Two Worlds: Hunters and Pirates

It's okay, but the two realms are too restrictive. Can it be extended to the heavens?

In fact, hunters and pirates don't go together Gourmet captives and pirates go together very well. . .

Author, I think you should not get involved in the plot of the Phantom Troupe after the hunter exam. Go back to the pirates to see if you can eat a phantom beast species or a natural type. At this stage, the pig's feet are to learn to recall and develop a few abilities to get yourself out of trouble with the pirates.

The hunter also follows the plot. . . It's understandable from the beginning why we still follow Xiaojie to beat up the enemy.

In particular, you also have a big point that is that Pig's Feet has been in the Hunter World for so long, and the pirates themselves are still imprisoned in the slave ship. You have written so many plots in the Hunter World, which also shows that Pig's Feet has the ability to solve the slave ship. So far, there is no progress at all. The beginning is a bit useless. It feels like the racial talent of the Three-Eyed Clan is just to get preferential treatment if the Pig's Feet is caught.

The protagonist is so strong that he becomes a slave?

The protagonist's character is a bit like a native who has gained the memory of a time traveler. He is a person who talks about bonds...

It is recommended not to give awkward names to moves 😅

Why do you want the Menmen Fruit? 😅 The fact that the world government will give the Gate Fruit to the world means that the Gate Fruit is not considered the top super fruit. Also, the settings of the Devil Fruit have been changed a long time ago and are not considered casually released. The Meatball Fruit is not so strong because it was developed by a bear, but because it is so strong in the first place.

Can you change the name of the move? What a show

If you can join the ranks of hunters, it is best not to eat fruits, otherwise you will be beaten to death by the hunters due to your weakness of being afraid of water. Even if you are only afraid of the water in the pirate world, it is useless. The mind also has the ability to predict the future and the ability to detect the past. Practice the three-color Haki and physical bonus in the Pirate World, and develop the telekinesis bonus mechanism in the Hunter World. If you want fruitful abilities, you can also develop telekinesis abilities such as Thief's Ultimate Intention, as long as the scope of stealing is widened.

The protagonist's current strength is already invincible in the known hunter world, both in terms of numerical values ​​and mechanics. Therefore, the improvement of the protagonist in Hunter World will not be particularly obvious. Like One Piece, it can only be accumulated slowly. I don't know if I can take people through time.

Pirates have forbidden devil fruits and can still fight with Haki. Hunters have no telekinesis ability, so they can't just do it casually.

If you don't want to suppress the fighting power, I suggest you change the title of the book later and let the bronze door open a new world.

The racial talents of the Three-Eyed Clan do not add special abilities to telekinesis. If you ask me, it would be better to try the natural type and pretend to be a change type, or a fantasy beast type trait type.

The shock and intimidation of Nian is at the biological level, while the shock and intimidation of Overlord Color is at the mental level. The intimidation of Nian refers to those who come into contact with the Nian of the Ant King.

It's okay. It's really bad to directly disable a certain ability with the ability to read. Is this kind of writing about astronomy more interesting than double penetration?

🙂In fact, the hunter value is quite high.

The hunter's stats are actually very high, and the pirate's mechanism is also outrageous, but it's too confusing.

It's pretty good, very cool, but I haven't been to Hunter World for a long time. I thought I would go to Hunter World when I was repairing the ship in Sky Island. After all, I just got the Thunder Fruit.

Oh no, my Kalifa, my long legs are gone! My long legs

The naming of moves made more than ten years ago, the deformed and chimeric world frame, the original character that highlights how awesome the protagonist can die at will Why can you continue to watch it? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

I just wanted to read the results and finish the book. More than 200 chapters? Speechless

Is it possible that the hunter's stats are very high and the damage is also very high?

I feel that the protagonist is already invincible as a hunter, and the pirate is also at the level of a quasi-general. What will be written next? Will he travel to a new world?

The plot is actually good, but it feels like something is missing.

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There are five people in the hot air balloon, four people in the headquarters and Hisoka, and where are the other two? There were a total of thirteen people before. After Feitan and Finks died, there were eleven left. In the plot, there were nine. Where are the other two?

Compared with Dragon Ball and Food Hunter, the combination of full-time hunter and pirate is more interesting.

There are so many fan stories and plots! ! ! Most readers only look at the chapter titles when reading this type of plot, because the original plot is too familiar! ! Therefore, if you want to write a good fan fiction, there is only one thing, which is to create an original story, and then integrate the interactive plot of the original characters. This is the most exciting part of online writing. Unfortunately, many authors find it easier to write pictures and plots, and are unwilling or unable to create original stories. Of course, such novels will not be read by many people and will not give high ratings.