Good Thing I Have a Training Room

I'm back! I've quit my old job, and before I starve, I've decided to write novels full-time, updating daily. I'm determined to finish "Luckily I Have a Training Room" no matter what. I've already disappointed many people; this time, I won't let them down. Come back, everyone!

Author, you might starve to death if you quit your job to write novels. To be honest, after reading your book, I don't think it's terrible, but it's definitely not a good book either. This little book has a chaotic narrative, abrupt plot twists, and terrible descriptions of geographical locations and environments. Maybe the only thing that's passable is the writing style.

I rummaged through over 200 chapters, a jumbled mess. In short: it's a hodgepodge of stories about appendixes pieced together. The protagonist has a cheat code, but during development, the appendix suddenly reincarnates, causing him to lose everything and start over, his status steadily declining. The key issue is the lack of clear message; every new setting feels like a series of different dimensions, then suddenly it all comes to nothing.

If you finish writing each world, and the protagonist becomes invincible in each world, then I think your book's performance should reach a higher level. Currently, each world is only progressing 10% to 70%, which is completely unsatisfying and frustrating to watch. Each world seems to be riddled with plot holes… I suggest watching *Mystery Journey* again before looking at yours. Your structures are similar, but yours lacks the satisfying pace.

It's getting better and better. Starting from Lin Valley, it feels just like the beginning of the book. Stop with the dimensional ascension. Ascension is better than dimensional ascension. It's just that the dimensional ascension was written messily and left some plot holes. I haven't even written a little bit about it properly before it's dimensional ascension again. Since there is a concept of past dimensions, there must be higher-dimensional worlds!

The author excels at writing beginnings, and the start and setting of each world are well-written. The middle sections are also acceptable, but each world ends without a conclusion; you think you're reading a book, but you're actually playing ten versions of a game, and you can't beat any of them.

This book is ruined by having too many protagonist names. It would have been better if the protagonist was called Su Qiulian from the beginning. After reincarnation, others would call him Chen Qingyan, and he would call himself Su Qiulian. Because as you read on, you lose track of who the protagonist is. There's no clear anchor point, and the ascension to higher dimensions becomes even more chaotic!

Chaos, that's the only word. Currently, there are three volumes: Desert Island, Pot, and Wizard. There were too many ambiguous parts in the middle, some parts were not completed, and then it suddenly changed course and ran away, from martial arts to infinite game, and then to Western fantasy. It felt like none of the genres were fully developed, but none of them were satisfying enough.

I don't object to the concept of switching worlds, but after switching worlds, only the second life perfectly inherited the memories, and the rest are just fragments. He only knows that he is a reincarnation. Especially in the third life, he directly discarded everything from the previous life, leaving only the training room setting.

Trying to write too much actually made things worse. The earlier lives were just setup and don't need much elaboration. It would have been better to start with the life before ascending to the next realm. The earlier lives could have been briefly described as the "cheat codes" in the training room, or even included as a few extra chapters.