I Transmigrated into a Martial Saint

Technology System: Orthodox Technological Advancement: Mechanical technology civilization (represented by modern China, etc.) Biotechnology Civilization (Deep Space Below (Green Star Civilization)) Microscopic Civilization (Rebirth of a Super Battleship) Limitless Planetary Civilization (Great Han Technological Empire) Starry Sky Herding Civilization (Rebirth of a Super Battleship)

Seeking information on the name of a prefecture, the name of a sect, the lineage and traditions of that sect, the Daoist titles of high-ranking immortals, their paths to immortality, and their treasures, etc. For example, the Qingzhou Immortal Ape Sect has seven lineages of seven-colored apes, the Crimson Ape lineage, the Crimson Ape Immortal, and the Earth Immortal Dao Fruit.

It's better to cut it off sooner rather than later. You've made two wrong moves. Being exiled shows that you can't continue writing about the Mountain and Sea Realm. You've already collapsed by cramming so many people who are so powerful that they would be top-tier figures in other books into one realm.

Well written. The descriptions of combat and the use of Dharma forms are far more sophisticated than those in "The Peak of Azure Lotus." I suggest the author's descriptions of combat lean towards the flying sword and magic weapon descriptions in Huanzhu Louzhu's "The Legend of the Swordsmen of Shushan." This would make the combat feel worlds apart from the descriptions of combat by 90% of the authors of current cultivation novels.

Let me put it this way to the author: I care about this book even more than you do yourself, because in my opinion, it has a very good chance of becoming a masterpiece. Of course, it's slightly lacking in its artistic conception, but the flaws don't detract from its overall excellence, and it has a bright future! Keep it up!

Cultivation is too complicated! I'm completely baffled! Becoming an immortal feels like having a cheat code under other people's eyes, just like the protagonist in a book! There's also a saying that once you reach the peak of the First Grade True Immortal realm, you can transcend time and space and achieve immortality.

The entire book is about cultivation, nothing else. Is the reader reading a novel or "attending a lecture"?

The beginning is packed with too many settings; reading the novel feels like attending a class. It's tedious.

I still don't understand. What's the point of the Dao Fruits of Heaven, Earth, Human, God, Ghost, and Immortal? The protagonist can become stronger and has a higher upper limit after becoming a Human Immortal, so why don't people cultivate the simpler Human Immortal or Ghost Immortal paths to obtain Dao Fruits, increase their lifespan, and then gradually become stronger?

The writing style is too messy and disorganized, making it very tiring to read.