The Strongest Sect of All Times

I said at the beginning that it is poisonous, fellow Taoists don't believe it, Shen Nong must taste the herbs, why bother hiahia

Obviously there is still a lot to be written, and there are still many holes to be filled in, but this book is marked with completion. I feel very disappointed and sad. I usually read books during the day and at night whenever I have free time. I read these two thousand chapters day and night for several days. When it suddenly ends, it makes people feel like they have lost something. Obviously they still have a lot to finish. I haven't seen Jun Changxiao and Hua Meigui's children, I haven't seen how their descendants pretend to be cool in the world (I haven't seen the discomfort of pretending to be real), I haven't seen Gu Chaoxi and his fiancée, I haven't seen how the corpse-carrying man resurrected his wife, I haven't seen Xi Jingyao's feelings for Jun Changxiao (she is like a tool from beginning to end, she seems to have received attention, but it seems not, her explanation is too pale) and the senior sister Some details and stories about why I was so moved towards Jun Changxiao (maybe I explained it, but I think it's not enough). I didn't see the situation between Xiao Sinji and her ex-fiancée (it probably shouldn't matter, but I just wanted him to have a good ending. I was really sad when he died, so I thought he could have a partner). I didn't see He Wudi returning home, I didn't see them entering the land of eternal life, and many, many more. Some might say that just because a story is finished doesn't mean their story is over. Indeed, I can imagine the sparks between them, I can imagine their future, I can imagine a world in which I will add all my regrets, but after all, it is just imagination, there is no definite answer, and what I look forward to is just fantasy. I can't help it. I'm really sorry and disappointed. I really want to see the continuation of their story, but it's over. All we can do is limitless imagination, but what the author can do is really give them real life. I am not a professional reviewer and cannot give good reviews, and I may not be a good reader either. I am always relieved to talk to them, but I am a seeker of knowledge with a desire for their stories, and a listener who hopes to hear the next chapter of the storyteller. Regrets in life are always necessary, but time can always give the answer. I hope to see the follow-up in my lifetime, but I think it is unlikely. (Don't troll me, you are right if you troll me. My writing is not good and I just express my thoughts.)

The game is too big, and there is no more material in the stomach. The content of the book is getting less and less, and it has deviated from the original direction. You have failed in writing this book. Please finish writing a new book as soon as possible. Old readers have no motivation to read. A friendly reminder.

It's not even a novice, it's forced to show off, it's not fun at all, and the whole process is awkward.

Lu Xianxian is definitely the biggest poisonous point in this book. She appears in a pitiful way but she is the most important heroine in the protagonist's heart... And I am also convinced by her cold personality. I really think she is so good**

The first part of this book was okay, it was funny, and the sect atmosphere was good. It belongs to the category of cool writing. But after the Upper World plot, it felt like the plot had changed. The first point is that there is a huge gap between the sect leader and his disciples. Many important plots are completed by only one person, and the disciples are a bit like tool men. Secondly, many interesting disciples hardly have any plots in the later period and there is no mention of it. The more I look at it, the more I feel that this is not a sect, but more like a brotherhood. Without the sect, everything can be done by pig's feet and a few brothers' hammers. The second point is that various systems are gradually beginning to collapse. Not to mention the cultivation system, let's talk about the existence of the upper realm and other realms. It is too similar to the various plane systems in the lower realm. But the Plane Battlefield solves the complex difficulties of conquering millions of planes, but you don't have the upper realm. If you really rely on this kind of spaceship to conquer, it would be too cumbersome. Secondly, after watching the plot, conquering other worlds seems a bit too childish. One last point: the system of sect style is too vague. I know the author wants to create a different sect. But it is still a sect in essence. I feel that the author is too extreme. The sect basically didn't take care of it, mainly due to the intrusions of Pig's Feet and a few core disciples. The sect seems to have become an accessory. There are also too few disciples in the sect. I remember correctly that the sect has barely recruited people on a large scale since it came to the upper realm. Not to mention the qualifications of the disciples in the upper realm, even in the upper realm, the number of Xuan-level sect disciples is not less than a million. But does the Eternal Sect really rely on these nearly 100,000 disciples and various mechas to become famous in all worlds? In addition to the latest plot of flying a spaceship to take all the disciples to conquer all walks of life, I feel that the sect system is a bit broken, and it feels like it is being forced. Summary: In fact, I read this book very early, starting with more than a hundred pictures, and I also saw the book at its most brilliant. But it seems that this book is going downhill at the moment. In fact, the writing style of Eternal Life is very similar to that of many novels. For example, Zhutian City and Creating Super Fantasy. However, the Eternal writing method may be refreshing in the early stage, but in the later period, the map becomes larger and more complex, and the realm spans, etc. Make the author's sect writing method too restrictive for the future structure. The result is that the new Conquest of All Realms plot is a bit like One Piece and loses the flavor of the sect. I hope the author will think carefully after reading my book review. Otherwise it will really collapse, which is what we don't want to see.

