Analyzing the Ninja World from Konoha

The part about the Kyuubi Incident was really poorly written. Although Konoha suspects that the protagonist is difficult because of some unfounded things, the male protagonist also has a big problem. 1. You must know that the male protagonist's adoptive father, Yuhi Mahiku, also died in this incident. Not to mention other people related to the male protagonist, the male protagonist really cares about the safety of Minato, Kushina, Yuhihi Mahiku and Kurenai, and will not hang around outside for half a year, and has to wait until Minato He only remembered this matter after summoning him back, which means that if Minato hadn't summoned him, he would have simply forgotten about it... I don't understand why it was written like this at all. Apart from making the reader feel that the male protagonist is heartless and heartless, is there any benefit? This problem is not the first time. It was also the same when Teacher Ueno died before. From the time when the male protagonist went to the D13 stronghold to before her sacrifice, there was no description of this character at all (no description at all in the literal sense). On the other hand, the male protagonist pretended to be in front of Ye Cang and his two teammates. He knew that Sunagakure was likely to attack the Konoha camp, but he sat on the sidelines and never thought that she might be in danger. I even doubted whether he still remembered such a person. As a result, after Teacher Ueno died, the male protagonist began to reflect and grieve in various ways. Why did he go there so early? Don't know what it means at all. 2. After returning to the village, I stopped acting out spoilers. In the past, when I heard and saw some information that was theoretically impossible to grasp (such as Kushina's pregnancy and the seal will loosen when a Jinchuriki is pregnant), I would act shocked. Now I don't act out any more. What was not suspicious at first has become suspicious. 3. Can't the Sandai and Danzo say something as big as preventing the Nine-Tails incident when they know that they are already under suspicion? Can't Minato and Kushina also say it? Just tell me directly that you learned from members of a mysterious organization that they are planning to attack Konoha on this day. Will what happens next happen? Although I think it is quite ridiculous for the author to write that Minato would suspect the male protagonist because of such unfounded things. Or maybe you don't care about spoilers in the drama anyway, and all kinds of information will be thrown around later, so why are you so reserved now? However, the male protagonist does not tell others about his preparations and plans throughout the whole process. With both parties already mentally tense and sensitive, any move will only arouse additional suspicion and suspicion. It can only be said to be forcibly creating conflicts. 4. How did they manage to move the delivery room quietly when the male protagonist was so sensitive? Moreover, the male protagonist has many means such as spiritualization (the male protagonist used illusions or other methods to deceive or get rid of the Anbu, the huge chakra and aura of the Kyuubi is very obvious), White Zetsu, Flying Thunder God (the Flying Thunder God mark was left on Kushina's hand beforehand, otherwise it can only explain that the male protagonist's perception ability, and in the case of physical contact, can not see through the disguise of others) and many other means, how could he not find the real delivery room after the accident? It can only be said that it is a forced intelligence.

Save the flow: The author thinks that helping Sarutobi Hiruzen is a good Hokage

The so-called "Three Generations Conspiracy Theory" is essentially the product of the three-way struggle between the author's plot design, character setting and readers (pursuing logical self-consistency). When a short plot is changed into a long plot, there must be problems both externally and internally. Problems and reversals need to occur in the plot. Then something goes wrong. The problem, analyzed according to realistic logic, is that the top person in charge is the Third Hokage. The fault can only be paid by the top person in charge who is not dead. However, the problem is that Kishimoto's initial character design for the third generation is the "kind Shinobu", so this will definitely lead to different settings before and after. So my evaluation of the third generation is that the plot needs a tool man. First there is the plot design, and then there is him. According to the design, you will not die so quickly. The embarrassing thing about the tool man of the third generation is that he must be a symbol of peace to support the warmth of Konoha, and also I should take the blame for the subsequent plot, even if things are inconsistent Nowadays, the attitude of many fan authors towards the third generation is just a tool. When I need it, I will smile and show you the book of seals. When I don't need it, I will collude with Danzo. All evil behaviors are my acquiescence.

Yuan Fei's Hiruzen is just like Li Longji who died late. He died in the Nine-Tails Rebellion and was a good Hokage.

There are all kinds of inconsistencies, and the protagonist looks smart, but is actually very stupid. Not to mention other poisonous points in the article, let's just say that when Kushina gave birth, she made a real and fake delivery room, and the pig's feet were guarded for a long time before she finally found out that they were fake. Man, I clearly have white skills and can arrest him at any time. What have I done?

