Konoha: Crayon Shin-Chan's Hokage Journey

I like the warm and novel style very much. I will continue to keep reading and will subscribe to support.

I haven't seen such a warm Naruto work for a long time.

Not bad, not bad

It actually makes me feel that this is Nohara Shinnosuke himself A very stylish book...

It's purely personal information: The author's description of Xiaoxin seems to be a little bit worse. Xiaoxin's naughty behavior seems not to be written out. Maybe it's because of the background of Naruto, so it's not too naughty. This will create a very big conflict later on, the issue of battle and war. Does the author want to write about Xiaoxin as the main character or Naruto as the main character? I mainly wrote about Xiaoxin, but I didn't write about the feeling of watching Xiaoxin's anime itself. The story is mainly about Naruto, and Xiaoxin will be asked to participate in the battle later. Will it be a sandman? Maybe, it will not be flattering on both sides, making people feel that Xiaoxin has become a virgin bitch. Enemies have invaded the village, and all the friends I know have been injured or disabled. Xiaoxin says he hates you and just knocks out the enemies. It feels awkward.

Has the author actually watched Naruto? What kind of bullshit did the Hokage have half sleeves? . .

Ninja, no matter how you hide it, how can a profession that is mainly about killing be integrated with the core of Xiaoxin's character that is funny on the outside but gentle on the inside? How do you change it? Maybe I haven't seen much of it.

There is something wrong with the writing, and I don't know how to improve it. I guessed it right. The quality of this book has plummeted since the war between cats and dogs. In the end, it was not considered a high-quality product. Before the war between cats and dogs, the quality was definitely on the level of high-quality products and thousands of orders. As a result, I was playing myself to death.

The level of spoofing is too low, not at all the level of spoofing that I think Xiaoxin is, just like a slightly lustful child.

Shouldn't your dream be to marry all the beautiful big sisters in the ninja world? 🙂 Become the Hammer Hokage

How should I put it? I feel like the protagonist is no longer Xiaoxin, and it wouldn't be inconsistent if he were replaced by someone else.

It's just right for tomatoes, but a bit too strong for starting point.

Crayon Shin-chan in Naruto? So how to solve the fighting in this world? Making dumplings or playing house? It's really killing me, it feels so different.

I regret ordering it. What the hell are cats and dogs in these ten chapters? Everyone is wise, especially Maruhoshi Kosuke.

Xiaoxin grew up like this?

Chapter 800 comes, Xiao Che and Xiao Xin fight fiercely

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The plot of 5-year-old Xiaoxin maintaining low-level daily tasks in the world of Naruto is great. Crayon Shin-chan is only 5 years old, so the grown-up Shin-chan can only be a side story. The Battle of Cats and Dogs was about to stop before I finished watching it. For me, it has strayed away from the main selling point. Looking at the comment section, the follow-up doesn't seem to be in line with my point of view. Cats and Dogs' previous plots and characters are great! Of course, the plot of cats and dogs cannot be said to be bad, as it is very good as a side story.

To be honest. Cats and dogs pulled after being put on the shelves. Shinnosuke travels through Naruto. For example, what I want to see is Shinnosuke's impact on the plot of Naruto. This was better before it was put on the shelves. Regarding the author's original plot, to be honest, I think it's pretty watery. There may also be readers who like the current way of writing, which makes it difficult to adjust the emphasis. The author has carefully considered whether he is going to write Shin-chan's special Naruto episode? Or write about Shinnosuke in the world of Naruto? Think clearly.

To be honest, from Saiki Kusuo's time traveling through Naruto to Demon Slayer's time traveling through Naruto, this is the third other world time traveling Naruto I've seen that was well written, but the first two were already eunuchs. I hope you can stick with it until Xiaoxin graduates.

I skipped the battle between cats and dogs because it was boring. Since you are writing about Xiaoxin, it is definitely about daily life, but readers want to see Xiaoxin's influence on the characters in the world of Naruto and the bond with them.

The text tastes a lot like deepseek

Crayon Shin-chan's favorite food is chocolate biscuits, his favorite idol is Superman, and his toy is Gundam Warriors.

I couldn't stand the plot about the princess and the battle between cats and dogs. It was very boring. The other parts were quite interesting, but the princess appeared later and it was very dramatic.

Q read it, and it is exactly what I thought before. Xiaoxin has grown up, and letting Xiaoxin see blood has the same meaning. The Xiaoxin everyone is familiar with is the five-year-old child, the lustful, weird and messy Xiaoxin. When he grows up, he will no longer be Xiaoxin. The author Da Gang should not be small, and Zhengnan is in a temple. Dumb must have some special identity , too scattered. I personally feel that, as other people in the comment area said, it would be better to keep Shin-chan at five years old and write about daily life, some missions, and the interactions of the characters in Crayon Shin-chan. It would be better to bring out the supporting characters in Shin-chan's world in a way similar to missions, but there is really not much content in this way, and it should be completed quickly. But then again, this is purely an afterthought. I have already written it down and can't change it. But to be honest, Xiaoxin's character traits are placed in adults, especially in Naruto, which feels a little bit like Jiraiya No. 2. This book probably won't get better even if I continue to write data. Let's speed up the completion and write the next one. With the experience of this book, the next one will be much better if it has a similar setting. It won't jump for several years at a time.

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Come on

It's pretty good. I'm looking forward to whether this Naruto book will be different from others, and whether Xiaoxin will really change the ninja world with chocolate bars and ramen.

Come on, author