Paladin of Asgard

The pace is too slow. It will probably take a million words to prepare the blood potion.

Is this bad? It's so bland? ?

Just after watching the beginning, I felt that the protagonist had everything he wanted and was short of money, so he immediately took out the hair potion and started making money (Thor's life of 1500 years is not as exciting as the protagonist's 10 years). And the reading felt bland and there were no surprises. For example, I just mentioned that you might encounter a troll nearby (the possibility is extremely low~) and it will appear immediately in the next chapter, and the same goes for the ice beast. It's not that it's wrong to write this way, I just hope that the narrative method can be improved. Sometimes when reading, I feel that I have been spoiled by myself, which leads to a poor viewing experience. There are many advantages. The author is not like some authors who start writing after knowing a little bit about it. It can be seen that the author has done enough homework on Warcraft and Marvel, and the writing style is not bad (it may be that he has read too much Poison Classic recently) Note: This is only for the early book review, not for the later subscription chapters, etc. Please do not generalize, thank you.

There are also 5 monthly passes. . It's so slow that I'm embarrassed to vote for you. . .

I hope the protagonist can realize the Holy Light, because it feels unreliable to always rely on the system. Just like what the sweeping monk in Tian Long Ba Bu said, deep martial arts requires deep Buddhism to resolve. I feel that if I always rely on the system, I may not be able to use it as freely as I did after enlightening the Holy Light. I hope to be able to comprehend the Holy Light like Mr. Fording, and have all kinds of powerful Holy Light skills at my fingertips.

Is it troublesome to set an approximate time for updating the irritating ones, one update or two updates?

A very good novel, a masterpiece of American comics, especially Asgardian novels. I recommend it to brothers who like Marvel comprehensive fan novels.

😒😒😒😒Update quickly! ! ! !

It's short, short, and the plot is not developed at all. So many chapters can actually be cut in half 🥱

Come on, author! I give you the tickets every day and save them for reading. Although the plot is very slow, it has a unique flavor when people read it slowly because of the large number of words. Top

This book is unexpectedly beautiful! The logic is self-consistent! The story behind the incident, the reason, and the process are all well-founded. Like it very much! The story is very interesting and gives the Marvel storyline a very organized progression from ancient times to the present. I just hope the author will update more! ! !

Regarding the start of Asgard, I personally have a small opinion. There are many authors who are in a state of beating the character of Loki to death with a stick. I can basically understand it for non-Asgardians, but I highly recommend it not for Asgard's start, because Loki can be changed. He himself is biased towards the evil camp due to wrong ideas, but there are quite a few fan works that directly crucify Loki. On the cross of the villain, to be honest, this is very easy to arouse the disgust of Marvel fans. Whether die-hard fans or general fans are very disgusted with such a plot, Marvel fans must pay attention to these points: ① Whether to resolve the Avengers civil war directly or to lay out hidden lines requires careful consideration. In this plot, attention must be paid to the part about Captain America and Bah. Tony's true thoughts and the attitude of the US government are also important. PS: If you choose to resolve this part, I saw a good idea in other fan works. It is impossible for the American government to assemble Tony's armor in large quantities because it is too expensive. The American government cannot afford to install Tony's armor before the Mark 7, let alone the armor above the Mark 43. If you want to assemble a 10,000-person army, packaging and selling the American military is not enough. Tony can completely sell some non-core technologies, such as shock absorption, or power systems, to obtain part of the government. With the support of fu officials, those wolf dogs can call you daddy as long as they are profitable. Tony, as a pure scientist, has no such awareness at all. Howard died too early. Tony really didn't learn anything about the means of dealing with the government. As long as there are support from these people and someone in the government endorses the Avengers, let alone the civil war, the Kosovia Agreement has some signs. I will live broadcast and chop it up. . . ②The birth of Ultron, I recommend that you find a way to cut this part out. To be honest, this part of the plot killed off Quicksilver and Jarvis, and added an ugly Vision. As a handsome guy, I don't recommend keeping it. Of course, your book is yours to decide. ③ As for the X-Men, this is content that can be written or not. It mainly depends on whether the author has the energy. Of course, it is not recommended to intervene in the plot of reversing the future. The best is to have the timeline that has been reversed. It is also recommended to do it before the timeline reaches Avengers 3. , To be able to handle Thanos' snapping of fingers, because if the snapping of fingers continues, the content of time travel is the most likely to go wrong, and there will be bugs at every turn. Of course, this part is almost finished, or you can continue writing, and the rest of the content is up to you. . .