Please, can you please take a look at the original Naruto novel? I haven't read the original work I haven't watched a single episode of the anime in 800 years. I just saw some conspiracy theories from others and believed it Hyuga Hizashi. In the manga, the third Hokage was the main fighting faction. They were all ready to start a war. As a result, Elder Hyuga was in trouble. The bottom of the salary White teeth, if you bring into the Japanese Bushido culture, you will feel that there is nothing wrong with death . If you bring into the comics, a TM will only describe a few things, and the slanders and insults of the residents are all after the animation itself Plus, judging from the comics, the mission failed - was attacked by teammates - he committed suicide due to depression, and it was gone It was also said that the Uchiha clan, Uchiha Fugaku wanted to rebel from the beginning to the end, and the anime inexplicably gave a Wanka setting, and it looked like a Like good people, the only thing in the comics is to rebel directly with a knife I don't want to read a comic + setting, let's just watch the anime You can say that the third generation is stupid and stupid, but for Konoha, he is definitely a good Hokage, who else can be replaced in the same position? If it had been anyone else, let alone the second and third wars, we would have been divided in the first war

It's hard to hold on, the chaos of the Nine Tails is purely disgusting.

The time travel at the beginning was a bit far-fetched, I had to explain it forcefully, but I didn't stick to the first three chapters. Later, I saw that the results were better, so I watched it again, and it seemed to be okay. The mid-term development was okay, but it inexplicably promoted some people. After reincarnation, they also developed the underlying combat power. The third generation of Hokage is basically one of the best Hokages in the history of Konoha. This is not what we are talking about. , It was commented by Konoha Village itself. Looking at the original work, there is no conspiracy theory about the third generation in the original work. The conspiracy theory talks about Danzo, a shinobi hero in the early stage, and a good old man in the later stage. Konoha has two periods when it is weakest, both during the reign of the third generation of Hokage. Well, after I read the Hokage several times, I judge that Kakashi is more popular, and Asuma is about one year younger. In this book, Kakashi will be able to do Chidori at the age of 7? In the original work, Kakashi is 12 years old, and Chidori has not yet fully mastered it. Moreover, Chidori was developed under the guidance of Minato Namikaze. Really, A-level ninjutsu is nothing. In the original work, it took Minato Namikaze three years to develop the Rasengan. You can think about how difficult it is to develop ninjutsu. In the original work, Naruto did not even have a C-level ninjutsu when he graduated. A civilian ninja graduated with only three-level ninjutsu and low-level teleportation skills plus ninja knowledge. In this book, Kai opened 4 doors when he was about 8 years old? Even if you don't die, you have to be useless. The side effects of the eight gates are quite big. The original work may not reflect it very well. Xiao Li only opened the fifth gate when he was 13 years old. When you come out, the entire tribe will have to absorb chakra and replenish the ecological environment of senjutsu chakra for the entire tribe. You are being plotted by the third generation, and you have to send a genin genius medical ninja to do a dangerous mission. Moreover, you are obviously related to the second of the three ninjas. You don't look at the monk's face and you look at the Buddha's face. You are A-level and S-level at the beginning. Are all the jounin and chunin in the Hokage Village dead? Even if three wars occur, the ninjas who have just graduated from the ninja school will not be sent out first. That is not to go to the battlefield, but to die. Only when the bottom level combat power is really gone in the middle and late stages will the novice ninjas be sent out. Otherwise, the novice ninjas will die, and the queen of Konoha Village will If you don't take up the job at the early stage, other ninja villages will be wiped out. In the early stage, novice ninjas can only do logistics and the like. They kill Danzo's team out of nowhere. At the age of 8 or 9, they are plotted by Danzo. They don't have any brains anymore. It's a bit hard to persevere.

My day: Get up and curse Naruto a few words to wake him up At breakfast, compare the bacon on the table to Choji and curse a few words to appetize See the tomato in the meal at noon and think of Kushina and curse a few words Afternoon tea, see Sakura at the next table and say a few words Big forehead While taking a walk, I saw Metkai running with his father and taunting the ten thousand years genin During dinner, I thought about Hinata being the daughter of the Hyuga clan leader who is not good at fighting and scolding him happily. Before going to bed, I saw Uchiha being exterminated, taunting Sasuke and escaping. One day is not enough. I woke up the next day and thought that Shino Aburame was unlucky in the insect arts, and at breakfast I laughed at Xiao Li for not being able to do ninjutsu. In the afternoon, I chewed my tongue at Kakashi's father, and ridiculed Iruka for being an orphan. In the afternoon, he ridiculed Iruka for being an orphan I took a walk and called Orochimaru a gloomy monster, and scolded Uchiha Itachi for his withdrawn character Dinner joke was that Neji was born in a bad family, saying that Tenten was a boring weirdo Sleep He mocked Jiraiya for being a jerk and thought Tsunade didn't look like a girl Calling Shizune cowardly and easy to bully, calling Mitarashi Anko unlucky Mocking Moonlight Hayate as a sick young man, ostracizing Inuzuka Kiba and his clan members Criticizing Yamato as Gen's weird tool, and Saki Sakai as a cold-blooded puppet Calling Shisui a hidden danger to the village, alienating Konohamaru, Udon, and Moehuang Criticizing Kurama Yakumo as a disaster star. Count all the weirdos in the village and sleep with peace of mind

