Great Xuanwu Sheng

It's really a horse-riding thing. I, like you, always read books by skipping. When I write about going up a mountain, I can write a chapter about riding a horse. I just finished the previous chapter and copy and paste it again. If you don't have anything to write, you can just write a little more horse-trading. It's disgusting.

The book is a good book, with good creativity and good writing style. However, it gets more and more sloppy as it goes on. A paragraph is repeated over and over again, which makes it a bit annoying to read. It makes many good descriptions feel like they were written deliberately by the author for the sake of word count. This book is really well written, but it's also really watery. I feel like I want to give up but can't let go. (It's more watery than what I wrote)

It's really hard to describe. Waste of time

It's a bit like the book "Go away", although it doesn't take the road of being a big 🐔, it's more exciting than "Go away", and the pace is faster, like an exquisite fast food, hahaha, it's my first time to fully order, come on

I rarely talk bad about a book, but the last few are really unbearable. When you finish it, I will subscribe to the one with the ending...

Although I haven't read the back yet, I feel that this book is a bit like martial arts. Basically, it is all about body training, skin polishing, meat training, tendon training, bone training, internal organs training, six bowels, and marrow cleansing. The level of force is not as good as in other novels. The life span is also a little longer than that of mortals. Golden Finger is not awesome enough and boring, but it is more systematic and comprehensive in the body training text.

I can't stand it anymore after seeing Chapter 394. Brothers, I feel really bad. I thought I was reading a good book. The writing in the early stage is really good, but in the later stage it becomes more and more rubbish. It's true that someone who paid tens of thousands of monthly votes in 2024 is so toxic. In the later stage, it becomes more and more shabby (personal test). After repeated descriptions in a paragraph, the supporting characters will be: shocked, unbelievable, unbelievable, surprised, and then there are basically no men around the protagonist. Sex, I am very responsible to say that there is basically no sex, either a senior sister, a junior sister or a younger sister, a sister's best friend, the master is also a woman, and he saves people and saves women. The descriptions are all about women. The harem is written in the female nest, right? Then the men around him are trash, and any woman picked up at random is a peerless genius. This is not the most disgusting. The most disgusting thing is the two women from the Hehuan Sect. Are there any emotional descriptions? Is there an emotional basis? Just deliver it to your door? You are a stallion, right? Haven't you seen that more and more readers are abandoning books? I don't know if it was because I let myself go or if it was a ghostwriter from the studio. I watched this chapter from the beginning and followed it bit by bit, hoping that the rest of it would be written well. In the end, I was really dumbfounded by the emotional handling. I thought the emotional scenes in the Gao Wu Era next door were already embarrassing enough. I apologized to Gao Wu, but you were even more embarrassed than him.

I still liked it very much at first, until the release of the Billboard, he was always talking about how the Billboard was, so I tolerated it, but when it reached the limit of the bowels and even purged the marrow, he still loved the Billboard so much and liked to compare it with it. No matter if he dropped points, we can only say that he was obedient. The other thing is water. In fact, your water is nothing at all, but even if your water is blocked, we are still convinced. You can write hundreds of words to solve the problem in one sentence. You are flooding and repeating the meaning without saying it. Are you kidding fools here? We've endured one or two chapters, but what's next? I don't want to talk about the various other minor issues left, but I see that your updates are slow and the quality has not been improved. It is not even as good as before. What else is there to say?

Why are you going to Lingmu Cave to show off? You beat someone else's ancestor to death. Can't you beat others when you show off your skills? It's okay to steal other people's things. The protagonist is really a bad character.

What the author understands as "redefining the mountains and rivers and rebuilding the world" is Jiufen Daxuan? It all depends on the protagonist to dominate the world. Ji is still the emperor, and most of the kings are also named Ji. It's really repaying evil with kindness d(^^*) Then the sect will not invade each other in Hanbei and Zhenbei King? In the end, the protagonist has to solve the demonic disaster. Give me a way to support the protagonist in the world. Just praise is enough? The protagonist is about to ascend, and the order is expected to fall apart. In the end, there is a high probability that the Ji family will be in charge of the world, and then everything will be settled 😏 It is understandable that the protagonist does not claim to be the emperor, as the power is all in one person, but it is a bit difficult to collapse without liquidating the Ji surname. How can the Ji family still remember you? People will just silently remember it and wait until you are gone before settling the matter.