The novel is very good and I like it very much. The characters are well drawn and there is no sense of abruptness. It's just that the updates are a little slow. I'm looking forward to your work.

😰 I was so fascinated by it that I accidentally ordered it all! 😵😵😵

I have a bar also called Asgaard.

Why can't I post a chapter?

I always feel that the number of Silver Hands is still a bit small! Only 200 people

In fact, it is better to change Cagliostro to Dormammu. Due to this incident, he accidentally entered the dark dimension. Because time in the dark dimension is disordered, so a long time passed after entering, and then he became Dormammu, the master of the dark dimension. Because the dark energy may be huge and not perfectly controlled, it was contaminated, so he became evil-minded. Then he wanted to return to the earth and conquer the earth. He was discovered by the first generation of Supreme Mage, and then there was a grudge between the Supreme Mage and the master of the dark dimension, Dormammu. It seems that Dormammu had a fight with Peak Odin and was repaired by Peak Odin, so he did not dare to invade the earth. Then after Ancient One came out, because of the time stone, Odin could not do anything to Ancient One, so he ignored the earth's affairs and ruled the earth in name. Then Dormammu found another opportunity, but was repulsed by Ancient One, and then Ancient One stole the energy of the dark dimension to survive.

The conditions for using the Holy Light do not necessarily require integrity, kindness, justice, or bravery, but you must be consistent in your actions and beliefs without any hesitation or doubt. Even if you resolutely implement evil and violence, you can obtain the Holy Light, as long as you think you are righteous. But once doubt arises, the Holy Light quickly disappears.

The main character feels so weak. . . I hope that after taking the potion, I can awaken my divine power. What kind of divine power do you think the protagonist will awaken? I think it is the God of Light or the God of the Sun, probably.

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I'm still very interested in Marvel. What's interesting is that it's combined with the Paladin of Warcraft, which should be very interesting! First collect and click to support!

666, The protagonist has spent thirteen hundred years in vain, and then forcefully suppresses

Tell a joke: A child from the Protoss fell from a tree and died 🙂

Very exciting, I watched the finale today. There is a stage in the second half of the novel where Rowe disappears, and the Marvel protagonist takes up a lot of space. The quality of the story begins to decline at this point, but at the end Rowe returns. The finale is a bit rushed, but overall, it is a very good work.

The strength is almost there. . . His character is not holy enough, so why write about a paladin? The highlight of the Paladin is that it is not his noble character. If he cannot achieve the virtues of a knight and does not ride a horse, he is not a Paladin. Of course, the protagonist is not bad, I can only say that it is mediocre and there are no highlights.

After seeing more than 300 chapters, I finally feel that there is a hint of Marvel. The author's writing style is okay but he really chose the wrong subject. The title of the book directly filters out those who don't read American comics, but when they click on it, it is actually an upgraded fantasy novel covered in American comics. Perfectly filters both sides of the audience. In addition, the development of the protagonist's strength is really not slow. After a few hundred chapters of ordinary Marvel novels, the protagonist is still a front-line combat force or a leader of a force. But here, it is 300+ before he is ready to enter the Marvel timeline, and the protagonist's strength is only 50-50 that of Thor (Thor 1), and his identity is still a part-time job. . . . . . If you intentionally suppress the protagonist's strength so that it can be displayed in the Marvel plot, then why did you write the first few hundred chapters?

Everything else is fine, except that the protagonist has nothing to do with the character of a knight, let alone a paladin.

Not updated. . . . Is it possible to update 8 times a day and then stop updating for 8 days 🤔 This is the legendary "explosive update"

Or just be at the same time as Thor, reborn so early with a golden finger and still have the same strength as Thor. What the hell are you thinking, author...