I Use the Ninja World to Help Me Cultivate Immortality

I finally saw an author who described natural energy as aura. I am very happy. I hope the author will not overwhelm his combat power. Immortal cultivators should kill ninjas within a few strokes.

What age are you still writing about where the protagonist has a low-grade spiritual root? Who is disgusting? The only protagonist in the ninja world is a cultivator. He insists on doing something like this. Is he afraid that if his results are too good, he will persuade some people to quit?

It is recommended to have more female protagonists. Recommended to accept: Tsunade, Kaguya Otsutsuki, Hayakura, Mei Terumi, Konan, Garuru, Mabui, Samui, Kurotsuchi, Temari, Yuhi Kurenai, Anko, Yuugao, Uzumaki Kushina, Uchiha Mikoto, Hinata Hinata, Hinata Hanabi, Yamanaka I No, Sakura Haruno, Tiantian, Koyuki Fenghua, Queen Loulan and Princess Sarah, Maitreya and Shion, Koso and her mother, Hotaru the earth spider, Summer Star, Amaru, Shizune, Nohara Rin, Toki, Akebi, Ada, Chino, Yakushi Nonou

He's so unique🤣. He just started practicing Qi and he's stronger than a jounin. What will I write about next😵‍💫. An honest jounin, can't Kage, Chaokage? It's hard to collapse the entire elite Jonin level one, two level, and three level level.

There's a war going on here. What kind of joint chuunin exams are they holding? It's not like we use the joint chuunin exams to hold military competitions in peacetime. Give up.

You, an elite jounin, are divided into several stages. It's outrageous.

It's just a mindless fantasy novel with a Hokage skin. It's still the lowest level of novel. It doesn't have the flavor of cultivating immortality at all. During a fight, you will only shout out the name of the move, and there will be no other description at all. The protagonist will shout: Lightning Thunder Fist, and then the enemy will die. There is no sense of the picture at all. It is purely written by a novice.

By the way, Naruto's combat power is more than this. Although the chakra system is not good for health, its destructive power and functionality are not bad. The complete body can split countless mountains with one knife. Which golden elixir has such destructive power? The power of Otsutsuki is not comparable to that of ordinary Nascent Souls. Pure Otsutsuki's lifespan, life-preserving ability and magical skills are very strong.

I just read the first two chapters. What can I say? There is such a long-lasting atmosphere.

Come on, author, it's the name of the protagonist that always reminds me of Inuyasha's boss.

There are more than 20 chapters about fighting during the collapse of Konoha. No one speaks at the end of each chapter. What problem are you thinking about, author?

Now when I read novels about cultivating immortals, as long as I see spiritual roots, I don't read them at all. Because the appearance of this thing illustrates a problem. You are born to be a pig or a dog for those with spiritual roots, and you will never turn over. This is inconsistent with the spiritual core of the Chinese people. I can accept the inequality of social status caused by various reasons in life, but I will never accept the inequality of my life and personality. Man's determination to conquer nature is the spiritual core of the Chinese people. In the old society, the emperor who was regarded as the incarnation of God would kill him if he was oppressed too much. Therefore, for novels like this, which require spiritual roots to cultivate immortality, the more experienced people are, the less likely they are to read it. This kind of setting is becoming more and more unpalatable in the current situation where everyone's knowledge and insight are getting deeper and deeper.

I went to the Star Ninja Village and was convinced by the Peacock Magic Technique. The side effects of the star have not been solved, so people need to practice. Only the protagonist's true energy can solve this problem. Others don't. The Lord himself will not have an endless supply of Qi. Others practice this stuff. Do you have to find the protagonist to solve hidden dangers every day? And when I see the protagonist being strong, I feel an inexplicable affection for him. Me too 🤮

After reading Chapter 60, most of the protagonist's battles involve Thunder Finger, Thunder Blade, Thunder Waterfall, and Sky-Exploding Thunder. . . It's okay to fight like this once or twice. It's really boring if it happens too often. I have no desire to watch it anymore. The most important thing is that the protagonist is not only capable of thunder escape. In Chapter 60, the abilities mastered by the protagonist include but are not limited to sealing, thunder escape, strange power, peacock magic, spells, and magic weapons. Why do you have to use Lei Dun? Also, I think the names of these Lei Dun are so tacky.

