Shiranui Genma in Konoha

Rigorous, this is the biggest advantage of this fan novel in my opinion, and it is also rare among fan novels nowadays. So far, this book has not had that kind of illogical surge in combat power. The innovation of the protagonist's ninjutsu is also very reasonable, which made me feel comfortable both physically and mentally.

In-depth discussion on how strong the current protagonist is 1. Flying Thunder God 2nd Dan 2. Chakra is around the top of Jonin 3. New weapons plus Thunder Release 4. Rasengan variant Advantages: Know a little bit about everything, disadvantages: There is no real sure-kill skill. Looking at the Naruto world, every Kage-level master has his own special kill, such as the third generation of mixed ninjutsu, Jiraiya Sage mode, and the fourth generation of high-end Flying Thunder God! The top jounin in overall strength

If Shisui is Kagami's son, and Kagami's age is set to be 25 according to the book of formations, then is Shisui the same generation as Jiraiya and the others? No matter how big the age gap is, he is a posthumous son. He is at most ten years younger than Jiraiya and the others, so he is about the same age as Minato. . .

The writing was good in the early stage, but in the middle stage, what the hell are you doing to change the basic settings of the original work? Is Sharakagi made from fish from the Kusakawa River? In the comics, it is clearly stated that there are three small fish with accompanying tails. Now you can make countless of them for me? Since the basic setting of the original work has been changed, why don't you write that Naruto is Danzo's son?

There is no reason to be dark. Some people can be dark, such as Obito, but even Obito was just an ordinary child when he was a child. This can still be written as a mental problem. Some books have problems with their outlook on life, but the protagonists are also the protagonists in the novel. However, this book directly portrays all Uchiha as psychopaths for the purpose of black Uchiha. Is it about Itachi? ? This is a new character created entirely for the sake of blackness! !

If you open the gold finger too high, the plot will jump out, but if you open it too low, it won't be fun to watch!

Author, you said that Uchiha is too extreme, but in fact it should be you who are too extreme. You are so obsessed with Uchiha that you completely bring your emotions into the book. The book could have been 100% but because of it. Your own emotions can only be reduced to about 80%. Persistence is a good thing. But put him emotionally. It becomes a bad thing. After all, this is your book, and you should try your best to make it 100% perfect. This is a qualified author. I hope you can let go of your obsession and write a better novel. I will come to read your new book next time. This is my little personal suggestion, I hope it helps you.

I feel like the author wrote this book for Black Uchiha.

SandaiThe beating of Orochimaru was really poisonous to me, and the forced blackening was not written like that

I can't bear my desire to complain. To be honest, the novel is well written, but the "notes" that pop up from time to time really make me fed up. If you have any settings that need to be explained, would it be inappropriate for the author to put them at the end of the chapter? I'm reading a novel, give me a sentence to note something, and then pull out some irrelevant things to make up the word count. I can understand that you want to explain your own settings. After all, it is a fan, not an original work. It is normal to have your own ideas. But could you please stop inserting a "note" in the middle of the text from time to time?

It's quite poisonous. I probably haven't seen it since Shippuden. Uchiha is arrogant, not stupid. He has power but is lonely. This is a proper Uchiha Danzo.

You shouldn't use one surname to beat the whole thing to death with a stick. Although I also hate some characters, if you deny all the characters connected with them because of some characters, then there will be problems with your three views. It is like hating people in a certain place indiscriminately because the region is black, or implicating the children because the father has made mistakes. I hate this kind of mentality. White Fang was written to death, and the Uchiha girl also committed suicide after being sprayed by Uchiha. Let's consider it as a foreshadowing. I just saw this. If there is no bend behind it, then it will definitely be impossible to book it all.

This novel was really well written in the early stage, with a compact plot and reasonable plot. It is among the best among all the Naruto fanfics I have read, but it is a pity that it fell apart in the later stage...

I feel that the author has no passion for writing, and what he writes later is as lifeless as a middle-aged man who has been married for 20 years and pays his wife regular wages every month! ! !

The plot has collapsed by now. The development and prosperity of Konoha is just a dry positive narrative, not to mention the evil god in this chapter, Pluto. . I have to say it was too hasty. Moreover, the descriptions of the protagonist's fights are becoming increasingly vague. . Well:-(

Know what will happen in the future. But nothing changed, he was still dead. Boring. 🪖

The author is an Uchiha black. Do you know what this book is about?

Tauren. . . Ugh, that's a little gross! Change the title of the book! "My wife, beheaded by a thousand people"

The first and middle stages were very rigorous, but as I was in a hurry to finish the book, I felt like I was just writing casually afterward.

So, Genma Shiranui's daughter is Mai Shiranui?

Good guy, Nari Yamanaka really made me look good.

It's pretty good, but the writing is a bit bland, there's no climax, and the heroine is mute

I read a book called Diary of a Doctor in Konoha, where Orochimaru turned himself into a woman and gave birth to two children in order to be with the male protagonist.

The first half is really well written and very rigorous. I haven't ordered the rest yet. I'll read it when I have time.

Damn, you are the one who has both wisdom and courage!

Ninja Dependence vol.8

It's a good seedling. The author is very rigorous and has a lot of research. I haven't seen anything poisonous yet. It's just that there are few chapters and it's not enjoyable to read (laughs)... I'll collect and fatten it first. Come on, author! Ps: I hope the author will not forcefully kill the plot for the sake of the plot. Many fans want to change the fate of the plot characters at the beginning. However, in order to prevent the plot from going crazy, they forcefully return to the main plot, such as Night of the Nine Tails. In short, this fan novel is quite comfortable to read. I hope the author will update it more!

Naruto itself is not reality, so don't worry too much about some things

A good Naruto article. Compared with other fan fiction, it is more like a completion of the details of the original Naruto settings, such as the water curtain hole of the four-tailed Monkey King, the source of some artifacts such as the Eight-foot Mirror and Ten Fist Swords, Hidan's immortal body, and where the evil god of death Pluto is, giving a more reasonable explanation.

Is this a book that someone wrote by themselves?