I read more than 400 chapters, and I was furious. I read "Creating Super Fantasy" together with this book, and I have to say that the characterization in this book is really perfunctory. Although the two books have different directions, this one is more humorous, but the characters themselves are not vivid and cannot resonate with people. Moreover, in Chapter 400, the author calculated the character's fighting scenes according to combat effectiveness = strength. I sprayed a mouthful of old blood on it, wondering in my heart, could the protagonist just increase his strength and abuse the sky, the earth, and the air? Is the breakthrough just to increase combat effectiveness? The body's reaction, the energy used by the sect figures is sky-breaking? This can be seen from my chop. The male protagonist used his skills casually and fought for 5 minutes, killing a high-level person alive. Could it be that the energy of someone in a higher realm is worse than that of a male protagonist who exercises every day? Is it possible that the male protagonist can increase his energy by exercising every day, and even reaching a higher level is nothing? Although I have read more than 400 chapters, I don't feel anything at all. The division of realms, the use of energy, the reaction of the body, and the details of the battle are not reflected, and even the difficulty of the main line is unclear. Also, could the author not forcefully add drama? Obviously hunting or purchasing can be dealt with in one go, but it has to be written clearly. Don't you feel that the pace of this book is too slow? As for "Creating Super Fantasy", I read more than 500 chapters of this book with great interest and read it carefully bit by bit. According to your book, I read 400 chapters in 3 days, and I still don't even know why Qingyang is so stable? Is it natural? At 16 years old, he is as stable as an old dog, and he even dabbles in building houses. Could it be that someone with good talent and hard work can still draw blueprints naturally? There is also the Night Emperor portrayed by the author. The author obviously writes so much about psychological activities, but he always kills him with one punch when fighting? One pass? Is this the plot of the Night Emperor battle? Even the emperor may not look down on the majestic Night Emperor. The author gave the Night Emperor a top-grade spiritual root, so the Night Emperor is just a little better than other inner sects? This book has 400 chapters.

Who is the Rose Queen? If you can't decide on the heroine, don't force yourself to be a wife Forget it. Find a big boss to take you away as a disciple. If Gou Sheng doesn't want to be single, just stay single. This emotional drama is disgusting {"NickName":"Author","UserId":90646}

This book brings to life the personalities and temperaments of many supporting characters. Everyone has a different temperament and personality, but they are all teased by the protagonist, but each person's personality is still different. Ye Di is cold and arrogant and is teased by the protagonist, Li Qingyang is steady and moderate, the senior sister Lu Qianqian is cold and protective, Xiaozui is loyal to the sect, loyal to her fellow disciples, and sincere in being grateful. Li Shangtian and the others are full of passion. The little bird with flowers and roses is in love with Queen Fan and the head wife Fan. The closed disciple He Wudi has a stubborn and stable character. When Jun Changxiao hit the treasure, he turned his back and squatted down to cover his face and laughed mischievously, etc., Etc., Which were vividly written. (Many authors are not bad at writing and plotting, but they just can't describe the temperament and character of these characters. The whole book uses a mold to carve out the temperament and character of the protagonist, supporting actors and supporting actors. This is the gap.) The above content is just a personal one-sided analysis.

I have read nearly 500 chapters, and I still don't know who the heroine is. The emotional line is blurred, and all kinds of pretense are slapped in the face. I don't know why a dead thing is written to look like a human. The pace is too slow, Holy Mother Bitch, I can't stand it anymore, bye.

You can only read this book as a clown, otherwise it will be too poisonous. Changing it into a comic also depends on how good you are in the early stage and how it will collapse in the middle and later stages. Forget it if you are brainless. You haven't filled in the pit yet. It's not that your writing is not rigorous but that it's too perfunctory. As long as a person's life is good or bad, he should treat the character as a human being. One moment he said that the protagonist deliberately suppresses his emotions for the sake of the sect, and the other moment he said that the protagonist cannot understand other people's emotions. Are you a kindergarten?

This book is really good, the pig's feet are ridiculous, the supporting characters are unfair, the plot is unfair, the author is unfair, and even the readers are unfair. From time to time, people get angry, and the book friends' enthusiastic discussions and the author's interactions make the book circle very harmonious. In particular, a certain Doraemon reader is deeply loved by the author and is clearly arranged in the book. It makes me laugh every time I see it.

The protagonist's products in this system were all stolen from others, even from many, many years ago. You can make a bold guess that this system was originally the product of a certain "thief saint" who stole many treasures and then died. In the future, after the protagonist saves enough "energy" for this system, he may be able to exchange it face-to-face and steal the artifacts and beasts from the opposite side.

Author, why was your last book about a stallion? It almost poisoned me to death, but this one is still good-looking, and it's not on the same level! Have you traveled through time?

There is nothing else in this book! Just highlight one embarrassing word! If you like embarrassing things, you are right to read this book!

