The Necromancer of Hogwarts

The shift schedule didn't work before, it hurt my eyes, so I sent it again. To say that Tageo needs to pursue becoming a god is simply laughable to everyone who knows anything about it. Let's talk about the setting of Diablo first. The first necromancer in Sanctuary is Rasma. Rasma understood the path of the balanced necromancer under the guidance of the Chaos Poison Dragon Tageo. So although Tageo can be regarded as Rasma's teacher, Tageo himself is not a necromancer. Let's talk about the character setting, the first necromancer Rathma, the son of the Demon Queen Lilith and the Archangel Enarius of the Angelis Council. His mother Lilith alone could kill all the angels and demons in Sanctuary World, thus forcing Inarius to allow her to use the World Stone. As the son of the Nephalem, Rathma is more powerful than his parents. In addition, the necromancers in the dark world are not the necromancy school of DND. The necromancers in the dark world use primitive magic. According to the D2 Player's Handbook, prime magic is the energy that flows through all living things, and the Necromancer is able to manipulate this energy to curse the fate of his victims. There are also Amazons who use this energy, who strengthen this power through belief and gain superpowers. "Farewell, and may Rathma's blessings be with you." - Necromancer Maitan, Diablo 3 mission dialogue "In the name of Rathma, in the name of Aldersun, in the name of Seloni, in the name of Garak, in the name of Dragonwing Muris, in the name of Tag'o, I will drive you all away!" - Necromancer Zal, Moon of the Spiders Such lines fully illustrate that the Necromancer has a clear belief system. Their magic is always named Tag'o, and they always keep Rathma's teachings in mind. Tag'or is a mysterious dragon-like creature who is responsible for guarding Sanctuary and maintaining its balance between heaven and hell. In Richard A. Knaak's Sin War trilogy, he is described as a creature made of stars, each representing a stage of life—past, present, and future choices so infinite that mortals cannot glimpse a certain future. Tageo's exact origin is unknown, but the book hints that he is not the only one, and that there are guardians similar to him in other worlds. No one has seen him since the end of the Sin War. He is worshiped by the necromancers of Rathma's cult. In short, this dragon is equivalent to the "god" of the Necromancer sect. In the novel, it is said that Tageo wants to become a god, which is completely nonsense. So, if the author could be more adventurous and want to write about a dark necromancer, please check the background setting of the information. It can be said that Tageo wants to become a god... Why don't you say that the Nephalem also want to become a god? When people are full, they try to become those beings they beat up.

Let's talk about the setting of Diablo first. The first necromancer in Sanctuary is Rasma. Rasma understood the path of a balanced necromancer under the guidance of the Chaos Dragon Tageo. So although Tageo can be regarded as Rasma's teacher, Tageo himself is not a necromancer. Let's talk about the character setting, the first necromancer Rathma, the son of Demon Queen Lilith and Angelis Council Archangel Inarius. His mother Lilith alone could kill all the angels and demons in Sanctuary World, thus forcing Inarius to allow her to use the World Stone. As the son of the Nephalem, Rathma is more powerful than his parents. In addition, the necromancers in the dark world are not the necromance school of DND. The necromancers in the dark world use original magic. According to the D2 Player's Handbook, prime magic is the energy that flows through all living things, and the Necromancer is able to manipulate this energy to curse the fate of his victims. There are also Amazons who use this energy, who strengthen this power through belief and gain superpowers. "Farewell, and may Rathma's blessing be with you." - Necromancer Maitan, Diablo 3 quest dialogue "In the name of Rathma, in the name of Odessan, in the name of Seloni, in the name of Garak, in the name of Dragonwing Murius, in the name of Tag'or, I will drive you all away!" - Necromancer Zal, Spider Moon Lines like this fully demonstrate that the Necromancer has a clear belief system. Their magic is always named Tag'o, and they always keep Rathma's teachings in mind. This section explains these two roles in detail. Tag'or is a mysterious dragon-like creature who is responsible for guarding Sanctuary and maintaining its balance between heaven and hell. In Richard A. Knaak's Sin War trilogy, he is described as a creature made of stars, each representing a stage of life—past, present, and future choices so infinite that mortals cannot glimpse a certain future. Tag'o's exact origins are unknown, but the books hint that he is not the only one, and that there are guardians similar to him in other worlds. No one has seen him since the end of the Sin War. He is worshiped by the necromancers of Rathma's cult. In short, this dragon is equivalent to the "god" of the Necromancer sect. In the novel, it is said that Tageo wants to become a god, which is completely nonsense. So, if the author could be more adventurous and want to write about a dark necromancer, please check the background setting of the information. Tageo can even say that he wants to become a god... Why don't you say that the Nephalem also want to become gods? When people are full, they try to become those beings they beat up.

Very good. How many words does the author plan to write ? Don't just write it as a eunuch.

The previous steps have been successful, and the introduction of various fantasy elements is relatively good, but since entering China, I feel that the author has gone astray. If he does not have enough ability to control political elements, the written content will appear childish, especially the author is not willing to be brief and forcefully write this aspect of the content. The most problematic aspect of the author's treatment of redism is that it creates a great sense of separation from the previous article. It was originally a fantasy style that combined modern technology and magic, and had its own promotion path. However, since entering China, he has been boasting about redism and various theories. There is nothing wrong with being patriotic, but I feel that the content of the author's article at this time has made me feel alienated from the story. Maybe it was the author's earlier plot that made me have higher expectations for this work, so when I started to brag about it, I had a strong sense of being out of drama, and it felt like an angry youth YY novel (not discriminating against patriotism). Maybe I used too much force? I don't know if the author has been in bad shape recently, or if there are some mistakes in the plot arrangement. I feel that the writing of the later chapters is much different from the previous ones. If the author carefully sorted out the outline or rearranged the plot, this work would at least have the potential to reach the popularity of The Invincible among Harry Potter fans.

My personal suggestion is not to use Chinese names in Harry Potter novels. Although there are Chinese people in Harry Potter, the names look awkward. After all, everyone has foreign names, and you, "Xiang Yu," look very awkward.

Just kill him, why should he swear to take care of the families of those prisoners? He still looks very passionate, haha. Does this protagonist feel like a clown, trying to deceive himself and others in this way? What about the coldness you promised? Might as well change it to a funny label.

Watching a creative HP fanfiction rapidly collapse in an indescribable direction, I feel that many readers have been thrown out of the car by this sharp turn.

I got addicted when I saw the red ghost part. I just want to read Harry Potter fanfics.

Red is not omnipotent, not to mention the extraordinary society where power is attributed to individuals. In the real world, except for China, it is difficult for you to see other red powers on the entire earth. The power of ideas and doctrines has limits, only interests are eternal. If you are addicted to advocating red, then so be it. It is better to look at the reality. After all, even in China, the glory of capital is more dazzling than red. No one is a fool, especially those in high positions. Regarding the power of wizards, I suggest you watch the Harry Potter and Fantastic Beasts movies. The power of wizards is not at all false in modern society, and it can even be said that it still crushes Muggle civilization. As for nuclear bombs, I don't think nuclear bombs are a huge problem for the Ministry of Magic. In the face of magic that can rub the laws of physics on the ground, what can nuclear bombs do?

It's too poisonous The second chapter alone ruins the character of the original work As an Auror who insists on not killing people, Moody would take the lead in trying to kill a six-year-old child? He could only capture but not kill those evil wizards Not to mention that no one with a little conscience would do this And a bunch of Death Eaters present could grab a random memory and feed it with veritaserum to figure out where the protagonist came from Have you read too many second-hand fan fiction and distorted the personality of the original character?