Prison of the Dead Pirates

Tell me your personal opinion. The first point is too straightforward. Let's go straight to it. The title of the first chapter is O'Hara, the first paragraph is about Robin waking up the protagonist, and the first plot points out the protagonist's abilities. There was also a very straightforward explanation. It seems too deliberate, and the author's presence is too obvious. Write half and leave half. There is a bit of room for imagination. If ten people watch it, they will have ten kinds of imagination. Don't give it a damn, out of ten Pirates fanfics, nine start with Robin O'Hara, all of them are scum. The second point is that fan fiction should be written about fan fiction, and the words fantasy and martial arts should not appear at the end, it would be too dramatic. The author's writing style is obviously too weak. The third point, no, think about it yourself. Some people will say you are a jerk, just go ahead and write. Sorry, the requirements for reading and writing are different. Money is a good thing. Whether you give it or not depends on whether you have the ability to take it.

I want to know what the author thinks about Robin becoming a Marine. I won't talk about the Navy slaughtering Robin's hometown. Can I find the historical text in the Navy? Or can I live a stable life in the navy?

Whether it's from Goldfinger or Robin's point of view, he should be a pirate, right? Goldfinger has to kill people to become stronger. The navy can't kill people casually, even pirates. Robin's whole family was killed by the navy. You let her go to the navy?

I would like to give the author a suggestion. If the power system is too chaotic and easy to collapse in the later stage, it is best to convert all external energy into the energy possessed by the pirate world, such as deducting domineering power, physical strength, etc.

From the moment I saw the chapter about joining the navy, I knew this book was going to be a hit.

The missing chapters are: 4, 14, 68, 77, 159, 185, 195, 308, 312, 341, 343... I don't want to talk about the others. Also, Chapter 289 becomes Chapter 287

The writing is broken. There are more than 10 navy generals in what you wrote. 2 Grand prizes can suppress the 4 emperors. With the 5 old stars, there are almost 20 generals. The pirates have been destroyed long ago.

After reading almost 100 chapters, I feel that the improvement of strength and skills is too confusing. Not everyone has watched various animations and knows about telekinesis and the like. It is not a system that is forcibly equalized, but there are multiple systems. There are several systems in less than a hundred chapters. The two of them have not watched Yunliwuli. I am too confused after watching it.

😂I haven't started reading it yet, but the first chapter I read in the table of contents is about O'Hara. What the hell is this? Do all fan fiction writers like Robin this much?

The power system is extremely chaotic, and the author typically bites off more than he can chew. A good book is not just a mixture of popular elements. It has to have priorities. The author is completely enjoying himself, and it is not exciting enough.

After reading Chapter 65, you choose various abilities and find them from so many two dimensions. How many readers can you read? You talked about it for a long time, but you didn't explain it clearly, otherwise you just talked about telekinesis. You explained it for half a chapter, but you didn't explain what it was. If this kind of ability will be more in the later stage, you might as well turn the data into skills.

🤣I don't know what to say, the power collapsed from the beginning, remember this is the world of One Piece, not the earth, the strength of 10,000 kilograms is only 5 tons, the weight of two small cars, plus low martial arts to fight Doflamingo, just kidding me. Even with your strength, you can't get out of the East China Sea.

If you are powerful, you can use cards to hurt people, so why not attack the enemy directly if you have the power? Isn't this just taking off your pants and farting, which is unnecessary? !

Forced wisdom. Mu Xiu Yu Lin's theory is that a nine-year-old is better than a 19-year-old Garp. Do you think it makes sense for the World Government to ask you to cooperate in research? With this kind of plug-in, even if you don't have time, it is still showing off in the navy.

The main character's name is to be discouraged. Why not give it a Chinese or Japanese name? It must be a combination of Chinese and Japanese names.

A pig's trotter can defeat the Yonko at the age of 10. Why are all those writing about One Piece now invincible when they are underage?

To be honest, this is just a fantasy novel disguised as a pirate fan novel. It makes me feel uncomfortable to read it, and I have no sense of immersion at all.

First of all, I think this, this golden finger really attracted me. It's a pity. Once I entered, the setting was really very ordinary, and there was nothing special about it. It's okay if it's random, but it's divided into levels, and the higher the energy, the better it is. I originally thought that the setting was that the protagonist could gain the opponent's ability by killing one person (although it is a bit invincible, but, that's what I really thought, but this prison is similar to other lottery systems, which is really disappointing)

To be honest, Qian Jin's strength is the life of the minion in the early stage, and he can also defeat the pirate with 5 million beli. Look at the pirate who ate the Slippery Fruit and fights ordinary pirates as if for fun. That is, meeting Luffy.

Update quickly, no more words →_→

Why did Luo Bin become the protagonist's savior? I don't understand. Didn't the protagonist wake up by himself? ? ?

I want to click on it, and then the directory, Dragon Elephant Prajna Kung Fu, this wave is called cultural output

A military academy will keep you hooked for hundreds of chapters and it won't even end.

I feel weird. Why are pirates always written about pirates? You want to say, "I'm not a good guy." What does this mean? I can't understand it. Do you know that you will come as soon as your mother enters Sea Wing Time Travel? "I'm not a good guy. Nowadays, bad guys are popular in time travel."

It doesn't match up with the previous chapter.

The protagonist is just a navy massacring pirates, but he also massacres others indiscriminately in the kendo tournament. This shows that the protagonist is just a slave who works hard to kill for the exchange value of the system.

"One Piece: Becoming the King of the World from the Age of Rocks" If you are short on books, you can read this book. It is a very interesting and novel pirate fanfic. This book stretches the timeline to before Rocks attacks the Valley of the Gods. The protagonist Li Yuan has his own domineering body-tempering secret "Sword God Body Tempering Art". Rise up in the Rocks Pirates, become a cadre, and plunder the property of the Celestial Dragons in the Valley of Gods. After the Battle of the Valley of the Gods, participate in the New World Hegemony and occupy Wano Country. Become the world's greatest swordsman and dominate the new world with Whitebeard and others. The protagonist has four children, Stephens-Gane, Wei Zhuang, Esdeath, and Chi Tong, all of whom are great swordsmen and compete with Hawkeye and Red Hair...

Anyone who doesn't want to be a hunter is not a good pirate! In a shipwreck, Zane not only awakened Su Hui, but also obtained a bronze door that can travel between two worlds. One Piece has high numerical values ​​and full-time hunter has high mechanics. Zane, who can travel between two realms, now has higher numerical values ​​on his left hand and higher mechanics on his right hand.

Come on, author, I will save you and write quickly. The number of words is too few. I will give you a few recommendations to support you.

This book is great, I will give you all my recommendation votes in the future