Good Thing I Have a Training Room

I have returned and quit my original job. Before I starved to death, I decided to write novels full-time and update them steadily every day. This book "Fortunately I Have a Practice Room", I have to finish writing it no matter what. I have disappointed many people, and I will definitely live up to it this time. Come on, everyone!

Author, you might starve to death if you quit your job to write novels. To be honest, I read your book and I can't say it's bad, but it's really not a good book. The narrative of this little book is confusing, the plot twists are abrupt, and the geographical location and environment are poorly described. Maybe the writing is just okay.

I looked at more than 200 pictures at random. To sum it up in one sentence: It's pieced together with countless appendix stories. The protagonist has a problem, and as a result, he is suddenly reincarnated during the development process. He loses everything and starts from scratch. The further he gets, the lower he becomes. The key is that I don't know what to express. There are countless planes without changing a place, and then it suddenly ends without any problem.

If every world is finished, the protagonist will become invincible in every world. In this case, I think the score of your book will be improved to a higher level. Now, each world is only 10% to 70% advanced. There is no sense of excitement at all. It is very frustrating to watch. Each world digs a lot of holes... I suggest you watch "Mysterious Journey" again and then look at your own. Your structure is very similar, but yours is not refreshing enough.

Gradually getting better, starting from Lingu, the same feeling as at the beginning of the book is back. Don't worry about ascending the dimension. Ascension is better than ascending the dimension. It's just because the writing of the ascending dimension is messy and I dug a hole. I didn't write it carefully before I ascended the dimension again. Since there are concepts in the past dimensions, there is a high-dimensional world!

The author is good at writing the beginning. The beginning and setting of each world are OK, and the middle part is also okay, but each world escapes or jumps without an ending; you think you are reading a book, but in fact you are playing ten versions of the game, and you cannot pass each level.

This book is ruined by the fact that the main character has too many names. Just call him Su Qiulian at the beginning. After you are reincarnated, others will call you Chen Qingyan, and you can call yourself Su Qiulian. Because just looking at it, you don't know who the main character is? Without a positioning anchor point, the writing of Dimension Upgrade will be even more confusing!

Chaos, just one word. There are currently three volumes: Desert Island, Pot, and Wizard. There are too many mysterious parts in the middle, and some of them are unfinished. Suddenly, I changed direction, switching from martial arts to infinite games, and then to Western fantasy. I feel that neither genre is fully developed, but neither genre is satisfying enough.

I don't reject the setting of changing the world, but after changing the world, only the second life perfectly inherits the memory, and the rest are fragments. I only know that I am the reincarnation, especially the third life. I just throw away everything before, leaving only the setting of the practice room. It can be said The protagonist has been changed and turned into a licking dog. There are still many unresolved worlds, which gives people a very frustrated feeling. The protagonist's brain is not very good, and I am really speechless. The more I watch, the more frustrated I am. Really, seeing Anna constantly surrounding me really makes me sick to the core.

If I want to write too much, I will fall behind. The previous lives are just the foreshadowing and there is no need to go into too much detail. It is better to start from the life before I was promoted to the previous school. The previous lives can be abbreviated as plug-ins in the training room, or I can write a few extra chapters. The upper world is written more than the previous ones. The book is solid, there are no such strong plug-ins, the style has also changed, it is a bit fragmented, and there are too many parts in the previous lives, and there will always be some parts that have not been dealt with well. After reading, people just want to skip or abandon the book, and have not seen the upper world. I hope the author can gradually get better.