These chapters all have conflicts and are written inexplicably An unknown strong man defeated your men. Is it worth starting a war out of nowhere without investigating his origins and abilities? As the shadow of a village, without considering how many people will die, starting a war out of nowhere? We start a war just for the sake of so-called face. The Hokage has political thinking, doesn't the Raikage not? The brainless one is Benzi Lei, not Raikage And the appearance of the second tail is also inexplicable. You can also ask Erwei to track the protagonist, and then receive the negative energy of the evil god, and then go berserk and fight with the protagonist. It's much better than you showing up unexpectedly and then fighting.

I haven't watched an episode of Naruto yet! It all depends on everyone at the starting point

In fact, I feel that there are no conspiracy theories in the original Naruto. The characters behave as they are, and there is nothing profound. Because the original author does not have such deep political thoughts, the political plot about the upper echelon of Konoha is very trivial. As a result, many authors have to use conspiracy theories and other secondary creations to fill in the plot, otherwise the plot will be very nonsense and the logic will be different.

1. There are few poisonous points, the protagonist is clean and tidy, and some scenes are actually quite touching. 2. Have your own ideas, be innovative, and have few routines. 3. The text is also written smoothly and logically. 4. Two monthly tickets are presented.

I feel like some people just make wild comparisons without understanding it at all, such as politics or conspiracy theories, except for the loopholes caused by not wanting to draw a long story in the early stage, such as The Strongest Hokage. According to the plot of Naruto itself, the third generation of apparently conservative monarchs led Konoha through two ninja wars and supported civilian ninjas, and its educational philosophy also indirectly supported Kai's emphasis on hard work and the development of physical ninjas. Overall, the third generation promoted internal harmony and talent diversity, and also exposed hesitation in dealing with potential threats. This is in line with the typical characteristics of conservative monarchs: consolidating the foundation, but sometimes lacking decisive changes.

My suggestion is to delete Chapter 1 and start directly from Chapter 2.

If it is a lack of security at the beginning, then from the moment you start to become stronger quickly, you should no longer think about it. Writing about how strong you have become while still struggling at the same time, don't you feel conflicted?

Chapter 1: Choosing BUG is speechless. It's like giving you 100 million in cash or a billionaire's plan. A billionaire's plan is more tempering. There are endless hardships, so I choose the plan 😥

When I read the introduction, I thought it was a novel setting, but it turned out to be a genius character wearing a chip skin. It is said that the protagonist has an adult mind, but he is still a bit like a child in every aspect, and there is no sense of expectation for the subsequent plot.

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Finally caught up with the latest chapter, you tell me that the 4th generation is still going to die?

Resurrection? Spending so much resources and time just to treat Tsunade's illness? If you have strength, push forward. If you don't have strength, cultivate your own power. When the time comes, kill everyone who refuses to accept it. Your resurrection and benefits are completely unequal.

Why do so many people spray again? It feels okay.

All plans were in vain, and fate was left to the conscience of the senior management. Hiding one's strength and finally revealing it can be a cool thing. The result was dealt with as a big point of depression, and in a way that was tested by people close to me. Anyway, if I were the protagonist, I would definitely be desperate.

All the problems were caused by Minato's early death. Just like Uchiha, Minato is capable of solving it. Tsunade ran away because of the war Except for White Fang and Orochimaru, everything else was basically fine.

I don't care if the concept of war is disgusting. All the weird and risqué operations in the third war can be ignored. I don't think it's okay for the protagonist to conduct human experiments on enemy ninjas or villains. After all, there is a bottom line. Even the Psychic Beast Island of the Sea Kingdom cheated and deceived without breaking through the bottom line. But! Called Orochimaru a companion, helped him escape, and even invited him to participate in scientific research? When Orochimaru kidnapped ninjas from the same village and conducted various human experiments, I felt that I couldn't bear it and wasted money.

Excellent Naruto fanfic, keep up the good work, keep up the good work!

No wonder the more you write, the less monthly tickets you get 😅

After watching Night of the Kyuubi, I found that the authors who wrote about Naruto were afraid that the protagonist's combat power would be too strong. If they wrote about being invincible, there would be nothing to write about. Therefore, most of the stories looked good in the early stage and then became smart later, and many readers know the performance of combat power better than the author. The result is that the writing is full of loopholes and is neither logical nor reasonable.

Generally, people who talk about conspiracy theories do not understand foreign cultures. Foreign countries are generally not centralized, but are negotiated by a group of people, and there are many subordinates and superiors. However, our culture has only one core, and the core is the same. This is the difference between brain circuits.

Well worth a look! I hope that the subsequent plot will also maintain this rhythm 😁