Control Time Starting from Naruto

Naruto's masterpiece. Feeling good enough. The writing is adequate. The plot is basically flawless. The level is okay.

There cannot be a 3x speed difference between a chuunin and a jounin. From the description of the protagonist's sealing speed in the novel, we can see how exaggerated the 3x speed is. You can't even see the sealing action. So since you can't see my sealing action, you can't see clearly when I wipe your neck with a knife. This is completely the level of instant kill at the same level. When fighting an elite chuunin later, the opponent was able to fight him with more than a dozen moves. Normally, at 3x speed, the opponent couldn't see the protagonist's sword-swinging movements and how to block them. The description was completely of two chuunin without special abilities fighting each other, and in the end, the opponent was killed by Hatake's swordsmanship. In my opinion, this is entirely for the sake of pretentiousness in the next part of the plot. It is obvious that you can kill the opponent without being exposed, but you have to use the iconic Hatake swordsmanship. Also, it is clear that the starting point is to hide the strength, but in the end he became the most popular in the class, but the strength is still in the top few. Maybe the author thinks that not using the time ability is enough to hide the strength. But the actual situation is that the top few in the class will also be paid attention to by the Hokage, because they have to be divided into classes according to their strength. The protagonist is completely a playboy version of Sasuke, and he often flirts with girls. Then the pretense is too blunt. For Uchiha Shisui, the protagonist has already made things go away by saying nice things, so he has to pretend to be pretentious. I suspect it is because there is a girl next to him, which is a very old-fashioned pretense plot. The other one is to kill the chuunin. They promised to keep a low profile at the beginning, but insisted on using Hatake swordsmanship to reveal their identity, which leads to the next pretentious part, that is, being taken away by the ANBU during the assessment. This pretentious part is like an urban novel. The class is in class, and two bodyguards suddenly come in and take the protagonist away. The classmates exclaimed, thinking that he is an ordinary person, but he turns out to be a rich young man. It is very cliché. And before leaving, he repeated the scene when he was showing off to Uchiha Shisui. ———— Generally speaking, the writing is relatively simple and forced to show off. If it were me ten years ago, I would have read it with gusto.

To be honest, this is my first time reading a Naruto fanfic, and I don't know if it's the first time I read it that makes it so good. The book review is very interesting. But I think this novel is really good-looking. The plot is not boring and makes me want to keep reading. It also contains some of the author's own opinions, but it's just not enough to read. QAQ... I hope the author will write better and better and be promoted to the Hall of Masters.

Many people found the later plot of One Piece boring and stopped watching it. Including me at the time, I had saved more than 20 chapters and didn't want to read it at all. It was too boring. But after I came back in the past few days, I found that One Punch World was quite interesting, so I gave it a reward. Those who, like me, left because the plot in the later stages of One Piece was boring, I suggest you come back and watch it, and just skip the hydrological plot in the later stages of One Piece. Don't ruin a good book because of a bad plot point.

Tomorrow will be better

Can the first generation Raikage suppress the third generation? The third generation may be able to suppress the first generation and the second generation together. Even the thunder armor mode was developed in the second generation. Shouldn't the third generation thunder in Yunyin Village have the highest combat power? The next four are the fourth generation. If you want to break free from control, you have to break free from the third generation, right?

Hello! Ye Nan Tingfeng, I love you! Did you hear that? Well, it's dead!

The author may have some misunderstanding about time acceleration. The time acceleration ability mentioned in the book makes your time faster. So if your punch speed is 3, time acceleration changes your speed to 1, but in the formula related to force, your punch speed does not increase by 3. Times, if you don't understand, then another way of saying this is that this ability can slow down the timeline of the world by 3 times. The speed of your punch remains unchanged, but in other people's senses, your speed suddenly becomes 3 times faster. Therefore, accelerating time does not increase your kinetic energy. Do you understand? I have a lot of characters. Can I add some details? (ಡωಡ)Hiahiahia

I think this book is well written. It explains the scale of time ability at the beginning. At the same time, it is said after Naruto that if the protagonist is not dominated by emotions and time, it is already very good as a Mugen flow novel. It's normal to show off and slap in the face. After all, if it's not like this, it's basically a routine of going to another world to completely destroy your cultivation and practice again. If you want to see it, you can watch the fish-man school beauty. You will get tired of it if you watch it too much. The combat characterization is still relatively good (although it is really a bit watery). I hope the author can make a breakthrough in the future. (≧ω≦)/

Two monthly tickets, five recommended tickets, plus finesse?