The most impressive thing about this book is that every time the protagonist goes to a place and sees refugees, he thinks to himself, I want to change the world, but I am too weak to do anything 😅😅😅, and then he leaves 😅😅

When he is poor, he is a protagonist with integrity, a bottom line, and ambition. As you grow up and harden your wings, your true nature comes out. Double-standard dog, hypocritical, burning, killing, looting, treating people like dirt. 😊😊😊Thank you, the author, for teaching me a lesson.

I have read Chapter 331. I feel it is tasteless and it is a pity to abandon it. I haven't read it for almost two months. I would like to ask, are there still a few sentences at the end that are repeated over and over again? Is it too long-winded?

You, a writer of cool articles, are awesome for leaving the throne to your enemy, the Ji family. With this way of writing, do you think you are Jin Yong?

What is the difference between what this protagonist is doing now and what Israel is doing now? It is understandable to rob things and kill people. After all, natural selection means survival of the fittest. But now that we have almost robbed and killed almost all of them, do we have to wipe out all the Xunmudong Tianling human race to be satisfied? The weak really deserve to die and shouldn't stay in this world, right? The protagonist in my mind must avenge his enemies and repay his favors. You don't need to have a righteous heart, but at least you have to have a bottom line when doing things. It's time to kill, it's time to grab, but you also have to have some control.

This is the disadvantage of the official version. Money is spent, and the subsequent quality is not guaranteed. I write casually to disgust readers, or simply end it. I am asked every day to support the official version and protect the rights of the author. Who will protect the rights of our readers and restrain the author? Please be careful to subscribe when reading the book in the future, and I will replenish my ticket later depending on the situation.

There is a book called Da Qian Martial Saint, which is so similar to this one, almost exactly the same 🤔🤔🤔

It's endless, isn't it? It's either a girl or a female, either a senior sister or a junior sister or a female master, and then it's non-stop, and there are all women around me. It's endless. I really rely on it. The more I write, the more rubbish it becomes. And as long as the female next to the protagonist, everyone can have a chance to exchange blood? It really makes you lose your ability to write. After reading hundreds of chapters, it's really disappointing to see something like this.

I feel like this author is just like me writing my graduation thesis in my senior year, writing some words over and over again, crazily trying to make up the word count.

The list fell down. So good😁

Someone is arguing about your book, Daqian Martial Saint, the plagiarism check rate is 80%

I'm wrong. It's an anticlimax but a snake. It's really fascinating except for the first 300 chapters. The following chapters are a bit unsightly. It's really ugly. I feel like it was written by AI. I skipped to the end and felt sick. I really regretted reading this novel. When I came to the comment area later, most people thought the same as me. . If the author still wants to eat this bowl of rice, he should reflect on it carefully and stop being lazy and feeding AI.

After reading more than 200 chapters, I really can't stand it anymore. The author is writing nonsense for the sake of the plot, tempering the five internal organs, the maximum number of heavenly stems and earthly branches is 12, when will there be an additional 13th level? Even with the system, the writing method of mining resources is still outdated. The previous artistic conception is also verbose. Che Lugluan writes back and forth. I feel that I am not reading the plot, but reading the training manual.

It's a bit long-winded. The word count is understandable, but it's too watery. There are too many explanations, half of which are explained in one chapter. It's repeated over and over again. I ordered all of them too early. I regretted it. I only read more than 300 chapters. I couldn't hold on anymore. I didn't give up on all of them.

Is there a Daqian Martial Saint who imitates your book?

I just picked up a copy of Da Qian Wu Sheng. I thought it was the one I read before, but I ended up reading dozens of photos of Poisonous Fatal Death. I wondered why I had subscribed to it if I continued reading it. Now when I looked it up, I found out that I had never read that book.

Later, I was forced to rise from mid-range to low-level martial arts. After the exchange of blood, it was quite boring. It felt like a dog's tail was followed by a mink.

The first two hundred chapters are okay, but the rest are almost all nonsense literature.

1. The writing is acceptable 2. Being 100 years old is a flaw. What does practicing kung fu mean? Cultivation style. 3. The setting of the kung fu system is a bit confusing. 4. The plot is acceptable. 5. I wasted dozens of dollars. I don't want to read it after reading it. There is still a gap between the written expression and the master. I hope the author will continue to improve

Originally, it was said that it was already a legend that one could comprehend the artistic conception of eight phases and then reach the artistic conception of heaven and earth. As a result, the writing progressed more and more. In Chapter 80 of The Small Town of Novice Village, it was already said that the head of the family had comprehended two artistic conceptions. So it was written one stage at a time. By the time he reached Qixuan Sect, the sect leader would have to be a legendary figure... The artistic conception was understood by geniuses in many other novels. Now it is almost ruined. Even the bad old man of Novice Village can understand both~