not omnipotent, not to mention the extraordinary society where power is attributed to individuals. In the real world, except for China, it is difficult for you to see other red powers on the entire earth. The power of ideas and doctrines has limits, only interests are eternal. If you are addicted to advocating red, then so be it. It is better to look at the reality. After all, even in China, the glory of capital is more dazzling than red. No one is a fool, especially those in high positions. Regarding the power of wizards, I suggest you watch the Harry Potter and Fantastic Beasts movies. The power of wizards is not at all false in modern society, and it can even be said that it still crushes Muggle civilization. As for nuclear bombs, I don't think nuclear bombs are a huge problem for the Ministry of Magic. In the face of magic that can rub the laws of physics on the ground, what can nuclear bombs do?

When writing an original article like this, don't blindly insert random things into it.

There is a deep pit. It is normal for Pig's Foot to be able to read the magic book after accepting the knowledge of the Necromancer at the age of 6, but the maid has a system since she accepted a contract? And he can also read magic books? ? ? What the hell! She used to be an ordinary person!

It's too poisonous The second chapter alone ruins the character of the original work As an Auror who insists on not killing people, Moody would take the lead in trying to kill a six-year-old child? He could only capture but not kill those evil wizards Not to mention that no one with a little conscience would do this And a bunch of Death Eaters present could grab a random memory and feed it with veritaserum to figure out where the protagonist came from Have you read too many second-hand fan fiction and distorted the personality of the original character?

Does the author have any other vests? Are there any other books? It very much agrees with my outlook and my taste.

The creativity of the book is still very good. Starting from the introduction of Cthulhu in HP, the power of will to collect the manuscripts made me so embarrassed. Author, I know you want to express patriotic sentiments, but can you write it more reasonably? The protagonist, as a foreigner, talks about cooperation with the domestic government in that kind of environment and is given so many benefits. It seems that normal people will have the idea of ​​​​showing kindness for nothing, committing adultery or stealing, right? Some revolutionaries who have survived decades of war will be fooled by the protagonist with a few words and a few tricks? In short, the latest plot is very interesting. Even if it is a manuscript of a great man, in front of the evil gods and archmages you wrote that have existed for who knows how long, I can regard it as the power of faith when the power of will of a mortal political leader kills several extraordinary creatures. But these characters have probably seen creation and destruction countless times in the messy civilizations in the world you created. Can a manuscript be so awesome that such a Tagio extraordinary being can exclaim? You must know that what you write about is an extraordinary existence that stands on the level of ordinary biological civilization and is on par with angels, demons and evil gods. People may not be interested in taking a look at the change of political power in the mortal world. Patriotism can be understood. . . It's too awkward to brag. . . There is also the protagonist's name for the government representative and leader. . In formal occasions, isn't it all about this gentleman and that lady? . Maybe I've read too much about fantasy, the name of the leader, Mr. Zheng, Mr. Wang, etc., And I was a little speechless when I saw this kind of narrative. . . Hope the author can continue to improve.

. . . Harry fanfic You wrote Lili like this. . . Alas, it was obviously very good in the early stage, but in the recent pictures, Harry has become inexplicably black.

The background of the Necromancers in Diablo 2 says that they can maintain the balance between life and death, and even reverse life and death. The skeleton soldiers are really just the foundation. The stone demons that create life and the ultimate rebirth are the essence of the undead. It's okay for you to be a god of life and death. Why lower yourself to play with undead skeletons?

It's a bit toxic, to be honest, it's extremely toxic.

Does this Zuowei have a B number? The protagonist can give him supernatural powers and then treat the protagonist like a child? Do you find it interesting? Are all your supporting characters stupid? If you met a child who could give you supernatural powers, would you treat him as a child? If I meet him, I will worship him as an ancestor

Three copies, all of which have been discontinued. Won't you think about it? If you don't build your reputation and gain a group of loyal fans, few people will pay to watch it.

I fell to my knees when I saw Chapter 12. I don't know if you want to write about Diablo or HP. Is Diablo so advanced? They have upgraded the system to HP. This is really embarrassing. I would rather have a system like Diablo. What more characters do you need? The main character is really a second grader.

The feeling of a third-rate web game is overwhelming. The author wrote this book because he got obsessed with playing the game. Um, it's not the outline of the game.

Has the author ever heard of the principle that there should be no more than three elements in a novel? At first, Darkness + Harry Potter was pretty good, then the plot of aiding the Communist Party was added which was quite interesting, and then vampires were added and it became a mess. Infinite flow can have n number of elements, but they are in different worlds. How can they all be squeezed into one world like yours. No matter how blindly the author keeps writing, I will give up. The more he writes, the more rubbish he writes, and sooner or later he will become a eunuch.