Tower of Fortune

Come on, author, I feel like this book will be a hit!

I was really amazed by the Xianxia part, but then the time traveler appeared and I was a little confused after entering the so-called main text. I honestly don't know how you can fill in these holes, such as Shisui's eyes, which are so invincible. And after returning to the main world, I don't know what the meaning of these abilities is. The main thing is not to say that time travel is impossible, the main thing is that the writing of Naruto and the like is bad, and it is hard to accept that it has no characteristics. Or if you, Shisui, open your eyes, you feel that Naruto is finished. I suggest that when writing about another world, the author should focus on the ability to cultivate immortality, and other abilities should be the qualifications for cultivating immortality.

Since cutting can make you stronger, why not? What is the protagonist afraid of?

I just saw that I got the Tower of Luck. It was written well before, but then there was another system, unlimited streaming, and various animation worlds. I died of poison and slipped away.

A hundred years is a good start, why not write about a school of mortals cultivating immortals?

I feel that any of the supporting characters are more decisive and wiser than Pig's Knuckle. Pig's Knuckle is useless except for its golden fingers. While killing a master who has been there for decades, he is being pretentious for strangers. Goodbye.

The part about cultivating immortals is really nice. I hope the part about traveling through time can be weakened.

The recent chapters have gotten better, please keep up the good work, author💪

I feel like the parts that are on the shelves but not yet on the shelves look good, and they feel a bit broken.

Why is it similar to other wizarding novels? It feels like the same academies recruit apprentices, and then take a boat to the academy, something goes wrong in the middle, and they are captured by the evil sect. Then in the evil sect, will they have to do a few near-miss and hugely rewarding tasks, and will they have to provoke one or two enemies that they can't afford to offend for the time being? Isn't it, uh, no, I already have skills, rune stones and alchemy! The next step is to hide. By the way, is there a street with small stalls and hawkers in the evil sect? If you are really serious, will you encounter plots such as picking up leaks and being slapped in the face? Now that you have reached the fifth level of Qi training, do you need to take medicine when you arrive at the base? Do you have a confidante? Do you have a younger brother?