Blue Fist General

I just read it, and it is generally good. However, if the author does not write books under a small account, you can still see the characteristics of the new author's lack of writing skills and insufficient setting and description. However, the writing is already very good. The author should continue to work hard. (PS: If you are writing about the navy, you can refer to Naval Thor. Well, I mean that book has a better and more realistic description of the navy.)

Please note that not all shoulder bumps are against the mountain, otherwise Baji would be meaningless.

Chapter 11 Begins: The name of the benefactor does not match the style of the pirate painting... The value is too big. Will it be calculated as billions or tens of billions in the later period? This is not a mobile game. The values ​​​​do not need to be so explosive. The cold reminder said coldly. His eyes flashed and he retreated...

What is Blue Fist? He is a man who can instantly punch Luke a thousand times without losing much of his health bar.

Points to note when reading this book: 1. The protagonist is a marine. 2. A pirate can be forgiven if he repentes. Even if you, a pirate, massacres a group of marines, it will be fine, just because the pirate's granddaughter is guarding the pirate. 3. The best way to avoid attracting the attention of Admiral Akainu is: Akainu glances at you while training soldiers at the training ground of the Navy Headquarters, and then you use the dnf blue punch to retreat and run away like crazy. In the Navy Headquarters! (Sorry, I haven't played Blue Fist and don't know what skill it is.) I am very optimistic about this book. I will go and have my stomach washed first. .

TotemOnce inserted, the green light added, winning the fourth place and losing the eighth place. Type a name🤓

The writing gets worse as you go to the back! All pirates have become sx! Everyone didn't believe that the protagonist was so strong, and then rushed to die! How can we still question this about a record that has been reported dozens of times on the news? And even though it was broadcast about the fight against the four emperors, a group of little shrimps still didn't believe it and rushed forward to commit suicide 😰

The beginning still has a slight game flavor, but the writing gets better and better later on. There are not only exciting battles, but also warm and interesting daily life.

It is purely a criticism that the navy has the overlord color. I beg you to see if the Warring States Life Card has the overlord color written on it?

I feel like it would be better if the protagonist had less self-created skills. I would like to see a protagonist with a downplayed system, no missions, no health and only blue fist skills.

It's obviously time travel and it has to be made like a game with NPCs. I'm convinced.

I feel like I'm seeing an admiral

I found that many readers would ask questions in the description of the novel, so I opened this page to give some unified answers.

Is there anyone else writing this kind of introduction to a novel about a model with bad feet? ?

Yong En actually doesn't play with swords😡😡😡 One sword kills evil and one sword calms the soul. Double Swords Huazhan

The more I know about the world, the more annoying I am when I look at the navy. Mainly because they were born under the red flag and grew up in New China. Slaves are anti-human,

What is justice for the protagonist as a marine? Justice with clear distinction between grudges and grudges! Still stubborn to the end of justice! Or justice without knowing right from wrong!

Chapter 24: Death from poison. Can others understand the skills in the system? Absolutely. . . Why do you need a system?

When writing data for your novel, if you just typed: , it wouldn't be so confusing!

It feels like this is a story about using a DNF system to play the One Piece game... If you didn't tell me, I would have thought it was a game novel. Except for the protagonist, no one else has a personality that is the same as an NPC. If an outrageous author writes old-fashioned game articles, they will definitely become popular (PS: Remember, it is an old-fashioned online game and not a virtual world game because the reason why virtual is virtual is because their NPCs have personalities that are more like the real world 🙄)

The theme is good, but the characters are the same as NPCs

The theme is good, but taking on quests is too cumbersome. Just fight monsters and level up.

Every master and disciple is a being that can destroy the world with one blow. This is not an apostle either.