It's annoying to have "author's words" mixed with a certain reader's interaction in the main text. It's like adding nine turns of intestines to a meal. It affects the look and feel of the novel and destroys the continuity of the story. The emotional drama part is like a soul clan queen who studied under Jiangnan and is thousands of years old. It is written like a silly and sweet love brain. In the part about Ye Xingchen and Xingyao reconciling with Lingyao at the beginning of Chapter 1690, he wanted to kill someone because of a name. He raped the person but refused to admit responsibility. He also wanted to kill the person and silence him. He let the person go but felt that the person deserved to be messed with. Because of this, being stabbed by the Empress Lingyao in the previous life was considered a light thing.

After watching for so long, Gou Sheng finally got married. Although he was marrying the queen he just met in a playful way, he felt shattered. . . Oh no, this book crashed from the beginning 😏 It's really strange why I read it for so long

Just watch the whole process without any brains. If you watch the whole process with brains, you can withdraw. There are many poisonous points.

I have the ability to finish writing the plot of the duel against the ten Immortal Sects.

It took two days to burst the liver, and it was over. The front was okay until the whole sect ascended to the upper world. As for the back, it was difficult to describe, the rhythm was very chaotic, and all kinds of pitfalls came. The character of the protagonist kept changing, and there was no sense of exclusive image. After ascending, Jun Changxiao can be said to have changed a lot. He was once a holy mother, and then he was brainless. His emotional intelligence was suddenly 0, and suddenly he had emotional intelligence again The thing that made me complain the most was that a female protagonist, the Queen of the Soul Clan, appeared out of thin air. Hua Meigui, a direct plot marriage, using tasks to force marriage. According to the entire story line, readers who have read it think that Lu Qianqian is the real heroine, and both parties have feelings, so she becomes the heroine. The best choice, but you just created one out of thin air. I am really convinced. The protagonist originally didn't like Hua Meigui, but later on, the protagonist and Hua Meigui were brought together. Then he directly ignored Lu Qianqian. At the end, Lu Qianqian was not married, but still had Jun Changxiao in her heart, and then she accepted a female apprentice and it ended. The plot almost got messed up from Hua Meigui. It was also because of Hua Meigui that the protagonist's character kept changing, making readers feel very strange. Sometimes they can't help but wonder, is this the Jun Changxiao I saw before? At the end, the author himself said that it didn't matter anymore, it was a mess, and he could write whatever he wanted. I believe that no one who can read it will not leave a negative review. Those who gave good reviews only saw the front and not the back I was really speechless. Many authors I have read hope to write better and more perfect stories. I have never seen such a casual author. If it is the first time, my evaluation is okay. But in the second time, I am really going to faint and give a reply

No wonder, I just read a book, and it's really similar to the author's ideas. I wonder if I remembered it wrong.

This book is really relaxing and enjoyable to read. Put aside some shortcomings about the heroine and the later stage being too watery. The overall look is quite comfortable. Because most of them like to let the protagonist be bullied and hide in the trap until hundreds of chapters later to seek revenge. It's comforting how quick the author is in this area.

A well-written book, the character of Hua Meigui is well portrayed. Writing is not easy, but the author has worked hard.

This is a typical example of pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger, pretending to be cool and getting slapped in the face, boring.

It would be better if the author was more serious

The recommendation ticket was sent to me. Those who saw this book during the limited exemption period, to be honest, the logic of Shuangwen is quite different. Mainly to kill time

{"NickName":"Author","UserId":90646} I like this book written by the author very much. It can be said that this book is the first book after reading Immortal Evil God for many years that is completely funny and surpasses it! Now that the author is writing, I find that the author has a little shortcomings. I hope the author can accept it and make this work more perfect! 🙏🙏 The author is very good at describing daily life and comedy, which is the biggest advantage. Secondly, the disciples' martial arts competitions are also very distinctive and good! However, the description of the war scenes is a bit too weak. Whether it is the 5,000 disciples or the 300,000 troops, the description is too far-fetched. It gives me the feeling that with so many people, there are not as many scenes as a martial arts competition. . . In the following chapters, the author also tried his best to avoid the description of these big scenes, such as the tomb of the holy doctor, the evil cultivator, the demon cultivator, and the Tower of Death. These are all very well written! But if the author wants to let the protagonist lead a group of disciples to fight in a group, it is better to learn how to better describe the big scenes 🌹 I am not a fan, I just hope that the author can improve to a higher level!

The Rose Queen should be straightened out, what do you think?

Seeing that the author has not strayed from the topic during this period, I will give you a special reward of 100 starting coins.

The chapter in Jihan Palace was really disgusting. Although Lu Qianqian was bullied, Jihan Palace obviously wanted to accept her as a disciple, not to harm her. The Palace Master of Jihan Palace compromised and said that he could talk to her if he had something to say. Jun Changxiao didn't even ask and just started firing. He was like an unreasonable villain. Even if he was so angry and angry, could it be that he was still out of his wits and needed to create enemies for himself? If the Martial Emperor and Martial Saint of Luzhou in the northeast later went to the Eternal Sect to find a place instead of being a half-saint, would the Eternal Sect still be alive? This protagonist suddenly struck me as a nouveau riche, without the temperament of a clan leader at all.