God-Level Sword Soul System

I just read Chapter 15 and I was hooked. 🙂Evil smile😊? So embarrassing. Abandon the pit

I'm having a myocardial infarction! After reading Chapter 20, all I could think of was "the corner of my mouth raised in a xxx arc" and "heart-pounding"! Can't the author find the adjective for pretentious?

It was very toxic in the early stages, so I put up with it. One Piece can still be watched afterward. Then the Soul Sword system turned into the Death Zanpakutō, and the force suddenly dropped. Since there is a Shinigami who can travel through the universe, it seems that the second part can also go to Naruto. With Naruto, the Bleach, don't deny that there is a stronger or even unsolvable world. In many other anime and movies, Death is nothing. Why not go to the world of Dragon Ball, One Punch or even nonsensical comics. I don't watch anime, and I haven't read any manga about migrant workers. No one is a fan, but you are so disgusting when you brag about death and beat up pirates. Change the Soul Sword system into the Death Zanpakutō, and the protagonist's level and upper limit of strength will immediately be greatly reduced. No matter how powerful the God of Death is, he is still his younger brother when facing an invincible anime. If you want to write an infinite flow that can go to multiple universes, you have multiple abilities in multiple universes. It's good now, pirates only have swordsmanship, and all their strength lies in the God of Death. In the end, the protagonist only has the ability of Death. Even if the protagonist crushes the three worlds of Pirates, Naruto, and Death, so what. There are more, stronger and unsolvable worlds, and the protagonist is limited to the ability of Death. If you don't go to other worlds, you won't be able to experience the strength of the protagonist. If you go to other worlds, the previous power system of Death will be completely destroyed. Because death has come to an end. You can either write a separate world, or you can absorb multiple abilities into multiple universes to become stronger. Using a second-rate world's ability to beat a third-rate world, after I saw that it was the God of Death, this little white novel no longer had the pleasure of being pretentious.

Forget it, I'd better give up, I can't stand it anymore

Halfway through, I wanted to think about why the author mostly avoids the question of whether the enemy is dead or not. I often see that defeating the enemy is nothing. . . If it's dead, it's dead. If it's not dead, it's not dead. Everything else is fine. It's just this part that makes me feel uncomfortable.

In fact, this book One Piece can still be read, but by the time I got to Naruto, it had already started to fall apart. Especially after the protagonist reaches the eighth level, he expresses his inability to accept it.

Write a pirate fan novel based on the protagonist template of a fantasy novel Although the formula is a bit old-fashioned, I feel that the author's writing is very stable. The protagonist's growth path is clear and clear. 🙂🙂 It is commendable that there are basically no poisonous points in the whole book. I personally feel that it is a very mature and steady work among pirate fan novels.

I wonder how many people stopped watching Naruto when they got there?

I have been enduring it, but I really can't stand it anymore. There are too many flaws. Is it necessary to push Dai to the height of the six-path death mode? The two of them break space together. What does the protagonist's spatial ability and ability to predict in advance do? Book deleted. 88

It's very well written. Don't listen to other noises and follow your own pace.

I feel a little uncomfortable. The opening part is really too embarrassing. Every now and then there is a wicked smile on the corner of the mouth, and every now and then my eyes are widened in disbelief. I can actually use more than four "eyes widened in disbelief" in less than ten paragraphs... It's really embarrassing!

After reading Chapter 19, I feel a little bit addicted. In my impression, One Piece is a world of strong men. The weak either endured it, suffered in silence, or became stronger and resisted, but a group of soldiers in the new barracks dared to question the decision announced by their superiors, or in public. There was no organizational discipline. Even the bandit dens were more disciplined than the navy headquarters. What are you doing with this giant poison? The Navy Headquarters is playing house?

Don't read it, anyone over 12 years old with a junior high school diploma or above will find this book boring, especially those who want to read light novels.

Um,,,,, the description of the empress is so fast, it's very disappointing. Yuzu,, Xiangxiang🦶, at least the male protagonist is so 6, he doesn't want water, he is so disobedient. The overlord is the one who kills him directly. He will look like a pig brother in his ink for a long time. Many novels describe how girls collapse like this, and girls are also what I think about. Please respect gender.

There are more than 10 pages in this book, and it looks like a god of war with a crooked mouth 😅

The corner of his mouth raised a slight arc... How many times has this happened? Aren't you tired?

After reading the first dozen chapters, the protagonist has to "twitch a smile from the corner of his mouth" on average twice per chapter. Is this the Dragon King with a crooked mouth?

Really, it's so poisonous. I couldn't stand it until I read Chapter 14. I really don't know how this author became so popular with his level of skill? Did you buy it with money?

Don't talk about the era. Compared with the books of the same period, he is 💩. There is also the Ghost Zhendun, the most typical "moral mismatch". There are many better books of the same genre at the same time than this one. Who can I criticize if you don't criticize him?

... Why is Mao so eager to read Xiaobai's fantasy novels? If it weren't for the character names of One Piece, I would have thought it was a Doujinshi fan series! The protagonist with raised lips, the shocked supporting actress

Pirates are originally an unreasonable world, and you can cheat whenever you want. The only one in the comics who actually gets stronger through training is Zoro. The others just level up after just one fight, which is outrageous. If Kirby also exercises, and there are so many naval exercises, why are there not many as cheating as him? To put it bluntly, Oda himself is a person who does whatever he wants and has no logic, which leads to a lot of bugs in his comics. Other comics have a reason for cheating, but Pirates is like that. When I say cheating, it is cheating, and there is no need to even explain it. And the funniest thing is that in reality there are still a bunch of people trying to force Oda to explain

The negative reviews are all for apprentices, so you don't need me to say anything more.

This is a pretentious novel disguised as One Piece! Throughout the whole process, people were dumbfounded, extremely shocked, their minds went blank in surprise, and they were horrified from the depths of their souls! Not interesting at all! From being a newbie in the Navy to being a naval officer, giving away one's life one by one, all the way to the West China Sea... I don't think there is any need to spend money to continue this kind of thing! Give up decisively!

It's so cliche. I read more than a dozen chapters and I can't stand it. It's too embarrassing.

Are the masters of Qidian banned casually?😡

A bunch of rip-offs don't check when it was written, they just keep criticizing it, let's make money together. I'm so addicted to reading this book now that I can't stand it, but it was really good before. I don't know what to criticize. Other Pirates fans can't read it in the current time period unless they were written in late 2018. Even those who have read it can't read it. Do you understand? Not speaking for the author, it was really good at the time

The novel written a few years ago is indeed a bit novice when I read it now, but it was indeed well written at the time! Why are so many people complaining now? Just enough money to bring the kids, thank you.

I'm particularly puzzled. This author's book has very good results, but I feel that the writing is not very good. Is this reasonable?

Chapter 6: Persuasion to retreat. I'm really speechless. The author arranged a classic practical trial just after the protagonist has become a master of cultivation. This kind of plot is basically standard in ancient fantasy novels. I thought it was a pirate fan, but it turned out to be an old-fashioned fantasy pretentious story with no pirate flavor at all.

I don't know why there are so many negative comments, the comments are ugly, is it necessary? It is originally a good article, if you don't like this kind of article, you don't want others to read it, right?