Conquest of Sailors

Damn it, someone actually rewarded me. Bining Snake Monkey, thank you! Thank you! 😭 I'm already crying

Are you writing online articles at a publishing level?

I read a few pictures because I won a red envelope, and I feel that the author's writing is okay, but needs to be improved. I remember that the preface said that he wanted to write a world instead of a novel. I think this is a big problem. This concept is usually only thought like this by novices. (Of course, the great among the great may also think so, but the author is obviously not) Write a novel well It's hard to say, you have to position yourself well, it's a matter of attitude, otherwise it will give people a very long-winded feeling like your novel, a very long-winded feeling. This is caused by your writing power and poor plot arrangement. You have to work hard to write the places that should not be emphasized, and write down the places that should be emphasized due to lack of experience. It's not good, it's just like a foot wrap, and it's a foot wrap stained with mud. I suggest the author write more clearly, don't be too ambitious, and be more commercial. (Of course, it can't be too white, that kind of white writing is really disgusting, but a little white is still good for newcomers.) Sharpen your writing skills, and finally let me talk about the style of your current novel. It is actually relatively niche, and the writing skills are not good, so no one will read it at all. I don't like this pig's feet, and the personality is too "realistic" (that is, too real). I think the protagonist of the novel must have a distinctive personality and cannot be written based on the author's personality. Instead, it must have a certain logic and cannot be emotional, because the emotional writing power cannot be controlled at all.

It will be on the shelves next Wednesday, January 30th. I hope you will support me a lot.

The accumulation of two million words is the foundation for your next book to become a god. Time will never let down those who are willing.

I see you, the author, giving me flowers for my book list. I feel really embarrassed. My little book list is still too little help to you. I personally suggest that the author if you have money can send you a chapter monthly ticket red envelope, or a chapter recommendation ticket package, and put it in the latest chapter. This can not only increase the number of votes, but also promote subscriptions. The publicity effect of this book may be better. Finally, I wish the author that your work will sell well.

The name is too dramatic... It's really like Nicholas Zhao Si's sense of déjà vu, and he can't look straight at it.

I will do my best to bring readers good works

You have a Western background and Eastern dialogue names. You also beep when typing, and you hit the second number again. It's very dramatic. Even if you want to watch the subsequent plot, you will be dissuaded by your writing style.

After reading the beginning, I feel that it is the same as the Warring States Period. Qin wanted to unify the earth, but other countries did not agree and wanted to resist, plus elves and dwarves and so on.