Who succeeded? Um? What about the process? 🙂

Working hard every day and not getting enough sleep is actually not happiness, so let's do it and cherish it! Happy everyone!

I can't stand it after a few chapters. It's too toxic. There's a problem with the time setting. There's no explanation. Don't write about things you don't understand. You have to force yourself to get kicked in the ass at the speed of light? All that's left of your body is the nucleus, right?

It feels like the progress is too fast, but the upside is that it's fun. No matter how good the writing is, the monthly recommendation tickets from now on will be yours. But I hope I won't travel to other dimensions. There are nine pitfalls out of ten written like this.

In Chapter 81, the political stance of the protagonist has changed very badly. Supporting Orochimaru is doomed to failure, and Orochimaru is not a qualified candidate for Hokage. He is the least suitable person among the Sannin to be Hokage. The scientific research brain and the leader's brain have completely different structures, and they even run counter to each other in many cases. Besides, the protagonist treats the political movement as a personal duel, and his political awareness is not as good as Orochimaru's own. What reason does he have to believe that you will succeed? Do the kids play house? It is better to become Hokage by yourself. No, if the protagonist has always been such a political mind, he will not be able to be Hokage. He does not even have the self-knowledge of Jiraiya to persuade him to quit.

With this kind of fighting power, how can a pirate pretend to be a bad guy?

The power system has collapsed. The double speed of the Eight Door Dungeon can be added up to more than ten times the speed casually. What the hell, crazy Chakra pouring will make you stronger. Even if you are strong, you can control the third generation Raikage for 100 chapters, but you can't beat the protagonist. The protagonist only has two plug-ins and ten time skills have not been used. He is at the peak of the shadow level. I am also drunk.

The author will consider writing about the King of Fighters world later. The author's writing style will definitely look good when writing about the King of Fighters world. Those more popular worlds have been badly written, and I feel like there is nothing new to write about.

I quite like the author's style, it's refreshing, but I still don't like to recommend Hinata, because I always feel that Naruto and Hinata are in true love, and it feels awkward no matter how I read it apart. I hope the author can consider the opinions of young readers.

I've already woken up, why haven't I updated it yet? Otherwise, I need to take a day off. I'm a little anxious :-(

I personally feel that the time ability is too incomprehensible, not as good as the previous Soul Sword.

Baihao and creation and regeneration are two techniques. . And Tsunade, is it okay for Baihao to see if there is a ◇ on her head? In the original work, everyone who accepts a disciple hopes that the disciple will not distract his energy. . I really don't understand how the author wanted to write it. . Complaint┐('～`；)┌

I read thirty-seven chapters in one go before going to bed last night. This book was recommended through a tag search of the books I really liked on the bookshelf. I was attracted by the pretty good introduction. I found other new books today and deleted this one. Leave a message: The setting of Time Goldfinger is not novel enough for me, and the plot did not impress me deeply and was flat. I have never watched Naruto, and this is my first time reading an anime fanfic. Just like a beauty, the book I like is a super beauty in my eyes. A look and a smile on the stage make me feel super A. The other ladies are also very beautiful, but they just don't catch my eye and make me think of her often.

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When did KING's expressiveness become so impressive? He couldn't even compare to Saitama-sensei who prevented a god-level disaster.

Can it be updated more? ? ? Do you know that so few updates make us feel like cats are scratching our heads? ? If you weren't afraid of meeting an acquaintance, I'd give you a couple of sentences! !

