Becoming an Apostle, Starting with One Piece

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ ​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ Out of the third world, straight to Curry, really can't stand it, a female character appears out of nowhere, inexplicably gets better, looking at you like this, will you take her through time together in the future? If you are really lonely on the journey, I suggest you write an elf character. Don't you think it would be inconvenient to have a DNF-like pet with the entire heroine? PS: I really want to start complaining, but years of training have made me hold back.

It feels like the protagonist is a robot at the end, without emotions, and has an attitude towards everything. Regarding the changes to the Naruto world, I just kill them directly and don't give any suggestions. He is as indifferent to other people and things as the Terminator and follows the program without any interaction. He talks to the top management throughout the whole process, shows his strength, kills, talks, and the next one. Reading fatigue

It looks really awkward ever since the girl hope Muxue appeared.

I'll wait for the author to finish writing the next world.

I feel that the setting of Destiny Child denies everything about the protagonist. If you just make a great wish, you can become stronger than the protagonist. If you make a great wish that transcends everything, wouldn't you be invincible?

The new ones are not going to be about the old plot of a hero saving a beauty and then committing himself to it! Even if it's about a female protagonist, the foreshadowing is too stiff! Originally, the protagonist's emotions were suppressed, and the Valkyrie was written to be passive and awesome, but now a heroine who endures pain has failed! It feels so silly! I think it is the first time for an author to write a novel. If the writing is not very good, it is best not to read it twice. Otherwise, you can kill it invincibly like in the pirate world, or you can cooperate with those who want to see the harem! Trying it twice will get you nothing! ! !

I read Chapter 142, and I always feel that humanity is gone, and men's instinct for women is gone. Even if you just play with a few women in the passing world, or write yourself as a bad guy, it is better than having no sense of humanity, and you can't get into it. It doesn't matter whether you do whatever you want or stick to whatever you want, but don't lose your humanity. People are reading your book, not anything else. It feels like you, the author, can hardly understand what you are writing about? ? ?

She is most likely to be the heroine. . But author, you really don't want to change the settings of your fateful person? It's equivalent to the protagonist's efforts in the future. No matter how much resources are used, no matter how big the trick is, the buff of this fateful person will put her on the same level as the protagonist, and she is still a ghost. . Although they are all cheating, it is obvious that the heroine's cheating is better than that of the male protagonist.

How should I put it,,, after reading it, I feel that it is a bit too belittling the fighting power of One Piece,,,, the rest is fine

How should I put it, in my eyes, ever since the protagonist was able to destroy the world of pirates, I feel more and more that the protagonist is no longer a human being, and his indifferent attitude towards everything has completely turned into a robot. But now I see Naruto. I hope that the original world can at least make the protagonist more humane...