Prove Your Dao! Great Golden Crow Emperor!

I have never read the book. I learned from the book reviews that if you read the original work, then read this one, it will be full of poisonous points. Most people who have not read the original work or have not finished it will be able to read it, but I have read the original work. Let me tell you my opinion. What do fan works rely on to attract popularity? First of all, it is not that the writing is good, but that the popularity of the original work is used to attract people to come and watch it, and there must be a large number of people who come to come to the original work. When the author is re-creating, if the substantial changes deviate too much from the original work, and the changes are made in important places such as the timeline, if it is the kind of change that the original work party cannot accept, the consequences will be obvious. When writing fan fiction, the test of the original work party cannot be passed. If you want to be popular, you have to look at them. After all, you will only read fan fiction if you like the original work. People who complain in the comments must have read the original book. If the author writes this book just for fun, forget about the comments. Just make yourself happy. If you write full-time, you still have to take complaints about reading seriously. Otherwise, where will the subscription come from? Is it in the interest of the author to write that most people subscribe? (I just say it casually, and I won't ignore you if you criticize me, hahaha)

His fairy grass, my poison. I can't resist it anymore. After reading ten chapters, I was poisoned to death. Goodbye. Never see you again.

I saw that the author wrote that the protagonist wants to kill the system. Everything for the protagonist is given by the system. As a result, he wants to kill the system. The system can advance the protagonist to the Mythical Golden Crow. You can imagine how powerful the system is! As a result, the protagonist tried to kill half of the system! The system is all highly intelligent. If it is so easy to be harmed by the protagonist, why is it called a system? The protagonist's secret code is given by the system, the Kunpeng method is also given by the system, and the martial arts double pupils are also given by the system! Author, don't you think you are inconsistent? Without the system, half of the protagonist would have been disabled, and then you forced cheating, which would be a flaw in his IQ!

Are they all recommended? ? Keep it up, I think you can order all of them when they are on the shelves⊙∀⊙!

I really can't stand the system of the world that covers the sky, and the protagonist is extremely cowardly, talking about world peace and so on, thinking of me, Ye Hei, who kills decisively, and the peerless beauty is also regarded as a pink skeleton, and turns into a wisp of ghost under the cauldron. This is the nature of an emperor. The protagonist is still entangled in the difference between a human and a monster. What kind of emperor should he be? Go home and take care of your child.

After reading three chapters, in a forbidden area, a five- or six-year-old girl appeared out of nowhere. No fool would believe her if she wasn't weird, but this protagonist still pitied others, forcibly lowered her IQ, and poisoned her to death...

How can I put it this way? I feel that there is a big problem with the settings written by the author in the early stage. Writing fan fiction is like dancing with shackles, and it is difficult to write well. But please take the original work you want to write seriously. You cannot make unreasonable changes based on a partial understanding of it. Listen to the opinions of readers. If you really want to make a living, take your book seriously and take your own efforts seriously. This book has more than 600 chapters. I believe the author has put a lot of effort into it, so don't let some small problems affect the quality of the work. Speaking of myself, I was attracted to this book by book friends who advertised it on Zhetian Zhi Eternal Sovereign. I read the first few chapters of your book carefully, and I read it with expectation and respect. I also posted long book reviews in the first few chapters to prove it. Although I couldn't stand it anymore, I didn't make any derogatory remarks in an insulting way. First of all, Zhetian has its own flavor. This is a certain difference between group portrait novels and other cool novels. Combining Zhetian with the system is a challenge for the original party to accept. The protagonist of the time travel in the second beginning is not like a diaosi who is afraid of the future or the miserable life that will follow. He is more like a warrior with a God's perspective who pretends to be afraid. My enemies in the future are very powerful. This Golden Crow is totally useless. This Golden Crow is so rubbish, but I don't know whether I should panic or not. This feeling makes readers feel uncomfortable. The three settings are not well integrated with the original system of Zhetian. Although the bloodline on Zhetian is important, the bloodline needs the environment to grow. If it is a pure bloodline, the bloodline in the Immortal Realm and the bloodline in the Nine Heavens and Ten Earths are essentially the same. Those born in the Immortal Realm basically have higher achievements than those in the Nine Heavens and Ten Earths. That is due to environmental factors, not time factors. Bloodlines will not rise or fall in nature due to the existence of time. You can say that the cultivation environment is different at different times. Different eras have different bloodline activation levels, and the lower limit can be raised. The author's bloodline and ancestral setting can be explained as the Golden Crow bloodline is stimulated by 10% in the ancient era, and in the mythical era, it can be stimulated by 50% in a good environment. In the immortal ancient era, the bloodline of the immortal king is fully stimulated, and the immortal is basically the quasi-immortal king. You can even change the bloodline development level. The plug-in system allows the protagonist to feel the cultivation speed of the immortal king bloodline in the ancient era in the ancient era. The fourth issue is the timeline. Gai Jiuyou was born after Emperor Qing retired for a thousand years. Author, the book can be modified. If you feel it is not well written, just modify it. Only high requirements can lead to high quality.

This kind of book is only suitable for novices. Old bookworms should not read it. It is too poisonous. I ran away after reading the fifth chapter. I leave this comment to warn future generations.

I couldn't stand it at all, so I just read the second chapter. There are all kinds of stupid settings and the plot is unreasonable. Has the author read the original version and the timeline? Do you know the plot details?

Shennong is dead. There are things like burning paper, small things to summon spirits, and big things like digging graves. If you really miss me, come down and stay with me. If it happens to be online, it will be purely a corpse transformation.