In fact, I can understand the author very well. My father suffered a sudden cerebral hemorrhage on the night of October 6 last year. I was still talking to my father on the morning of the 6th, saying that my father's 50th birthday would be on the 11th, and my sister and I would go back to celebrate it. However, at 10 o'clock in the evening, I received a call from my relatives saying that my father had a sudden cerebral hemorrhage and was in the emergency room. The doctor had issued a critical illness notice. With the help of my relatives, my father was transferred from the county hospital to the city hospital. I quickly drove there. During the 3-hour drive to the city hospital, I was thinking about what my father would be like. When we arrived at the hospital, my father had already been admitted to the ICU and was in a coma the whole time. The doctor told us that the possibility of recovery was very small. Even if the situation improved, he might become a vegetative state. During the long wait, we came to the 11th. Today happened to be my father's 50th birthday. I prayed for him in my heart, hoping for a miracle to happen. On the 15th, the doctor persuaded us. We and the relatives and friends around us were also trying to persuade us. All our savings had been exhausted, and our relatives had also paid tens of thousands of yuan in advance. Finally, thinking about letting my father return to his roots, we asked the ambulance to take my father back to his hometown. All the relatives at home and my father's friends were waiting. When the ambulance opened, all the relatives and friends were calling my father's name. At that moment, I really hoped that he would open his eyes. Unfortunately, the miracle did not happen. 1 At 6 o'clock in the morning on the 6th, I realized that my father was dying, and I quickly called my family over. My father's chest went from rapid to slow at the beginning. I saw his eyes open a little, scanned around, and finally settled on me. I knew that he must not worry about me. I am 23 years old, I have just been working for a year, and I am not married. At that moment, I sobbed and said to my father: Dad, don't worry about me, I will take care of myself. You can go in peace! As soon as I finished speaking, my father closed his eyes. At that moment, I was completely shattered. My father had just renovated the house in my hometown just for my sister and my brother-in-law. When they came back for the New Year, they saw that the house needed to be newer. He put in all the effort, but he didn't enjoy it. I thought I had just renovated it. I just started working, so I can take my time, thinking that I have the ability to let my father enjoy the blessings. Since I was a child, I have always made my father worry about it, but I didn't let him see me acting like a friend, I didn't let him see his daughter-in-law, I didn't let him see me get married, I didn't let him hold a grandson, but now I can't anymore. Author, pain is short-lived. After this period of time, the loved ones who have passed away are engraved in your mind. Life is still going on. The only way to give back to the loved ones who have passed away is to work hard and move forward. I hope you will be strong.

After reading the first book, the author has changed quite a lot. The first book can be said to be the peak of its debut. There is nothing to say, it is refreshing, the rhythm is smooth, and the pretense is smooth and natural. The protagonist has a mature coolness and is quite handsome. The first original novel should be The World Honored One. I quite like it. Unfortunately, some settings really make it difficult to continue writing. Later, attempts at original creation were not very successful, which is a pity. Up to now, the routine process of Dead Fire Sea can be said to be very mature. But gradually, the protagonist changed from a cold knight to a pretending artillery king. It is highly recommended that the author do some research before writing. One chapter is about driving, three pages is about a hint, and xp is exposed as a joke everywhere. I know 2D fandom, many LSPs, and many people just love to watch this. But I personally still prefer the protagonist you created before. It's not like now, just pretending to be against the wall. The narration describes how handsome the characters are. The protagonists have different statuses and think differently. In fact, they don't care at all about what they have and what they don't. In the past, the protagonist was given an image to the reader through description. Why do they keep using narration to emphasize the setting and lamely explain that it is reasonable for the protagonist to not do anything?

Fans are just making nonsense based on the original work. The nonsense is interesting, so subscribe. It's nonsense. If it doesn't look good, just criticize it. Quite normal.

I hope Fairy Tail can be written longer and more exciting. Although the anime itself is unfinished, I personally have very high expectations for Fairy Tail fans. I have followed you for 3 books, so please help me!