The author probably refers to the world view of the Mortal Cultivation Story. Mortals compete with Naruto in terms of combat power. It must be the early stage of Naruto and the latter stage of mortals. Not to mention the hundreds of years of golden elixir, which can kill a lot of people. However, if you let the golden elixir fight the six paths, the settings are different. The author sets the natural energy as Aura is actually wrong. After all, the original work has written out the characteristics of natural energy. It is very powerful and dangerous, but the protagonist is as safe, convenient and average in strength as a playboy, so why not set a separate energy called aura, and then maybe you can also activate the aura fairy mode haha

After reading a dozen of them, I was persuaded to quit. Not much is written about the plot, but the settings are discussed at length, and the ninjutsu levels are directly divorced from the original system. Cultivation is only half a chapter in the beginning. I really don't dare to think about what you are going to do next. What the hell is it like to install a low-grade spiritual root on a protagonist? To suppress the fighting power? It's up to the author to decide how fast his cultivation progresses. I don't know why he insisted on creating this thing. 🤔🤔🤔

What the hell is this all about suggestions? I look confused.

Forget it, forget it, this protagonist is a bit too strong. You actually wrote it according to Naruto. If you want to take advantage of Naruto's popularity, then you should stop and follow Naruto's world view and power system. It's a bit outrageous if you write Naruto as covering the sky. I have to give a lot of opinions. I'm really a brainless person.

Personally, I think the best part of this book is the following points 1. The strong in the extraordinary world are respected, and they are decisive in promoting women as eunuchs. Unlike other Naruto stories, the protagonists are either single women or eunuchs for life 2. They are decisive in defecting, and they will never leave Konoha as a dog if they have the ability 3. Selfish, selfish, and The protagonist of a Naruto-like novel is either a tall man who stays in Konoha and becomes the Hokage or is dedicated to changing the world for the people (I hate the Madonna bitch the most). Especially this is a small Japanese anime. As long as you travel through the past, if you don't have the ability, just stay up and wait for the protagonist to save the world. If you have the ability, you must be smart if you don't act casually There are also shortcomings. The power system is not quite right. According to what you wrote, you will kill several shadows at the fifth or sixth level of Qi training. On the surface, you will be almost invincible in the ninja world. In the foundation stage, you will be comparable to the Sixth Path. In the golden elixir, you will beat the God of Otsutsuki. Personally, I think that although the ninja system has a low upper limit of immortality potential, it still has some merits. At least it takes shape quickly and its combat power is not weak. Shadow level ~ Foundation building Golden elixir = Six Paths Nascent Soul = God of Otsutsuki) This is slightly more reasonable. You can write that the lifespan and combat power of immortal cultivators surpass those of ninjas of the same level.

This is a novel for which just reading the chapter titles is enough.

After reading so many pictures, I was told that he is an immortal cultivator, and he doesn't even have basic spells. The pictures are easy to write, and the fights are all about thunder escape. I can write something about natural energy, and the main character is like a succubus. Others are inexplicably loyal to him and are devoted to him.

The only enjoyable part was watching the fourth Hokage Danzo split and destroy Konoha, and then the protagonist killed all the named male characters. There is nothing else worth seeing.

At the beginning, isn't Shisui only 5 years old? Itachi should be about 3.4 Years old. Sasuke shouldn't be born yet, and the fourth generation should not be dead yet. Why is that old man from the third generation the Hokage?

You are practicing the first, second, and third levels of Qi... Forget it, the elite jounin is doing such bullshit in the first, second, and third stages... Isn't it disgusting!

If you get rid of the third generation and don't follow the plot, there will be chaos. It depends on the author's ability. The combat power is too strong. It should be completed in 200 chapters. It's too watery.

Who else besides Yakushi Nonou? Does Hinata have it?

Why is there no crushing? No matter who you fight, it will take dozens of turns. No matter what level you are, it will be the same.

,,, Violate harmony, cultivate immortality and true energy, true energy shadow clone,,

What follows is pure mindless killing and killing.

I think the cultivation system is more suitable